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Posted: 17 years ago
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trrrrriiing trriiing...the

phone rang at pooja's home..
she had just finished opening a note that she recieved and she read thru it..

"hello?!"
"pooja?.."

she knew that voice and......she loved it..but today a coldness surrounded the conversation...

"hmm"
she answered curtly..

"woh..hum bol rahe hai.."
"pata hai..bol.."
"aapko koi chitthi mili??"
"han..mili.."
"to aap chal rahi hai na.."
"han.."
"woh...hum aa jaye apko pick up kane.."

she was silent..

"nahi..agar aapke gharwale apko na jane de to..woh sagai ki tayyari..woh.."

"hUh!!!..ghar ke niche se..jeep me baithkar..mobile pe se call kar raha hai..to aa ja na upar..mein 5 minute me aa rahi hun.."

trring...trring..

"oye yudie..yeh sab???tujhe pata hai kuch??"

"nahi huda..mein khud surprized hun..hey tune chief se baat ki..?i m sure..use sabse pehle letter mila hoga?right??"

"dekh yudi mein nikal raha hun..tu aalekh ko leke aa..ok?"

"right bro!"

the small company of five entered the restaurant..the manager came up..

"excuse me??..lt.aalekh sharma??"
"han..bol.."
"table no.15 par aapka koi intezar kar raha hai.."
"thik hai..."

they went to the table..and cud see a slender girl sitting there..
"apun lt.aalekh sharma.."

"aur mein..." she turned...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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[COLOR=BLUE]..aur mein....tumhari hone wali biwi..."

"NEELU??!!"
"HEY SIS??!!"

THEY WERE JUST SO HAPPY TO SEE HER..BUT THE HAPPIEST WAS...

""tu yahan??"...

of course..lt.aalekh sharma..jo is waqt sabe zyada khush tha...

"ha yaar...mein yahan..aur is sab ki wajah hai.."

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"ye lo beta..areh ye kahan gayi..??"

the note said ..

"THANK YOU AUNTY...AND...SORRY TOO!!"

"huh???..yeh kya baat hui???..khair..mein dekhti hun phone kiska tha..."

she walked up to the answeRing machine..

"hmm..lets c.."..

and a voice from the machine said..

"madam aap ne jo washing machine liya tha uska..."

"areh??!!yeh kya??..yeh to kal ka message hai..aaj ka kaha gaya??
phone to aaj aya tha..."

meanwhile some 20 kms away....

ding dong!!

"hello uncle...main na..nancy!"
"sorry beta hum apko pehchaan nahi paye.."
"uncle mein nellu ki frnd..hua karti thi.."
"hua karti thi??"

"yes uncle..actually hum bahut acche frnds the..

but jab se usne us criminal ke saath rishata rakha to woh mujhe manzoor nahi tha..
u know uncle how it is..i tried to tell her..but she..uff!!!
well but uncle mujhse u know nellu's parents ki halat dekhi nahi gayi..
uncle i haVE to try one last time to pacify her...knock some sense into her..plzz uncle let me meet her..."

one advantage of being in the army was u never get caught wen u lie!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
neelu heard the door being opened and lookde up...
"na..??"
"HAN NANCY!!!MEIN NANCY..."

nancy????..neelus mind was racing....
but her expression cleared it..

"mein tujhe akhri baar samjhane ayi hun neelu...use bhool ja..mein..
uncle...kya hum akele??..."

"oh yes!!"

the "uncle"...left..

"tum??..."
"han mein!!!..ab suno..tumhe yahan se nikalna hai..par kaise??
tell me abt this room..."

"dekho yaha se undetected nikalne ka rasta sirf yeh window hai jo bahar se bandh hai..aur shayad ise sirf tab koi khol payega..jab woh verandah se adhe jhulkar is ta pahuche!!!!!!!!!!!!huff!!!"

thEy looked at each other questioningly...

"well training kis din kam aegi???"
she took off her bag..

"lets get to work..."

she easily managed an opening in between the verandah doors and broke open its lock...and then stepping into the verndh..looked down..

oops!!!the guards...oh shit..!!

"well chalo thoda sa risk to uthana hi hoga"

..and looking at the grds it seemed they were least bothered abt the occupant of this room....maybe even the knew of her futile attempts of escape..!!

neelu looked out and somehow was frightened..she saw 'nancy'hanging midway between the verandah and the window working wid the locking system....

and all this in a mini skirt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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finally the locks were worked upon and a rope tied to the window...

but they knew they had to wrk fast coz the time they had taken may have made ppl at home suspicious!!!

they came down to the lawn...but now..the guarDs..

"neelu ruko..ab mini skirt ka kamaal dekho..."
"huh??..ok"

she walked in front of the guards with loads of attitude and done!!

..they were staring at nothing but her..and then..

