SS: Raven epilogue Pg. 13 5/4

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My dearest friends, i'm back with another story, couldn't resist myself from writing on Radev. I hope you guys will love it as my previous ones, this will be also short as usual, not more than 15 parts. I know only few members are here so i'm asking those few members to please like and give comments, you know to motivate me 😆 so i don't get lazy 😃
Ok enough talks, now about the story, the story is purely fictional, not realistic, you know magic and stuffs , don't expect logic but expect romance 😉 😳
Enjoy reading!
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Raven
She kept her gaze on her prey, observing his every moment silently, she had been doing it for more than a week now. He is no different than the other humans she had seen but there was something different about him, though she couldn't point it out. It had been an hour or so since she had been sitting on the tree of the backyard of her prey's house, waiting for a moment when her prey will be alone, so she could start her mission. She tried to shift from her uncomfortable position on the hard branch, she slightly lost her balance but then again abruptly tighten her hold and let out a whoosh.
"Damn! When will he be alone?" She mumbled to herself as she is losing all of her patience.
"Dev! We're going home!" She heard someone saying, her heart beat quickened, now is the time, he will be alone and she could carry out her mission. His friends bid their farewell and went on their way leaving him alone in the silent backyard.
Dev leaned back on one of the chairs, he closed his eyes, relaxing and silently enjoying the beer. It has been years since he last met his friends, he was away studying and managing his father's business but now he is back, back for good. The only thing he doesn't like is the presence of his mother, his cold, hard as a shell mother. He sighed, it shouldn't bother him now since he never got her love and affection in the first place.
Dev felt a strangest feeling, like he's being watched, he's been having these feelings from past days, he couldn't understand if it's just a feeling or not. He opened his eyes slowly and gasped, he instantly sat up and tried to make sure if what he is seeing is not a fantasy. A most beautiful girl is right in front of him, looking directly at him. He couldn't make out her features due to the dim light but he can say that she is beautiful. What is she doing here? Who is she?
"Who are you?" Dev asked softly, still mesmerized from her beauty.
No answer.
"How did you get here?"
No answer.
"What are doing here?"
Still no answer.
She lifted her hand and pressed her palms on his forehead, his eyelids went heavy, and slowly his eyes went dripping, until he fell asleep.
***
Dev gradually awoke from his slumber sleep, he rubbed his fingers against his eyes and stretched his body. He had a strangest dream, a beautiful girl, he hoped the girl was true, but she isn't. He flickered his eyes, after a moment instantly sat up and scanned his surroundings. He is in a small bedroom but it is not in his house, when did he come here, what is this place and how did he come here. Suddenly a loud sound caught his attention, as if many utensils fell down. He removed the blanket and went out to check, only to find a kitchen in a mess. The utensils were clattered here and there, stains of half blended fruits were splashed on the shelf and uncovered blender machine. He frowned, where is he? How did he end up here? Who lives here?
Dev turned to leave but something caught his attention, something black like hair, he walked further. His jaw dropped at the sight of the breathtaking beauty, the girl last night, it wasn't dream, it was true, she was true. He didn't get better view of her last night but now he can clearly make out her delicate features. Her raven black hair, chocolate brown eyes adorned with thick black lashes, slightly curved eye brows, thin yet sensual pink lips, perfectly pointed nose and soft yet proud chin.
