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Aria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#791

Originally posted by: lolor
Raghav cried for kalpi...he deservers more pain...
If kalpi hates her umborn child she should hv aborted it...dont want kalpi to hate her born child ...🥱
Dev planning shaad & kalpis marraige & want to kill raghav...( me too...)😉
Now raghav know kalpi is in India & with mr chopra...waiting how he will meet kalpi...

Haha,It hasn't start yet LOL😆 She won't,But I have plan something😃

Who doesn't want SHAAd.

Hottie.

He will meet her soon😆😳

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Aria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#792

Originally posted by: sunyy
Yeah I don't believe in abortions either but this is fiction 😆 but one question how will she hide it she will Get a bigger. I don't knowni m trusting I but usually in these ffs when baby arrives they go down the tube . But will trust u and see what happens 😕

Haha you will see soon sunny😆

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Aria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#793

Originally posted by: akshara82
Thanx Aria..
Kalpi didnt abort the child..
im so relieved to see Kalpi living happily with her family and Raghav is all alone😆😆😆
Aria.. he need more pain and suffering..
and im sure you are going to make him pay every penny of his torture to Kalpi..
Update Soon..

Aww how could she Haha I know😆😆

He will get it hasn't even started😉 hahah yeah👍🏼

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Aria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#794

Originally posted by: rachufan
i loved it aria darling today i read last four chappy yesterday was my last exam so didnt read before fab work dear now kalpi is free and happy with her real family where is prem nd rag he deserve more pain i want to read more in my mind i have only one question " Ab Tera Kya Hoga Raghav" update next chappy soon soon soon 😉

Thank you 😃 It's alright. prem will appear soon,He does and he will😃

hahah will update soon

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Aria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#795

Originally posted by: -HeyJude-
Hey aria! Sorry for the late reply! I just finished studying and when I saw my PM Box I saw 4 updates pending and I was like on cloud 9!!! And don't ever dare to cancel posting your stories dear!! We love it and cannot live without it 😭...

Chapter 13,14,15,16 were bombs!! I'm so happy that kalpi finally knew that she's afsana and that she's Dev chopras long lost daughter. I pity her for carrying a burden with her and that's raghavs baby! Now its also great that raghav is falling in love with her but raghav shouldn't get kalpi easily! I still hate raghav after everything he did to her he thought that she misses him and will fall in love with him!! What a jerk!! And I really like neetu she's so bubbly and she was the only member in the singhania mansion who loved kalpi like her own... Now what happened to prem?? Is he still in coma? I like shaan though. Now, will there be a love rectangle in their relationship??? 🤣

Anyways aria dear continue it soon and never think of giving up on your stories.. Can't you see all the love and appreciation you're getting?? 😉

It's Alright😳 LOL😆 I won't😉

She hates her baby,he won't get her that easily,Of course he has to begg her,Yep Neetu Loves Kalpi like her baby😆

haha he will appear soon,No only a triangle LOL, Raghav-Kalpi-Shaad.

I am I love you all🤗

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Aria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#796

Originally posted by: Vsapras
ARIA...❤️ Meri...Jaan...before I go further...One...Question??????.
KAUN...BANEGA...KALPI ...KA...PATI?????????😆 Lol
RS...Is imagining her everywhere ...hayee ... his is in dilemma ...looks like he is not taking it well at all

Haha,How can he take it Well😆

Kalpi on the other end is just coping. Dev's mansion has become home now,with Kalpi's entry..Hmm...
Meher...is a good friend and a confident of Kalpi ...and YES..she did not abort Raghav's baccha..
Mahi..A friend of Raghav's..Is she trustworthy ?? Will she seriously help him ?? Dekhte hai
Neetu is missing her Kalpi ..Awww she is the only sane person in that house. What is Raghav's plan??

Mahi is trustworthy,Kalpi can't abort her child,Haha,true😆 His plan is to get her back lol which is gonna be hell for him

Wow.. So he found out about Kalpi's real family...none other than The most dangerous don Dev..
Now another new entry..Oh yeah..Shaad???Why ??? Dev's plan to get Kalpi hitched??
Then what??? Kill Raghav?? He has just confessed that he Loves his Biwi . Please don"t kill him
He is Reforming now,sitting in the dark corner was not his style.Was it???I am so confused with
Kalpi and shaad's closeness . What rare flower did he gift her and why?? What is the significance of
this. Now Kalpi hates Raghav and his unborn child Why is she bearing all this pain??? For who??

