Invitation to a different writing challenge (Part 22/page 82) - Page 5

Scene starts in Srinagar...wer raman is thinking about ruhi nd hw he loved her daughter, remembering all the good times with her nd her hw cutely she use to call him PAPA...he is caressing her pic nd crying nd saying meri RU...please come soon papa is missing u...

In delhi Bhalla's nd Iyers's are in same society...They are opposite to each other...bt they didn't notice...In Iyer's place...ishu is running behind ruhi...fr making her brush nd bath..bt ruhi is nt listening nd running faster...while running ruhi is saying run fast nd catch otherwise I wont bath... finally ishu gets hold of ruhi nd starts tickling her...ruhi giggles...Mr & Mrs. Iyer are very happy by seeing ishu nd ruhi lik this...

Ruhi is selecting clothes fr ishu as it is their daily routine...ishu only wears what ruhi selects fr her nd further arguments on it... Ishu nd ruhi are on break fast table...only ishu should feed ruhi... she wont eat from other person hands r by herself... so ishu mak sure tht she wil only feed ruhi...because she wil stay hungry bt she wont touch the food...

Mr.Iyer went to bring som grocery nd met Mr.bhalla...they are close friends nd due to career reasons they parted... Mr.bhalla recognises Mr.iyer nd thy involve takking abt their past life...bt never mentioned about ishita r raman r ruhi...

Ishu calls appa... nd says did he buyed every thing needed fr party...he says yes nd she asks him to come soon as ruhi is sleeping now nd she can complete the arrangmnts... mr.iyer invites mr.bhalla to his home...as there is surprise b'day fr his pothi(grand daughter) mr.bhalla remembers ruhi nd gets sad...bt mr.bhalla says they wil definatly come nd moves to their respective houses...

Mr.Bhalla says to everyone about party bt mrs.bhalla sasy its their b'day pothi b'day too nd says I don't want to go...all becomes sad nd decideds not to go...

In iyer's house ishu completely decorates ruhi's room with teddy's , ballons nd kept Barbie theme...she takes her to her room at night 12 AM... ruhi observes every thing nd shouts in excitement...ishra in UNISON says HAAPY BIRTH DAY ruhi(ishu nd saying to ruhi nd raman saying this to ruhi's pic...in srinagar) nd Ruhi says Happy b'day to Ishimaa... ruhi tells her she will celebrate her b'day wen she celebrates it...to vch ishu says we both celebrates our b'day...( it is the day wen ishu took ruhi with her nd I made it ruhi's real b'day tooo...) Ishu nd ruhi celebrate their b'day nd cut the cake...a lone tear passes from ishu nd mr.nd mrs.iyes eyes...as hw ruhi beautifully changed their life nd hw happy ishita is...

P.S: I hop it really reached ur expectations..nd vikas I think I didn't let down ur part...

thanks yar...updted nxt part...

As expected and for betterment you are taking it to safer side.

But felt little expansion would have been better in dialogues.

Then making Ruhi's real and assumed birthday same was great idea.But now my part became a let down but agreeable.Twists should be made.

Everything is perfect and I would have done the same if I were writting.

Hope no 3 is not a quitter.Old no 2 prooved to be.

You made it perfect by making Ruhi to starve but not eat without Ishita.

If I were not to break rule by making more than two scenes.I would have made it till this point.

So even if Raman makes Ishita arrested (legally can't as there is a legal police complaint on both sides and flaw can't be noticed easily of Bala so no blame) Ruhi will not eat till Ishita is there to feed her .

Awesome part.

I wish next writer is fast .Plz buddy update fast.

I have waited five days for this post.Don't break rules.

FOR ALL WRITERS.I WILL BE SENDING BASIC Line of advice for safe flow of story.

How can we know whether any one is reading or not.Give your opinion frankly.

You may not know.But Shravani made this part in short notice .

Shravani was supposed to make part no 3.

But because of no 2.Who took this challenge series as joke.Or ran away as coward unable to make it.Shravani was given notice to make post yesterday evening and she got ready with it in short time.

She deserves credit for this work and her loyality to team and team work.

Shravani you are a start buddy.

sorry.

loved the second part...

@ shavi2311

lovely update...

birthday concept was awesome...

Ishita and Ruhi just superb

when Raman N Ishita wished birthday in unison..very nice...

waiting for next update...