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..neelanjana

@..neelanjana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#581

Sad update !Feeling sorry for Geet's friend seriously how pathetic is the mentality of some people !!Brij & Tayiji...😡 don't wanna say any thing about them 🤬Maan is tensed something is fishy...Precap is horrible

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sobia4maaneet

@sobia4maaneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#582

meeting her mother was the only good thing about this trip after all !!

HP remains the same however the heavenly years of freedom outside made her forget what lifestyle she is suppose to have here ..sad the chauvinism still thr in few such areas of our countries ..

simi's incident was a even sadder thing to think of ..i hope maan would take her to delhi to get her some help ..

but first he needs to get back thr n help his wifey darling from those awful people ...

where is geet's father ..?? is he dead n i ve forgotten sorry writer i don't remember but if he is alive plzz make him stand up or atleast clear his character if he is also brij types :(

the whole paradise is a mess now i guess ...maan wahan trap hai geet yahan struggle kar rhi hai ..

n now dadi maa ill as well ..

this is disaster ..!!!

next time maan would know better than to leave geet alone ...

the precap ...plzz get maan back n have him slap that idiot brother of her hard as well ...***PLUUEEJJJ***

thnaks for the update

waiting for next already

luv ya

sobia

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mansiahmed

@mansiahmed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#583

Nice part...the hoshyarpur n its rules...thayyiiji🤢...maan being busy n dadimas illness n geet being restless with the kid talk...but i ont like geet is not reacting she is lisning to all taunts .she has been to london n working woman n last but not least she is Mrs.Maan Khurana she left behind her past like a meek girl sh emerged as a trong girl with maan or Is she going to emerge as a strong girl by this trip,brij slapping geet not at all acceptable hope Maan reach on time

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Desire6

@Desire6

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Posted: 10 years ago

#584

i would ...like to comment niche say...
serioulys...Brij😡 crap...wat we say...ha...raddhi ke bhav jayega..maan ke haatho...

how dare he to slap maan ki pumpkin...ko...
oh its so sad ...maan left her here to njoy...it was better he had taken her wit him...atleast she would have been not likedis...
lonly...

and wat a family...sachmai...
do dey leave in 18th century kya...odni..no jeans...bhanjh..nd wat not...
even geet ki mom..she is also thinking on der line...
waise..yeh...society is only like dis..nd more devil is dat tayji...kya uski geet say koi khunas hai kya...
dat he is so rude to her...

loved dat maneet ka cute emotional talks...
it was d only good thing in all dis...
how maan was tensed..yet was not able to hide it from his pumpkin...

nd maan...i hope hope he reaches n witness...brij slappin...her...nd
show dem der place..for hurtin his pumpkin..samajta kya hai..brij khudko...

nd god yahi twist tha ashu yeah aur koi b hai...
very emotional update...
bt loved it very much...

specially maneet talks...

waitin..eagerly for next part...
cont soon..
will be waiitn..

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nihatri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#585

Pls don't mess up the peace of the story

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

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Posted: 10 years ago

#586

Situations are very much related to real life

Geet has been living a differrent life abroad

N now back to village she has to obey the elders

N hear their harsh talks

N simis incident has shook her

Maan being away n he hided dadis sickness too

Geet is sulking in dark

Noone to share her fear

Awesome part

Very painful

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

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Posted: 10 years ago

#587

Precap.oh nohope maan comes there

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Madhuri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#588

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

Updating...😈

jaldi karo...waiting..😊

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KawaiiGeet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#589

PART 7

"I love you Maan...", she didn't know why but she felt like confessing today. her heart had been so heavy and dadima's ill health just scared her more to death.

"love you a lot pumpkin. Now sleep...good night."
She kept the phone and tried to sleep but nights had been sleepless for her these days perhaps. And just like the previous nights, she just couldn't sleep.

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"Simmi..tu please khud ko sambhal. Mein tujhe yahan se le chalungi. Tujhe kuch nahi hoga!"

