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Hi guys... so i'm not the best of writers, and I'm still fairly inexperienced in writing poetry but i gave it a shot and wrote this drabble/poem after seeing todays episode. 😊


Walking in the Shadows

He is boy of small words,

But a man of large thoughts.

His fights for his life everyday

As the monster in him awakens to prey.

His strengths are his weakness,

His protector is his opponent.

He leads his life in his buddy's shadows

Through his guide, he follows.

His delusional love,

His instinctual attraction..

His heartbreak, and his enlightenment.

He found love once again,

But his past interferes with his present

And he shall be a shadow no more.

His anger overshadowed his love

His pain controlled his tongue,

His piercing words were not from the heart,

Yet as he hurt his buddy, his best friend,

A piece of his soul starts to break apart.

And he keeps walking neither in light nor dark,

he keeps walking, walking in the shadows.



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yet as he hurt his buddy, his best friend,

A piece of his soul starts to break apart.

And he keeps walking neither in light nor dark,

he keeps walking, walking in the shadows.


Loved it!!! Somewhere deep down Dhruv always harbored a tiny bit of insecurity!!! But Nandini's rejection, Alya's reaction, Manan relationship broke the tight leash he had on his insecurities... Now shit has hit the fan

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Originally posted by: moonstonespirit

Yet as he hurt his buddy, his best friend,

A piece of his soul starts to break apart.

And he keeps walking neither in light nor dark,

he keeps walking, walking in the shadows.


Loved it!!! Somewhere deep down Dhruv always harbored a tiny bit of insecurity!!! But Nandini's rejection, Alya's reaction, Manan relationship broke the tight leash he had on his insecurities... Now shit has hit the fan


Aww, Thank You :D yes shit has hit the fan, but thisis dhruv's time to change and mature. its a reality check for both of manik and dhruv :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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And he keeps walking neither in light nor dark,

he keeps walking, walking in the shadows.



I loved that portion ..indeed dhruv is walking on wrong path and he will come back ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Poopy - This was so brilliant. You captured Dhruv beautifully.Much needed perspective.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: charminggenie

Poopy - This was so brilliant. You captured Dhruv beautifully.Much needed perspective.

Aww thanks genie. this is nothing compared to teh brilliant stuff u write, but thank you 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: fan145

And he keeps walking neither in light nor dark,

he keeps walking, walking in the shadows.



I loved that portion ..indeed dhruv is walking on wrong path and he will come back ..

glad u like it, thanks for reading :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aavani

loved it...😊

Thank You :)

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