Never Alone... (Part 13: page 23)

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Awesome update di

loved it

Zara is too upset n not talking to Ryan..

Ryan n Zara's pain was beautifully described!!

Ryan tried to burn in the Blue flames of life..

Michael came to save him!!

the whole update was fabulous!!

do continu soon

thanks for pm

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Aliya

@Darlingladdu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

First of all thanks thanks thanks for the update and PM.
i just love the update waw awesome very beautifuly written each and every ones feeling. keep it up and update soon love u

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Itna chotu update😭

Abhi toh start kiya tha😭😭

Anywayyy... at least you came back with the story so yaay!😃

Beautifully penned confrontation KK!👏 That part was mind-blowing.. their confessions, Ryan's anger (totally justified) and Zara's pain... I totally understand her POV too.

Hehe u know what's strange? I decided to watch City of angels and then now reading this.. too much of fantasy lol. And both made me all emo😭

But but what;s the blue flame of life? Is he safe now?😕

What's going to happen now? Am scared 😕

Pleaseee is baar don't go on a long break from writing😛 Ab toh wada likh do

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EshaalYousufzai

@EshaalYousufzai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Awesome update didi..

Truly loved it..

Zara misunderstood his love.

Ohh my Rayan was about to sacrifice his life in the blue flames of life!

Michael!!!!!!!!!!! The Michael!!!!!!!!!

Can you give him a face?

Please please please...

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Swara85

@Swara85

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Commenting on last two parts.

Oh no.! why did you kill Eve.? This is so not done..😭
Ryan will protect her till 20 years..he will forget her after that..like really??
Zara came to know that he is an angel..Never expected this to be so early..
Their first kiss..I never saw that coming too..😳But that was a beautiful part.👍🏼
Zara's pain, her thinking that he was doing only his duty till now and there were no feelings from his side...and his reaction on this..sacrificing his life..then Michael's entry..You nailed this part..It was truely awesome.👍🏼
Michael said they will meet again..means he will meet Zaara again..for what..?? what will he do/say to ryan..??
I'm very eager and curious to know about the next happenings..please do continue soon.
Thanks for pm..Both the updates were beautiful.

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Wow didu...it's awesome, blossom, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, flawless and mind blowing update...just loved it...beautiful...do continue soon...and thanks for the pm... :)

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fly.high

@fly.high

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

This was emotional !

Zara needed answers but Ryan was bound not to say them... but he committed the unforgivable...

He...being an angel...fell in love with a mortal.

and even worse...he has bow confessed his feelings to Zara .

hope he don't guest too harsh a punishment...

continue soon

love
birdie