Mg ss- It Takes Two Season-2 THREAD #1

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DimaagKaKeeda

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Oh god Melanie as Vamp is hilarious. Her trying to give those smirks 🤣

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Updateee Updateee *meri maange puri karo writerji*

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Can't wait for Handa's clan bear Maan's wrath. Brij ko dho dale.

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geet trying to help simmi she told her they will leave for delhi on teej day
brij saw her coming out from simmi house and he dragged her from there he told everyone in the home where geet has been going all these days secretly taiji as usual taunted her but geet is firm to help simmi
brij slapped her grr how dare he now maan wont gonna live him
on the day of teej news regarding maan came on tv all started taunt geet again saying because of she not able to give birth to child he left her and having time with other girl
annie came there and geet fainted due to high fever
when she woke up she saw maan infront of her she felt overwhelmed and she also got the news that they are going to become parents she felt happy
maan noticed red marks on her cheek and he asked her who did this to her but geet didn't say anything but maan knew who did this and he went from there at once
eagerly waiting for the next part

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DimaagKaKeeda

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Saari Night Besharmi Ki Height

Ek Tuuu Ek Mainnn

Aur Ho Dim Dim Dim Yeh Light

^^ Whenever I listen to this song, it reminds me of ITT Maan 😛 Suits him sooo perfectly well 🤣

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Guzara Waqt

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Geet was already emotionally vulnerable n Handa family weaken her more with their filthy thoughts about Girls.

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OMG, who are spamming here. hey gals. 😛

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@supriya_anand: hi dear and welcome aboard. it feels wonderful to see people like you come ahead and post their awesome comments on our works and am very happy that you like my works. Its a great motivation for me and i hope to see you in every thread of mine.
oh and you have mentioned : "I read this line in the prologue: Maan needs space from his wifey!!"

Darling please check the prologue again if its "from his wifey" or "with his wifey".😉
i think you are mistaken!😆 anyways, do enjoy reading.

@ALL: I will be finishing this ss in the next 3-4 parts. See you all in the next thread!😉

PART 8

"Brij?", he wasn't even listening to her.

Geet knew she was a bad liar when it came to Maan for he read her eyes like an open book. Still, she didn't want any hassle. Her lips said no but her eyes betrayed! And Maan knew his jaan inside out. Before geet could even ask him stop, he had already stormed out of their room.

"Maan...please stop...", she rushed behind him, calling him out.. she had been weak and couldn't pace up to him, but nevertheless, she followed, frantic and scared.

"Maannn...rukiye..."

Annie was in the room just beside theirs. Hearing geet's voice, she rushed out and held her, "ohh god geet kya hua? You know you are not well...see you can't even walk!"

Geet held Annie, "Annie please stop Maan... bahut gusse mein hain..."

"theek hain..pehle tum baitho..."

Geet held her hand, "no please...just stop Maan first."

Everyone sat in the hall, rejoicing the good news that beautified this teej festival. It was almost dinner time and all the puja were done. Geet had been sleeping the whole time for she had been sick. Brij was talking to someone on phone while the ladies were spreading the table. Darji was working on some stuffs and everything seemed too peaceful until Maan's voice shook the entire haveli!

"Brijjj...", he marched with long strides, fuming within. His eyes were red in rage. He didn't care where he was or who was he dealing with. All that mattered to him was the person standing right in front of him had dared to lay a finger on his pumpkin. In three years of their marriage, he never dared to even raise a voice at her, and someone hurting his beloved drove him crazy with anger.

He screamed for his attention again and everyone were scared to see Maan this angry. Papaji came rushing, "Maan bete...kya hua? Aap itne naraz kyun hain?"

{Maan bete..what happened? Why are you so upset?]

Maan shot him a glare and walked straight to Brij and waited for him to finish the call. Rano and others rushed out, getting worried that what had made their reverend son-in law this upset. Brij smiled seeing him and immediately kept the phone, "Arrey Maanji...kya baat ho gayi?"

[Maan ji, what has happened?]

He felt like punching this douche bag right now for he was acting as if nothing happened!!! Rano came running, worried what has upset her favourite son-in law, "Maan puttar ki hoya?"

He turned back to rano, "Am sorry Ma but koi meri jaan ko haath lagaye ye mujhe pasand nahi!"

[am sorry ma but i hate anyone who dares lay his finger on my jaan.]

He turned back to Brij and punch him hard on his face, making him tumble down. Brij was unprepared and this sudden blow made him fall, shocked and disoriented!

"Maan Puttar...kya kar rahe hain aap?", Darji shouted.

[Maan puttar...what are you doing?]

He didn't even listen. He bent down and picked brij up, who still hadn't recovered from the blow he received, "tu janna chahta hain na meine tujhe kyun maara?"

