FF: Dil Hai Tumhara Part 20 pg 18

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Bani a sweet and simple girl with many dreams. To get her sister Rano married in a good family and to make it big someday. She knows somewhere along the way she will find true love.

Bani: I know that you don't have to look for true love for it comes unexpectedly. He doesn't have to have big bucks or dashing good looks like John Abraham he just has to give me unconditional love at any circumstance.

Rano: Didi where have you drifted off to? I've been saying your name for so long. We're getting late. Did you forget we have to go to the mandir today?

Bani: Oh! It slipped my mind. I'll go get ready.

Here our prince charming chain ki neeend soraha hai.

Massi: Munna get up. Did you forget you promised to take me to the mandir today?

Jai: Massi let me sleep. I'm very tired.

Massi: Munna please noone is home.

Jai: Alright! But I'm going to wait in the car because you know I don't believe in baghvan, pratna and all that.

Massi: Jai beta you must atleast enter if not for god than atleast for my sake.

Jai: Okay.

So Jai, Massi, Bani, and Rano all arrive at the mandir.

Jai to Massi: I'll go get the puja tray.
Bani to Rano:

Jai gets there first. He purchases it and as soon as he turns around he bumps in to Bani and the puja tray is about to fall but Bani catches it. So Bani's hand is ontop of Jai's. They both have an eye locking session.

Bani: I'm terribly sorry.

Jai: It's okay.

Bani: Good thing I stopped the anarth from happening.

Jai: anarth?

Bani: It's inauspicious for a puja tray to fall.

Jai: I don't believe that, or your baghvan. He is just a statue. If he can't help himself how will he help you?

Bani: He may be just a statue but he has great strength. Have you ever prayed infront of him.

Jai: No

Bani: Well just try and see.

She buys the tray and leaves. Meanwhile massi hears everything.

Massi: I think this girl will be perfect for my munna.

Rano: Didi what took you so long?

Bani: Never mind that we have to pray fast. you have to go to colledge and I have to go for my interview.

Jai: Massi please hurry I have work.

After praying is done:

-Jai drops massi home and goes to work.
-Rano goes to college.
-And Bani arrives at the place where her interview is to take place.

Receptionist: Mam it's time for your interview. Sir is waiting for you.

Bani: Alright.

Bani goes in and sees a man sitting on his chair facing his back towards her.

Bani: Good morning sir! I hope I'm not late. I'm here for my interview. My name is Bani Dixit. I reassure you if you hire me you wont have any regrets. I'll show you my resume. Sir are you listening?

The man turns around and it's Mr.Walia.

Bani: Aap?

She is very shocked and the part ends on her shocked expression.Alright I hope you guys liked part of my FF. I want to see your predictions for the next parts. Feel free to post them. I'll post part 2 as soon as I can.

Kanchi911




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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi Naina!!!😊

congrats for your 1st ff👏👏👏
It's a nice start👏
continue soon😊
Edited by siumi - 18 years ago
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awesome start!!!

dont get me starting to predict!!

cuz oh man... i will just go on and on!!!

plz cont soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome start , i'm one of the silent readers who doesn't comment a lot or at all but i couldn't help my self right now. great work! can't wait for the next part! continue soon! 👏
Edited by aqsita - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww cute start...totally awesome...
next time longer updates 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi,

Great start, please continue soon.

Nikita
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Hey, a wonderful start n congrats on ur new FF!
Pls continue soon!
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Hello! I had a lot of time on my hands so I've started part 2.

Jai: Hello I am Jai Walia owner of Walia industries.

Bani: Hello!

Jai: Let me see your resume.

He looks over it.

Jai: I'm impressed. You have the job.

Bani: Thank you so much. When do I start?

Jai: Today.

Bani: Alright sir.

He calls in Rosy his secretary.

Jai: Rosy show Bani her cabin.

Rosy: Ofcourse sir.

Jigyasa was outside Jai's cabin at that time and she heard everything.

Jigyasa: How could Jai Bhaiya hire this do takai ki ladki.

She goes in.

jigyasa: Jai Bhaiya how could you hire that girl. She dresses like a beggar. What experience could she possibly have?

Jai: I looked at her resume. She is going to be perfect for the job. End of discussion Jigyasa.

Closing time came. Everyone left except for Jai and Bani. Jai is about to leave but he sees a light on in Bani's cabin. He goes in.

Jai: Bani you're still here. In fact you were suppose to leave early.

Bani: I know Mr.Walia but it didn't feel rigth to go early on the first day and I had some work. I was just working on the last touch ups of the day. I'll just be a minute.

Jai: Bani it's quite late. I'll drop you home.

Bani: No it's alright Mr.Walia. I'll take a taxi.

Jai: Please I can't let you walk alone and as your boss I'm telling you to take a lift. It will be no trouble at all.

Bnai: Alright sir. Let's go.

During the car ride everything was quiet. Then they arrive at Bani's house.

Bani: Thank you so much! Mr.Walia why don't you come in have some tea or coffee.

Jai: No I'm fine. I have to be getting home anyway.

Bani: Alright.

Bani is about to go inside but Jai calls her. She turns around.

Jai: You forgot your purse. He gets out of the car and gives it to her. After saying bye he leaves. Bani goes inside the house.

Rano: says Oh ho didi woh kaun tha in a teasing tone.

Bani: It was my boss. He insisted on giving me a ride home.

Rano: Okay. Didi I'll prepare you something.

Bani: No it's okay I'm not hungry. I'll be going to bed now. I have work early tomorrow morning. Good night.

Rano: Goodnight.

Bani and Jia are both in bed and are having flashbacks of their meetings. Jai smiles when he thinks of the mandir scene.

Jai: There is something special in this girl. She has this junoon to go to the top. I like that. Oh it's very late. I should go to sleep.

So both eventually fall asleep. That's the end of todays's part. Hope this part was as interesting as the first. Part 3 will be posted soon. Have patience.

Kanchi911


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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part
pls cont soon
i have one question where is part 1
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that was a great part
i read part 2 before 1
pls cont soon

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