NEW FF : UNAKAAGA PIRANDHENE PART 32 POSTED, pg 119! - Page 17

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PART 12

lak : raji ready aagalaya...

raji : hmmm itho lakshmi,...kandipa saree katikanuma...

lak stares angrily...

raji : karthik sonnathu crctu thaan...

lak : enna

raji : unaku aandha kannu thaan...

lak starts beating raji...

lak : enna d jodiya serrndhu kalaikareengala...

raji : seri seri summa sonen, na apdiye oru walk poitu varava...

lak : madam inga walk porathukune vandheengala...aana oona walk porenu kelambidra...

raji : summa kaathu vaangalaame nu...indha iyarkai katru pattta evlo nallathu theriyuma...

lak : seri seri poitu seekram vaaa...enakum neethaan podava katti vidanum...

raji : seekram vandhudren lakshmi...bye

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raji was walking along the sea shore...

karthik and goutham were playing in water, on seeing raji, goutham left the place...

raji ignored karthik and started walking on the shore...

karthik : enna aazhndha sindhanai pola...

raji : evening party la endha drama panni party ya spoil panlamnu plan potutruken...

saying ds she continued walking...karthik stood rooted to the place...

just then he realised how much his words has hurted her...

karthik : m sry...

raji : paravala...

karthik : illa nejama sry...

raji : unga sry enaku venam...oru badhil venum...

karthik : enna?

raji : ellaru kitayum nalla nadandhukarenga, paasama pesreenga...enna avoid panreenga, sidu sidu nu irukeenga...

karthik stopped her...

karthik : athuku kaaranam unake theriyum...

raji : aniki night na pesinathu thaana...

karthik : aama...

raji : en nelamaiya sonen unga kitta...athukaaga pesamaye vitruveengala...

karthik : nee sonna athey kaaranam thaaan raji...na un kitta nalla pesi false hope thara virumbala athaan...

raji dint speak...

karthik : matha padi unna hurt pannanum nu na nenaipena...neeye sollu...

raji : ipdi pesama irukarathu enna hurt pannathu neenga nenachutrukeengala?...

karthik : athuku illa...

raji : lakshmi, vishnu ta pesra mari friendlyaa pesunga entayum...athu mudiyatha ungalala...

he remained silent...

raji : mudiyatha nu keten...

karthik shouted : mudiyathu d... mudiyathu...

raji frowned...

karthik : lakshmiya paakara mari ennala unna paaka mudiyathu...nee lakshmi,susan mari illa enaku...enaku unna paathale...venam vidu...nanthaan anike sonen la..ethaiyum kolapikatha...nee neeya iru...na pesathathu thaaan unaku hurtingaa irukuna...na pesren inime ...palayamari pesren...pothuma...

ipo kalambu...time aaguthu...

all these dint fall in raji's ears...

karthik : hey thittangulam...party ku ithey koilpatti chudi thaana? kalambara idea elam ilaaya?...

raji smiled...she dint come out of the shock...

karthik : po ...poi ready aagu...ethaiyum yosikatha...na palaya mari thaan pesrren nee thaan pei aranja mari iruka...,kalambu po...

saying ds he turned and started walking...

raji : karthikkk...

he turned...

raji : lakshmi susan mari ilana?? vera ennavam...

karthik : athu ethuku unaku ipo,,,

raji : ipdi paathi sonna epdi...olunga solitu ponga...

he walked towards her...

raji : enna paathale???

she continued...

raji : avangala pakra mari en enna pakka mudiyathu ungalaaala?...

she softened her voice...

karthik neared her...he tucked the strands of her hair hiding her face, behind her ears...she closed her eyes...

karthik said in soft voice : unake nalla theriyum,, aana athu ennanu na solli nee kekanuma?

raji nodded her head...

raji : en lakshmi, susan mari na illa?...neenga en andha mari enna pakala?...

she asked innocently,with her sweet voice...

karthik : athu en na...avanga enaku romba varusham pazhakam...nee apdi ila...konjam naal thaan pazhakam...athaan...avanga mari enala unna paaka mudiyala...avanga thaan romba close ...purinjatha...?

she snapped open her eyes...

he gave her a teasing look

raji looks at him angrily...

raji : avlothaana?

karthik : aama

raji : nejama avlothana?...