"Who are you?"
She gave him a dazzling smile which triggered his mind and soul.
"I'm a raven"
Her voice was like a music to his ears. Is he still in a dream? If it's a dream, better not wake him up.
"How did I get here?"
"I brought you here."
"You brought me? But why?"
"You question a lot, Dev. You know how to use this?" She asked while pointing at the blender machine.
"I saw a human using this, I followed his way but I don't know what happened or is it broken?"
Dev frowned, how someone cannot know how to use a blender unless he is from village.
"I bet you are from village, aren't you? You didn't put the lid on it."
"the lid?"
"Aha, this one." He replied while lifting the lid.
She sighed and spoke "humans are very complicated species."
"So are you. Now tell me why am I here? And where am I?"
"You are here as a captive."
"What?"
"You haven't noticed?"
"I..If I had been captive, I would be in ropes, where I couldn't escape."
"You won't be able to escape because this house is in the middle of the forest, if ever, you manage to escape, there are deadly wild animals who are ready to eat you. Even if you still manage to escape the wild animals, you will get lost on this thick forest. Mind you, there's no other human except you."
"And you."
"I'm not a human. I'm raven, a bird."
Dev raised his brow, he replied "as if i'm going to believe this non sense! You're lying! At least tell believable lies."
"You don't believe me, of course you won't. You humans are like that unless you don't see the thing you don't believe it. I don't care if you believe or not. I'm new to this human form, I didn't knew human get hungry so fast! I just ate 3 hours ago and I'm hungry again! You cook? Of course yo--"
"Shut up! Man! You talk like there's no tomorrow! And what the hell are you talking about? Are you like crazy? I don't know how you brought me here and why I'm here? I don't believe you and I'm going! Goodbye!"
"I told you! Don't go! You can't escape from me. I'm warning you."
He smirked and challenged "I don't believe you. Stop me if you can!"
He turned to leave, but he couldn't move even a muscle, he tried hard to move but he felt as if his legs has turned rock and wouldn't budge. He looked at her and fumed while seeing a triumphant smirk tucked on her lips.
"What did you do?" He asked furiously.
"I stopped you." She simply replied.
"How? Why can't I move? Damn it! What are you?"
She sighed "How many times will I repeat? I'm raven. I am granted a human form for a mission I must complete before I change into a raven again. I have complete control of your body or any one body except one person."
"Who?"
"So you're believing me now?"
"Of course, this is not normal, it's something mysterious! What's your mission? How am I related to your mission?"
"Can we discuss later, I'm hungry! You cook, I don't know how to."
"I want answers now!"
"Give me food and you'll get your anwers!" She said and left the kitchen.
Dev swore violently as he marched to the kitchen counter and pulled out vegetables, then start attacking them.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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First of all a big thank you for starting a RaDev SS 🤗 Loved the first part.Quite interesting. Is Radhika a bird or she's got some special powers? She sounded mysterious. Enjoyed the first part. Hope to get the 2nd part soon. And,thanks for the PM.
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Waw lovely update
totaly misterius
means raven birld is non other than our radhika
love the 1st part
update next part soon
thanx for pm
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Originally posted by: fatssrilanka

