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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Gayathri30

Dhivya how are you feeling now? Hope your btter

thanks for the update

sumaarana updateta yaaru sonna
i loved each and every scene. Starting with lakshmi and rajis convo and friendship nice to see how much lakshmi wants raji to be with everyone, raji feeling bad and coming to the party hahaha..

kr convo by the beach karthi saying he will be back to nornal and taking the nivk out of her chudiar lool.
Vl scene vishnus comedy semma ithula yenna mathiri anthra balti adikuraru about thebdress raji wore hahaha
kadisila koushik pesanathu konjum kovum vanthuthu anna raji saying what she feels and koushik understanding was nice to see :). Karthi slapping koushik and standing by raji was all nice to see :).

Is there still.more party scenes waiting for next :)...


thhanks a lot dear fr the commnt
ur wish...let me know wat u want??
party scenes?? r office???
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Posted: 10 years ago
@dhivyaa erm party scenes :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
First you take care of your health ma...

Amazing update ma, Karthi - Raji , fight, samadhanam superb

Koushik mattum appadi pesalana, raji manasula yennanu karthi ku therinjirukaadhu

Koushik inimel friend or enemy?

Vishnu - Lakshmi convo nice
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sumarrana update nu ungha baashaiye engalukke super ah irukku..

Appo super update nu ungha vaayila vandha adhu engallukku eppadi patta update ah irukkum ?

Thank u so much for this lovely / superb / wonderful and awesome update , Dear...

Take care off ur health first... Rest are all next...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajee71



Take care off ur health first... Rest are all next...



Timing & Rhyming 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hello Dhivya ma'am, hope you get well soon, take good care. am wondering where to start writing about your latest update...romantic KR, emotional RL, hilarious VL, meaningful R-Koushik, back to romantic KR again - what lovely conversations and interesting narration of scenes?! Well done ma'am.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Just a awesome update Dhivya..
Love you for it..Such a sweet conversation between Karthik-Raji
Waiting for next sweet one.,..Please take care too
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Posted: 10 years ago
Its was an awesome update dear. Take care your health .
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Posted: 10 years ago

this is for u gayathri sis...filler part...

full of kr...stry ll move fast from the next part..

m feeling better now frnds..thanks 😛

PART 13

raji moved away from karthik and reached lakshmi...

some were dancing to the pleasant music,played by the DJ...

vishnu : enna raji ithu...abacharam abacharam,...thalaya virichu potundrukele...hahaa

he laughed...

raji : enna vishnu kalaikareengala...

vishnu : aiy kandupudichuteengale...

raji : na thala pinnikaren nu thaan sonen lakshmi thaan...

lak : dei olaru vaaya gammunu iruka maata..nane kashta patu ivala convince paniruken...po nee poi yartayavathu pesa theriyama pesi adi vaangu...inga ethuku vandha...

raji : en lakshmi erinju erinju vizhara avaru mela epaparru...

vishnu : athaana enna latchu keka aalu ilanu nenaichiya...na nallavan enaku onnu na 4 peru kepanga...

lak : enna elam indha kuruvi kootu mandayanuku support panreenga...

vishnu : lakshmi enoda curling hair a apdi elam sollatha...enaku ketta kovam varum...

raji : vishnu ivaluku oru 7up vaangi thaanga apo thaan unmaya pesuva..paasam pothu kittu varum...

lak : hmm..ah seri seri na kalambaren..susan ena koopadra...

vishnu and raji laughs

vishnu : epdi naluvara parunga raji...

vishnu : lakshmi ...

he stretches his hand...

lak : enna kaasu venuma?...

vishnu : lakshmi epaparu summa kindal panite irukatha lakshmi...

lak : seriousaa ve kekren enna da?...

vishnu : party la oru azhagana paiyan un munadi vandhu kaiya neetina enna artham...

lak : enga enga??

vishnu : kai itho iruke,...

lak : kai itho iruku...azhagana paiyan?...

vishnu : kalaikatha lakshmi...vaa

lak : enga?

vishnu : hmmm andha kadaila 7up vaanga...

lak : adi...

vishnu : apo vaa lets dance...

lak : ipdi elam koopta epdi varathu...

vishnu : vera epdi koopdanumam...

lak : enna da thanni kudu apdindra mari unarchiye ilama koopadra...bore unoda...unaku ethuvume olungave varla vishnu ...atleast otta joke solva la athayavathu panni sirika vei...

she sees no one infront of her...

lak mv : inga thaana ninutrundhan..enga ponan...kochikitano...aala kaanume...

he hears a beautiful song...the music stopped, she could hear only his voice...

vishnu sings : ennavale adi ennavale...endhan ithayathai thulaithu vitten...

