Invitation to a different writing challenge (Part 22/page 82) - Page 39

Originally posted by: harichandana

Awesome update vikas.har baar mai kich expect karke aate hu lekin yaha toh us se bhi bahut upar mil jata hai unexpected turns so beautiful here.this is one of the best updates till now in this thread. ruhi itni shaitaani omg mujhe toh voh pehli pehli din yaad aa gayi jabruhi ishita ke saat bahit masti karti thi n ghar mein chupchap.so lovely yaar . raman ishita ruhi evry character rocked it .n thankgod u completed courtdrama in one part.i juat hav no words vikafpr this. beautiful .thanku for such a wonderful update

OMG I am totally in love with this part. Loved to see Ishita Ruhi bond and Raman a spectator of it. Loved to see naughty Ruhi. Loved to see Toshiji warming up more for Ishita. Loved the way Raman convinced Ruhi to come along with him... Loved the entire court scene. Ruhi didn't recognise Shagun. She deserves to be a stranger by her deeds...

So now Raman is desperate to get married to Ishita for Ruhi as in

"Ruhi Ke Liye"

Looking forward for Ishra bond to develop and Ishita's point of view as well..

Buddy you did an awesome job. speechless.

That was an amazing extension! I loved the part where Shagun was insulted. Now I really wanna see how Ishita agrees for the marriage xx

Originally posted by: sakshi.ekansh

OMG I am totally in love with this part. Loved to see Ishita Ruhi bond and Raman a spectator of it. Loved to see naughty Ruhi. Loved to see Toshiji warming up more for Ishita. Loved the way Raman convinced Ruhi to come along with him... Loved the entire court scene. Ruhi didn't recognise Shagun. She deserves to be a stranger by her deeds...

So now Raman is desperate to get married to Ishita for Ruhi as in

"Ruhi Ke Liye"

Looking forward for Ishra bond to develop and Ishita's point of view as well..

Buddy you did an awesome job. speechless.

Originally posted by: shavi2311

great updte vikas...

loved ru... suprb cute...

ishita want to hav raman's gaze on her...lovely...madam patgayi...

glad u didnt do court drama... drct meeting with judge is awesom...nd hw ru told abt her ishima...

i got my yhm bak trough this updte...loved it...

ur updte is stressbuster fr me...

thanks for liking.

Glad to see you again vikas

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana

Glad to see you again vikas

I know how excited you were...for your turn...

really wonderful update...loved itt

you always wanted to show ruhi ishita scene and bonding...since part two and you got the chance now...beautiful...that morning scene was just awesum

and cherry on the cake was raman and toshiji seeing itt..ruhi so cute and chirpy self...wow

loved that dialog...ishima papa ko kaam hai jo unse ho nhi rha. Haha...good job

custody thing was nyc...finally raman has decided to make ishita agree

lets c her reaction in next part

shavi in row now

all the best dear

Ishita's toughts...

Raman is enjoying the view infront him... ruhi who is busy in licking and enjoying ice cream... ruhi makes raman out of his toughts and asks him to buy teddy bear... he takes her to the mall... ruhi selects the same teddy bear which ishra had fought earlier... by seeing it raman remembers their fight and how they left it without buying... raman and ruhi do some shopping of clothes for ruhi and ruhi selecting maximum green and pink... raman can easily say her tastes are not the one which have a year before... she takes raman to ladies section and asks him to select dress for her ishimaa... ruhi says ishimaa always gifts her but I never gifted any thing to ishimaa... to which raman smiles and shows some dress to ruhi but she says ishimaa wont like this colo or she never wear those type of dresses... raman asks ruhi what is ishita's favourite color she replies by saying green... raman shows some green dresses but she rejects every thing... Suddenly raman eyes fell on blue salwar suit and shows it to her... she says its pretty and we will take this... raman and ruhi left in car and while driving raman says to ruhi that you are completely becoming ishimaa... she giggles and says ishimaa's fav are my favourites ishimaa likes green color so ruhi also likes green and gives wider smile... raman smiles at her and drops her in ishita's house...