karthik : ipothaiku avlothaan,...po po time aguthu ready aagu...black sari thaaan dress code..po po..

raji : athelam mudiyathu...venumna summa vandhu kalandhukaren...podavai elam katta mudiyathu...

karthik : en ?? en kattamaata...dress code na follow pananum...

raji : nee neeya iru nu neengathaana sonneenga...karupu podavai elam katta koodathunu enga aachi solirukagna...enaku athelam katti palakam ila...unga romba varusha frnds lakshmi susan venumna katuvanga...na katta mudiyathu...

she moves from that place...

karthik mv : katta maatana po d...odambellam thimiru...nee podava kattalana nanga apdiye yengi povom paru...kattina katu..katati po enaku enna...

scolding her in his mind he leaves to his room...

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lak : paaah ethana suthu..epdi d katta kathukita...

raji : avlothaan mudichachu...iru pin kuthi vidren...hey lakshmi azhaga iruka d...unaku super ah iruku indha podava...

lak : nalla kati vitruka thanks d...

raji : hmm irukatum...paru full attention un mela thaan iruka poguthu po...

lak : otatha ma... po po nee katiko...

raji : na katala lakshmi... saree konjam transparentaa irukara mari iruku..na ithelam katta maten...

lak : inga paru unaku katta ishtam ilana direct ah sollu...jamukaalam mari ganamaana podavaya kuduthuruken. lesa irukamla..

raji smiles...

lak : unaku interest illa apdi thaana..ipdi elam oru veembu pudichavala na pathathey ila...evlothaan kenjuvangalam unta...

raji : en chellam la..inoru murai na unaku thaniya katti katuvenam...ipo nee enta koochuka koodatham...deal ok va...

lak : not ok...podava katrathula ennavam unaku...seri vidu...hall ku varruviya ila athuvum interest ilaya...

raji : illa lakshmi varla...

lak : enaku ithu onnum aacharyama ila...ingaye ukandhuko...mingle agidatha enga kooda elam..nanga elam theenda thagathavanga paru...oru selfie eduthuka vaa na venam,..enga kooda velila vaa na venam...podava katiko na venam...cha kadupa iruku enaku... onnum solrathuku illa...nee ipdiye irru...na varen...

raji feels bad...

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all gathered... vishnu was waiting fr lak's arrival...

lak entered..

vishnu's face glowed...lak smiled shyly on seeing him...

vishnu : lakshmi...super ah irukenga lakshmi indha podavai la,...

lak : parra adhisayama iruku..enaku indha colour edukala...dark ah iruken apdi ipdi nu solvanu nenaichen...

vishnu : epavume apdiye solvena,,..

lak : nee aniki apdi soniya ilaya...

vishnu : andha dress enaku pudikala atha neenga potuka koodathunu nenaichen...athaan raji ta apdi sonen...

lak : enna olarara...

viishnu : oru naal neenga andha dress potutu vandhenga lakshmi aniki fulla tensionaave irundhengala...athaan apdi sonnna neenga atha inimetu poda matengala athaan sonen...

lak : nalla malupara...na tensionaa irukarathelam nee note panriya enna...

vishnu : enna lakshmi ipdi ketutenga..neenga tensionaa irundheenga na odane unga kita vandhu mokka joke solven...neengallum andha mokkka joke ku kooda vilundhu vilundhu siripeenga..ahahaaa

he started laughing...she turned furious...

vishnu : ila na apdi solla varala...

lak : unaku villlane vaai thaan da..serndha vakula oru 4 vaartha nalla pesariya,

vishnu : athelam vidunga lakshmi...serious ah onnu solren...devathai mari irukeenga...

lak : devadai vella color dress la ila irupanga..na karupu potruken..enna kalaikariya...

vishnu : ennanga neenga olunga pesa vidreengala..apram pesala pesalanu kottu vekarathu chai...na kovama poren...

lak holds his hand...

lak : seri seri sollu..nejama podava nalla iruka?...

vishnu : indha podvaila neenga...epdi theriyuma irukeenga...

lak : epdi...?

vishnu : marapaachi bomma mariye irukeenga...

she frowns...