[you want to know why I hit you?]

Brij was too shocked, "Maan...ye aap kya.."

But Maan didn't let him speak. He pushed him away, "Ye ek aurat pe haath uthane ke liye..."
[this was for raising your hand on a woman..]

"Ye kya bakwaas hain?", Brij fumed, "aap meri behen ke pati hain par iska koi matlab nahi ke aap jo chahe karein.."

[what is this nonsense? You are my sister's husband but that doesn't give you any right to do whatever you wish to..]

Maan could almost kill him there. the audacity of this man! He pulled him close by his collar and thrust another punch into his stomach, "ye..apni behen pe haath uthane ke liye..."

[this...was for raising your hand on your sister...]

Tayijji's eyes watered as she rushed to Maan, "Maan ye aap kya kar rahe hain..chodiye usey..."

[Maan... what are you doing...please leave him..]

But Maan was in no mood to listen to anything. he prepared for another punch but this time Brij countered the attack, "aap jaante nahi aap kiske saath dushmani kar rahe hain Maan...", he threatened,furious, ready to fight back.

[you don't know who are you dealing with!]

"Jaanta hoon... I am dealing with a spineless bas***d jo apni mardangi dikhane ke liye aurton pe haath uthata hain..."

[I know... I am dealing with a spineless bas***d who, to satisfy his ego raises hands on women...]

"Aap had paar kar rahe hain Maan... mein bhool jaunga ke aap mere behnoi hain..", Brij screamed, unable to take that blow on his ego.

[You are crossing your limits Maan...I will forget that you are my brother-in law..]

"had tho tune paar ki hain saale...", Maan bit out.

And in no time, Brij was over Maan, revenging for his bruised ego. Maan felt a punch on his cheek but he wasn't going to let go of this jerk. He held his hand, and pulled him into a lock, hurting him. he screamed and kicked Maan on his knee that had him disoriented and he freed himself. He turned back and was about to hit him but Maan was quick enough to table, and thrust a few more punches, making him bleed. Papaji and Darji tried to stop him but he was nowhere near stopping. He had been too damn angry to see his geet so scared and so much in pain. he never realized when Brij had fallen down and was bleeding from his nose and mouth yet he didn't stop kicking.
Tayiji begged him to stop but he wouldn't listen. Rano asked him too but Maan was not even in hs senses.

"Maan...", he heard that familiar plaintive cry of his pumpkin, who came rushing to him and held him away, "Maan..chodiye please...stop..."

"Geet...just stay away...", he stopped for a moment and pushed her away to a safe distance, "I won't spare him today!"

But geet hugged him sideways, "Maan please...", she cried, "stop all this. He is injured please..."

He looked at her tear stricken face. he didn't want her to cry when she should be squealing in happiness and ceased for a while. He felt sad for her that she had been through all this when he wasn't with her.

"Please stop...", she sobbed, "its enough! I can't take this anymore!"

He could never deny her. he softened seeing her cry on her happiest moment. He pulled back and hugged her, placing a kiss on her forehead, "as you wish jaan..."
He held her close by her waist and walked back. Brij stood up, with the help of Papaji and Tayiji, wiping that blood off his nose, "ye aapne sahi nahi kiya Maan..."

[it wasn't a good move Maan..]

Maan stopped on his tracks and looked at geet, who seemed to shaken up with everything. he gestured her to wait and walked back to Brij. Geet tried to hold him back but he didn't stop.

He smirked as he went closer to brij and without a warning, punched him one last time making him fall back again!
"aur yeh...yeh meri Patni pe haah uthan ke liye..."

[and this... this is for hurting my wife]

And indeed it hurt like hell. Rano was so upset with all the drama unfolding but somewhere deep down she felt blessed that her daughter got such a husband who always stood by her side.

Maan went back to geet and hugged her. as he walked to their room, he just announced, "Hum yahan se jaa rahe hain... abhi isi waqt!"

[we are leaving... right now!]

Everyone was surprised to hear Maan make such an announcement. They knew Maan had a bad impression on them now and upsetting their son-in law was a sin, according to their beliefs and more than that they feared a bad reputation, in their own town as well as back in Maan's family.

After almost half an hour, he walked out, calling the driver to take their luggage and holding Geet, who seemed too upset with the whole thing. Annie had never expected something like this to happen but she was glad that they were moving out. She felt sick learning of Brij and his stupid mindset. Everyone in the Handa clan rushed to them, trying to stop them from leaving.

Papaji bowed his head in shame, "Maan ji ruk jaiye..aap aaj hi tho aaye hain... "

[Maanji please stay... you came just today]

Darji too came forward, "Maana humare bache se galti ho gayi.. par aap aise naraz hokar mat jaiye puttarji.."

