manan ff ur the one for me (part 26 page 120 updated)

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hii guys...i am getting bored so thought of writing on manan ...so the story start with the opening night of musicana i.e after their kiss


PART 1


Finally ...its a night where I found someone to care for to have someone beside me when I am sad or happy...to whom I can talk my heart out...I can cry laugh with this beautiful angel sitting right beside me staring at the fireflies ...she was smiling ..I just can die hundred of death to see this smile on her face...I just wish no body can snatch this beautiful smile of her...and I promise no body will hurt her or snatch this smile of her ...

Suddenly I got curious about this fireflies ...I mean what's there to smile at this small glowing insects...

"Tum fireflies ko dekh kar itna kush kyu ho"I asked her curiously...she looked at me with her bright shining eyes and that shy blushy smile...ufff this girl is gonna kill me ...

"Ummm I ...I will tell u tomorrow"she said and got up...

I didn't wanted her to leave...ohh god help me...and upar se suspense oh no...

"Nahi nandini...pls tell na this suspense is killing me..."I said childishly ...look what this angel had done to me...I mean the great manik...oops sorry 'THE GREAT MONSTER MANIK MALHOTRA' is begging and acting like a child...I mean if fab 5 saw me like this they will faint...

"I said na I will tell u tomorrow"she said and turned to leave...

I got really upset...how can she just walk away hmmm I won't talk to her I said to myself with a angry pout...but then I heard a voice...of course its my angels voice...

"Manik ...tum mujhe ghar drop nai karoge"she said cutely walking towards me...

And her one cute act and I got happy I forgot that i had to be angry and I said "of course ...I will"and I kept my hand around her waist and we walked towards car ...she was blushing and I was enjoying it...hmm this means we have a long time to spend together...it gonna be best night of ur life my angel...

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Sorry for this crap...If u liked it hit like and comment...chappals eggs tomatoes all welcome...


INDEX

Part 2 -page 3

Part 3- page 6



Character sketch -page 8.
Part 4-page 10

Part 5A -page 12

Part 5b-page 16

Part 6 page 18

Part 7 page 21

Part 8-page 24

Part 9-page 26
Part 10A-page 29
Part 10B -page 32

Part 11-page 36
part 12-page 40
Part 13-page 44

Part 14-page 49

Page 15A-page 54

Part 15B-page 58

Part 16-page 62
Part17A-page 67

Part 17B page 73


Part 18-page 80

Part 19-page 85

Part20-page92


Part 21-page 92

Part 22 page 97

Part23 page 103

Part 24-page 110

Part 25 -page 115

Part 26 page 120
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Posted: 10 years ago
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continue with the next part buddy!!!👍🏼
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Originally posted by: _keertu_

continue with the next part buddy!!!👍🏼



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plz cont yaar yeh dhruv wale track se acha hai
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it was very cute..
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Congo for the new story
awesome start
plzzz continue soon dear
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Originally posted by: Dhariya_


plz cont yaar yeh dhruv wale track se acha hai

plz cont
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Yeah ...I too was really sad with that sacrifice and all ...ro ro ke bura haal tha mere babies kya so thought of writing it in a different way ...thanks for liking it
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Originally posted by: nimarious

Congo for the new story
awesome start
plzzz continue soon dear


Thanks
Will continue soon
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Originally posted by: kristii

it was very cute..

cont soon


Thanks dear...
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This is lovely... what a lovely take on a day that turned out not so good... hope the rest of the day is just as memorable... 😊

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