Invitation to a different writing challenge (Part 22/page 82) - Page 6

love d 2nd part @ shavi 2311 it was beautiful Mr.bhalla n Mr.iyer r friends so may b its gone interesting ruhi is birthday wow n ishra wish her wow next writer plz make Raman come to Delhi

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

Nice one buddy.

As expected and for betterment you are taking it to safer side.

But felt little expansion would have been better in dialogues.

Then making Ruhi's real and assumed birthday same was great idea.But now my part became a let down but agreeable.Twists should be made.

Everything is perfect and I would have done the same if I were writting.

Hope no 3 is not a quitter.Old no 2 prooved to be.

You made it perfect by making Ruhi to starve but not eat without Ishita.

If I were not to break rule by making more than two scenes.I would have made it till this point.

So even if Raman makes Ishita arrested (legally can't as there is a legal police complaint on both sides and flaw can't be noticed easily of Bala so no blame) Ruhi will not eat till Ishita is there to feed her .

Awesome part.

I wish next writer is fast .Plz buddy update fast.

I have waited five days for this post.Don't break rules.

FOR ALL WRITERS.I WILL BE SENDING BASIC Line of advice for safe flow of story.

Sorry fr leting down ur updte...hop others vl justify it

Originally posted by: .Jayashree.

read both the parts
story is going good
@vikas
it was a intresting start liked it so much 👍🏼👏
@shavi
u too continued the story very well 👏 👏
eagarly waiting to read the next part
please continue soon...

Thank u so much

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

sorry.

I wont acpt sorries frndshp so no sorries frm nxt tym

Originally posted by: Akshatha19

wow...

loved the second part...

@shavi2311

lovely update...

birthday concept was awesome...

Ishita and Ruhi just superb

when Raman N Ishita wished birthday in unison..very nice...

waiting for next update...

Thank u so much

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

love d 2nd part @ shavi 2311it was beautiful Mr.bhalla n Mr.iyer r friends so may b its gone interesting ruhi is birthday wow n ishra wish her wow next writer plz make Raman come to Delhi

Its glad u liked it...

Originally posted by: shavi2311

Sorry fr leting down ur updte...hop others vl justify it

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

I din't mean that way.

I want to say.

I could'nt think of that before.

Yaar yahan tho poora meaning hee gadbad hogayan,

leave it.

Cool vikas... I got ur meaning... Chck ur inbox...

Nice continuation waiting for the next part loved ishu ruhi bonding could hav expanded ramans pain in a broad way

Thanks Shavi for update the story was good the way you put Ruhi b'day at the day they meet her and her real one was good sad that Raman still not see her yet. Hope Bhallas come to party and remember Ruhi cause she grown up the face might little change or may be Ruhi not remember them cause Ruhi still young. Waiting for the connection now Ruhi can't leave without Ishu but both family know each other might be easy for Ishra to be friends.But honestly like Vikas said need some twist to be spicy the story then will be more fun. Is it possible that can get PM for update? Cause I really enjoy the reading please. HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL OF YOU.🥳🥳🥳