Akdha FF - A spontaneous desire Chapter 20 TZR updated pg 159 June 24 - Page 4

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Chapter 2

Jalal rakes his brain and finally decides to call Mr Satyam and explains his worries for his wife and unborn children "sir, don't worry, the police commissioner is my best friend I will call him for help, I will meet you at the cardiac center". Jalal's mind goes blank, he stops functioning -he is scared for his wife and children. He curses himself for being away from them, many thoughts rush through his mind , has an emotional breakdown... "everything will be ok saab, we are at the hospital"

Jalal opens the door and rushes out. Jalal rushes to the ICU - his eyes looking all around for Jo, he goes in sees his Ammi - lying in bed with her eyes closed, hooked up to heart monitor, "Jalal beta I knew you would come" she said " where is Jo, why has she not come yet, she called me from the airport and said she was on her way?" Jalal becomes pale, starts to break into a sweat, takes a deep breath to calm himself, then places his hand caressing her head, bends slightly, kisses her forehead saying "Ammi Jaan, we are all worried, good to see you take rest and get better first, we can talk later" his eyes fills with tears, he turns away... Ammi grabs his hands "but beta, what about my beti?" Jalal gives her a hug, he did not want her to see the tears in his eyes, he rests momentarily on her for comfort - "saab teek hoga, don't worry too much beta, you are looking tired, you take rest too" ...

Jalal slumps to the ground in despair, sobs, tears streams down his face, he is too tired to wipe them away - he feels life starting to slip away every that mattered, every thing that he cared for, other things did not matter any more, he feels his head spinning, a sickening feeling threatens to overwhelm him. He leans forward, closes his eyes shut - Mr Satyam touches his shoulder and says, "keep faith in God" Jalal could not think, the sight of the smashed car, broken phone, blood in the vehicle comes back to him. He quickly gets up and says "I have to see her, I have to see her" Jodha was placed in ICU and Jalal was told it would be at least a couple of hours before he could see her as they had stabilize her first. This was not acceptable for Jalal - he pushes everyone away, yelling, "I don't care for your rules, I need to see her now you can stabalize her in front of me" and rushes in, sees her hooked up to a ventilator (life support breathing machine) and a probe coming out of her bandaged head. Wires monitoring her heart and breathing, the alarms going off, her face swollen, she looked totally helpless, he could barely recognize his wife. The doctors and nurses were all talking and trying to explain to him what was going on, he could not hear them as he was still in shock staring at his wife who was in a coma and non-responsive. He sees her lying helpless. He rushes over to her touches her soft hands kissing them, leans over and whispers in her ear "I love you Jo, you are not alone, I am here and will be here with you and will take you back home. I have good news for you, I want to thank you for making me a proud father, you are a mother too, you have given birth to our boys - Hassan and Hussein, we need you" Tears fill his eyes as he talks to Jo , squeezes her hand, no response, at that moment he breaks down and losses it again. He feels soft hand touching his shoulders, looks up and sees Bakshi hovering over him teary eyed, she hugs him, he clings to her they cry bitterly.

They were ushered out of the ICU by the doctor who said " she has a lot going on in her life now and does not need this additional drama" In a state of shock. Jalal tries to process what was happening but still could not wrap his head around it. Jo had suffered a traumatic brain injury from the accident and as a result had a factored skull and swelling in the brain, trauma caused premature contractions and she ended up delivering early. He was happy Bakshi had come down to be with Ammi jaan, her support was all he had for now - he could not confide in Ammi as her heart was too weak to handle even good news. As the day progressed on, by the evening Bakshi is soon joined by Abdul, Mirza, Shivani and her parents . All of them worried - they meet and speak with the Doctor - Jalal see's Jo's mom sobbing, walks over to her and hugs. Jalal was happy to see them. Soon they are joined by Dr Sneha, Jo's doctor, Jalal's private family do Jalal feels a slight relief, finally he has pillars of support but still has a tough time coping. He asks Abdul to arrange for top teams of Neurosurgeons and Neonatologist to called and say "by tomorrow I want them here and also check with management if any high tech monitoring devices is needed to take care of them and arrange to have it delivered as soon as possible" He then walks to Abdul and Mirza and say "take care of all the problems with the business, I will not be able to attend to any of it, my family comes first"