She didn't know from where she got this courage but she found herself determined to help her friend. She was stronger than she had been, all thanks to the loving family she had back in Delhi. Had she been the geet that she was a few years back, she'd even not dare to open her mouth. But now, she knew what was wrong, was wrong and though she knew her family wouldn't approve of it, she had to help her friend no matter what. she quietly got back home, taking care she was well on time before anyone questioned her and found the house being decorated. She looked around carefully and saw rano coming to her, smiling.

"maa, ye sab kya ho raha hain?"

Rano gave her a basket full with some decoration stuffs, "bhool gayi geet... parson teej hain! aur ye sab usi ki taiyyari hain! chal ja, ye saman tayiji ko de aa!"

"ohh...theek hain!", she nodded and walked slowly towards tayiji, who was busy cleaning the rooms. She didn't even want to face her after her usual taunts but then she was one person who could never keep grudges against her loved ones.

Tayiji gave her a look while taking the stuffs from her, "itna ghumna phirna band kar aur ja apna kamra saaf kar!"

Geet just nodded quietly and was about to go when tayiji called her, "geet puttar..."

She turned back, hearing the gentleness in her voice, "ji tayiji?"

"umm..maanji kab waapis aa rahe hain? wo itne achanak aise chale gaye..mujhe chinta ho rahi hain.."

Geet was surprised to see that genuine concern and she felt happy that tayiji was not rude. Though she may sound like one, but she loved her deep down.

"ji..maan ko office se phone aya tha aur unhe urgently jana pada.."

Tayiji cupped her face, "dus din hone aaye hain geet aur maanji bhi nahi aaye tho mujhe fikar ho rahi thi.."

"nahi tayiji.. bas kaam khatam hote hi wo aa jayenge."

"theek hain puttar... koi gal ni. Tu ja apna kaam kar!"

Geet smiled and left. She felt really glad that tayiji wasn't being her usual self. She had always been like this. She was bitter mouthed but she never thought ill of anyone.
It was late evening when she called Maan but he didn't answer! She called him a few minutes later but he just disconnected the call. She was worried now for Maan never did that. She thought he might be busy so she waited until dinner was over. She quickly went to her room and called him yet again. after a few missed calls, he finally answered but he was frantic.

She could hear voices...lots of noise from the other side, like some kind of altercation or anything for that matter that wasn't pleasant at all.

"Maan...aap theek hain? what is happening?"

She could hear his heavy breaths, "jaan..i will speak to you later alright. Am still at
work."

She could feel that tension in his voice that worried her more, "Maan..kya baat hain? sab theek hain na?"

"bye geet..take care. Annie might visit you tomorrow."

"Maan...", she couldn't even complete and the line had gone dead. She sighed and immediately called Annie, asking about dadima. This was one relief that Dadima was totally fine and she was back home.

"Annie is dadima around? Can I speak?"

"she is sleeping geet. Acha suno.. i will be going to your place may be tomorrow or day after.."

She was reminded of Maan and immediately asked her, "Annie, tell me honestly, what is going on there? I know there is something really serious and your brother is just not telling me anything!"

"umm..err geet, you know there is some legal issue going on right so the media kind of got the wind of it and now they are haunting bhai like hell!"

"am worried... i want to go back to Delhi right now!"

"don't worry geet, I am anyways going to bring you back with me."

Geet smiled, "yeah.. come soon. But if you come, how will dadima manage? She isn't well na.."

"umm..tum fikar mat karo. Bua ji aayi hain. she said she will take care!"

"hmm..come soon okay. I really can't be in peace!"

"calm down babes...Am coming soon. And Just don't worry about bhai.. he is totally cool."

It took a bit persuasion from Annie to calm geet down but she wouldn't rest until she was back home and seen everyone fine with her own eyes.