Ishita comes after 1 hour... she takes ruhi and hugs her...kisses her on cheek...but ruhi is not responding to her hug and kisses... ishita observes this and asks her the reason... but ruhi didn't respond to her questions... Raman who is waiting for ishita sees her and keeps himself calm and comes after 5 min with teddy in hand... which he wantedly did not give to ruhi so that he can meet ishita with this reason but he cant understand what is going between them... he only knows ruhi is not responding to ishita and he is sure ruhi cant do this as she loves her ishimaa very much... so tought of asking reason he moves forward but raman hears ruhi's voice saying you are very late... ruhi is waitng for you from 1 hour and now Iam not hungry and I wont eat... she starts running in the house and make ishita run after her... raman completing enjoying ishru's scenario and forgot why he came... ishita cant get hold of ruhi and ruhi see raman and goes behind him... ishu is about to egt hold of her but stops herself seeing closeness between her and raman.. it seems like they are hugging each other... raman's trance breaks by ruhi's giggles... and he straightens himself... he gives teddy to ruhi and says don't trouble your ishimaa... she came from clinic just now and you are making her run behind... this is not good ru... to which ruhi says I will do this if she comes late in a stubborn manner... raman says ru but she says I wont listen to you and runs... ishita says let it be... iam habituated to her...and let me handle... she goes to kitchen and serves plate for lunch... she holds plate and goes to ruhi's room in search of her but she is not their so she calls her but ruhi is not responding... raman silently enjoying with a smile on his face... ishita checks curtains, under th bed but ru is there and she knows ruhi is in cup board and ishu going to check cup board but raman shouts like some thing hurted him and falls on the floor... ruhi immediately comes out and asks her papa with high concern in her voice where you are felling pain... ru is very sorry papa... I made you fall down and about to cry but ishita takes her in hands and starts tickling her by saying sirf ruhi nahi ruhi ki papa bhi natuanki kar sakte hain...(even ruhi's papa can act not only ruhi...) raman says sorry ru you are about to cry because of me but ru starts tickling her papa with her tiny arms... raman asks ruhi to stop but ishita and ruhi laughs their heart out by seeing raman like that...raman admires her angles...while ishita stops ruhi and takes ruhi in one hand and plate in another but raman comes to offer help...he takes ruhi's teddy and plate from ishu so that ishu can hold ruhi comfortably... ishita is feeding ruhi and asks raman to join for lunch... raman is about to deny but ruhi joins saying please eat with ru and ishimaa today... raman cant deny to her daughter so he joins with them... ru is making hell for ishita with her antics but ishita calmly and smiling feeding ruhi without uttering a word... in between raman also feeds ru and asks ishita to eat but she denies but raman forces ishita to eat with them... with ruhi's nautanki(drama) ishraru completes lunch... raman bids good bye to them... and moves into their flat... ishita makes ruhi to sleep by saying story and ruhi palying with ishita's hair sleeps peacefully... after making sure ruhi slept she sees the teddy and remembers her fight with raman and the turns of events between them... how raman made unique proposal, asking permission to take ruhi and in lunch how he helped her with ruhi... she again gets back to the proposal of raman... but ruhi murmurs saying I don't know them... ishita paniks and wakes up ruhi... and asks ruhi what she is thinking... ruhi says how her papa took her to some place and the questions asked by judge... after that she shown two persons and said one is my mumma and even that lady also said she is my mother but I said my mom is ishita... and ruhi asks whose that lady who said iam her daughter... ishu is about to cry but controls infront of ruhi... meanwhile raman comes to take ruhi for some time... raman observes ishita and knows she is sad and tells ruhi to go their home as dadi is calling you... Raman is about to ask ishita that what is bothering her but she scolds raman by saying how can take ruhi to meet her mom... you never tought of talking it to me about ruhi meeting her mom... you wanted to start a new life with me as ruhi's ishimaa but you never botehred to say that you are taking her to her mom... and ishu cries infront of raman ...raman is about to console her but she says may be you never trusted me... that's the reason you did not even said where you are taking ruhi and on what basis you propesd to be ruhi's ishimaa officially... ?? without having trust in me ...?? Without trust relation wont work Mr.raman ...raman want to say that he cant see ishu in problem but ishu didn't gave any chance to him and left the room...

Raman thinks to himself...iam royally messed up with her... and its highly difficult to covience her now...

fassgaya bichaara.

Wonderful yrr