Jalal was too afraid to leave Jo's side, Dr Sneha assured him she would take care of Jo saying " Jo would want you to be with the twins more than her". Jalal thinks for a long time bends and kisses Jo on her forehead, squeezes her hands and slowly walks down the hall towards the car, arrives at Apollo childrens rushes to the Neonatal Intensive Care Unit (NICU) to see his babies as their father, he is not new to them, just a few hours ago he had entered the same unit to donate blood - not knowing they were his own blood -- tears flow down his cheeks as he bends down looks into the incubator and whispers "hello my precious little Hassan and Hussein - I am your abbu, I am so happy to finally meet you both - I loved you before you were born and love you even more now" -- it is at this moment of bonding, for the first time, Jalal begins to feel like a father, a new found feeling engulfs him, he feels determines to be strong to take care of his family, his wife and babies - they need me, Jo would expect it of me. He peers into the incubator again and sees his sons - they were the smallest babies he had ever seen, tiny and fragile, he could see their blood vessels and veins through their almost transparent skin, afraid for them as he watches them struggling to breathe. Jalal's takes a deep breath, wishing he could breath for them. Dr Ali, Jalal's trusted private physician places his hand Jalal's shoulder and says "Jalal beta, the days ahead are going to be really tough for your little family - I want you to be strong and realistic - twins are very tiny, their lungs have not developed fully, they have been through a traumatic delivery - that is a lot of stress they have handle, you have to be mentally strong for Jo's sake as well, you are Jo's hope and hope comes from strength". Tears flow down his cheeks as he sits down, his hands covering his face says "my perfect life has turned upside down in a matter of hours, why did all this happen to me ". "Jalal I do have a suggestion, after seeing Jodha I think it will be a good idea for her to hear the babies cry - that might give her a fighting spirit and bring her out of her coma based on what the neurosurgeon said, she has swelling in her brain ... " Jalal has a nervous breakdown, was given shot of tranquilizer and forced to rest.

The next several days became a routine for Jalal, visiting his mom in the ICU, visiting the NICU several times per day, then visiting Jo at the trauma center several times a day, spending nights at Jo side, leaving her at 3 in the morning to be with the twins. One such morning Jalal walks in and see Hassan struggling to breath - he sees him breathing fast with shallow breaths, making little grunting noises - Jalal yells for the doctor -who rushed in immediately - assess the situation and tells him "he might have an infection, we have to separate them,to keep Hussein from getting the same infection". Jalal feels helpless - Hassan seemed to be sleeping more, lost interest in feeding - became less and less active - the doctor suggested the place him on life support - Jalal prayed about it, he recalls the doctors words "even if placed on life support he would never be able to breathe on his own again, his health is rapidly detoriating" A completely broken Jalal sees life crumbling around him, he feels alone -he asks to hold Hassan in his arms, for the first time, Hassan was taken out of the incubator wrapped and given to Jalal, hugging his first born- he felt immense peace, he kisses his forehead, his lips feel the softest skin - a little hand touches his cheeks - like he was saying goodbye - Jalal whispers in his ears between tears-"beta, I see every breath is a struggle for you, I feel your pain, your ammi would have died seeing you suffer, she is fighting for her life too - she did not get the privilege to see you but felt you growing, ... you miss her warmth and singing don't you" he pulls out his phone and plays the lori Jo would sing for her babies everyday at bedtime - little Hassan, closes his eyes and snuggles against his abbu's chest, takes his last breath, in his loving father's arms. Tears stream down his cheeks, he asks to have private moment and asks all to leave, hugging his little son, Jalal cries his heart out, that day a part of Jalal died too. Having another child did not make it easier for him to grieve, but it did give him reason to live.

