~~Rishtey~~(fan fic...RN) - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
yaar u are creating a lot of suspense plz update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
hey too good
pl continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
hey too good
pl continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thnx a lot!!..i will update today..in some time!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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the morning was beautiful and dewy....
but to her it was still the memories of yesterdays rains....the feel of footsteps in the hall alerted her..

she got up slowly and walked out...

"HEY NAINA!!!!HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

all five faces were shown bright...but..

"hey!!!yeh sab kya hai yaar???...meine kaha tha na tum logon se..nahi milna mujhe kisi se..
i dnt want to celebrate my bday...pllzz..jao yaha se.."

she stormed into the bedroom again...
alekh and huda looked at each other...

she stood by the bedside..

"yeh kya battameezi hai naina??"

"e tera chakkar samjha apun ko.."

"BATTAMEEZI???TUM LOG BATTAMEEZ HO..KAHA THA NA MEINE..KI.."

"CHUP!!!!!!!!!!!"

alekh cudnt take it any more...

"bahut hua niana...ab bas kar...tu dekh khud ko...kya ban gayi hai tu...areh naina...mar chuka hai captain rajveer..."
he softened a little..and went towards her..

"sambhal ja naina.."

"mujhe bhashan mat suna aalkeh..jake apni khud ki zindagi ko sambhal...ja bol de neelu ko ki woh wapas aa jaye ...ja na!!"

SMACK!

huda had slapped her hard...naina stared at him in shock...
"huda yeh tune.."
"aalekh ja yahan se..ja!!"
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Posted: 17 years ago
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[COLOR=GREEN]"oye naina..woh bhashan nahi de raha tha..aur hum me se koi bhi yaha apne liye nahi aya hai...
thik keh raha tha woh..dekh khud ko..kya ban gayi ahi tu...chal mere saath.."

he clutched her hand tightly..he was frustrated and angry...she had to be shown the truth...

"dekh bahar...dekh..."
he pointed at the small group waiting in the hall...

"ali aur pooja ko dekh...do din ho gaye un dono ne ek dusre se baat nahi ki..
jabki agle teen dino me unki sagai hai...dono apreshan hai...unhe nahi pata unka rishta kis mod pe khada hai...

phir bhi..ek doosre ke saath hone ka natak kar rahe hai..
gharwalo se ladkar yahan aaye hai...tere liye.."

naina looked over at them...yes ..
there was indded a startlind coldness in their faces it missed the love...the spark..

"aur woh dekh..yudi..usne apna ghar chod diya hai naina...
woh chakar bhi wahan nahi laut sakta..lekin aaj uske chehre parto bas isliye ki tu thodi der ke liye has de...
woh aaj apni behen ..ya apne doSt..kisi ke kaam nahi aa raha...

aur han..aalekh..jise tune abhi itna kuch kaha...
areh tere liye to tere bhaiyya jaisa tha na woh...

pata hai tujhe..neelu kyu gayi...use majboor kiya uske ghar se..
hum sab ne socha tha uska kuch nnahi bigad payenge uske ma baap lekin aisa nahi hai..
hum me se koi..yaha tak ki yudi bhi use contact nahi kar paa raha hai..aur han..
tujhe pata bhi hai..ki teri laparwahi aur bure kaam ka zimma aalkeh ne apne upar liya hai???
aur agar karwahi hui to uski wardi ja sakti hai naina......."

he sighed...

"bas kar naina...bas kar.... 8 mahine ho chuke hai...bas kar!!
yeh zindagi nahi rukegi...aur han naina...captain sir bhi..yehi kehte the.."

he left leaving her standing still and numb.....
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knock!..knock!

"oh thank god u opened the door....oh my god..hello!!..

my name is..na..nancy..i hv cm frm usa..
actually i m looking for this address aunty it is soooo hot here in india..oh my gosh...!!
cud i plz have a drink aw water..phllzz ant(h)y"

"tum USA SE AYI HO???"
"HUH???"'
"frm usa??"
"oh..yes..yes...may i come in..kya..andar..uh...uh.."
"come dear.."
"thnk you..."
"can i hv water anty??"
"yes..u sit..i will get it.."

but she knew it wasnt only water that was coming up...
just then the phone rang..
but the lady cudnt hear it and dint pick it up..so it went into the answeing mode..

"bhabhi???.bahut ho gaya..ab hum ise yahan nahi rak sakte..aaki beti hai ya kuch aur..isne phir se bhagna ki koshish ki..."

she came out of the kitchen with a glass of juice and a few titbits..
but all that was left of the usa returned guesT was a note saying..

"thank you aunty!!!"
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Posted: 17 years ago
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THAT WAS TODAYS..UPDATE!!!!!!!!1

WAITING FOR RESPONSES!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
good
suspense!!!!!!!!!!!!1
ye aunti kaun hai?? Is she Naina's mom??
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
hey just caught up wd ur ff
too good 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
thnx a lot!!!!!

update today...in some time!

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