All fathers what their daughter happily married and All,Haha,I can't kill Raghav he has to Pay,nah not his style at all,He Likes her and the flower is to show his friendship and interest in her,Significance-Love,Care,Friendship LOL.She won't bear it any longer trust me.

What will happen when she belly starts showing ?? And who is the new appointed bodyguard ???

Lol so many questions,Everything will be out,BODYGUARD LOL You'll see soon😉

Aria baby please hire a detective and solve this fast😆😆 I am getting Constriction pain😆
Okay Aria my sweets l am ready for any twist and turns now but always a RAGNA Lover...
Remote is in your hand you are the boss😆...I am your huge fan ...love U
Aria Fantabulous update sweety...muah...night. night...

Hahaha 😆 Chill relaz,everything will be out,Love you too babes🤗

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Aria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#797

Originally posted by: chahat4u
Hey Aria, loved the update and it is good to see a smiling Kalpi again. Loved Kalpi's garden. Ronit Roy is open of those actors whom I always admire on TV and he has a very strong personality. So technically its between two Titans, but this time Raghav's guilt may weaken him. Also I want to say something, the fire of repentance in which Raghav is burning, especially this strong one, is the biggest punishment one can get. One can get toughest, hardest, cruelest pf physical punishments from some other person. But without this fire/repentance/guilt, no punishment causes that deserving pain tot he wrong-doer. I'd like to see Raghav surely burning in the fire of repentance but would not like to see him begging or being hurt physically, at least not beyond a certain limit.
YOu know even God gives chances to reform, to confess own crimes. It is said that if you confess publically what wrong you did, you're free of that crime's burden. Raghav is surely on that way. But I am happy to see a happy Kalpi. I would like her to accept her baby with all the love and care he/she deserves. An innocent child doesn't deserve hatred of his/her own mother. n yes, Thank You for keeping Kalpi pregnant.

Thank you charupie😃I find him Very Intriuging😆 His Acting, I like him😆

I understand That,He will get a Little Hurt Physically,I shall not go overboard Promise,Your Love for Raghav Is AMAZING👏😳

Thank you for reading did Miss you alot.😳

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Aria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#798

Originally posted by: Vsapras
Aria my sweets ... Before I hit the sack and fall into deep slumber...snore ..snore...
I had forgotten to state about the beautiful garden you described in the CS...
One song I keep humming insanely is from the movie Creature ...😉 It goes like this..

Mohabbat barsa...dena...tu..saawan...aaya ...hai...
Tere...aur..Mere...Milne...ka...mausam..?Aaya ...hai
Paas..bulake...tujhe...sine...se...lagana...hai..
Itna...pyaar...kisipe...Pehali...baar..Aaya...hai..

Won't it be perfect for our Angel and her PATI ????.😆
I am snoozing now...snore..

You got me singing now😆

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Aria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#799

Chapter 17

As Night Came Kalpi was seated by the Steps Looking at the Outhouse,She rested her head on her Knees "Bappa,How Will Shaad React when He finds out I'm Pregnant,That I was Raped"

Kalpi thought,Meher sat next to Her and Kalpi rested her head on her Lap. "Am I bad Meher?? Am I a Bad Person to this Child?"

She asked "Choti Begum,It's your decision,But..."

Kalpi raised up and Looked at her "but what,I should Speak to Mr Singhaina about this??"

Angrily Kalpi got up and was stopped by Meher "Husband Or Not,Kalpi he is the Father of your Child" Meher said Looking at a Emotionless Kalpi,"Father of My child!! He Raped Me and He Didn't care,So don't tell what to do!!' Saying that Kalpi left from there.

Pacing back and Forth in Kalpi's Room Raghav thought of a way to Meet Kalpi Alone With Mahi's Help.

"You Know,It's going to Be very Hard" Mahi said.

"Hard?? Please,It's going to Be Easy,Kalpana will take me Back"

Raghav said,Mahi walked over to Raghav and Looked at him "Tell me the truth,Do you really,Really think Kalpi will take you back? After everything you did,Will she Take you Back?" Mahi asked a Dumbfound Raghav "Stay in thoughts before you make a Move,Otherwise you'll regret it all" Saying that Mahi left.

Raghav sat on Kalpi's bed watching her Picture "You will Take me Back right?? Kalpana?"

Kalpi walked through the Fog Making her way to the Cabana In tears,Kalpi couldn't Take Raghav's Name anymore,She sat their and Cried Making a Decision again,wanting to Abort her Child.

