Never Alone... (Part 13: page 23) - Page 11

It was a wonderful update.👍🏼
The confession scene was simple and beautiful. 😳Loved that part.! Both Zara-Ryan's emotions came out well.
Mike..So glad he is trying to help them in some way. He has the power to erase their memory but that won't be needed now.
Zara stood strong now and being selfless, ready to sacrifice herself..❤️
Ryan won't give up and hopefully that scholar will be of some help.. It seems like that won't be easy..Just wish they won't have to separate and together they came go through this successfully.
Loved the chapter and waiting for next..cont soon..Thanks for pm.

Shree: That was a Perfect Mono.👍🏼

Cheaper 7
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it
Wonderfully Written
Zara accused him of not loving her
OMG! Ryan try to brun himself to prove his love
Thankfully Michael came at the right time
Amazing
Thanks for the PM

Cheaper 8
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it
Finally the truth is out
Loved Ryan-Zara Moments Sooo Beautifully Written
Their confession was Sooo Lovely n Heart Touching
Zara is ready to sacrifice her life but Ryan won't give up
Hope they won't have to separate
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: SeasonOfLeaves

Arrrghhh I am such an idiot I clicked on the back button so have to re-type my comment.. Sighhh. Anyway.

Typing on mobile so less emos this time!

The beginning was too too beautiful.. Their emotions were so perfectly penned down :') I loved their simple confession.

So Mike is helping them out.. I hope things do work out for them now..

Zara is a strong person.. She's holding up so well despite of whatever she must be going through.. Sighh. And yeah their love makes her stronger 😳

I'm really really looking forward to the next part. Hopefully they won't be broken apart and will pull through this together

Shreee behnaa.. That was mind-blowing!! I could feel her love for Ryan and every emotion she went through.. It was beautiful :')

Oh and the last line nailed it!!

Continue soon kk 🤗

Originally posted by: Swara85

It was a wonderful update.👍🏼
The confession scene was simple and beautiful. 😳Loved that part.! Both Zara-Ryan's emotions came out well.
Mike..So glad he is trying to help them in some way. He has the power to erase their memory but that won't be needed now.
Zara stood strong now and being selfless, ready to sacrifice herself..❤️
Ryan won't give up and hopefully that scholar will be of some help.. It seems like that won't be easy..Just wish they won't have to separate and together they came go through this successfully.
Loved the chapter and waiting for next..cont soon..Thanks for pm.

Shree: That was a Perfect Mono.👍🏼

wow di i don have words...

that was so sweet of Mike.revealing the truth is not an easy task yet he convinces God to do so.lines have been beautifully crafted out.

Oh dear kunnn... you made that angel fall...why I'm not surprised?

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

that was so sweet of Mike.revealing the truth is not an easy task yet he convinces God to do so.lines have been beautifully crafted out.

awaiting for the next.

thanks for the pm and do continue soon.😊

@Shree Di-- Your every phonemes and morphemes ,every segment and suprasegments captivate me to the core.the mono. was just 'splendid'in its own way.😊