endha idam athu thulaindha idam andha idathayum marandhu viten...

she was awestruck...

he continued to sing...

vishnu sings full song..and she was surprised to the core...

while singing the last line...he reached lakshmi..he bent down on a kneee.,,,and stretched his hand...

raji was the first to clap...followed by others.,..

lakhsmi has no other go...she felt happy...she dint give her hand...

vishnu stood up

vishnu : enachu..ithuvum nalla ilaya...? enaku ithuku mela elam onnum theriyathu lakshmi...

now lakshmi gave her hands...

lak : m impressed...

vishnu smiles...

lak : ivlo nalla paduviya...unaku pesave olunga varathey...

vishnu angrily looks at her...

lak : seri seri kochikatha...super a padina...po...

vishhnu : thanks lakshmi...

lak : come lets dance...

now the music started...and they both were dancing...

raji was looking at them...she was happpy for her frrnd and her brother...

karthik came and stood near her..he touched her shoulder with his...

she just then noticed him

raji : enna

karthik : onnum ilaye...

raji : onnum ilana seri

karthik : vishnu pramathama padinar la

raji : aamanga..na kooda ethir pakave ila...ivlo nalla paduvaru nu ...summa asathitaru...

karthik : hmmm

raji : neenga padalaya

karthik : ila

raji : en?

karthik : vishnu lakshmi kaga padinaru..na yarukaga paada...

raji remained silent

karthik : avanga serndhu aadranga...na yaar kooda aada?

raji : en ponna ila... athaan ithana peru irukangale...poi aadrathu...

karthik : paathavangaloda elam aada mudiyuma enna?...

raji : pinna?

karthik : palaganum..pudikanum...apram

raji : pothum pothum...

raji started again...

raji : summa party arrange pantu ipdi summa ninna epdi poi aadunga...

she tested him...

karthik : venam venam...

raji : ila paravala...

karthik : ada venam ma... na mathavangaloda aadina...avangaluku semma kovam varum...

raji : apdiya??

karthik : aama varatha pinna...

raji : kovam varumnu ungaluku epdi theriyum...

karthik : oru paiyan avala pathu dress nalla iruku, neenga azhaga irukeenga nu sonale enaku kovam varudhu,

apo athey mari thaana avalukum...

raji : aamava?

karthik : aama na inoru ponna katti pudichu aadna avaluku kovam varatha...

raji looked at him with respect...

raji mv : namma unarchigaluku ivlo madhipu kudukararu...oru ego..oru aambalandra thimiru onnume ilaye...

karthik : enna apdi paakara...

raji : ila apdina ipdiye thaaan summa iruka poreengala...

karthik : neeyum summa thaana iruka...

raji : enaku ithelam pudhusu...athaaan

karthik : hmmm

raji : venumna avangalodaye koodaye aadungalen?..

she said shyly...

karthik : andha ponnu na koopta aada maata...

raji : apdiya...avlo uruthiya theriyuma ungaluku...

karthik : enaku avala pathi nalla theriyum.,..ava party ku vandhadhe enaku pothum...

raji smiles...

karthik : athuvum ilama enakum avalukum ipo konjam sanda...

raji : oho...

karthik : athaan...

raji : unga paadu romba kashtam thaan..seriyana pattikaada irupa polaye...

karthik : chm apdi sonna avaluku kovam varum...

raji : sry sry..na solala...romba kovakariyo...

karthik : lesaa...enaku andha character thaana pudichuruku...

raji smiles lovingly at him...

all girls from goutham's and susan's team approached karthik...

girls : sir oru selfie...

karthik : call me by my name...

girls : selfie eduthukalama karthik...

karthik : sure...

raji moved away from him...

he held her hands...

girls : raji neenga konjam...

karthik : raji enga pora...

raji : neenga photo eduthutu vaanga karthik..nan anga ukandhuruken...

karthik : neeyum vaa..vandhu en pakathula nillu...

raji : ila venam karthik na anga ukandhuruken...

she sat n a chair...

after taking pic...he neared her...

karthik : en nee varla...

raji : enaku photo face nalla irukathu karthik...

karthik : atha nanga solanum...seri vaa ipo namma eduthukalam...

raji : nanum neengalum matuma?...

karthik : aama en?...

raji thinks...

karthik : seri ok venam vidu...

she changes the topic...

raji : karthik appa varanga naala kalichu

karthik : oh enna vishayam?

raji, after a pause...

raji : summa enna paaka

karthik looks at her fr a sec and continues...

karthik : nallathu thaana...

raji : hmm nallathu thaan summa sonen...appa kita ungala pathi neriya soliruken karthik avaru ungala pakanumnu sonaru...