She thought if she Abort her Child she'll be free from her Past,Free From Raghav,That baby Makes Her Live in her Past Everyday she thought,Wanting to Calm down she decided to Speak to her Neetu Ma,kalpi dialed Neetu's Number and Cried on the Phone "Ma,It's hard,It's hard really Hard,I just can't take this anymore,I want to see you,I miss you" Kalpi said Weeping on the Phone,Hearing her Voice after 2 months Raghav smiled widely with tears Rolling down his cheeks,He remained silent on the Phone as she Spoke.

"Ma,Abbu Takes good care of Me,But I miss your Cooking and Hugs,Shall we meet soon?? Our Usual Place?? Hmmm??"

Kalpi wondered why Neetu wasn't speaking she then smiled "Areey Ma,I'm so so sorry for not contacting you In these few days,I was really busy,With everything"

Raghav continued Smiling as she spoke about everything,He felt sad and wondered why she wasn't mentioning her Pregnancy,and Why she didn't even Once mention his Name.

"Ma,are you still there??" Kalpi said getting up.

As she started walking and continued talking she tripped,hearing her scream Raghav broke his silence "Kalpana are you alright!! are you hurt!!" He asked worriedly,Her eyes widens hearing his voice,she frozed in her spot "Kalpana,Are hurt?? Please tell me you're not Hurt" Raghav asked,He became More worried Hearing Silence on the other end "Why are you talking??" Kalpi asked breaking her silence "Kalpana,Thank god you answered me,You are alright" Raghav said taking a deep breath "I have asked you a question,Answer me,Where's Ma??" Kalpi asked with a Demanding tone "Don't Hang up Please,Just Talk with me,I want to see you,I need you,I need to see you" He said with a Sad voice.

Kalpi Looked at her Phone and Ended the Call.

Raghav Sighs seeing the Call was Ended,he felt Dejected and Hurt by Kalpi,He wondered how will he Meet her and Confess his Feelings,He thought Maybe if he confessed she'll Understand Him and Accepted him Back,He needed to see her Face to Face and Make her Understand that in these 2 Months was Hell for him without her and He Only wanted her.

Kalpi walked into her Room in a Huff,She was angry "How dare he call me,What does want!" She thought.

She dropped herself on the bed thinking Her Neetu Ma did that,She wondered if her Neetu Ma was desperate enough to want her back with her son.

"No,I'm wrong,Ma would never want me back with him"

Kalpi laid back in her bed,she cursed Raghav for not making her think straight.

Kalpi laid in bed covered Up thinking about her Day and Shaad,She had Missed him,His smile,his warmth.

Her mind then Falls back on Raghav "I'll never meet Him" She thought and Dozed off to sleep.

Raghav laid back on Kalpi's Bed,He quickly Wiped his tears and rolled the Pillow Over hiding them,he turns to his side and Looked at kalpi's Bedside Photo.

Raghav Had Decorated Kalpi's Room with all Her Photos,Just to know she's there,He missed her with all His heart,He hated himself for hurting her,Now he felt she was hurting him by not Meeting Him,He smiled at her Photo Sadly "Please,Don't Push me away anymore,I will meet you soon" He mumbled.

As Morning Came Kalpi Picked rest Roses and Daises Brighten up the Breakfast Table,She laid the Food Out smiling at her work.She sighs hearing the Loud Manly footsteps comming her way,She stops her Brothers and Gave them and Angry Glare "Saif Bhaijaan and Bhaiyu what is this,Late for breakfast??"

Kalpi Looked at her Father "You too Abbu??,Bappa,Strike them!"

Zain smiled wickedly and hugged Kalpi tightly Messing her hair up,signaling Saif and Dev to be seated,Zain turned Kalpi around holding unto her tightly showing her Dev and Saif seated.

"Okay Bubbles,We won,Girls are icky and Werid,Men Rule"

Zain Gave a Pouting Kalpi a Big Kiss on her cheeks and Took his seat eating,"Look Bubbles,You're the Only girl here,The Baby,so You can't win with us" Saif said Smiling at a Pouting Kalpi.

"Bubbles don't Pout to Much,You might Stretch your cute mouth"

Zain and Saif Laughed Seeing Kalpi glaring at them,Kalpi walked up to Dev Fretting while He tried Keeping a Straight Face "Abbu,Look...Look what their Did" Kalpi said hugging Dev who looked At Zain and Saif snickering.