lak shouts : mara manda mara manda..yaravathu oru ponnu kita marapachi bomma mari irukeenga nu solvangala...tube lite...nee solala nu inga yaru azhudha...cha...olunga pesa thaan theriyala nu patha...unaku ethuvume varala,...wasteuuu ...unna poi.,...cha

vishnu : latchu na en apdi sonen nu neenga kekave ilaye...

lak : inoru vaartha pesina..kola vilugum mavane...pesama poiru...

vishnu : enoda finishinga parunga, starting thaan nalla irukathu... latchu...

he calls...

lak : pesama poriya..ilana fork ah eduthu sorugiruven pathuko...

vishnu : aaah vanmurai...vanmuraiye enaku pudikatthu...neenga shaantha lakshmiya irupeenga nu paatha veera lakshmiya irukeenga..na apram varen...andha fork kitaka pogathenga..athu saapadrathuku use panrathu...

lak smiles...

karthik : enna solran un aalu...

lak : ennatha sonan...podava nalla iruku...nee aazhaga iruka nu kooda olunga solla theriyala...en paadu kashtam thaan karthik...

karthik : hahaaa na varrappa nee sirichutu thaana irundha...feel panna mari theriyalaiye...

lak : feel panala...irundhalum...

karthik : athuthaan vishnu..avaroda iru life poora santhoshama manasu vitu sirichute irupa...

lak smiles again...

karthik : seri ellarum enga...

lak :elarum irukome...susan anga iruka paru...

karthik : room la yaravathu iruka poranga...nalla pathiya...elarum vandha mari theriyalaiye...

lak : dei kedi ...raji nu nera kekalam la...

karthik : avala evan ketan...susan apram mathavangala elam keten...

susan : na un pinadiye thaaan pa iruken...reel vitathu podhum...

lak : odambellam thimiru karthik..irundhalum avaluku ivlo thimiru aagathu..nethi la irundhu kenjaren vaa d vaa d nu pidi kudukave matra

karthik : vidu sila pera enna pannalum matha mudiyathu...

lak : ava enna nenaikara..en apdi panra nu onume puriyala karthik...athaan enaku kadupaguthu...valid reason irundha kooda paravala...apram en ipdi panra...

karthik : reason iruku...athaan varala

lak : enna polladha reason...

karthik : nanthaan...enala thaan ava varala...

lak : ungalukulla ennathaan nadakuthu apdi...en ipdi pidivatham pudikarenga neenga rendu perum...

karthik : vidu laskhmi...podava katta maatanu thaan nenaichen...varaamaye irupanu nenaikala...ava varalana party nadakatha...vaa aarambipom...

though he said ds to lakshmi..his eyes were still searching for her...

karthik mv : nejamave varlaya...kochikitalo ?... varuvanu nenaichene...

he felt her presence...he turned back immediately and saw lakshmi hugging someone...

lakshmi's elated voice reached his ears...

lak : hey vara maten vara matenu enna tension panina,...ipo vandhu nikara...

raji : seri poiratuma...

lak : lusu...iru d...azhaga iruka raji...doll mari iruka...

raji : en lakshmi...nee vera enna thititu poitiya seekarama avasara avasarama kelambinen.....

lak : nejama enakaga thaan vandhiya...

raji : aama varave koodathunu nenaichen...nee dulla ponniye athaan manasu kekala vanten...

lak hugged her...

lak : nejamava raji..

raji : sandhegama..olunga thala kooda seevala..clip ah potutu unta odi vanten...

lak : ethuku indha clip...loose hair vidu...

she removed the clip...

raji : ayayo thala viri kolama va irupanga...

lak : ada iniki oru vela thaana nee summa iru...

raji : nalla iruka lakshmi..?.

lak : alraaa raji...unaku black sari romba edukuthu...super ah iruka po...ethukum en frnd ta irundhu thalliye iru...mulungira poran :P

she warned her ...

raji smiled...lakshmi moved...atlast karthik got to see her...he was taken away by her beauty...

both looked at each other...

angel she is, he thought.,...

raji went to the corner of the hall and stood alone...

karthik and koushik neared her ...ds time karthik was quicker...

karthik controlled his emotions and said

karthik : nalla iruku...

raji without any feeling, thanked him...

karthik wanted to convey his feelings for her at that moment, but he couldnt...

raji wished to be complimented by him,...but both thought that wasnt the right moment...

koushik : u lukk gorgeous raji...