A week later Jalal witnesses the same things happening to Hussein. Loosing both his babies takes a big hit on Jalal, many times he got out of control and had to be tranquilized and forced to rest- he had family and friends supporting him, he still felt empty inside and incomplete, his mind constantly revolved around Jo, only she could fill the emptiness in my life he thinks. He thanks God for bringing Jo into his life and prays "Allah, please show me mercy and give my life and love back to me" A broken Jalal reflects back on his life which till recently happy and full of promise, seems bleak and grey today. Living in a traditional society - Jalal as a male is expected to be strong and provide - which he was doing - but deep within, he was at war within himself. Riddled with guilt for being out of the country - blaming his mom for wanting to attend a marriage where people hate her. Jalal has not had a dry eye day since he landed in Chennai, is forced to continue on as Jo was still on the ventilator fighting for her life - puts on a brave front and struggles on with life. Jo had the world's best team of doctors taking care of her. He spent his days and nights sitting with Jo, holding her hands, talking to her and playing recorded cries of Hassan and Hussein. Jalal watches her lying limp and helpless - he was not used to seeing Jo like this, she was always feisty and smart mouthed, never stayed quite a single moment ... sitting at her side holding her hand, caressing her, Jalal recalls the first meeting and smirks, gets lost in her thoughts...

Flash Back - 3 years ago: Mumbai

Jo was visiting India on a short 5 days trip from the US to attend her best friend's wedding she was the bride's maid of honor. Landed in Mumbai less than 18 hrs ago at 0200am, went to bed at 0600 and woke up at 1000, she missed meeting her dad as he flew in from Calcutta and went straight to work -Jo decides to meet her dad first - calls him first " Bhapusa, how come you left this morning without seeing me, you did not hug and welcome me home like you always do, I am coming there to get my welcome back hug" Wait beta wait, don't come now, I have a very important meeting" Jo cuts in saying "well, I am standing outside the building, can I just come in for a quick hug, I will leave immediately... please, please" she begs, Mr Bharmal sighs and say "ok be quick, if the meeting starts you'll have to wait" - Jo runs into the building and takes the elevator to the 6th floor, walking out bumps into a tall man wearing a dark suit, drops her phone down, she picks up her phone hears her dad calling her, she looks up sees her dad walking towards her - she runs gives him a hug, says see you later and leaves. The tall man watches her every move lustily and thinks "it would be nice to have this beauty in my bed, this is the first girl that has ignored me, I must make her mine before he sees her, she should be an easy catch considering the financial mess Bharmal's company is in I am glad she is his daughter and chuckles.

Jodha does some quick shopping, meets up with her friends for lunch -they get their beauty pampering done and leave for Anya's Sangeet at the Royal Taj. Jodha was staying friends the whole weekend at the Taj - it was the wedding venue as well. She runs up to her room practices the dance with her friends - Jo was having fun, enjoying life - she has not been this happy in a long while - the last wedding she attended was her brother's 5 years ago. She loves to dance -dressed in her light green lengha choli matching with her friends, gets ready for the sangeet ceremony. Takes one last look in the mirror, wraps her royal blue odhani around, hiding her curves well, slips on her silver sandals and starts walking towards the elevator when she gets a text from Shiv - "Di please call immediately, it is about Bhapusa" Jo quickly calls her - Shiv - tells her " this guy came here - he is the owner of Mogul Dyanasty - I overheard them talking, Dad's company is having money problems I think, because that guy told dad that he will help with the financial problems and extend the payment date only if you become his mistress, he just left" Jo was shocked and furious, Shiv continued "he said, he cannot keep you honorably but you will be the most important person in his life, di those were his exact words" -- Jo's blood was boiling - she hangs up the phone, quickly google's Mogul dynasty owner - and the company's website pops up, with the image of the owner "Jalaluddin Mohammed Akbar" she scrolls down to get his telephone number and is unable to find it, clicks on the events and see that he is hosting a shareholders family party at the Mogul Ritz tonight, she could not believe her luck. She quickly calls her driver and asks him bring the car upfront, runs to her friends and tells them she is going out to meet a friend, promising to be back before their dance performance and leaves - The Mogul Ritz is just 3 blocks away her driver tells her - she gets into the car, downloads his image to her phone as a screen saver, continues to look at the image of Jalaluddin Mohammed Akbar - the very first image of a guy saved on her phone apart from her brothers !!

OK all

I know this is a very lengthy chapter - I tried to cut out as much accident drama as possible. Your comments positive or negative is always welcome.

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