"Abbu are you Laughing at me??" Kalpi said Pouting.

Dev then Looked at kalpi worriedly seeing her Holding her Stomach in pain,she made her Glance at Dev who called out to Meher "Yes Sir" Meher said Running in.

"Please Carry Afsana to her room" He said sternly

Meher held unto Kalpi tightly and Carefully carried her to her Room,Zain and Saif Looked at Dev worriedly.

"What's wrong with Bubbles" Saif and zain said getting up to meet her,But before her could go Dev Reassure both Brothers.

Zain and Saif Were two amazing Brothers to Kalpi,Their would Mess with her,Trouble her and Love her more than Anything,Saif and Zain Became Over Protective Of her.

Meher Held Kalpi's Hair Back as she kept Vomiting, "Have you taken the Medicine Doctor Shah Gave you??" Kalpi wiped her face and Gupled down the Pill.

"I did,I pity Myself,I have to take these otherwise,I'll be sick whole day" she said in an annoyed tone,Kalpi and Meher made their way back into her Bedroom.

Kalpi took a seat and Looked at Meher "I'm sorry about Last Night" She got up and Hugged Meher tightly "I just Hate him,I hate him,I hate him" Meher Looked at her Surprised "I'll See you later,Huh? we'll eat Ice-crem Behind the Cabana Okay."" Saying that Kalpi left from there, "Hate?? It might be Hate,But I know Deep down,You do care for him and Your Baby,I Pray Allah unite you Both." Meher thought.

Raghav ate Watching his Mother who was In a Daze Having Ishita feeding her. "Have you Spoken to Kalpana??" Raghav asked Neetu.

Neetu looked at raghav and Left from there quickly.

Aryan smiled at his Brother "Bro,Get your wife back,Bring her home,We all will be Happy,Mom will too."

Raghav nodded "I Will,I will bring her Back,That's A Promise"

Aryan smirked watching Raghav leaving with Mahi "Bring her Back Bro,When you do,It will be my turn to Have her" He thought with a Wicked Smirk.

Kalpi Roamed around the Palace,Firstly she was bored secondly she was hiding from her Brothers who was Planning to Pelt her with water Ballons.

Dev stood in the Hall with Kalpi's New Bodyguard showing him Afiya's Photo "My Afsana Is just Like her Mother"

"Afsana Has been through alot in these few Months,So I need You to Be there for her,She has been weary this days"He said.

Kalpi walked down the Hall walking to Meet Dev "I'll Have to find out where Shaad went without telling me"

As she made her way into the Hall saying "Abbu,Not fair why did Shaa..." Kalpi's eyes widens as she stares at the Bodyguard who was Grinning at her,Kalpi knew that grin that evil Grin,She was Dumbfounded seeing Raghav standing before her,Flashes of her Rapes and Past Played in her Mind.

But Raghav was smiling seeing her Looking so beauitful,All he knew is that he wanted a hug from her and for her to Forgive Him,He was Teary eyed she was standing before him.

As Dev walks up to Kalpi,Her eyes shocked wet eyes Could'nt Move from Raghav's,"This is Jonny,He's your New Bodyguard,Since Jonny and His friend doesn't have any Family or Place to Stay,We'll let them stay in the Out house"

Dev touched Kalpi on her Pale Face "Afsana what's wrong?? Why are you looking so Pale??Jonny is quite Good."

Kalpi Griped her salwar and Inhale seeing Raghav walking towards her,Raghav greeted Her and Smiled. "Namaste Afsana Ji"

Kalpi Looked at Dev who signaled her with a Smiled,Kalpi Bowed and Greeted Raghav 'Namaste Jonny ji".

Is pal main hoon...

Kalpi Looked up seeing Raghav's Long Gaze at her,Hating that smirk on his face.

I know It's a short update,Will update again later😊 hopefully.

I think this chappy could've been better sorry if it was boring

Edited by -AriaRai- - 10 years ago

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sweet1308

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Posted: 10 years ago

#800

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god its awesome aira rag so determined t get kalpi back does he think getting kalpi would be easy reality boy wat u did there is a long way t go kalpi still sick n her relationship with her brothers was so well written kalpi missing neetu darling n that bas***d aryaan 😡 i want t kill him disgusting thought

jhonny jhonny have had chocolate

yes muma yes muma

rag as bodyguard nice twist waiting for more

update soon

love u loads muaaahhh😊

Edited by sweet1308 - 10 years ago