[We agree our kid made a mistake.. but please don't go being upset like this..]

He gestured Brij who came ahead and apologized too. But Maan would buy none of that. He was hell angry and would never bear his wife being insulted. Annie looked away as tayiji approached her, asking her to make her brother understand. In all this, the only woman who remained quiet was Rano for she knew it was better if geet was with Maan. She'd be safe there, both physically and mentally.

When Maan and Annie didn't budge, Tayiji went to geet, "puttar... tum log itni raat kahan jaoge.. aur tu pet se hain.. teri tabiyat bhi theek nahin..aisi halat mein bahar jana theek nahi..tu hi maanji ko samjha..."

[puttar... where will you go at this time of the night? And you are pregnant too.. its not good to go out in this condition..please ask Maan to stay..]

But to her utter shock, all geet did was look away, holding Maan's arm tighter, giving her answer.

Maan placed his hand over her hold and caressed it gently and looked back at tayiji, "I hope aapko apka jawab mil gaya... humari fikar karne ki koi zarurat nahi..."

[I hope you got your answer. No need to worry about us.]

As they headed out, Papaji tired to stop them but Maan just gave a cold look, "Jahan meri Geet ki izzat nahi... am sorry papaji par mein wahan nahi ruk sakta."

[where there is no respect for my geet, am sorry papaji but i can't stay there.]

He turned back one last time to look at the family members, realizing how shallow they had been, "Geet ki fikar karne ki koi zarurat nahi..."

[You all don't have to worry about geet..]

And he walked her out. No explanations asked or made. They drove out, leaving the bitter things behind. The drive was silent. Annie sat in the front, leaving her bhai and bhabhi alone to rest and engaged herself on her cell phone, texting dadi of the good news that was coming home.

Maan sat with geet and she just leaned on his shoulder.

"are you okay jaan?", he whispered, pulling her close in her arms.

"umm.. am just tired!", she mumbled, "I want to sleep."

He pressed a soft kiss on her head, "rest! We will be reaching the hotel in a few minutes, you will have your food and medicines and then sleep."

She nodded and closed her eyes, feeling the peace after such a long time. She recalled the moment when he had whispered into her ears that they were going to become parents and this actually sunk into her completely right now. She had been too much disturbed to think in those terms. Now that things were calm, she had all the time to think about her baby!!

Oh My God! They were actually going to have a baby! She couldn't even believe it... seemed like a dream. It felt like just yesterday when she had been thinking of carrying her and Maan's baby and now that it was coming true, it felt so surreal! She was too lost in her thoughts, probably didn't realize when they had reached the hotel and checked in or when Annie came and Maan left!

"ohooo.. I see someone too much of a lost case!", annie teased, sitting beside.
Geet snapped back to reality and smiled...actually smiled after ages, "no..i was just thinking..."

"..about the baby..right?", annie cut in, making geet smile wider and nod.

"ohh geet...you don't know how happy we are.. and trust me more than Bhai, its dadima who is jumping in joy. Can you believe, the moment i told her about this, she was off the bed and running all round?"

Annie spoke stuffs here and there making her laugh and she felt lighter at heart. A few moments later, Maan joined them, as the room service served them their dinner. They had their food amidst chatter and laughter and later annie excused herself to her room.
Geet cleaned up and went to change, while Maan called up Adi to make arrangements for the tickets. She came out, wearing her night suit and how wonderful it felt. She had stopped wearing those back home fearing tayiji's taunts ut with Maan, she could just be herself.

She realized he was on call, booking for tickets and went closer, mouthing him to give her the phone. He wondered what she was upto, not getting anything. she rolled her eyes and snatched the phone from him.

"han..hello Adi... please book four tickets instead of three.."

Before Maan could even ask her anything, she already confirmed, "yes..right. do it. Don't worry about your boss...just do it."

Maan wondered what was going in her mind but nevertheless he gave in, without questioning and took the phone from her.

"han Adi... do as your Ma'am says..yeah fine!"

He kept the phone down and picked her up in his arms with one swift movement and carried her to the bed. She giggled while he laid her down gently and slept beside her, perching his head on his elbow, "whats going in that brain of yours?"

Geet smiled seeing his face..ohh how much she had missed him! but she needed to discuss Simmi with Maan. She knew he wouldn't say no to her but she needed him to be aware.
"Maan... about the tickets... there is someone who needs our help. This ticket is for her..."

He leaned close to her and pressed a finger on her lips, "shh... i don't want to know anything. I know you well pumpkin and I know there is something. but for tonight, can we speak about us?"

She felt so overwhelmed with his love...no questions asked... no answers sought and he was always by her side, as she had cited, not a step ahead, not astep behind. She raised her hands and cupped his face, "yes... Maan...its like a dream.."

