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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: swapno

Aye haye!!! they are married!!

Zoya is broken but Asad is determined!!
Wow this is going to be enchanting!!
continue soon

Thank u so much swapno😳
Glad u liked it😊
Will try to update soon😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hii guys. How are you all?
I am back with a new update, hope you guys like it.
Enjoy reading.

BANNER CREDITS TO ME.

Part 16

Its been one week to asya's marriage. Zoya has been a good daughter in law, sister in law and a good wife. She did all work that a wife should do like making breakfast for him, when he is late wait for him and have dinner with him. But she didnt talk him when they were alone. Asad tried to talk but she always ignored.

Zoya's pov.

In this one week i came to know that asad is a workaholic he is very punctual very angry, very religious. Dont believe in PDA, a man of rules and regulations. He has also changed himself like me and hid himself behind work.
He is busy in his office or singing. Oh guys i forgot my husband is a singer, yes i knew it Even i listened his songs but always pretended that i dont have any idea(giggle). Like the other day when najma told me about this i pretended that neither i know nor i am interested but only i know whats the truth(giggling)
Till now he has not done any effort to manofy me because he is busy in his performance which is at Brewberry Cafe.
Viase can you believe hume 1 week hua mumbai aaye and main kahi ghumne nahi gayi kyuki vo bahut busy hai.

She was brought out of her trance by asad.
Asad handing pass to zoya. Zoya this is the pass for tomorrow's performance plz fo come
Zoya denied very politely. I cant come Asad tomorrow is my meeting and i cant miss it.
Asad was disappointed and told zoya this performance is my first performance after nikah and if you ll not come i ll not sing the song.
Zoya said but what about your reputation?
Asad- i know it will be ruined but i dont care. Saying so he left.
Zoya was upset at one side its his Carrier and one side her mind which dont allow her to go she kept on thinking about it.
(Zoya joined her business again which has a branch in Mumbai)

Next day evening.
Its half an hour asad was on stage but didnt performed because je didn't find zoya anywhere. Now audience started to loose patience and one of them was about to throw something on him but zoya came their holding her hand.
Girl- what the hell is wrong with you?
Zoya in anger said jinko tum mar rahi ho vo mere husband hai.
Everyone kept quiet
As soon as asad saw zoya claded in a white saree he wnet to some other land, she came there like an angel stopping everyone from abusing and being a perfect wife
Asad now started the song. Guys jis special insan ka wait kar raha tha main vo yaha hai and today all the aongs are dedicated to her my wife my love of life. I love you zoya my Angel.

Zoya was still giving the girl a deathly glare but she heard him and when he said those lines she was so overwhelmed that she wanted to hug him right there and than but stopped herself

Asad started the song. (This song suggested by my partner in crime Abi. Thanku abi.)

Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Yaara, Yaaraa... yaara!

Mujhko iraade de
Kasamein de, waade de
Meri duaaon ke ishaaron ko sahaare de
Dil ko thikaane de
Naye bahaane de
Khaabon ki baarishon ko
Mausam ke paimane de
Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Seeing the chance when asad was busy in singing she turned to go because she cant control herself. As soon as she turned to go he sang the line and it felt as if with song he is also crying and to make her doubt clear he was crying.

Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro raha hun main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro raha hun main
He signaled with his head to stay to not leave, dont know why but she complied.
Seeing her stop he sang the second parah.
With every line they both were crying.

Manzilein ruswa hain
Khoya hai raasta
Aaye le jaaye
Itni si iltejaa
Ye meri zamanat hai
Tu meri amaanat hai haan...


Waqt bhi thehara hai
Kaise kyun ye huaa
Kaash tu aise aaye
Jaise koi duaa
Tu rooh ki raahat hai
Tu meri ibaadat hai

Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro raha hoon main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro raha hun main

He finished the song with a flying kiss in her direction. She blushed but hid it.
After a long pause he started another song.

Chand aasmano se laapata ho gaya
Chal ke mere ghar mein aa gaya, aa gaya
Main khush-kismat hoon bakhuda iss tarah
Ho jaaye poori ik duaa jis tarah

Singing the song he cMe down playing the guitar(as done in movie)
He came down and handed the guitar to a crew member and came to zoya and sang song for her


Tere bin meri jaana kabhi
Ik pal bhi guzaara nahi
Teri aarzoo ne khud se begana kar diya

Singing the next line he sat on his knees opening his arms. Forwarding his hand for a dance. Zoya too agree because of the crowd.

Chaand aasmano se lapata ho gaya
Chal ke mere ghar mein aa gaya, aa gaya

He twirled her and pulled her to his chest. Zoya felt shivers run down her spine as soon as he placed his hands on her bare waist.
No doubt she was feeling good but simultaneously she was angry on him for taking the advantage of crowd.

Maine tujhe tohfe mein ye dil diya
Tune mujhe badle mein ye jahaan diya
Main hi jaanu, tu hi jaane jo hai darmiyaan
Tujh se hai meri jaana ghar ye aashiyaan..

He swayed softly with her on the song lipsing every word with pure love and care. Zoya wanted to maintain distance from her she had decided to talk to her as soon as they reach home.

