DREAMS...DO COME TRUE.. NEW UP-pg 42

hi evribdi...
i m writing a new romantic RN romantic sattire.....😳😳😳hope u like it... i have thought nli bits n pieces of the story... so i realli dnt knw... hw the stori is gonna turn out.... so plzz support me... by posting ur comments.... as i alwais say...both appreciaton as well as +ve criticisms r veri much welcomed.....😳.... n other thing i wanna say r mi spellings... u wud find the letter "I"...instead of letter "y" in mani places.... plz... pardon wth me... im stuk up wth it !!😛...actualli mi keyboard letters rnt proper...😡😡... stop workn wen necessari...😡😡 so gotta use onscreen keyboard 4 certain letters n it hinders the flow of thought while writing......so i use similar sounding letters... hope the meaning doesnt change...😕😕
well now bak to the story... its a filmy kinda stori.. so dnt expect logic too much... coz films r supposed to b full of bloopers !!!😃....well the narrative style to some parts will b like the camera is taking u to those places... in a 3rd persons point of view...dat is..
it may vari too...
now i think its enuf of bugging u all wth the stupid dialogs... wen i dnt even knw... hw u ppl rgng to react to the stori !!😕.... as im am quite bad at writing...so plzz keep dat in ur mind while reading !!
so lemme start....
characters: Col.Rajveer singh shekawat - O!! mi cuti pie....... ☺️ Rajeev khandelwal !!
Maj.naina singh shekawat - well can b played by any1 u like...😳😳
others i will introduce u in further scenes...😃😃

Naina ko priyanka ke siva aur koi play kaise kar sakta hai??

DREAMS...DO COME TRUE....

The scene opens... its a beautiful dai outside... its spring time.. all the blooms r in their full glori...
in a sprawling mansion in delhi... the stilish n unique house shaped name plate outside read..
col:ra jveer singh shekawat.
& maj: naina singh shekawat...
n above this a special golden plaque... simpli read..." our jannat.. u r welcome ..."
this simple name plate jus gives an insight to the ppl who reside in this huge ..posh mansion... in a main centre in new delhi...the ppl... who even though .. are rich.. obviousli due to luk of the mansion... were true at hearts... warm n.. kind...
next we see dat... behind the huge stilish gates.. wooden gates..guarded bi 2 securiti personnels....the is an extremeli huge house wth a open porch at the entrance wth a majestic pillars suppoting a elegant roof whch starts 4m the first floor of the house... it jus lukd like a 5 star hotel entrance... well to sai ..it was exactli a fittin descriptn to the hous eon the whole... it had 3 floors .... n mani num of rums... a beautiful sprawling garden outside wth well maintained lawns... ..

Then as we enter... passing along the aestheticalli arranged living rums... drawing rums.... further inside... a secluded rum was there.... it was quite huge... simple white walls... adorned wth quite a few curios .... there were 3 to 4 wind chimes ... 2 wooden ones too... .. at one side of the room... there was a huge.... realli huge..... window.... almost 6 foot wide n al most the same height.... the specialit of it was dat...it was a single piece of glass... n cud b opened outside... into a special garden ...which wasseperated 4m the rest of the garden bi 2 wooden doors on either side ..which were mostli kept lokd... it was a private garden ....
now the window... had a sill whish was almost 5 feet broad...... it also had a small wooden grill to abot 1 feet height... indicating the end of the window...the sill was adroned wth a a bed wch fit cozli into that space.... it was adorned wth a simple white bed sheet... mani small pillows... all black colors...
n there ....
we see a smart ...extremeli handsome young man... in a simple white shirt n white tracks... leaning his head on the wall n lying on that bed....... but .. he isnt alone... the is smbodi sitting the same wai... but nli difference is dat.... or to sai SHE.... is leaning the back of her head on his chest...n her bodi leaning entireli on his... his chin was touchin her hair... jus as a small child wud ly leaning on smbdi.... she too was in a white sleeveless top n a simple white cotton pyjamas...
there was innocence in both their eyes... there was an emotion.... a bond... sparkling in their eyes... thei simpli sat there...gazing at the garden outside... the garden... which the ladi of the house wth her belovd.... cherish to luk after... it was their common passion...all the blooms there were like their babies... wch thei caressed n nurtured.. wth utmost dedication n luv...

her haIr jus rubbed on his chin n he was gentli caressing her beautiful lucsious hair...she... she was the most beautiful person ani1 cud have evr seen... her beauti wasnt so physical... but her inner beauti radiated onto her face... which made her luk ...no less than an angel.... her beautiful ...deep black eyes...were one wud get lost in their depths... her sweet pink small lips... which were alwais arched in a smile... her rosy cheeks... wch were ...wat to say... extremili... chubbi ...jus like a small kid.. wch evri1 wud want to pull it lovingli... on the whole... she was an angel.... an angel in disguise on this blessed earth...





[WELL DATS IT 4 2DAI EVRIBDI.... I WILL CONTINUE IF I GET A POSITIVE RESPONSE....
@RITIKA2O25... I JUS THOUGHT LEMME ME GIVE FREEDOM TO EVRIBDIS IMAGINATION.... COZ ..I PERSONAALI... LOVE READING ...FOR DAT 1 FACTOR MAINLI.... 😳 😳 😳 ...HOPE U R CONVINCED DEAR... 😳 😳 😳 ... N WELL TO SAY ...PRIYANKA CAN SURELI B A ROCKING NAINA... 😊 ....
BYE TO ALL !! 😊 😊 ]

superb,please continue as soon as possible.

hello friend,kya soch rahi ho??????itni achhi drescription and expression de diya aur ab puch rahi ho ki response milegi ya nehi milegi?????????plz update.
have a good night.

hey dear too good

its amazing dear

pl continue
and ofcourse Priyanka ke sivaya aur naina ka character koi play nahi kar sakta

Gr8 start.U write so well.Ur description is also very nice. 👏 Plz continue.

guys don't miss understand but hum logo ko to unki pyar ki shurvat karni hai naki koi bacha vach so plz i request u ki achi story banaaaaaaaaaaaoooooooooooooooooo plz for heaven sake.