NEW FF : UNAKAAGA PIRANDHENE PART 32 POSTED, pg 119!

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NEW ff : UNAKAGA PIRANDHENE...

INDEX
PART 5 PART 13 PART 21 PART 29




PART 1


Time : 9:00 am
Karthik was waiting for the red signal to switch over to green...
He was restless and getting struck in chennai traffic would obviously test one's patience...the time moved slowly for him...he was correcting His hair by looking at
his image on the bike's mirror...
He heard an honey sweet voice suddenly...
He turned towards that direction to listen to that innocent voice...

"Anna innum evlo neram aagum?"

The owner of the voice wasn't visible to him...
The share auto driver replied

"IPO thaan ma signal potruku"

Again he heard the sweet voice

"Anna konjam seekram na plz.."

Driver: signal vizhundha na enna ma panna mudiyum, venumna vera auto pudichu poiko

Girl : seri sorrynga Anna...

A lady seated next to DAT girl n the share auto asked

Lady : en ma tensiona iruka?

Girl: illa iniki enaku interview athaan ,nerathuku ponumenu...

Lady : konjam seekram kalambirukalam LA,indha ooru traffic LA nerathuku poitalum...

The girl got even more tensed

Lady : ooruku pudhusa ma?

Girl : aamanga...motha tharava varen...

Lady : periya vanga yarayavathu kootitu varlamla kannu...

Girl : illa na velaiku porathu appa Ku pudikala, kalyanam Kati vekrenu sonaru...

The auto over took karthik...he was so much into her story that he dint note the green signal...
He kick started his bike and drove fast...
In the next signal,he saw the same share auto and heard the girl narrating her whole life story to that unknown lady..
He smiled at her innocent..
He wanted to take a look at that girl...but he couldn't as auto's screen covered her face...

Girl : indha vela matum ilana enga appa enaku kalyanam katti vechuruvaru...ithaan avaru enaku kuduthurukara kadaisi sandharpam

Lady : un nalla manasu ku nalla they nadakum ma...interview LA select aagiruva..nerathuku poiralam kavala padatha ma...

Girl : romba nandringa...

He tip toed and tried hard to look at her face,but he failed...
A small girl was selling roses in the traffic signal...
The signal turned green and the girl dint note that... Before she reacted...
A car in which 4 youngsters were travelling,came in High speed was about to hit the girl...she got scared and jerked back,while doing so, she slipped and fell on the ground...
She was bleeding...
The car overtook all the vehicles and moved in jet speed... It seemed as if the driver was drunken or should have been mental...dats the way he drove the car...
Karthik shouted at them And started to chase them... He could find the car nowhere...
The girl was bleeding and none bothered...
The girl in the auto was stunned to see all these events happening in front of her eyes within fraction f a second..
She immediately rushed out of the auto and went to the girl...
She took the girl on her lap..she wrapped her dhupatta on the child's wound...but the bleeding wasnt controlled
As she is new to the city..she doesnt know any hospital nearby..and was asking the auto driver to help her...
Much to her surprise, the driver had left already...she asked the passers by to help her...none volunteered..she cursed the boys in the car...she doesn't know what to do...she looked here and there and begged for help...
She saw a hospital on the other side of the road quite far away from the place she was standing...
She lifted the child and started walking...
Karthik reached the spot and saw a girl holding Dat Lil kid...he rushed to her...
K : kolandhaiya kudunga...hospital kootitu ponum...
She gave And he ran fast..she followed him silently...she walked fast to match his long steps...
He admitted DAT Lil girl in the hospital and was filling a form...

The share auti girl neared him

Girl : romba thanksgna...

Karthik jerked...the same voice...the cutest voice he had ever heard...

He turned immediately and saw the girls face at last...
She was the one who helped the girl... She was the one in the auto...he was awestruck...
The girl not only has a sweet voice, but a sweet heart tooo...
He thought...

Girl : romba thanksgna..
She repeated...

K: cha cha nanthaan ungaluku thanks solanum...

Girl : ila na ethuvume panla...enaku indha oorula hospital enga irukunu theriyathu, na ooruku pudhusa..iniki thaan interview vera...appa thituvaru...she started the whole story again...
He was surprised at first and then startrd laughing at her innocence... Finally she concluded

Girl : nalla vela enna pandrathunu theriyarathukula ..neenga vandhutenga thanks...
K dint reply

Girl : hello...

K : ahmm hmm solunga...

G : Andha Car LA ponavangala pudicheengala?

K : ilana avanga vegama poitanga..na papa Ku ethuvum aagira koodathunu vandhuten..
.epdiyum yarum help paniruka matanga nu theriyum..

G : ilanga na ooruku pudhusu..ilana naa..

K : cha cha na ungala solalanga..kavala padatheenga udhavumndra manasu irundhale athu periya vishayam...

G : hmmm... Neenga sonna mari yarume help ku varla...

K: ulagam romba mechanicala agiruchunga...ipolaam erakame ilamathaan irukanga... Kolandha thaniya vizhundhu kedapanu thaan vandhen..paravala neengalavathu vandhengala...ipdi elam ipo neriya pera paaka mudiyathu...

G : athaan solla vandhen...ungaluku romba periya manasu...

K : karthik...he stretched his hand...

G hesitated...understanding that...he put down his hand...

Girl : vanakam...

K : aama iniki interview nu sonnenga..pogama nikarenga...

G : Aama ungaluku epdi theriyum??...she asked doubtfully ..

K : neenga thana IPO sonnenga...

G : aamala...interview thaan... athukunu oruthavangaluku adipatrukarapa pathutu pakama poi sambadhichu ena prayojanam ??? Apdi saapadra saapadu thaan ottuma?? Namake uruthume...

