DREAMS...DO COME TRUE.. NEW UP-pg 42 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome plz do continue soon will be waiting for it eagerly
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Posted: 17 years ago
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he gentli caressed her hair.... n was cuddling her like a babi.... her eyes occasionalli lukd at the person above her head... n gave a loving smile... n he returned it n plants a sweet peck on her cheeks... wch turn 4m mild pinkish hue to a deep pink...n raises her head ...turns...n touches his cheeks wth her sweet lips.... wch then moves onto his lips....n thei pour their luv into that passionate kiss...
n ater dat small interlude... thei luk into each others eyes wth passion.... he then simpli smiles..n sez..." naina...i often keep thinking... wat was i dng all those years b4 i met u .. were was i ....wen u were rite here...
i was wandering in darkest deserts of life... wen u were rite here...as my oasis..
why was i lost in the deepest trenches of the oceans... wen u were rite here... as my safest shore....
whi dint i meet u b4 getting lost in the oblivion ... wen u were rite here as my horizon....".... he wud have continued...hi poetic verses... but a tear 4m her eyes...made him melt... he knew those wrent tears of sadness but of love.... saing dat u cud sai ur feelings in these verses... but I dont even hv words...to sai ...wat u mean to me... those eyes were sipmli yelling...... dat .... u r mi soul... there is nthng above u ... nthn beyond... nthn other than u in this whole wide... world ... n nothng wthout u ...in this heart...in this life... forever....n 4ever...


