~~Rishtey~~(fan fic...RN) - Page 5

hi friend,excellent job..............................
the poem is so good..................................

waiting................

Its brilliant,too good. Wow Naina's character is very very well written. 👏 👏 👏

Hey buddy i think we should give u the title Suspense Queen. How do u manage to do it yaar. Now i'll b checking evry half an hour to c whether the next part is up or not.

Suspense pe suspense!!! kya yaar!!! kam se kam jaate jaate FF padne ke baadth, chaiin se jane doo, yeh suspense majboor karta hai ke kider mat jaa......hehehe...

Great work!! you really write beautifully!! wish the LRL team could consider your FF stroy...

Actually the way they have ended Raj's character and left the love story mid way of RN, was too heart breaking... if it was one sided love, it was a diff issue but here when they were like nearing to propose this mad unexpected climax they show and destroy the entire good feel about the serial..

But no complaints now as it wont help in anyway... but thanks to you and all the others too that have come up with this FF, atleast dil ko tho tasali milti hai padkar about RN rather than remembering that tragic moment between RN...

Waiting for the next part!!

@friend forever

thanxxx!!


@sherlock holmes 😆 ...
i have already recieved that title...in fact wen i wrote my first fic{this is my second one}

i was asked..whether i have done a PHD in suspensology..!!!heheh!!

thnx anyways!!




@sweet candle...

u never know wat the future holds...

"waqt se pehle..aur kismat se zyaada kisiko kuch nahi milta!!"

so about RN.... dont draw conclusions...


thnnxx!!!

in the centre of the room placed on the chair was...

"yeh guitar???....i...thnx guys!!"

her eyes sparkled..a guitar eminded her of music...a love she shared wid someone very special..rajveer sir..

"aise nahi...ek gana to hona hi hai...."

she struck a note...
"hmmm...yaaron...dosti badi hi haseen hai....
ye na ho to kya fir bolo yeh zindagi hai..koi to jo raazdaar ..
......"

and then...

"yaaron..mohabbat bhi to bandagi hai...
yeh na ho to kya fir bolo yeh zindagi hai..."

she cud feel her voice giving away...wat was the pain she felt in saying these words???y did his face come to her mind...

"koi to dilbar ho yaar...
jis..jisko tujhse ho pyaar..
koi to...hah!!!"

she cudnt continue...
but neelu handled the situation...

"ab mein!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

she pulled aalekh towards herself...
"baahon mein chale aao.....bahon mein chale aao....
oh..humse sanam kya parda....
yeh aajka nahi milan...yeh sang hai...umar bhar ka....
baahon mein chale aao...."

naina struck the guitar....and made up for the music...

"chale hi jana hai....nazar chura ke yun..
fir thami thi saajan tumne meri kalai lyun??.."

it was pooja...........

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the days that followed were one of the brightest in the ghai household...
but pooja dint show any signs of excitement...she was happy..but...

"helo??!!ali...kya kar raha hai"
"oh aap???woh kuch nahi...bas yuhi..ghar me aaj kafi chehel pehel hai.."
"hmmm.woh to yahan bhi hai..lekin tum dono ke chehre par nahi..."

ali cudnt reply...

"tum dono ne to ambala me sagai karne ka faisla bhi isliye kiya tha..kyunki yehi tum dono mile the lekin..AB...ye sab kya hai ali..."

"naina..aap bhi ..hume koi samajhta kyun nahi.."

"ali aisi baat..oh..pooja aa rahi hai..bye!!"

the evening was splendid..the music... the busy household...
and pooja all were a treat to the eyes and the heart...

naina sat wid pooja getting her ready..she looked beautiful in the light pink and blue lehenga..and naina in her turquoise churidaar..looked stunning!!!

she brought pooja down and surveyed the hall..
for once today even the boys looked good!!!

the naach gana brightened evryones mood...it was fun..and then..

the same song played..and pooja cudnt control her feelings...

"kabhi kabhi kuch to kahi piya humse..
ke kum se kum aaj to khulke milo zaraa humse
hai raat apni..ho tum bhi apne..kisika fir hume darr kya.."

ali was walking down he corridor wen suddenly...

"kaun hai??!!areh..AAP???..YEH AAP..CHODIYE HUME..."
"TU CHAL..BAS..CHUP..."
"ye aap kya kar rahi hain???"
"ali..tune dekhi hai pooja ki halat??..."
"aap bhi..to hum kya karen...besharmo si harkatein..???"

"ali...besharmi mein aur pyaar jatane mein fark hai..
mein ye to nahi keh rahi ki tu sabke samne use kiss kar..ya kuch...
lekin jab tum dono saath ho...tab to uske kareeb ja sakta hai??
...dekh ali..tu yeh soch raha hoga ki kya tan se ek hona hi sab hai...nahii..
lekin dil me jo pyaar hai..woh bhale hi sabse bada ho..
lekin kabhi kabhi mann ke pyaar ko jatana hi to zaroori hai na??
...tu hi bata..kya tu nahi chahta ki pooja bhi yeh pyaar jatae...??..bol.."

"naina hum...."
"soch le..."
"ek minute.."

ali had held her hand and stopped her..

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"oye yeh naina aur ali kahan hai..."
"pooja!!!!!!!"
"kahan thi naina..mein..areh.....yeh lights ko kya hua??"

the song boomed.....

"mahi ve.....thats the way mahi ve...."
they cud see all the three guys..huda aalekh and yudi...and...wen they moved....

"ALI??????"
"han pooja ..ali!!!!!!!!!!"

she cudnt believe it.....

NOW I WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

FOR SOME SMASHING RESPONSE....

hmmmm..noresponse????!!! 😭 😭
well..i will still take the courage to put up the next part!!