K : crctu thaan..IPO thaan na iruken LA..neenga kalambunga..unga appa ungaluku kudutha last chance vera...

G : ila athu vandhu...

K : na pathukarenga...

G : ila na papa va avanga amma ta vitutu kalambarene..

K : Ada na pathukarenga neenga kalambunga..

G : ila pombala pullaiya epdi ungata...ila neenga thappa nenachukatheenga..na enna solla varen na...

K grew angry...he left the place immediately...

G : karthik ...karthik...she called...

G was upset...
G went to doctors home...doctor said the girl was normal...and enquired abt karthik...

Doc : Andha ponnoda Anna enga??

G : yaru doctor ??

Doc : athaan karthik...form fill panitrundhare..enga avaru

G realized her mistake and felt very bad...

G : avaru vandhu...
K entered...
K n doctor wer discussing while r listened to them silently...
K informed the Lil girl's parents and they came to see her...

Parents : romba nandringa thambi...

K : cha cha paravalainga irukanum.mothala avala school Ku padika anupunga..vela Seira vayasa avaluku...
He gave them some money And they thanked him once again...
The girl saw all these and felt ashamed of herself...
K ignored that girl and walked past her...she felt bad..
Though she knew that she was late for the interview..she doesn't want to miss,so she went to the office..
...,...
NETTECH

She entered the building and was taking the steps...the face of karthik flashed her mind..
How could I behave so cheap to him?
How dare I doubted that gentleman...
The same thought pricked her mind every second...
She wanted to ask sorry immediately to him,,...
she forgot the whole purpose for what she came to this new place...all these thoughts were queued in her mind,,,
She was about to fall...
But HE caught Hold of her ...
IS IT HIM???? r m i day dreaming??...she felt his rough hand holding her...after feeling his touch, she confirmed that it wasnt a dream...
Her face gloomed...she was openly smiling at him...
He was equally excited to hold her in his arms but dint express DAT...both of them didn't come to normality..
he was shocked to see her in his office...was she mentioning about the interview in my office to that lady? how come i wsnt aware of the interview?? has she been selected??
how great it would feel if she gets selected??...
with all these questions running in his mind...
Quite some time later k was the first one to come bck...

K : konjam nengala nikareengala?
The girl immediately came out of his control...
the first thing she was supposed to ask was a SORRY...but she dint..she forgot that actually, on seeing him again,,,,
before she was GUILTY,,,but now,...on seeing him again she was damn happy...

girl : neenga epdi inga???

k : atha naa kekanum...ithu na vela pakra office...
avlothaan..andha ponnoda santhoshathuku ellaye ila...
manipu kekanumnu nenaicha odane munadi vandhu nikarane?? ipove ketralama?? ivan office laya vela paaka porom???
ithelam coincidence ila...???
and now all these were running in her mind...
he was about to leave...

she called...she called him as he expected...

Girl : KARTHIK...
for the first time, his name sounded sweet after being uttered by her...
He turned...

Girl stretched her hands...
"RAJI"...

Her name kept on vibrating in his ears...
He teased her with his looks by folding his arms,without shaking hand with her...
Her face became dull...she was about to put down her hand...
He immediately stretched his arms...

k :"karthik"...

Raji : theriyum...

////////she is not only a girl with sweetheart.. she is going to be his sweetheart too////////////...
She smiled...and he got immersed in her innocent smile...
They both were smiling at each other...and were in no mood to leave the hand...

Kr smiling...and hand holding...

To be continued...


started a new ff,..donno how much u ll like ds ff
not gonna end ds ff soon...so plz adjust panikonga😊
pudichurundha let me know

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dhivya , Nice one will read and comment
A small suggestion , please give some space from first dialogue and second one as it is little bit difficult to read
Hope you dont mind
Edited by anithu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anithu

Dhivya , Nice one will read and comment

A small suggestion , please give some space from first dialogue and second one as it is little bit difficult to read
Hope you dont mind


sure sure...m really sry ll edit now...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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very bad presentation ..
m very sorry..i dint indent properly...
ll update the next part clearly and legibly
Edited by dhivya8 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi - wow another story from U... great ..
Very very nice start - new story line - KR kaga ethanai story venumnalum ezhthalam... padikka naan ready...
KR introduction semaiya irukku...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Dhiya . New ff so fast. Super intro by KR. Lovely start . Puduchiruku dear. Waiting for next part da.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Pavi super update ma, i really enjoyed the different KR intro very nice to see both of them have similar personality when helping someone. Raji telling her story hahahhahaa nalla comedy and karthik wanting to find out who the girl is and wanting to see her face.

the hospital scene raji doubting karthik him getting angry and going away pavam paiyan... bless him got hurt.

then her going to nettech and correcta hero vandu heroine catch pannitaru when she was falling soo cute. And their mind voices loool 😊

one thing maybe use different font colours for the characters but i really enjoyed this... appada not finishing soo soon thats good because im expecting more for you 😊
all the best for this ff 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow...Dhivya...superb start ma...👏👏
loved this KR..😳..

karthik aval storya kettu rasikarathum,aval innocenecea ninachu sirikarathum,avala periya manasa ninachu perumai padrathum...very cute...

raji karthika thappa ninachalum ,appuram avana gentlemannu ninachathum ...sweet...

KR in same office...very interesting...😛

waiting to read more...update soon


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb start dhivya 👏👏👏

KR wow wow original plot oda light ah start aanalum but their meeting in different style 😎

hospitalah K vah R thappa ninaichadum den R feeling bad for it every second is sweet 😳😳

den KR's meet in office wow very cute ☺️

waiting for ur next part pa


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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow another FF frm divya
kr introduction too gud 😛😊
r saying abt her to all 😆

waiting to know more abt dis kr , do update soon

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