[ thanks evribdi 4 all ur wonderful replies... im realli grateful...
😳 😳 😳 ... i was realli late 2dai... so cud write nli this much.... will tri mi best to update on sundai.... waiting 4 ur replies.... bye !! 😊 😊 😊 ]
Edited by cutipie.niki - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
yes,darling 4ever and 4ever
and now promise u will write 4ever.
splendid!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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her eyes occasionalli lukd at the person above her head... n gave a loving smile... n he returned it n plants a sweet peck on her cheeks... wch turn 4m mild pinkish hue to a deep pink...n raises her head ...turns...n touches his cheeks wth her sweet lips.... wch then moves onto his lips....n thei pour their luv into that passionate kiss...
ater dat small interlude... thei luk into each others eyes wth passion.... he them simpli smiles..n sez..." naina...i often keep thinking... wat was i dng all those years b4 i met u .. were was i ....wen u were rite here...
i was wandering in darkest deserts of life... wen u were rite here...as my oasis..
why was i lost in the deepest trenches of the oceans... wen u wee rite here... as my safest shore....
whi dint i meet u b4 getting lost in the oblivion ... wen u were rite here as my horizon....".... he wud have continued...hi poetic verses... but a tear 4m her eyes...made him melt... he knew those wrent tears of sadness but of love.... saing dat u cud sai ur feelings in these verses... but I dnt even hv words...to sai ...wat u mean to me... those eyes were sipmli yelling...... dat .... u r mi soul... there is nthng above u ... nthn beyond... nthn other than u in this whole wide... world ... n nothng wthout u ...in this heart...in this life... forever....on seeing this he simpli hugs her thightli.... letting his tears fall freeli on her shoulder.... it was an hug which told her ... no ... even fate canot do us apart.... i will b alwais there 4 u...nt jus 4 nw .. nt jus 4 2mrw... but 4 infinity....
It seems that ...that window sill is their most favourit place in their whole huge mansion...actualli...years ago... stood on this same place a small house surrouned bi barren land.... it belonged to raj's father n he had inherited it 4m his father...Raj had lost both his parents when he was very young.... he grew up in his rich uncle's house in kolkatta...his uncle had been a bachelor ...n nw he too was no more... before he died ,he had left all his wealth in the name of Raj... so ...this house was made in the memory of both his parents... the ones who gave birth to him n the one who took care of him... huge potraits of the three of them adorn the main aestheticalli decorated living rum of the mansion... so thei had realli taken so much care in builing n desiging the whole house dat..... It was as if their whole world was in this house... they lived all alone in this huge house wth 2 or 3 servants...thei alwais wanted more ppl to b in their house.....thei wanted the house to b filled wth laughter n their luvd ones....but....somethings r better left unsaid.....
well nw abt the rest of their house....v see ...their splendid bedroom at 1st floor of the mansion... it had red n black walls facing each other....i:e ...... in the middle... the was a king size bed.... with beautiful wooden art work done at the head side... it was majestic..it had a beautiful... soft bed covered wth red satin quilt...two black pillows n numerous small squre pillows arranged perfectli on the bed... the walls were adorned wth tarnished golden art work... n stautes of diffrent sizes were kept at different sites elegantli adding to the beauti of the room.....n fresh red roses were kept near a bedside table....the lighting of the room is dim n romantic..thre was a couch on one side.. wth a centre table....n one one of the walls there was a cupboard... which had all of raj's clothes...there was a balconi on one side.. n on the another side the is a huge bathroom....
now in the next scene ..
we hear raj shouting 4m the bathroom....to naina... for his bath towel .... naina who is wearing a black nite suit ..n standing at the balconi... jus gazing at the lawns below... dreamili... hears this n starts to smile.... jus sez to herself .." yeh raj bhi na.....har bar yehi karte hain... par.... n blushes n continues...... par.. mein unki inhi aadon-mein tho hi marthi hoon... n as she smiles n blushes... goes to take his towel 4m his cupboard n come... b4 dat... raj ..peeping slightli 4m the bathroom hidden behind the door.. shouts mockingli " naina dear... woh towel ... itni bhi bhari nahi hai... thoda jaldi de do na... mai tho thand se mara jaa raha hoon ...!!!!! "....... n naina after reaching hte cupboard.. finds out that.. the towel he usualli uses isnt der... n den she understands that he was jus playin a trick on her... but well...she smiles at his naughtiness n still goes der takn another towel 4m the cupboard.... seeing her smile raj too had understood dat she had found abt his trick... but both knew... thei still wud pretend not to knw... coz fun in life comes 4m such sweet small things....
she the went der n wth a sweet smile handed it over to him as he was stertching his hand out... wen she kept the towel on his hand he pulled her inside ... she was yelling to leave her... that yell was the one filled wth love..." Raj chiii yeh kya kar rahe ho... main poori gili ho gayi ab...tum bhi na...."... raj:" arre maine kya kiya... apni khud ki biwi ko ek hug bhi nahi kar saktha... kya zulmi duniya hai ye!!"grinning...
she then ran out of there n he followed her... n caught her again.. she" mujhe chodo na... dekho tumhari towel loose ho rahi hai... mujhe chodo aur usse pakdo !!" she said teasingli.... raj continuing to hold her tightli.." mujhe tho koi problem nahi hai uski loose hone say... mujhe tho sirf tab problem hogi jab tum mujhse loose hogi !!"... laughing ... she the laughed at his witti answer n at the same time managed to come out of his hold which was weakened nw.... or to say he had let her go... she the ran to the door n shouted 4m there.. "main jake ke dress badlke aati hoon..." n on this he told... "this is totalli unfair !! sare gharon mein... ek hi rum-mein miya biwi dono ke kapde ..ek hi cupboard mein hote hain... magar... jus bocoz ye ghar bada hai... sigh... tumhari ek aur seperate room hai aur jab bhi mein tumse romance karne ke liye aata hoon tum wahan baag jathi ho!! not fair !!! ...he was shouting cuteli... jus like a small kid denied of a chocolate n n so protesting 4 it...!!
"she laughing 4m the doorside...shaking her head in disbelief.." tumhe tho har time sirf romance hi sujtha hai na...sham ke 5 baje hai..mere sweeto choclate hero !!... waise bhi iske baad bhi tho hum ek romantic dinner ke liye hi tho jaa rahe hain.... tho mein chali..mere room ko... aur aap na...yehi baitke ke aahein baarthe rehiye...." gave a teasing smile n tuk... off... leaving his eyes fixed on his beautiful ..beloved wife wth an adoring luk... n jus two words came to his lips..." haye haye !!"...a beutiful smile escaping his lips.. he knew.... he jus dotted on her... she was more like a kid n he jus luvd to play few tricks at times wth her...coz these light moments r the true esence of a beautiful n content life.........


[ I have rewritten the last update too ...to maintain the continuiti...n thought since i had written this much... i will update it 2dai itself...
i hope u all like this update... n plzzzzzzz do repli after reading... eagerli waiting 4 ur comments......😊 ... bye...
P.S:@ friend forever....
thank u so much... 😊 😊 ]
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
@cutipie.niki:thanks to u too...............
today's episode is beautiful,the expression,the room's description,the love,the tricks all r really admirable.
reading it I can clearly imagine all the scene........
excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
go ahead................
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@friend forever...
thank u 4 ur comments..
Well as 4 others...
i think nobdi liked mi writing style....😕 😕 😕 well sorry to hv let u all down... i think i will better stop it here....sorri again... .... bye....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
@cutipie.niki:
I like ur writing style.
I love to read story and more than that I love to read any kind of article
U may post next part or other story
As u wish.........
Best of luck
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
Hey listen its a nice story.Plzzzzzzzzzzz write the next part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
👏 amazing...so roamntic..continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
hey please mere exams shuru hone wale hain is liye main itna nahi aati but i love ur ffs
do continue they are amazing 😳

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