raji thought that karthik would stop him saying dat, like before, but he dint...

karthik was fuming...but he was helpless...

koushik : aniyayathuku...

he dint complete..

raji : thanks bro...

karthk smiled...

koushik shocked...

koushik : enna dhideernu bro ?,...

raji : en ? any problem ?

koushik : enna dhideernu keten...

raji : inga parunga koushik na anike solanumnu nenaichen unga kita...neenga aniki beach la kittaka vandhathaala thaan na ungala avoid pananume nu velagi ponen..athuve periya scene agiruchu...na ungala avoid panrenu theriyudhu la? apram en ipdi ena rough ah pesa vekarenga,...puriyatha ungaluku...

karthik was hearing all these and felt happy...

koushik : enakum silathu puriyala raji...vishnu sonna summa irukenga...karthk sonna...

raji stopped him...

raji : vishnu kita na thanks bro nu solirundha...welcom sis nu solirparu...aana neenga apdi panala...ipo unagaluke purinjurukum enna reason nu,...

koushik : apo karthik ?...

raji remained silent,,,karthik wanted to hit him...he turned furious...

koushik : karthik sonna summa irukenga..? en nu na solava?...

raji tried to move from that place...

koushik : pesite irukarapa poreenga...na solava? en na avaru PM...avara ethirthu pesa mudiyala...apdi thaana...

raji wanted to stop him..so

raji : aama apdiye vechukonga...ungaluku velakam tharanumnu enaku avasiyam ila...

she moved...

koushik : apdina periya post la irukaravanga ungalta enna pesinalum enna pannalum summa irupenga apdi thaana...

he dint finish...

karthik slapped him hard...raji started crying...

koushik realised how cheap he spoke and immediately apologised to raji...

koushik : m sry raji..na ungala hurt pannaumnu apdi elam pesala..ena ungaluku first la irundhe pudikala...enaku en nu thaan theriyala...elaru kitayum orey mari,anbaa paasama nadandhupeenga, athuthaan neenga...neenga ipdi elam panrathu unga characteraiye mathuthu...

na othukaren...ungala patha seconde enaku pudichathu...unga character pathathum oru ponnu na ipdi thaan irukanumnu elam nenaichen...aana neenga konjam naala oru mari behave panreenga...nalla illa raji... kashtama iruku...

ungaluku en mela abiprayam ilanu enaku theriyum... enna sonenga..aniki beach la ena avoid paneengale anike enaku therinju pochu...ipo kooda karthik sonathuku neenga perusa react panla...athaan nanum sonen...kandipa ipdi tension aavenga.,...athu en nu ketralamndra mudivoda thaan na sonen...

raji : koushik...ipo kooda na solren...oru paiyan ipdi enta vandhu pesarathu enaku pudikathu...athuku kaaranam ennanu enaku theriyathu...grls school la padichu...clg, hostel nu elame apdi thaan...apdiye valandhathaala thaaan enaku pasanga na epavume oru bayam undu...kooda poradhavanga yarum kedaiyathu...ithelam serndhu thaaan oru bayam manasukulla...athanaala enna strictaa katipen...

athukunu neenga solra mari uyar adhigaringa enna pannalum pesama irukara ponnu na ila...

koushik : cha cha na apdi mean panala...m sry raji...

raji : pesa vidunga koushik... karthik mela en kovam varala nu enake theriyala...

karthik looks at her...

raji : pasanga na bayam apdindra thought marinathey ivara pathu thaan... ivar kita irundha na en appa kita irukara mari neriya tharava feel paniruken..safe and securedaa irukum...ithuku peru enna nu enaku sathyaama theriyala...ethuva venumnalum irukatum...

athaan enala avara..

she cried...

koushik : enaku puriyudhu raji..m sry...

raji : neenga sonna mari...enaku unga mela abiprayam kedaiyathu...na ungala pathum bayapada thaan senjuruken...neenga sonathu crctu...na ivarta kova pattathila...en character athu ila...en ipdi aagitenu enake theiryala koushik...nyayama na karthikayum thitirukanum...aana enala mudiyala...en nu enaku theriyala koushik...m sry

she cried again...

karthiik held her hand...she looked at him wid tears in her eyes...

koushik : kolapikatheenga raji...na oru aavesathula apdi ketuten m sry...neenga feel panathenga...