"ah!!!!!"

she slipped and landed very carefully in one of their arms..and no doubt the other one rushed forward too..but they missed the signal of her hands..wich was caught by neelu..and...

"kaam khatam..."
neelu was speaking to her wide eyed audience..

"sach ppl...aaj agar woh nahi hoti..toh i wud have been dead.."

a smile decorated everyones face..as if to say...
"finally.."

but aalekh...his happiness was seen in the twinkle of his eyes..
neelu got up and walked up to him...they were close..but

aalkeh took a step back much to her astonishment...




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Posted: 17 years ago
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THAT WAS TODAYS UPDATE..WAITING FOR ALL THE RESPONSE!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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woh so long one!!!!!!!!!!!!! really nice
but friend aajki update me phele portion parne me taklif hua. next bar plz don't use so light colour.plz don't mind.except it all the epi is good
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey buddy too goooooooood yaaaaaaaar. U r the best. 👏 Please Please do keep updating more frequently.We all are dying to read wht happens next
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@ friend forever

sure!!will keep it in mind!!
thnx!! 😊

@sherlock holmes

thnx a ton!!! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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aalkeh took a step back much to her astonishment...
and he looked at..yudi.. he still remembered wat had happened in kma....

"haath chod aalekh..."
"eh nautunki ab yeh mazaak nahi hai..."
"exactly..."

alekh left her hand and came close to face yudi..

"sun...apun ko pata hai tu yeich soch raha hai ki apun ek quaidi sharabi hai..aur apun teri behen ke saath mazaak kar raha hai...
lekin yudi apun bhale hi neelu ke sath zindagi bhar nahi rahega ...lekin apun yeh nahi chahta ki use takleef ho..."

"listen aalekh.."

"oye tu sun apun ki baat...
tune apne ma baap ki baat man kar apne sapne ko maar dala na???..
lekin tu kya chahta hai teri behen bhi aisaich kare???
..dekh yudi agar tu nahi chahta to apun isse shadi nahi karega lekin iske saath aisa mat kar ki apun ko tujh par haath uthana pade..."


yudi knew wat was going on in aalekhs mind....
he walked up to him...

"wazzup chief??"
"yudi woh apun..."
"hey sis..."
he took neelus hand..and Then aalekhs...

"there u go buddy....waise ek baat hai chief ...thank you..."

aalekh looked down at neelus hand wich was now in his..

"bole to ..kis liye??.."
"well u see....yeh ...headache ab tumhari hai...sambhalo..."
"bhai!!!!!!!!!!"

"just kidding sis..."and he hugged both of them...and
then looking up to aalekh..

"take care of her..."
"oye???..apun?? aur iska khyal rakhega???pagal hai??..."

a tense silence followed..............
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Posted: 17 years ago
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he walked further away...his back towards them...

5 pairs of anxious eyes followed him..and so did neelus thumping heart....

she looked at him determindly but her heartbeat increased wid every step...he took

"areh!!..apun iska khayal rakhega to apun ka khayal kaun rakhega??..."

"HUH????"

he faced his confused audience...

"tum sab ka thobda to dekho....12 baje hain.."

and then broke into a wide grin...

"areh iska to kya..apun tum sab ka khayal rakhega...
aur apun is neelu ko janta hai...tum logo ko kya lagta hai??
..apun iska khayal nahi rakhega to kya yeh apun ka khayal rakhegi???..hhahaha"

"AALEKH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
...nnelu ran into his arms..

evryone started coughing badly after abt a minute..though they dint want to disturb the perfect bliss on the faces of the lovebirds
..they had to ..otherwise yudi might have as well started cryng!!!..
they broke apart..

"oye kaidi...ab kuch khila to...waise...neelu teri 'nancy' kahan hai???..areh apni naina??!!"

"oh!!actually guys ek aur news hai...woh..."..she looked tense...she handed them a note..

hello guys!!!
aa gayi neelu??...congratulations aalekh...hamesha khush rehna...
guys yeh chitthi mein do baatein kehne ke liye likh rahi hun...
firstly i m so soory aaj subah ke liye..especially to pooja ali and yudi...tum log ambala ke bahar posted ho..phir bhi mere liye yahan aye..aur meine..i m sorry evryone...
ek aur baat...tumhari yeh naina ab jaa rahi hai..
tumhare is dost ko..is naina se ab tum kabhi nahi mil paoge..
but b4 that mein tum sab se milna chahti hun..
'the lounge...' 8 baje...neelu tum sab ko le aegi...
tk care..

oye yeh sab kya hai???"
"yeh naina apna connectoin kyu withdrw kar rahi hai.."
"iska dimag kharab ho gaya hai??"
"areh aap log baat mat kijiye...chalie ab..."

"mein abhi ayi..."
"neelu???..kahan ja rahi hai??"
"do minute.."

she went farther away and made a call..

"hello??..han..hum nikal rahe hai...best of luck!"

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