The next morning, geet found everyone busy preparing for teej. It was her first festival at home so things were a bit more grand than usual. Geet kept herself busy with the preparations until she saw Brij go out for getting stuffs. She was quick on her toes because she knew this was one moment where she could help her friend. She quickly asked rajji to make an excuse for her and rushed out of the house.

It was bright afternoon and she just ran out to Simmi's. Her parents were shocked to see geet back again. they tried to stop her, fearing the society which considered their daughter as a bad omen, but geet was adamant.

Once Simmi's parents were away, she quickly locked the door behind her and rushed to simmi, "sun, kal teej hain aur tu taiyyar rehna. Mein kal sham ko Delhi jaa rahi hoon..aur tu mere saath chalegi!"

Initially simmi was shocked to death, sceptical about their escapade but geet was determined, "par geet..ye sab...kyun?"

"shh.. kal teej hain aur sab busy honge. Kisi ko pata nahi chalega!"

"par ye sab tu kyun kar rahi hain geet? Tujhe pata hain agar kisi ko pata chal gaya kit u mujhse milti hain tho sab kya kahenge?", Simmi had tears in her eyes, overwhelmed with the effort geet was putting in.

Geet wiped her tears, "kyunki tu meri dost hain aur sahi aur galat ki pehchaan hain mujhe!"

Simmi hugged her and cried and geet could just say nothing because all simmi had in her heart was pain and only pain. at least she was letting it out.

She took her leave and slowly walked out of the door, being careful that none saw her. she sighed looking around and stepped out but froze right on her steps, meeting those red, furious eyes that held terror and pure terror in them.

Brij was returning home and whilst his jeep made through the narrow lane, his eyes fell on geet who was stepping out of that woman's house. He halted the car and glared at her. how dare she!!!

Geet was rooted at her spot, fear engulfing her as to what would happen to her in the next minute. Brij was heartless and she knew what he was capable of.

"Gaadi mein baith!", he thundered, grabbing attention of the people around, who also seemed too stunned to see someone at Simmi's house!

"GEETT... gadi mein baith!", he screamed, making her jump. And when she just couldn't move, he held her hand and dragged her to the jeep.

"ahh..veerji...", she could merely squeak out. She was scared now, knowing how cold her brother was.

Brij didn't say anything. he just made her sit in the jeep and drove madly towards Handa haveli.

The house was bustling with all the preparations. Darji was watching news on TV while the women chatted and a few neighbours were home too, for the teej preparation.
The moment geet got down, Brij dragged her in, holding her hand so tight that it pained her. her eyes watered, "Veerji...please chodiye..."

It hurt so bad that she jerked her hand off, enraging her more. Brij looked at her with utmost hatred and grabbed her hair and dragged her in, "bahut par nikal aaye hain tere. Abhi batata hoon..."

She cried in pain, as he dragged her inside, shocking everyone out there. Rano came running, "brij kya kar rhe ho? Chodo usey..."

He shot a stern look to geet and pushed her away. She was about to fall but her papaji held her, "geet beta...kya baat ho gayi?"

Before anyone could say anything, Brij thundered, "usey kya pooch rahe ho chachaji... mujhse pooch..kahan dekha tha meine ussey!!"

Darji came to them, glaring at geet, "kya kiya isne ab?"

"Darji.. ye itne din se humse chup chup ke uss Simmi se mil rahi thi. Wo tho acha hain aaj meine issey dekh liya..."

Everyone gasped, murmuring stuffs about geet and simmi. No one ever dared to even go near her, let alone talk to her. Papaji was shocked but he cupped geet's face, "puttar...kya ye sach hain?"

Geet look down, not saying anything.

"Bol geet..kya ye sach hain?", Rano asked her.

Geet sighed and nodded in affirmative, angering everyone.

Tayiji burst out, "dekh liya beti ko itni choot dene ka anjaam?", she rushed to geet and push her away, "kyun re... teri shadi itne bade ghar me karwayi tho iska matlab tu kuch bhi karegi! Mana kiya tha na tujhe..?"

