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Parvathi Devi

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Posted: 11 years ago

That was wonderful start...

So La is going to marry NK.. hmm interesting...

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aysemLDG

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Posted: 11 years ago

You changed prologue. I have to admit that the first version of the prologue was more intense than the new one. As far as I remember Arnav's done violence to Khushi, that was the last straw for her and she left him, his family, her family behind to start a new life. If you don't mind may I ask you the reason behing your decision of editing the prologue after 9 months.

Coming to the first chapter... I'm glad that Khushi moved on and created a new world for herself. A world filled with success, good friends, joy... Is Lavanya in this story ASR's ex-girlfriend or a new character? If she was ASR's ex-girlfriend then it means she knows the connection between her soon-to-be husband NK, Arnav and Khushi and she made a plan to reunite Arshi. If she is a new character, it's highly possible that she knows nothing about Khushi's past with the certain Raizada, Arnav.

Let's wait and see Arnav's reaction when he realizes Khushi's new avatar and especially her strong bond with Armaan. I smell jealousy in the air.

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divya

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Posted: 11 years ago

Long time... Good to see u bk...

Awsum strt...looking fwd

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Pastellitesoulx

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Posted: 11 years ago

Armaan<3 i love this name lol.
Well armaan is so cool.
Awesome update.
Waiting for khushi to reach delhi with armaan.

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pran28671

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow beautiful n interesting concept

eagerly waiting for next part

continue soon

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Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

*nagging reader voice*

update soon dear

waiting

love it

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Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

simrannn kaha chali gai tum simsim

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