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What a sweet update. Loved their date and talk and Manik's actions at home, very cute.. looking forward to what happens next.😊
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What a sweet update. Loved their date and talk and Manik's actions at home, very cute.. looking forward to what happens next.😊



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thanks lovelies for liking my story ...hope u all like the next part too... 😉


part 3

Finally it was the night...musicana night...today we didn't met or talked ...u all know who I am talking about right?no...of course me and my angel nandini...from morning we are practicing with our respective bands...me with fab 5 and nandini with that jerk harshad,that madubala and that stupid lover boy of mukti...what's his name shahid yaah ...seriously she is with that bunch of idiots...uff..uparse this cabir he switch off my phone and hide it somewhere and when I asked why he said that nandini told him...seriously this girl know me so well...she know very well that I will concentrate on her more than practice...uff this girl...


Now it was 7 of night...,we were going to met at 6:30 and she ...she is late...arggh I am not gonna talk to her ...anane do usse dekta hu mein...suddenly I felt her her presence around I turned only to get my breath stuck ...she was looking like a angel...her eyes shinning...her blue glittery gown...the new hair style...

"I am sorry...so so sorry maanik..."she said by breaking my thought...
Oh yeah I had to be angry right...so I went with a flow and turned on other side angrily...
"We were going to meet at 6 30 ...aur aap aapke paas tho mere liye time hi nai h..."
"Manik aisa nai h wo navya ne mujhe rok ke rakha tha...that's why I am late"she said coming in front of me but I again turned at other side...
"Haa ha wo navya zayda important hai na..."
"Manik stop behaving like this...yeha dekho.."she said trying to turn me around ..I turned to see her holding her ears "sorry"...she said cutely...

Ohh god why does she do this to me...how cute she looked I felt like kissing her right there ...ohh let me tell where we were...any guesses ...of course our favorite place ,behind the music block...the place was well decorated... But who care about the place when your love is in front of u..
I just removed her hands from her ears and smiled..."tum maan gai na ..."she asked happily ...
Oh shit phir pakda gaya...
"No...not yet ..but I can if I get it"I said with a smirk and nandini her eyes were wide open listening to me...
"What are u talking about I didn't understand"she said acting as if she didn't understood I was talking about the kiss...
"U know exactly what I am talking about"I said pulling her towards me..she just looked at me as if telling me she want it too...
I slowly moved to kiss her...and ...and..and ...don't get excited ...her phone started ringing...arrghh I felt like killing the person...
"Oh shit navya"nandini said worried and picked the call...
Navya ...I felt like hanging her with that harshad ji of her on tarrece ...she just spoiled our movement ...argh
"Kya ...oh god how can I forget we are first to perform..."
"Arre navya I will be there in 5 minute"
"Yeah pls harshad ko sambhal Lena"
"Bye"
I heard this things from nandinis side while she was talking to that madubala...
"Aiyyapa ab kya Karu...harsad mujhe maar hi dalega"she murmured
"Kya hua?"I asked holding her close to my heart her hands on my chest and mine on her waist holding her securely in my arm...
"Manik I need to go ...meri performance first hai"she said little sadly...

"Ohhh...,all the best "I said trying to cheer her up...
"Tum gussa nai ho na " she asked playing with my blazer...
In answer I just kissed her forehead ...
She smiled and kissed my cheeks "all the best to u too "she whispered and ran away...


All the performance ended and result were announced of course fab 5 won because of our power packed performance
...
We fab 5 won musicana again...I was very happy we won but I was more happy to see my princess chearing for fab5 clapping for us...I knowshe was very happy for me...iI smiled seeing her...but the case was opposite with harsad and his two puppy's...harsad looked angry navya was sad and that shahid he was carefree ..but my eyes were stuck at my angel...
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PRECAP
Harshad manik fight...
Party time at manik place
Manik getting jealous of dhruv and possessive manik on way


Pls do hit the like button... And do comment so I can know your thoughts about this part
Edited by sauju - 10 years ago

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