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i just read the the story rite from d start once again...
it was a very refreshing...
yu are a very gifted writer i must say...
the last part wic yu had updated now... is very gud..
Raman making her wear her saari... 👏👏..
loved ishu's characterizational growth...
Loved Ruhi the angel...
loved their seemandam / ghodbarayi...
I would have liked Raman applying the same... 😳😳..
but the way yu wrote about ishu';s expressions... its just spot on...
her Love declaration for Him tat came unknown to even her was the bst...
I would add on n on... but i prefer to stop my ranting/rampling here...
P.S : - I would Love to read this from you ofcourse in ur style...out of interest can yu add those sweet moments wer Raman and ishita talk about after birth of child or their names or Raman talking to the children in her tummy...😳😳
P.S.S :- i loved ur english Language Usage...👏👏
Edited by shravsss - 10 years ago
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