"han geet...kyun gayi thi wahan? Humne samjhaya tha tujhe..phir bhi?", Rano questioned, scared of her daughter's future now.

Geet kept mum while Tayiji spoke whatever came to her mind, "...uss banjh ke ghar jakar tune tho humari naak kaat di..sharam nahi aayi tujhe?"

This irked geet. She had been quiet knowing fighting with these people was useless but then demeaning a woman to this extent, made her patience break. She glared back at Tayiji, "Baanjh nahi hain wo...", she screamed, "Nahi hain wo koi buara Saya... aap sabne mil kar ussey baanjh bana diya hain"

Tayiji was enraged by her audacity to talk back and turned to rano, "dekh le rano apni beti ko... apne ghar ki izzat ki koi parwah nahi hain issey.."

"ye galat hain geet..tu ussey nahi mil sakti.."

"Kyun nahi mil sakti?", geet blasted, "kya kharabi hain usme? Baccha nahi ho raha tho ghar se nikal denge? Kabhi socha hain uspe kya beeti hogi? Shaadi koi khel hain kya? Uske pati ne usey chod diya tho kyaa aap log bhi uske saath aisa suluk karenge?"

"ehh lo.. shaadi ki baat two keh rahi hain jisko uske pati ne uski shaadi ki raat ko bina dekhe chod kar chala gaya?", Tayiji tainted, making geet go numb!

Rano didn't want this to come out like this. She didn't even know when Tayiji had got to know this but Darji was more shocked, "kya?"

"han bauji", tayiji commented, "apni geet bhi kaunsi doodh ki dhuli hain? Yaad hain shaadi ki raat maanji chale gaye they kisi kaam se? Wo issey yahan chod kar gaye the... aur ab jab ye waapis aayi hain, ab bhi issey chod kar chae gaye hain..."

"tayiji ye kya keh rahi hain aap?", geet was stunned as tears rolled down her eyes.

"sahi tho keh rahi hoon... ek waaris tho aaj tak unhe de nahi paayi...tho tujhe bhi yahin chod kar chale gaye...warna koi apni biwi ko aise maike me chod kar kyun chala jata?"

"tayiji bas... ek aur shabd nahi! Aap hoti kaun hain mere aur Maan ke bare mein kuch kehne wali? Kuch jaanti bhi hain mere aur Maan ke bare mein?", geet had hot tears rolling down her face, unable to hold that hurt and anger at the same time.

"mujhe kyun chup kara rahi hain geet? Khud se ppooch...shaadi ke teen saal poore hone aaye hain..tu bhi Simmi ki tarah hain...Maan se pooch kyun nahi aaye tujhe lene?"

"bas!!!", darji thundered, "geet ko yahan se lekar jao...", there was enough drama for now. Everyone was in a festive mood and he really didn't want people to gossip, "aur geet koi koi bahar nahi jaane dega!"

Geet stood defiantly while rano tried to make her understand, "Geet.. tu Simmi se aur nahi milegi bas!"

Geet pushed her away, "Mein jaungi ussey milne... woe k insaan hain..koi janwar nahi!"

Brij shouted, "bahut badtameez ho gayi hain tu...bhool mat tu hoshiyarpur mein hain... "

"Jo galat hain.. wo galat hain veerji.. aur mein Simmi ke saath aisa nahi hone dungi.."

And the next moment, she felt her head spinning and she stumbled back, falling on the ground. Her cheek burned with the stinging sensation and she felt her face going numb with the intensity of the slap. She couldn't even move for a while but the incident just shook her. rano quickly walked geet to her room and made her sit on the bed, "ye kya ho gaya hain tujhe geet? Kyun aisa kar rahi hain? sab tho tere bhale ke liye hi keh rahe hain na.."

