New TS: Pyaar ki Baasha pt 3b pg 20 30/07 (completed)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey guys,
i am here with a TS.. it is not so sophisticated like my other stories. its simple and sweet. hope you guys like it!!

NOT PROOFREAD... Please ignore the errors

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||Pyaar Ki Baasha||

"Ishita Iyer and Raman Bhalla"

"Present sir" came Raman's voice

Ishita smiles at Raman as he says this. She places her hand on top of his hand as a gesture of gratitude. Raman simply smiles back understanding her gesture.

They both turn to concentrate back on their lecture.

This was the daily routine. Everyday raman and Ishita used to sit together and the professor used to call their names together and Raman would answer always. Ishita would always acknowledge this gesture by her smile.

Now Raman and Ishita with few other friends of their where sitting in the cafeteria of the college.

Romi - Hey chotu 8 cups coffee lana.

Chotu - Ji bhai abhi laya..

Vandu - Yaar mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai, miku tumhe mere saath nachos khana hai tumhe pasand hai na..

Mihika - Haan yaar, Raman Ishu tum log bhi kahoge.

Raman looks at ishita who blinks her eyes saying no. She turn to mihika and refuses by nodding her head negatively.

Raman however, accepts mihika's offer.

When Mihika was ordering Raman looks once at ishita.

"Chotu ek chocolate fantasy cake le ana."

Chotu who was taking down the order wrote down raman's order as well.

Mihika - Aiyoo sorry ishu akka mein toh who order karna hi bhul gayi

Ishita just smile back and shrugs her hand telling no big D.

"Raman chahe koi bhi bhul jaye Ishu ke liye Choco fantasy order karna tum kabhi nahi bhulte na" Bala teased.

"Kya yaar, uske pasand ka cheez uskeliye order karne mein kya problem hai." Raman just replied.

And that is how the day went again like every other day. At the end of the day, ishita, vandita and mihika together said their good byes to their best friend and left to sit in the car. Romi and Raman where still busy talking to Bala..

"Uhmm..." Ishita nudged Mihika.

She signaled her to tell Raman and Romi to come soon so that they can go back.

Mihika "Haan ruk" "Raman Romi yaar kitna time lagate ho, jaldi chalo na.. Ishu akka ko Ghar mein kuch kaam hai.. aur mujhe bhi party mein jaana hai aaj mihir ke saath" she called them frustrated with their everday antics to make them late.

They came back and left back to go back home.

Raman and Romi were brothers where as Vandita, Ishita and Mihika were sisters.

These best friends were also neighbors.

Once they reached home, they went back to their respective house chattering loudly but two remained silent. Raman and Ishita were walking behind ever one holding hands.

"Acha ishu sun, aaj hume who project complete karna hai. Parson deadline hai toh its better we finish it today!'

Ishita questioned him asking what time.

Raman thought for a while and replied, 6:30 shuru karte hai, tumhe koi problem toh nahi?"

She shook her head telling no.

"Acha, now go and take rest. I'll meet you in the evening" he said pecking her forehead softly.

Ishita just smiled and kissed him back on his cheek.

Mihika, Vandita and Romi just smiled back looking at their interaction. They had tears in their eyes but chose not to show it to anyone. They then said their see you soon's to each other and walked back to their respective houses.

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INDEX!!!

Part 1 above post

Part 2 pg 7

Part 3a pg 13

Part 3b pg 20

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12Singmeenu thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I have a big dout plz clear is ishu I mean is it like she can't speak of something 😉 no jootha chappad plz it is just a wild guess 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting story
One doubt ,is ishu didn't speak
Nice start
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ishita lost her voice right..
She didnt speak..her gestures are very meaning ful re..
I loved it..


raman understanding her every expression and her every likes and dislikes...:-)

wow wow romi,mihika,bala,vandy i loved them...

I love this gang yaar..
This story is peaceful...no drama,no shaggy..lovely bonding:-)

Aww raman kiss her forhead..both are adorable..
Pyaar huwo tho basha ke kya jarurath hai...:-)

Ishra ke isharahe kafi hai...
Thanks for pm..
Edited by janani_divan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello!
Iam finding it interesting..
What happened to Ishu? She can't speak?
Please continue soon coz I can't wait for the next update.
Thanks for the pm.
Edited by RaMANasa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thats amazing , something new and exciting...She cant speak kya? If this like that it would be amazing to see Raman unconditional love...Thats so sweet of him reading all her guestures, taking care of her...I really liked the concept...u write beautifully we know that...
I love their freindship too...

I am liking this...Continue soon...

P.s. This is not excuse for not updating ss Love tonight...I am addicted to that and will not leave u if i dont get one update😆BEWARE...Your readers can be arrogant😆
Edited by --abha-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good start 😊looks like Ishita cannot speak.
Continue soon and still waiting for today's update of Love😳
Ty for PM.😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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How sweet br I have a doubt y is Ishita my speaking?? Can't she talk?? And y romi Vandita and mihika are feeling emotional by seeing both of them like dat??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

I have a big dout plz clear is ishu I mean is it like she can't speak of something 😉 no jootha chappad plz it is just a wild guess 😆

haha asha di.. u have guessed it right.. see I am very bad at bringing twists in the story like u n gaya. So brought it straight out!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: janani_divan

Ishita lost her voice right..
She didnt speak..her gestures are very meaning ful re..
I loved it..


raman understanding her every expression and her every likes and dislikes...:-)

wow wow romi,mihika,bala,vandy i loved them...

I love this gang yaar..
This story is peaceful...no drama,no shaggy..lovely bonding:-)

Aww raman kiss her forhead..both are adorable..
Pyaar huwo tho basha ke kya jarurath hai...:-)

Ishra ke isharahe kafi hai...
Thanks for pm..

haha I know u would guess by now!! But i just wanted a simple story with a diff story line that's all
thank u so much

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