Akdha FF - A spontaneous desire Chapter 20 TZR updated pg 159 June 24

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

An emotional and heart touching update.😭

My heart cries for Jo.. jalal is so broken with her condition . God !!... Jalal is gong through trauma.

Jo's horrible condition and the critical situation at the hospital depicted well !!!!

U r really an amzing writer👍🏼.

Flash back ... really an interesting one. Looking forward to read more of it..😳

Love to read long updates.😆..

Thanks for the pm dear... 😊

Edited by shruthikarthik - 10 years ago

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zakia4

@zakia4

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

very emotional update di.loved it so much.di jodha ki yeh condition nahi dekhi jayegi please jo ko jaldi theek kar do.di flashback scenes are superb please continue.aap ki writting ki taarif ke liye lafz nahi hai mere pass jitne baar padhti hun padhne ki cahat badhti jati hai.please di update soon jyada wait nahi hoga and thanks for the pm.

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Pba123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

A very emotional update

Helpless jalal as he lost his babies n jo lying in coma state

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Uma

@Kutty58

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Wow.. In one chapter... You brought the readers to every emotion there is.. Sad abt Jo accident... Hope that the twin are born.. Heartbreaking that they didn't survive.. But flashback is soo cute.. I am sure the guy with the indecent proposal is someone else. Yet jalal is going to get a slap 😆

U are very talented writer... 👏

Thanks for the PM... Waiting eagerly for chap 3..

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Srihitha

@chunty1962

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Nice chapter. You are an amazing writer.Jalal's condition is vulnerable and it is very difficult for parents to see their chilren loosing lives in front of their eyes. It needs great strength to face it. Hope jodha recover soon and fills his emptiness in life. Flashback is very interesting and hope to get an update soon.

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2thless

@2thless

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Nice Story... the modern version of JA... loved the storyline... the Hussein and Hassan death part was very touching... and he recorded the babies cries... awww...

Do update soon and add me to your PM list...

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swriter

@swriter

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Nice story i like it plz update soon😉

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lovejodhaakbar

@lovejodhaakbar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

So heart breaking...jalal has to deal with the twin's death and being strong for jodha...but the flash back make me excited.. Wish the next chapter flash back will b longer...thank u for updating dear author

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renuganesh

@renuganesh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Nice storyline buddy...story starts after their marriage with cute flashbacks... nice concept
I missed 1st chappy n prologue but yesterday l read from the beginning ..ur a grt writer..
I enjoyed reading..but 2nd chappy is heart broken one.. u emoted wellthe character isation of jalal
Very caring n lovable hubby n father,..
Waiting for nxt chappy dear..
If possible pm me.

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crystalwings

@crystalwings

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Teaser Chapter 3

"why are you dragging me inside the elevator?" "Let me go you, you brute, ..." she struggles , attempts to kick him as the door closes- Jalal sees her doe like beautiful eyes fill with intense fear, her lips quiver, ... he corners her grabs both her hands lifts them straight up in the air and pins them firmly against wall, leans on her immobilizing her, his face inches away from hers -she slowly lifts her eyes and looks directly into his, sees fury in his eyes. Gets faint hint of wine as his warm breath fans her face " brute eh, don't you dare do it again, you will awaken the sleeping animal in me ...such a hot temper eh, ... you think only you have a temper, you have yet to see mine, nobody messes with Jalaluddin Mohammed"