raji : neenga ketathula thappu ila...ungala hurt panirundha m sry...

koushik : ila athelam onnum ila raji...mathi mathi sry ketukarom.. neenga thaniya ukandhu yosinga...manasu thelivu aagum...ethavathu prachanaina share panikonga...ungaluku oru nalla frnd ah na epavume irupen...

he was about to leave

k held his shoulder...

karthik : iam...iam...

koushik : ayayo neenga kudutha adi kammi boss..na oru flow la apdi ketuten...nalla kuduthurukanum...rajiya pathu apdi ketadhu kandipa thappu thaan..neenga adichathu nyayam thaan..seri ok nan kalambaren...apram enachu en raji azharanga nu koodiruvanga elarum...bye...avangala samaadhana paduthunga...

koushik left that place...

koushik cried mildly as raji clearly stated that she has no feelings fr him...

raji was still sobbing...

karthik brought his hands to touch her but stopped...he gave his kerchief...

raji : enna ithu...

karthik : kerchief nu solvanga..unga oorla epdi solvanga...

raji : ethuku...

karthik : thodachuko...kannula thanni vazhiyudhu paru...

raji wiped her tears...

karthik : enta kooda ithelam nee sonathu ilaye...

raji : ethuku solanum?...ungaluku puriyatha...

karthik looked at her eyes...

karthik : nejama solanumna ipothaan purinjathu...seri azhadha...

raji : na azhala...

karthik : azhudhalum...sirichalum..azhagu matum koraiyave matenguthey...epdi athu...enna ragasiyam?...

raji looked at him...

karthik : sevandhe pochu kannu,kannam elam...

raji : azha vechutu sevandhu pochamla...

karthik : naana una azha vechen?...

karthik : aana paravala...sevandhu sevandhu azhagu koodiruchu...

raji : podava epdi irukunu solave ila?...

karthik : podava sumaar thaan...neethaan athula minnara...

she smiled...

karthik : aniyayathuku azhaga iruka raji...enaku apdiye una allikanum pola iruku...

she smiled again...

raji : niruthunga.,...enaku pasanga enta ipdi elam pesina pudikathu...

she said innocently...

he held her by her waist...brought her near him...she hit him...she held his shrt collar...

karthik : nanum pesa koodatha?,,,,,..

he pinched her nose...she remained silent

karthik : sollu na unna pathi pesa koodatha?...andha urimai enaku illaya?...

he neared her even more...and said huskily...

karthik : sollu raji...

raji : ippothaiku ila...

she pushed him aside and escaped from his grip...

he smiled...

karthik : na sonnatha enake solriya neenu...

raji : koushik enta pesinathum...na avarta pesinathum marandhurunga...namaku sanda thaan...neenga enta normala pesunga..nanum apdi thaan...vera ethuvum atha thaandi ila...purinjatha...

karthik : enna sonna...

raji : namakulla onnum ila nu sonen...

karthik : ivlo periya gap iruku namaku nadula...onum ilanu solra...

he pulled her towards him again...and said

karthik : hmmm ipothaan onnum ila...

he winked...

raji : ayayaaa...neenga seriye ila...na marubadi solren ketukonga..namakulla ethuvum ila ethuvume ila...kekutha...

karthik : en kaathu kekathu...

raji : kekati poguthu...

she ran from that place...

karthik smiles...

to be continued...

Originally posted by: shiningstar77

Dhivya...ennapa ippadi asathareenga...chanceailla..ithu summarana updatea??...appdinu neengathan nianchukanum...awesome one...👏👏

Karthik than manasula ullatha paathi sollitan..innu antha three wordsthan sollalai...but raji appadi ennu sonnneganu ketathuku avan reply...naughty boy..😆

raji ,first rombathan alatikittalum,saree kattikittu vanthuta...super cute..

VL scene...sema...enna marapachi bomaiya??...dhivya...mudiyalama.🤣..super thought..👏

raji calling koushik...bro😆...koushik...grr...varthaiya vittutan...but then he realised his mistake...good to see...

namma hero eppavum pola slap vittutar...hihi...

raji...thanoda feelingsa romba azhaga sollita...😳

KR scene...LOVELY...No words...❤️

Originally posted by: neelimarani

nice story Dhivya👏...

moving smoothly and interestingly...