Invitation to a different writing challenge (Part 22/page 82) - Page 41

Nice continuation Shavi.

Superb Shavi love the moment they spent some time together like the family.Now you put Raman in fix he have to clear the air with Ishu and convince her to agree to marry him. May be he can start to tell little of his background so will help Ishu to decide to marry him. Till then have to wait for next person update.😊

awesome update
poor raman now how will he convince her
kya yar hadd hain bt i love d fact ishita jatofying her hakk on raman

Terrific update.
Love the ISHRARU moments.. Ru is so adorable!

Poor Ishu, hope Raman explains and charms his lady love soon!😊

Originally posted by: RMGT

Nice update shavi.
Ishraru scene is so cute.
Awww poor Raman. Now waiting 4 him 2 woo ishita. I want their relationship start with love. And then how they going 2 face their problems with that strong bond. Not like at the show.
All parts r so good. Well written guys. Keep it up. All the best.
Tnx 4 pm shavi

Originally posted by: nividances

Nice continuation Shavi.

The cute IshRaRu scene was nice. I could almost picture them together as a family, laughing and enjoying.

The twist at the end with Ishita misunderstanding Raman was perfect.

Great job!

Originally posted by: usaonly

Superb Shavi love the moment they spent some time together like the family.Now you put Raman in fix he have to clear the air with Ishu and convince her to agree to marry him. May be he can start to tell little of his background so will help Ishu to decide to marry him. Till then have to wait for next person update.😊

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awesome update
poor raman now how will he convince her
kya yar hadd hain bt i love d fact ishita jatofying her hakk on raman

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Terrific update.
Love the ISHRARU moments.. Ru is so adorable!

Poor Ishu, hope Raman explains and charms his lady love soon!😊

Edited on page 53. Sorry for not replying sooner shravani.