karthik : kandipa veetuku kootitu vaaa...athuku munadi phone pannu..veeda clean pananum

raji : indha mari yaravathu vandha thaaan clean panrathu pola

karthik : aama bachelor veedu epdi irukum...

raji smiles..

karthik : enna pathi enna soliruka...

raji : neenga aniki video eduthapa enaku help pannathu..motha naal andha papa ku help pannathu...

karthik : apram...

raji : apram neenga nallavaru..vallavaru...enoda friendu...

karthik : apram...

raji : apram boss apdindra bayama ungala patha irukathu apdinu...

karthik : chmmm,...matteruku vaa...apram...

raji : apram enna...

karthik : avlothaan sonniya...

raji : avlothaan soliruken...

karthik : seri ok...

they continue to talk...

all eats and share some light moments...

since all were tired..they decided to stay fr one more night..n leave the next morning...

lak : raji enaku semma tiredaa iruku...namma poi thoongalam vaa...

raji : vaaa polam...

vishnu : bye raji gud nite...latchu gud nite.

lak : gud nite vishnu...

karthik : raji oru nimisham...

raji : solunga karthik...

karthik : thookam varudha?..

raji : ilaye...

karthik : apram en room ku pora...summa kaathu vaangalame...

raji : seri pola...

karthik : disturb panrena?.,..

raji : ilaye...

karthik : seri...

they walk...

karthik : appa epdi varuvanga bus ah train a

raji : bus la...

karthik : hostel theriyuma...na poi pick up pantu varava...

raji : vennam karthik na poren bus stop ku...

karthik : seri enna vishayam sollu...

raji : enathu...

karthiik : summa nadikatha raji...enaku theriyum...etho solla nenaikara ...enanu sollu..

tears flow from her eyes...

raji : karthik....

karthik : raji en azhara ipo...

raji : bayama iruku karthik...

karthik : ethuku...

raji : appa maapla pakraru...

karthik : pakatum..en azhara...

raji : paakatuma?...

karthik : aama pakatum...

raji : ungaluku kashtamave ilaye karthik...

karthik : prachana vandha apram thaan yosikanum...munadiye yosika koodathunu soliruken la unaku...maapla paaka aarambichu...set aaganum...unga oorla elam jaadhagam papenga..athu porundhanum...apram avanuku unna pudikanum,...avanga veetla irukaravangaluku unga veetu aatkala pudikanum...

unaku maapalaya pudikanum...

raji : enaku pudikathu...

karthik smiles...

karthik : theriyum...ivlo procedures irukula..ithula onnu nadakalanalum...thalli poirum...

apram en bayapadra...

raji : elame seriya nadandhuruchuna?...

karthik : appa kita pesu...

raji : athaan karthik bayama iruku,...

karthik : seri na pesava...?

raji : neengala...

karthik : pothuva pesaren...unga appa ta pakuvama pesi pakren...seriya..

raji : etha pathi...

karthik : unga ponnu ipothaana vela paakara...inum oru 6 maasam potum apdi ipdinu..enavo pesren..athelam na pathukaren...

raji : othukuvara?...

karthik : theriyaliye...papom...

raji cries,,..he wipes her tears...

karthik : nethi ithey neram...en mela nambikai ila...ipo enna pesa solra,,...

raji : nambikai ilanu yaru sonna...

karthik : nethu nee sonathuku athaana artham...

raji : nethu sonathey thaan na ipavum solren...appa othukalana...enala ethuvum panna mudiyathu...kadaisi varaikum kalyanam panikamaye irundhuruven...athaan enala mudiyum..,..

karthik : hey lusu...en ipdi elam pesara...

raji : appa othukita thaan elame nadakum karthik,,,,..

karthik : nanum athey thaan solren...appa othukitta thaan elame...na pathukaren...

raji still cries...

karthik : enaku nee azhudha pudikathu..nee epavume sirichute irukanum...siri paakalam...

raji : karthik oruvela othukalana...

karthik : enna paniduvanga nu nenaikra...una blackmail panuvangala? pudikatha oruthara katika solli...

raji : appa apdi panna mataru karthik...

karthik : hmm apram enna prachana enaku...

raji : oruvela apdi...

karthik wipes her tears...lifts her face...he makes her to face him...

karthik : raji...nee en koodave irundhalum...enna vitutu ponalum... vera oru vaazhka en kan munadiye vaazhndhalum...

raji : apdi elam nadaka vida maten...

he keeps his finger on her lips...

karthik : shhh...pesa vidu...

nee enna pannalum nee sandhoshama irukanum...athaan enaku sandhosham...nee enna paninalum enaku un mela kovame varathu...vitutu ponalum...thalli irundhalum...puriyudha...

raji : nejamava...