Geet just didn't reply. Tayiji's words rang in her mind..maan left her because she couldn't bear him a child! Maan would kill to get her, she knew him that well, but tayiji's words hurt her deep within. When rano was gone, she somehow walked towards the washroom and checked herself. her cheek had turned completely red and it was bleeding too.she tried to touch it, but it hurt so much. She just washed herself and went to sleep but she couldn't. She missed Maan. She wished he were back soon. Tayiji's words just didn't leave her mind. She trusted Maan but she was hurt deep down. Tears rolled down as she cried her heart out. She was back home after so long and it just didn't seem that people were happy to see her back!

The next morning, rano woke her up early around 4am for the teej festival and gave her the shagun and stuffs. She hadn't slept the whole night and it was just when the clock had struck 3, she had finally closed her eyes. She felt feverish, dizzy and weak. Rano asked her to get ready and come to the living room for mehendi. Geet just kept quiet and did as instructed.

She sat quietly as the ladies applied mehendi on her hands, teasing and also gossiping about what had happened the previous evening. But geet was far from all that. She felt her heart sink with whatever was happening. Tayiji didn't even look at her and she couldn't bother about it. she just did things mechanically as rano told her about the fast and stuffs.

Handa Haveli was full with people and geet just kept to herself. She was carrying some stuffs across the hall when rajji screamed, "geet didi... dekho jiju tv par hain... "

Everyone gathered around and rajji pulled geet near the tv as well. There was some interview of his, regarding the legal problem that he had been dealing with. Geet just heard nothing. She just stared at him lovingly. Its been long she hadn't even spoken to him. even with those shades on, she could sense he was tensed and tired. She so wanted to run and hug him till her hearts content. Her own house now seemed to suffocate her.

She was about to leave post his interview when there were pictures of him with a girl, claiming to have filed the case and the news reporter talked of how they had been caught in a hotel, late night. There were images of him escorting the lady out of the hotel in the morning and talks dominated the headlines. Geet was shocked at first but what killed her was tayiji and others looking at her accusingly. Papaji immediately turned off the TV and asked everyone to leave.

Geet couldn't understand what was going on. Maan being with a girl, the problems he'd been facing, dadima's ill health, just nothing made sense. Everyone stared at her like she was the main culprit.

"Dekh liya...isi wajah se Maan ne tujhe yahan chod diya..samajh ja geet aur tu humse zaban lada rahi thi.."

Geet felt the pinch in her heart. she didn't know who taunted but her heart sunk with that comment. She felt dizzy and nauseated. She hadn't eaten last night and she was to fast the whole day for teej. She knew Maan and she knew media well. She just walked slowly back to her room when she heard a familiar voice, "Geettt..."

She looked towards the door and saw a beaming annie, rushing to hug her. geet couldn't see her clearly with tears clouding her eyes but she was glad annie was here.
"ohh I missed you so much. Told you I'd come right...", annie ran and hugged her tightly. Geet felt that warmth in Annie that she had missed despite being home. Geet hugged her tightly and finally took a deep breath in.

Annie pulled back, holding her shoulders, "Ab bhai nahi aa sake tho unhone mujhe bhej diya tumhare liye..."

And the next moment geet fell limp in her arms, scaring the life out of her, "Geet...oh my god...geet kya hua??"

But geet didn't respond. She wanted rest...she wanted to go away from everything and this darkness that she was in right now was the best place. She was tired and she wanted to go back home.

She didn't realize how long she had slept or where she was but she felt nice. Not dizzy not suffocated...in fact she felt peaceful and warm and happy. She stirred a bit and felt the warm embrace of someone around her. she slowly tried to open her eyes, adjusting to the light when a hazy but a familiar image greeted her. she blinked a couple of times and this time she saw him, close to her, holding her in his arms. Unsure, she looked around and found herself in her room, still in HP.

"ma...an...", she could just barely speak.

He just pulled her up close in his arms and hugged her, "thank god you are fine! What have you done to yourself geet?"

