DREAMS...DO COME TRUE.. NEW UP-pg 42

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Posted: 17 years ago

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may............... i know round about time when u will post 2 morrow............

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Posted: 17 years ago

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dunno yar...i will try my best to update 2mrw eveng or by nite.... 😳 😳 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: cutipie.niki
@DIVYA 7000... IM SORRY..IF I MISLED U ... 😕 😕 THERE IS NOTHING SECRET ABOUT THE ROOM... 😕 😕 ITS JUS A PLACE... SHE LIKE TO SPEND TIME ON HER OWN... N AS I SAID... ITS RAJ WHO DOESNT WANT TO INVADE HER PRIVACY... WELL HER MEMORIES TO SAY ...SOME MORE !! 😉

first...its diya7000..not divya dear😊...n now I got ur point...but pl don't use...that sad..emoticons..u r doing extremely well...👏👏..so update soon

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Posted: 17 years ago

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sorry 4 misplelling ur name...😳 😳 .. n thanks too.. 😳 😳 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

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hey thank god u started wrtng again and there is no need to thank me for replying it is just that my exams are round the corner so hardly visit the forum these days
i must say u have a really amazing writing skill and i will be surely waiting for the next post btw is this ff of urs only on rn love story or does it change its way in between????please post the next part fast i am eagerly waiting for it

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tina agarwal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#46

continue soon

its a beautiful fic

read it on orkut

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Posted: 17 years ago

#47

@cutipie.niki:dekha sab lag chahete hai ki u should continue.Aur tum ho ki ...............
anyway next part, plz my friend

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Posted: 17 years ago

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NEXT SCENE...
We see him waiting outside his rum in the living rum 4 her to come...he is dressed in night blue shirt wth a black blazer n black trousers... he is lukn ...well .... nw wat to sai... jus.. dashing... his sense of style was evident in all the things he did... he was a personality who was distinctli different from others wthout ani consicous efforts from his side... as thei sai some ppl r born wth it... born wth style....
he was jus flipping through few nat geo magazines placed on their table ...it had pictures of beautiful flowers n exotic places... he jus luvd both ... he was sitting there 4 almost half an hour.. but not once the thought of waiting there 4 such a long time even occured in his mind..nt bcoz he was seeing those beutiful pics n reading abt them ... bt jus knew... he wud wait a lifetime 4 her n this jus nothing... but evritime he aw a veri exotic flower ... nli thing which came to his mind was how beutiful she was... well wat to sai... it was a lovers heart afterall...
now after a long time she steps out of her OWN world n walks upto the living rum ...veri well knwing he wud b there waiting 4 her...bi an impulse or to sai... love does teach heart to communicate wthout the need of ani senses... he turned towards the side in which she was coming.. n wat he saw was an intricateli carved sculpture of beauti... the most exotic of flowers... most rarest of diamonds... the freshest of morning dew.... his thoughts knew no bounds.... he was jus speechless...
it was not as if she hadnt lukd beutiful before... but 2dai... well there was an inexplainable poetic nature to her beauti... anibodi cud have bcm a poet seeing her... there was something new abt her.. which he hadnt noticed till then... he was jus wondering what dat cud be... a sparkle in her deepest ocean like eyes... he was getting lost in them wen ... she gave the worlds most beautiful smile ...which made his heart leap ... she jus came near him n gentli bent n gave a peck on his cheeks !! he was spell bound ... n she told..."u r lukn ...dashing dear..."... he then came out of his revierie n smiled n gentli got up 4m his couch n pulled her hand a gave a gentle kiss on it n asked.."shall v go then dear ?".. n thei both leave to their favorite restaurant...

well.. the restaurant is different as the favourite restaurant of such an unusalli different couple should be... it was almost at the suburbs of delhi...it lukd like a ol' english mansion... it was a tall biuiding ... wth a narrow.. pyramidal roof.. it was brick red in color..n was mellowed wth the age... the car parking was at the back of the building n so 4m the front the beauti of the builing was not disturbed... it had an ol' world charm to it... as we enter we find a huge door... wth stained glass at the top n exquisite wooden art work on the door.. n then as we enter inside v see... a beuitifuli lit place... cream colored walls which made a subdued stament of their own...the ambience of the rum was almost magical...there were huge chandiliers hanging i various corners.. the furniture were couches wth tables rather than tables n chairs... it instanli made 1 feel at home.. their dream home...the couches ...few were red n few blue... wth beautiful glass centre tables... there was a small chandilier on top of each couch...n a beutiful candle stand wth fragrant candles in it..... it adeed to the magic in the atmosphere..the couches were quite few in number n were placed quite far 4m each other in secluded areas... as the owners believed in maintaing the beauti intact of this wonderful place... there alwais was a special spot ...facin the huge window which lukd upon the gentli lit garden outside... 4 our couple...thei used to frequent this place quite often... it jus matched the character of our couple... both were romantic....

THEN
we see our couple are in the car ... theres a beautiful romantic ol' hindi song playin in their limousine...raj was driving n humming the male part of that duet while naina was humming the female part of the duet... both in perfect sync wth each other jus like their thoughts..both luvd these kinda songs... songs wth melodi... songs wth meaning... songs whch wud make them 4 get the realiti... wch wud transfer them into a place... not guarded bi boundaries... not bound bi chains... a place were thei r free.. free like birds... free like flowing water.... jus merge into each other...like rivers merge into the ocean.... getiing lost in each other... 4ever...

Edited by cutipie.niki - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago

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sorri i was a bit late 2dai...had to go out...n came bak late... well i have written nli this much 2dai... 😕 😕 will write more n post it 2mrw... well this scene is to b continued n well the stori is going to open up more...
@ arss...well it is a love stori... but it will have mani different facets to it... i hope u like it...😳 😳
n thanks to all others who replied !! 😳
asusual waiting 4 ur replies...
bye !! 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

#50

whai I say??????????????no words are truely fit for it!!!!Aajki update me conversion bahut hi kam hai,still the expressions ............I mean it's really fantastic.
Accha ye batao tum aajki episode me khud ko kitne marks dogi??
main to tumhe 10 me 9 de rahi hoon

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