karthik : sandhega padriya... enake ithu nethi thaan purinjathu...nee sandhoshama ilana enaku nimmathi ila...atha nalla purinjuko...unaku oru prachana...athu enala irundha kooda...enaku en mela thaan verupu vandhurum...nethi elam na apdi thaan irundhenn...en melaye kadupu...enna panna nu theriyama...atha unkitta kaati...

he stops...

she looks at him...

karthik : apram thaaan purinjathu... indha ponnu nimmadhiya irundha thaan da karthik, namma nimmathiya iruka mudyum nu...athanala neee enna mudivu eduthalum na unaku support than panuven...ok va...

raji hugs him...

raji : thanks...

karthik : ethuku...

raji : elathukum...epo prachanainalum vandhu nikkareenga athu epdi?

karthik : athaaan paasam/...

she hugs him tightly...he too...

raji : en enna patheenga?...

karthik : epo...

raji : aniki andha papa ku adipatu..na nadu road la ninapa...en enna patheenga...

karthik : ithu enada vamba pochu...

raji : neenga apdi pannama irundhurundheengana..enaku ivlo prachanaiye ila...

karthik : na unaku prachanaiya...

raji : na apdi solala...

karthik : apram ?...

raji : en ungala pathom nu iruku...

karthik : enaku apdi ila...

raji : en

karthik : una paakama poirundha neriya miss panirupen...

raji : nejamaava...

karthik : aama

raji : na romba naala kekanumnu nenaichen kekava,?

karthik : kelu...

raji : ungaluku en ena pudichathu...enaku ungala pudika neriya kaaranam iruku...ungaloda helping nature...nermai...enna kapathinathu...ungaloda kovam...ipdi neriya...ovoru asaivilayume ena aacharya paduthineenga...

aana..

karthik : nee ena thaan panala ena?

raji : na enna paninenam?

karthik broke the hug...looked at her eyes...

karthik : unna paakrathuku munadi unoda voice thaaan na keten..apove paathi gaali...

raji smiles...

karthik : ivlo oru innocence..kallam kabadam ilatha manasu...

raji : apdi elam yaru sonna...

karthik : nadikatha..atha ketiye enta mogathuku nera...ungala nambi epdi indha pon kolandhaiye vitutu porathunu...

she bits her tongue...

karthik : paasam kaatra vidham...

raji smiles...

karthik : chinna vayasula irundhe na hostel thaan...athanaala weekend enga parents paakarapa nanga romba jollya irupom..sanda podama paasama,kutty family irundhalum neirya sandhosham...enga amma ku romba varutham enna pirinju iruka...aana enna seiya...

raji : oho...apdina amma va ingaye kootitu vandhuralam la...

karthik : ipo athu matter ila...na solrathu mulusa kelu...

raji keeps her finger on lips and nods her head..he laughs...

he keeps his hands on her cheeks...

karthik : avanga kaatra paasatha na un kita pathen...arumaiya valathurukanga unga veetla...

raji : ungalayum thaan...

karthik : shhh... romba arumaiya valathurukanga...itha na unga appa kitaa kooda sola poren...

raji looks down...he lifts her face again and nears her...

karthik : na onnu sollata?...

raji : venam...

karthik : en?

raji : enake theriyum...

karthik : atha confess panna venama...

raji : konjam naal aagatume...

karthik : raji...he calls

she hides her face on his chests...

he pats her shoulder...

raji : kalambalama karthiik...

karthik : konjam neram irukalame...

raji : hmm time aachu..

she looked at him...

karthik : serri vaa...

raji : karthik...

karthik : sollu...

raji : oru selfie eduthukalama?...

karthik : parra...yaro photo face nalla irukathunu sonangale...

raji : apdiya yaru sonna...

karthik smiles...

he puts his hand on her shoulder... and they both take a selfie...

raji : polama

karthik : nillu...selfie eduthachu...dance yaru aaduva...

raji : hmm asku busku..athelam vera aaloda vechukonga...

karthik : adipavi apdina vera oruthavangaloda aada permission grantedaa...

iru ipove poren...

raji : hello...kaala odachuruven...

karthik : adipavi...neeyum vara maata,...mathavangalayum vida maatra...

raji : over speeda iruku inum konjam naal potum...ipothaiku gud nite...taataaa

karthk smiles...


to be continued...

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precap

raji : karthik...appa

karthik : helllo ...na busyaa iruken apram pesu raji...

raji : karthik onnum ila orey oru nimisham...

karthik : puriyatha unaku...semma busy...

raji : puriyudhu karthik...oru sec.,..

he cuts the call...


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Edited by dhivya8 - 10 years ago
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Hahahaha thanks ma ... i shall read and come back and comment...

but thank you soo much 😊

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