He caressed her hurt cheek, "does it hurt? Its all my fault. I just shouldn't have left you there alone!"

She held his hand that was on her cheek and brought to her lips, kissing it softly, "don't say like this okay. I was alone thats why I fought my own battle... and You can never leave me alone, can you?"

She smiled naughtily and guided his hand and placed it on her stomach, "see.. I wasn't alone!"

"ohh what do I do with you geet?", he just dipped his face into her shoulders and hugged her tightly as his hand slowly trailed imaginary lines on her stomach, "I still can't believe we are going to have a baby... "

A thin film of tear clouded her eyes, more out of happiness and gratefulness for this man in her arms and she softly caressed his back, "I love you so much Maan... and now I just want to go back home with you...our home!"

He broke the hug and kissed her... their breaths mingling unevenly, trying to be in sync with each other and the happiness brewing up inside their hearts.

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Maan and Annie sat shell shocked hearing about Simmi as geet narrated the whole incident and why she booked an extra ticket. Annie was furious, "how can they even think like this? When we go to pick her up, just remind me to teach them a lesson!"

And in no time, they headed back to Simmi's place and Maan just kept holding geet's hand, feeling proud of her.

Geet got off the car, and went straight into the house, despite the protests by Simmi's parents while Maan and Annie waited outside. A crowd had gathered to see Geet daring to reach Simmi.

After a few minutes, despite the old couple's begging and crying, geet brought Simmi out and looked at her parents, "aaj se Simmi ki koi zimmedari aap par nahi hogi.", and she just walked back proudly to Maan.

[after today, you don't have to bear any responsibility for Simmi.]

Someone from the crowd shouted, "tu bahut galat kar rahi hain geet... apne bure saaye se ye tujhe bhi barbaad kar degi..."

[you are doing wrong geet..she will destroy you with her bad spirit.]

Geet was about to reply but Annie cut in, "thanks hume pehle se warn karne ke liye. Agli baar we will make sure that hum aap logon ke bure saaye se bache rahein."

[thanks for warning us before hand. Next time, we will make sure we stay away from your bad spirit.]

"tum aaj kal ke bacche kuch nahi samajhte... wo baajh hain beta.. sab par bura asar hoga.."

[you young people don't understand anything...she is unable to conceive.. she will be a bad omen for everyone]

"Tho aap logon ko usey doctor ke paas lekar jana tha... kya pata kharabi isme nahi iske pati mein ho..usko ghar se nahi nikalenge.. lekin Simmi ko zarur nikal denge...wow.. very nice.". Annie taunted, making everyone gasp.

[Then you should have taken her to a doctor and who knows, problem is with her husband and not her.. you won't throw him out of the house but you will throw Simmi out.]

Everyone watched them in shock, more at geet who hugged Simmi as she burst out crying, hearing all those taunts. She consoled her and made her sit in the car and turned to her parents, "log tho bahut kuch kahenge.. par aapse aisi ummeed nahi thi aunty ji..bachpan se jaanti hun aap logon ko...par khair koi na...Simmi yahan kabhi waapis nahi aayegi. Chalte hain hum."

[people will say a lot of things but i didn't expect this from you auntyji.. i have known you since childhood but... anyways Simmi isn't coming back here anymore. We must leave now.]

Maan sat in the front, feeling so proud of his pumpkin. She was something! he smiled and put on his shades, as they drove out of HP, leaving the women to finish their talks.
Simmi cried all the way to Amritsar, telling geet and annie how grateful she was and blessed to have a friend like geet. She had lost hopes of seeing the light but everything seemed different now. Annie wiped her tears, "Now you don't have to cry. Its over and dadima tumse milkar bahut khush hongi.."

Geet kept quiet and looked out of the window, feeling happy that she was back to where she belonged to, truly. Its sad that people still held such cheap mindset, needless to say even her family let her down. She was upset but not angry. They had been brought up that way and being confined in that place hadn't brought any changes in them and sadly, they themselves don't want to change.

"kya soch rahi ho?", he whispered, pulling her close to him, while they walked into the airport.

She sighed, "umm.. nothing."

He kissed her cheek, "I can't wait to go back home..with you."

She smiled and leaned on him as they walked, leaving Simmi and Annie giggling behind.

"Don't worry Simmi... ye dono tho aise hi hain.. tum ignore karna seekh lo."

[Don't worry Simmi.. these two are like this only, you learn to ignore!]

Simmi had never laughed genuinely for a long time now but today she did. Her own family..her own town didn't accept her but people who she didn't know came to help her. she watched Maan and geet walk together... and felt happy. Strangely she never missed her husband...you need to have feelings for someone to miss them and she had none. She had left them long back, when he had abandoned her.

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