ERRONEOUSLY SEDUCED #7 THREAD 8 ADDED PT 36 Updated on 1-7-2015/ P133 - Page 86

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Posted: 10 years ago
omg
what will happen now
i just hope geet and baby be safe
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Awesome update, scared for Geet, don't want miscarrige. Hope Geet and baby both are fine.
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Hope that through this book maan will understand geet properly
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Maan is a complete confussed soul. Nice update.
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Part 34
Haha.. so cute.. Part is so cute n caring for his chachi he does all masti.. but he shows more care towards Geet than Maan .. Maan kuch seekho chote bachhe se... Marble incident was funny.. Seriously Maan u shouldn't take any responsibility.. tumhare bas ki baat nahi hain woh... Maneet n part going to shopping mall.. Huum waiting for it..
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Posted: 10 years ago
target of 250 likes have been accomplished please update really want to know what will happen part
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update
Maan confused with his feelings
the old lady's talks affected Maan
Geet fell down.
Poor parth is so much scared n took the blame on himself
Geet is such a condition also is saving parth from Maan's anger
n Maan promised that he will not do any thing
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PART - 36



GEET going through a pain again but due to unconscious state the feel of it lessen. Maan was tensed, clerly evident but for whom most not yet sure. Baby still his priority. He was worried what if he loose his offspring at this stage. When he sacrifice this much. In all these thoughts there was a little space for Geet also, might be.


He was standing aloof at the corner, ignoring Parth completely. The boy sat on the bunch and scanning hopefully here and there. He was gloomed and needs some one's warmth but Maan paid no heed. He didn't had idea that what impact this all leaving on his mind and heart. Parth was blaming himself and scared alot. But this will not reached to Maan. Suddenly he jumped from the bench and moved from there. Maan don't even realize when he vanished from there as he was only worried about his baby.


Soon Doc come out and Geet was shifted to I.C.U for observation. Maan asked about them. "Doc is every thing alright?" This was his first time. Dev and Meera already faced this before. Doc scanned his face. Her face is stern. Maan repeats his question, when don't got reply.


"Yes both are fine. You are lucky Mr. Khurana that she handle herself carefully that moment. When she falls she put all strain on her hands that's why got get serious problem." She told him.


"Then why she faints and her condition was worst when I brought her here?" Maan wanted every detail. His care gave positive vibes to doc as well.


"Because her pregnancy having a complications. I already cautioned you several time. If she don't show her alertness then today you loose your baby or may be both."


"Thanks doc." He said briskly.


"Thanks to her. She is caring for your both children." Doc to assume Parth his son. "I kept her for observation only. When she get her conscious back, I will discharge her. But don't repeat this again so be very careful around her."


Maan sighed and went to I.C.U ward. He waits till she open her eyes again. Doc came in between and check the moments of baby at the screen. Baby's doing well. Her face told Maan that everything is fine. Now he only waits her to awake again.


How much time had passed, he had no idea. But he went inside the moment she got her conscious back. Maan sat near her. Her face seemed pale but it carried a smile of relief. She knew her baby is fine. Maan caressed he hairs and kissed on her forehead. He sat besides her, holding her limp hand.


"You okay?" He asked softly, while caressing her head softly.


Geet nodded and scanned the room. "Where is Parth, sir? Apne use kuchh kaha to nahi na? He is kid, not at fault." She enquired in whimpering voice. Maan's ears alerts. His mind start thinking fast. Sudden change of expression worried Geet and she panicked. "Sir where is he? Did you hurt him? I took promise still..." Geet's all attention shifted to Parth. She wants him near her and now.


Maan cuts her words. "Geet please, just calm down. You still not fine." He cautioned but no effects.

"I want to see him? Where is he? Aap usko thodi der b nahi sambhal paye?" Geet's heartbeat raised thinking about his well being. She knew Maan's temper and when he got angry spare no one.

"Geet please, he is fine." He assured but his voice not convinced even to his own ears.


"Then bring him to me." She demands.


"Okay don't get hyper. I will bring him here." Maan left her side and moved out. He scanned the place and realised that he don't see him since Geet went inside. "Now where is he? This kid only love to trouble me." Maan cursed Parth and start his search as he knew Geet wants him at any cost. With pace steps he cross the corridor, looks him at floor every where, in lifts, every where but Parth wasn't there. He was vanished like an air. Maan ran his fingers in his dense hairs. "Now where I search this stupid boy?" He start thinking and asked from the staff if anyone see him. No one knows about him, so he walked towards reception for some help. At few steps ahead from reception there was a statue of mother merry. Maan's eyes sparked as his search finally over. He sighed and moved into the direction.


Parth was there. He was standing in front of the idol with his tiny joined hands. Maan silently stepped towards him, curious to know what he was doing there.

