DREAMS...DO COME TRUE.. NEW UP-pg 42

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Anuradha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#21

Sweetttttttttt...very chewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwetttttt 😳 😳 ..loved it...do post soon...

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Taskeen abdulaziz

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Posted: 17 years ago

#22

awesum fic.....luv ur writin style...plzzz continue

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friend forever

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Posted: 17 years ago

#23

ab to tumhe continue karni hi chahiye...................

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Arushi.

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Posted: 17 years ago

#24

please every one is requesting u please atlaset for us

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fanatic 21

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Posted: 17 years ago

#25

its toooo cute n sweet...gr8 👏 👏

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 17 years ago

#26

Thanks evribdi... 😃 😃
i realli had stopped writing ...coz nobdi replied... 😭 😭 😕😕 ..........
well... jus saw all the replies... realli 2 sai im feeling veri much grateful 4 all the replies... thank u soooooooo much... i m realli glad !! 😳 😳
but... sorri ... i hvnt written since the last update...as i told b4 ..i had left writing.... 😕 so i will start 2 write again ... n update as soon as possible wthin 2 to 3 days...
bye !! 😳 😳 😳

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shalusm

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Posted: 17 years ago

#27

thats good!! 👏
but i feel sorry for huda 😭

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 17 years ago

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"she laughing 4m the doorside...shaking her head in disbelief.." tumhe tho har time sirf romance hi sujtha hai na...sham ke 5 baje hai..mere choclate hero !!... waise bhi iske baad bhi tho hum ek romantic dinner ke liye hi tho jaa rahe hain.... tho mein chali..mere room ko... gave a teasing smile n tuk... off... leaving him watching his beautiful ..beloved wife wth an adoring luk... he knew.... he jus dotted on her... she was more like a kid n he jus luvd to play few tricks at times wth her...coz these light moments r the true esence of a beautiful n content life.........
she went to her rum... it was a beutiful rum indeed ...complementing her style... she had done up the rum herself...it was too private... even raj hadnt been to the rum mani times... it was her private haven...wer she cud b jus her... no tags attached...even though she wud luv to have all the attention in d world... which signifies "RAJ"... in this case... there r times she wud prefer to b alone ..n raj being as understanding as he alwais is ... alwais understood if she spent sometime alone in her rum...afterall it was a womens world in that room ... he thought he better not invade it ...coz as thei sai , there r mani mysteries hidden in them....
well the setting of the rum was elegant... it had white walls wth red art work done on the junction wer the ceiling n the walls meet...n the same ways wer the floor n walls met... it was quite different... the red color jus stood out in the white b/g ...jus like naina ...bold n beautiful... alwais stood out in the crowd... then there were artificial flowers in beautiful wooden baskets on the walls... thei had all the colors ...beautiful whit , red , yellow , pink ....puple flowers wth pretti leaves to add that necessari touch of green to them... she had these flowers on the walls n in mani vases all around the room... nli in this rum ... she dint have ani natural flowers ...except a beutiful red rose plant which she grew in her private balconi...
it told smthing abt her character... it said... she never wanted anithing to change... she wanted time to stand still.... jus like those ever beautiful plastic flowers... never to whither off...she wanted the past... present n future to b the same ... well atleast she wished 4 ...
but again...she grew a rose plant ...coz... she wanted also to b in touch wth the realiti.... but more... constructive one.... she cud alwais see the plant growing...new flowers cmng in the place of the ol' 1s... but still remain the same beautiful roses... jus like... even though mani waves come n go... the shore 4 eterniti remains the same... calm n quiet.... placid.....
the simple things in her rum told a lot abt the person who stays there...simple , independent.... but at the same time... had her own ideas...
next scene ...
we see naina sitting on the dressing table lukn herself into the mirror.. she had a glow in her eyes...a naughty glow..she was hiding something... wel is it a prank...well ..nli those naughti eyes knw... she was indeed lookn gorgeous.. bt there was smthing more into it that made her luk dashing dat evening....... it mite b d secret she was holding on to.....
well...aniwais she was in her 1 of the most fav outfits dat nite... n it cud nli b a.... sari...! this time it was a black sari wth silver bead work n a halter blouse... it was alwais sari 4 a spl occasion... n it was bcoz...well dats naina...it was her persoana... she wud luk gorgeous in all outfits...n she wears them too.. but wen its an occsion to cherish... she wud prefer nli sari... she jus luvd the feel of sari across her body... it made her feel home... special... n to the soldier in her... make her feel...well... Indian...
n wen it cums to sari... there is one important reason... whi she wears them on all imp occasion...well the answer 4 this is a quite simple 1 ... well it dat...all her saris r gifted by...him !!!! he is alwais haapi 2 c her in sari...n she is alwais happi 2 see him happi... well that was how their world went... it jus revolved around each other....

Edited by cutipie.niki - 17 years ago

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 17 years ago

#29

well.... i knw this is a small update... but this is all i cud manage 2dai... so i m sorri....😕 n plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz this time plzzzzzzz do repli... 😕 😕 so that i cud continue... coz... if i get no replies... its like im wasting mi time writing it ... for no 1 wants to read n im jus cluttering the forum... i sureli wudnt want to do that.... 😕 😕 so plzzzzzzzzzzz if u like it...plzzzzz let me knw.... thank u all ...😳 😳
bye !! 😳 😳 😳 😃

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friend forever

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Posted: 17 years ago

#30

@cutipie.niki:h m m m............kya expression!!!!!!!
wonderful!!!!!!!!!
Ye likhna etna assan to nehi hai!!!!!!!!!! character to humari haat me hai,par iska emotion,expreesion likhne ke liye khud ko us jagah par le jana parta hai
ab phir se naraj matt ho jana late reply se
tumhi socho is more pe hume,Raj aur Nina ko chor dena chahiye????????
I think nehi.

and Now It is my earnest request to all the friends please reply on @cutipie.niki's update
nehi to ..............

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