Invitation to a different writing challenge (Part 22/page 82) - Page 40

superb update
cute scene b/w ishu n ruhi
loved it
waiting for next

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

fassgaya bichaara.

Ishita tho pehley pat gayee thee.

I really wanted this confrontation yaar.

Raman tho bichhar.Ishu ko pareshan na karney key liyen kissi ko bathaaay nahen but yahan ulti padgayee.

Then ISHRARU scene was too good.

Now have to see how Raman mannoys ISHITA.

Thanks for quickupdate buddy.

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana

Wonderful yrr

thmks for quick update

so cute...loved shopping segment and then ishraru cute scenes..beautifull

they gel with each other so well..

iishita was just thinking about propsal wen ruhi told about shagun...and she took it all wrong...poor ramAn

but i liked the twist..its must for story to continue

lets c how he manages now

brilliant work shavi

gud job

superb love ishravu shopping. love full part

Qow lovely update raman ruhi ishita moments r so adorable perfect family moments .raman bhi nautanki ban gaya beti ke liye loved the way how they both handled ruhi .I really loved ruhi a lot in this kitna shaitani kar rahi hai yaar. their family lunch iahita thoughts final confrontation everything was so gud.bechara raman ko phasa diya hai na yaar pehle hi pyaar ke confusion mein hai ab ye bhi n as usual ishita yaha bhi raman par shuru.totally a perfect family update with their daughter's antics.thanks for pm n this early update.evry moment was a kodak moment loved it wholeheartedly

wow... what an twist !!!!

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Hey shravani... Another beautiful update from your side. Loved it totally ... The shopping scene and the teddy that reminds them of their first meet... The scene where Ruhi was upset with her Ishima and was running around. Raman doing masti as well and the tickling scene... It was so sweet..

But syappa on its way.. Ishita misunderstood Raman. ab let's see how he manages to manaofy her.

Great update dear.. Loved how you gave it an roothna manana angle...

Originally posted by: harichandana

Qow lovely update raman ruhi ishita moments r so adorable perfect family moments .raman bhi nautanki ban gaya beti ke liye loved the way how they both handled ruhi .I really loved ruhi a lot in this kitna shaitani kar rahi hai yaar. their family lunch iahita thoughts final confrontation everything was so gud.bechara raman ko phasa diya hai na yaar pehle hi pyaar ke confusion mein hai ab ye bhi n as usual ishita yaha bhi raman par shuru.totally a perfect family update with their daughter's antics.thanks for pm n this early update.evry moment was a kodak moment loved it wholeheartedly

Originally posted by: Akshatha19

wow... what an twist !!!!

Raman- ruhi shopping just nice, the same teddy...

Raman purchasing dress for ishita so nice...

Ishru scenes so sweet and lovely totally enjoyed, ishra so close...

papa-beti duo are natuankis...

i was feeling ishita will agree for proposal of Raman, but my god twist...

beautifully written...

IshRaRu the best as always...

just loved it...

Nice update shavi.
Ishraru scene is so cute.
Awww poor Raman. Now waiting 4 him 2 woo ishita. I want their relationship start with love. And then how they going 2 face their problems with that strong bond. Not like at the show.
All parts r so good. Well written guys. Keep it up. All the best.
Tnx 4 pm shavi