"Please God save my chachi and baby. I promise I will be a good boy and never do any mischief. If you want then take my all toys but please don't hurt my chachi and baby brother." Parth praying in sobbings. Tear drops rolling over his cheeks continuously. He was pleading for both's safty.


Maan hear his prayers and turned amused. He don't know how to react. How much he was concerned for Geet and baby. Maan went near him and bend on his feet. He swirled Parth. Parth was crying. He hold his ears and apologize. "I am sorry chachu. But I don't want to hurt chachi and baby." His sobs chocking his voice in throat.


Maan wiped off his tears. "Did you really give your all toys for Geet and baby's safty?" He stared in his innocent eyes like he was reading his expression. But Parth' s reply stunned him.

He nodded in yes. "I will?"


"Your favorite ball?" Maan asked again.


Parth stared his ball. "Ha ye bhi." He quickly put his ball in the feet of idol. "God I give this to. Please chachi or baby ko kuchh mat karna." He prayed for both again.


"Come here." Maan pulled him to his embrace and lift him in his arms. He stood up carrying him. "God ne apki sunn li. Your chachi and baby both are fine. Now stop crying. Geet want to see you." Maan wiped off his fresh tears and embrace him. He took him to Geet who was waiting for him only.

Relief was evident at his sight. She took a relief breath seeing Parth alright. "Where you are? Why took so much time? Give him to me." Geet was still worried. Tense lines ease but she wants to confirm this to her heart as well.


Seeing Geet Parth to wriggle and jumped from his arms. He rushed towards Geet. First he jumped on stool and then on Geet's bed. Geet filled him in her warmth and kissed him. She saw his wet eyes. "Ye ro kyu raha tha? I knew it. You scold him." Geet accused him for his tears.

"It wasn't me. Its you who made him cry." Maan retort back. Geet stare him in confusion. "He was crying because you are hurt. He was scared for you and baby." Maan cleared and told her everything.

Geet pulls him more and caressed his cheek. "My baby praying for us. Apko pata hai God bachho ki prayers kabhi ignore nahi karte. See me and baby both are fine. Just because of you." Geet knows he was disturb after whatever had happened so she tried to made him feel good.


"Meri wajhse?" He asked to confirm.


Geet nodded. "God ne apki prayer suni or hum dono ko theek kar diya."


Parth smile wides and slipped downwards. He gently kissed on her baby bump. "Baby don't worry. I always protect you. Parth love you alot baby." Parth was talking to baby which gave reason of smile to both Maan and Geet. Maan observe him so closely for the first time. How much he love his baby. Suddenly baby made a moment inside. Like baby is to responding to him. "Mumma see baby replies to me." In excitement he called Geet mumma instead of Chachi. Parth was usually talk with Alya when she was in Meera's womb, so he was in flow called Geet mumma.


But his one mistake shake many emotions in Geet. Her eyes Welled up with happiness. She start thinking how it feels when her baby to calling her like Parth do right now.


Maan too felt this. In her innocence he stirred even Maan's heart. Suddenly he to craved for this. He to thinking very soon his child to call him father.


Both looked at each other. Maan sat near her and embraced her. Holding her hand he kissed her While Parth was busy in talking with baby.


Doc came inside to check her again before she issue her discharge papers. She saw Parth. "Good that you found him. Mr. Khurana please learn to handle your family what if he lost." Doc scold Maan and Geet's face turns her all expression. Doc checked and left.


Geet was glaring him. "Apne to kaha tha ki ye neche tha. It mens apko b ye baat pata nahi thi. Hai na?"

Maan turn numb. His kitten employe transform into a hungry protecting mother lioness. Who can go to any extend to save her cubs.




HI guys


I read each and every comment carefully. Many of you asked that when Geet wear glasses?

Ans. Then dear friends read the Character Sketch and Part one again. Your doubt will clear.


One more thing few demands me to cut the chapter of Parth now.

Ans. Then let me tell you one thing. I know my story better. And I needed him in this portion. To jisko b boriyat ho rahi hai ya lag raha hai ki uski zarurat nahi hai to guys you are free to leave. But I am going with the way I planned."
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update, poor maan still he is not sure for whom he cares geet or baby. I thought maan would realise his love for geet with this fiasco. Never mind atleast party stirred maan emotions to some extent.
So cute parth praying to God for geets and baby's safety.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful part...i love parth yaar... He is cutie that knock some sense maan.. Maan hv a lot of things to learn fm him... It was so touching when he pray for geet n baby well being... He was willing to sacrifice his favourite toys for them.. Finally maan anger melted seeing him praying like that... Geet finally come to know the truth about maan lost parth fr a while.. Now wondering what answer he'll give the mother tigress... He he he he...

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