She felt nice... warm, in fact happy in his arms, safe after a long time. Tears clouded in her eyes, "I missed you so much Maan..."

"you scared me...", he place a kiss on her temple.

"but how come you are here...all of a sudden?", she asked, not even parting away.

"Annie called me up, said you fainted and ran high fever... and here I am.."

"but Maan... what about your work?"

"you are more important to me right now...", he leaned closer to her and whispered in her ears, "and guess what?"

"umm?", she spoke faintly.

He smiled, "we are going to be parents..."

The look he saw on her face was worth the happiness he had received when he had gotten here. From shock to surprise to amazement to happiness...her tears said it all. she had been so low all these days and suddenly learning of her pregnancy and seeing Maan back, she just couldn't hold it back. She hugged him tightly and cried her heart out.

He hadn't expected to hear such a good news when he had headed back to HP. All he wished was his pumpkin was fine. Annie's call had really scared him when she had cited that geet ran high fever as well. But when the doctor confirmed the news, he just couldn't have waited for his darling pumpkin to just wake up. He pulled her up in his arms and caressed her back, "shh... its okay pumpkin.. am back to you."

"Maan.. I want to go back.. please.."

"Umm I know.. but you are not well na..."

"Maan please..."

He cupped her cheeks to tell her how much he wanted her back with him but she winced in pain, the moment he did so.
"ahh..."

His ears shot up as he tried to hold her again and she winced. Worried, he pulled her close and checked her cheeks and was shocked to see it totally red, with a bit of clotted blood here and there. it didn't even take him long to understand what could have happened.

"Geet...who did this?", he breathed in sharply, making geet gulp hard.

"Tell me geet...ye kaise hua?", his warm breath fell on her, telling her how angry he was.

"nahi...wo Maan kuch nahi... I just fell and there were pebbles...", she tried not to worsen the situation. Right now, she needed none but Maan to be with her. they were going to be parents and she needed nothing else to worry them.

"you think me a fool?", he thundered. How dare anyone lay a finger on his pumpkin?
"was it papaji??", he screamed, scaring her. he was angry and she knew how violent his anger was. He never got angry and when he did there would be no stopping!

"nahi Maan..please calm down..."

"Was it darji?",he asked seething.

"no Maan... aapplease gussa mat kijiye..."

"Brij?", he wasn't even listening to her.

Geet knew she was a bad liar when it came to Maan for he read her eyes like an open book. Still, she didn't want any hassle. Her lips said no but her eyes betrayed! And Maan knew his jaan inside out. Before geet could even ask him stop, he had already stormed out of their room.

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Edited by kawaii_geet - 10 years ago

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

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Posted: 10 years ago

#590

i feel like hitting every member in HP with a stick so that they think... really THINK...

Sad that not even a single member in Geet's family seem to have sensibility..

Simi thing was itself blown out of proportion.. instead of getting her a help or knowing what went wrong, they have just named her and kept her aside...

and worst, just coz Geet met up with simi, they are including Geet also in that category..

seriously, they thought Maan left her coz she was not having a kid.. kash they knew how crazy Maan was about her.. and if he ever heard about what all they told her, he would just blast it off..

and its so much crap that these people make marriage just a ritual for getting kids.. Ofcourse kids bring immense happiness and are major part of a married life, but that doesnt mean if you dont have a kid, the whole marriage is a failure.. Its more about two ppl getting to know each other, falling in love and love and care for other selflessly...

and top notch was that idiot Brij... just coz he thinks he is right, he does anything he wants.. Moron... Iam so waiting to see Brij given back his own treatment from Maan..

Geet is pregnant and coz of this situation, she is more scared than expressing her happiness... and am so damn waiting for Maan's reaction..

Everyone of the Handa family member needs a good earful from him..

and that was a very wrong point to stop..

I WANT an UPDATE ASAP..

Edited by Shruthe - 10 years ago