Tere bin meri jaana kabhi
Ik pal bhi guzaara nahi
Teri aarzoo ne khud se begana kar diya
Chand aasmano se lapata ho gaya
Chalke mere ghar mein aa gaya, aa gaya

Tune mere raaston ko manzil kiya
Tujhe paake zindagi ko haasil kiya
Tere liye hai ye saansein, tay kar liya
Tu hai toh hai ye kahaani, mere saathiya

Tere bin meri jaana kabhi
Ik pal bhi guzaara nahi
Teri aarzoo ne khud se begana kar diya
Chand aasmano se lapata ho gaya
Chalke mere ghar mein aa gaya, aa gaya

Controlling her emotions she swayed with him till the song ended.
Everyone gave a huge round of applaud and hootings.


Noone was there at home because all went to attend some relatives marriage.
Zoya was standing in her room waiting for asad impatiently. Asad entered in room with a satisfied smile on his face.
Firstly the performance was a huge success secondly she came there for him and stood for her.

Zoya to asad- we need to talk.
Asad said happily ahh finally after one week of cold war you feel the need of talking.
Zoya said angrily dont be happy asad. What do you think of yourself? Jab man kia chod dia jab man kia vapis le aaye life mein. Hote kon ho tum?
Asad also got angry- us time tumhara boyfriend tha or aaj husband hu.
Zoya said agar itna hi haq hai Toh mardo jaan se. Jab life se gaye tab koi reason nahi di bas dil toda aur chale gaye. Aur ab jab life mein aaye ho tab bhi bas apni chala rahe. Sirf nikah hai khareed ke nahi laye? Kya drama tha vaha pehle mujhse zabardasti vaha bulaya phir zabardasti mere sath dance kia. Naukar nahi tumhari nahi koi khilona ki jab dil kia toh mere sath khela aur phir chod dia.
Asad was listening everything patiently because this hatred was buried in her heart from last 7 years.

Zoya again spoke. Aaj main Janna chahti hu kyu choda mujhe?
Asad- kya tumhe yaad hai zoya tumne mujhe kaha tha ki tum apne ammi abbu ke liye kuch karna chahti ho or uska sirf ek hi rasta hai ache se padai karna. Aur jab se tum mere sath hui ho padai toh tumne chod hi di thi. Toh bas isliye tumse dur gaya.
Zoa clapped for him. Wow asad wow you are so amazing. Agar itna hi pyaar tha toh mujhe samjhaya kyu nahi? Mere sath hona chahiye tha
Jante ho jis din tumne choda har din so(100) maute mari hu kisi se share nahi kar payi. Zindagi mein andhera sa cha gaya tha.
Asad- main bhi koi khush nahi tha zoya. Tumhare paas atleast mujhse nafrat karne ki vajah toh thi mere paas vo bhi nahi thi.
Zoya- par yeh tumhara decision tha mera nahi. Bas asad main tumse koi baat nahi karna chahti. Jis tarah 7 sal pehle chod ke gaye the aaj bhi jao.
Asad asked pleading- plz zoya aise mat kaho main ab tumhara bina nahi jee sakta. Tum bolo main kya karu jisse mujhe meri zoya vapis mil jaye.
Zoya said- vo zoya toh kab ki mar gayi. Agar la sakte ho toh vo 7 saal vapis le aao vo zoya vapis le aao. Agar tum yeh kam karne mein kamyaab hue toh i ll forgive you.
Asad said confidently- ok zoya main apni zoya ko vapis le aunga aur vo 7 sal bhi jo tumne sirf aansoo bahakar bitaye. Ab tum mere paas aaogi tab tak main tumhe kisi chiz ke liye force nahi karunga. And yes maine tumhare har din har lamha pyaar kia hai aur yeh vaada hai mera ki tumhare andar vo pyaar jaga kar rahunga.

Precap- mission zoya manao.
So how was it guys? I hope you guys like it.
Bye gudnyt tc.
Love Vish❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Heyyy...Vish.. 😊
Thanx for the P.M...
I liked this part..., A very good and well written...
But i don't know when eventhough Asad left her broken...at that time he did that for her own good...and yes as she questioned he should have talked to her about it but Asad is not at all guilty i guess...like how she is treating him...
But now as every truth is out...now will see how Asad will make her get her previous self back...
Looking forward to the next part eagerly ...
Continue soonn..
# And this is just my POV ...so kindly spare me for any offence.. 😆 😉
Edited by MayurChan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
unrees
It was flawlessly Awesome Update
&
I love both song scequence&love U my partner in Crime for Zoya's out brust on Asad
But it doesn't mean U get to make Mission manao Zoya easy for Asad
Infact make it as hard as you can😉
and
yeah
CONTINUE SOON
Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Super sweet update.loved the songs n especially Chand aasmano was cute.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part loved it
Asya dance wow
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow surprise update
Loved the performance n asya dance
Their first fight after wedding...but at least they talk...
Mission zoya manao...can't wait
Update soon
Thanks for the update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice...
Thanx for d pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
So a week of marriage and a week of Cold War
So the singer is finally out
Love the songs so suit the situation
Even though she is angry ahe still came
She can't see him lose face
Oh face off they both have their say to each other
Asad plead he can't live without her so don't leave me
She said it was his choice not hers
So he told y he broke her heart because she neglect her studies
She said if he didn't had another way
Ok,so a challenge if u can bring back tht zoya from 7 yrs back
She will forgive him
So Asad have his work cut out for him
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was awesome fantastic loved how zoya went to the concert n their dance *blush* loved zoya's outburst n now asad miyan u will have to do many things to manofy her papad belne padenge bahut but intezar ka fal meetha hota hai

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