First of all a big thank you for starting a RaDev SS🤗Loved the first part.Quite interesting. Is Radhika a bird or she's got some special powers? She sounded mysterious. Enjoyed the first part. Hope to get the 2nd part soon. And,thanks for the PM.


Thank you dear, i'm glad you loved it. Radhika is a bird plus she got special powers, the mystery behind that will be revealed once the story unfolds and how dev is related to her mission..keep reading will post nxt prt soon 😊
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Originally posted by: dakshumhatre

Waw lovely update
totaly misterius
means raven birld is non other than our radhika
love the 1st part
update next part soon
thanx for pm


Thank you
Yes Radika is raven bird
Will update the nxt prt soon 😊
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thank u so much for starting a Radev FF... its just tooo good cant tell how happy i am!!! waiting for the first part ... its very interesting and something new... please continue
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Originally posted by: sush_avina

thank u so much for starting a Radev FF... its just tooo good cant tell how happy i am!!! waiting for the first part ... its very interesting and something new... please continue



Thank you, dear..
will update soon..
keep reading...
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Chapter 1
"Hmmm, It's very delicious!" She said as she ate the food.
"Now will you answer my questions?"
She grinned and replied "well, you asked why you are here, you are here because you are under my protection, I'm your protector for the time being and the second question was how you are related to my mission, it's because of your mother."
"My mother? What do you mean?"
"Ah! I promise to answer those questions, I can't answer new one, you have to cook for me again to get your answers."
Dev clutched his fist tightly, controlling his anger, even though she's beautiful, she's damn irritating. How can his mother relate to her mission? Why is he being protected and from whom?. There are so many question he wanted to ask but the darling girl is having her merry time eating. How beautiful she looks, her lips, oh wow they are like sweet strawberries, thin but sensual, the way she lick her lips aroused Dev in an instant. Damn Dev! what are you doing? She's an enemy!
"So you wouldn't answer my questions unless I cook for you?"
She grinned, ah!her smile is dazzling! Dev! Start a fan club of her! She's enemy!
"You got that right unless you promise me that you will cook for me everyday."
"If I do that, you'll answer my every question?"
"Hmm, this is heaven, you are best cook!"
Dev smiled at her innocence then instantly wiped it off.
"If I promise, you will answer my questions?" He repeated.
"You promise? I warn you if you break the promise, you'll regret."
"How?"
"promises are not meant to be broken because if you break them, you break the trust and trust can't be same after you broke it, you will regret."
How noble! Dev, focus!
"Ok. I promise to cook for you everyday if you promise to answer my question, every question."
She nodded with a smile.
"Now, how is my mother related to you?"
"She's a raven too!"
"What?"
"There are two kinds of raven, one are the ravens you see normally, the birds one. Second are mystical raven, like me and your mother and many more of us, we are angels in a form of ravens, we are granted human form for specific period, only for decade, if we wish to have human form again, we have to pray for it by chanting a mantra while using the precious gem called tanzanite, that gem grants us power, lets say that gem holds our life. That gem is as powerful as you can imagine, if a human get hold of it, he will be powerful enough to destroy the world, the more times it has been used, the more powerful is the gem, so we don't let any human see it without trusting them. Your mother trusted---"
"Don't ever tell him about his enemy and what is happening to me! I don't want him to get involved! Promise me!"
"Why'd you stop?"
"I forgot to tell you something, there are some questions I can't answer, the ones you're mother don't want, I promised her."
"Why? Why won't she tell me anything? She don't even talk to me! Why will she not tell me something very special? She..always kept me away from her! why she never loved..me?" Dev asked himself.
"Don't you ever say she doesn't love you! She won't protect you if she doesn't!"
Dev was still in his thoughts, completely unaware of her.
"That's right! I'm still dreaming!" Dev said aloud.
"It's a dream! Everything is a dream! It's too unreal to be true and too mystical, I just have to wake u---Ouch! Why did you do that?" Dev said and rubbed his arm where she had pinched him.
"It's not a dream, it's real. Your mother is in danger, now that you are gone from her."
"What?"
***
"Where is he?" A deep, menacing shout of a man pierced her ears.
She raised her chin proudly, and replied "I won't tell you! He is safe, safe from you!"
"You witch!" He barked and took a step forward towards her but he couldn't walk further, held by her magic.
"You are saved because of your damn powers! You won't be safe forever!"
"There won't be forever! I'm giving away my life! Once my son is safe, I'm never coming back to human life!"
"You will come back! For your son! He won't be safe as long as I live, don't you think that I'll let you go easily. I've waited years for this."
She went still at his threat.
"You won't gain anything after you lost me, you may have my gem but I won't be there to pray!"
He smirked and replied "I will still gain something, revenge my dear, if I can't have the power I want, you're son don't have his life"
Tears sprang from his eyes as she shouted at him "You're cruel! Damn you! Go to hell!"
He smirked and replied "Think about it, give me power or lose your son." He said and went away from her.
She fell on her knees as she cried out, she never had a chance to love her son, to touch him, to care for him, much less look at him, just because of him, that bas***d. She thought if she could take her son away from him before she turn raven, he will never get a chance to harm her son. But now even if she turn raven, he will still hunt her son and kill him, just to get his revenge. That will get her nothing, neither her son's life nor her human life, what can she do to protect her son's life.
***
"You have to tell me!"
"I can't Dev, I promised your mother, I can't break that promise."
"I can't sit here while my mother is in danger! Ok, don't tell me but bring me to my mother."
"It's same like telling you, she don't want you to get involve, that's why you're under protection, you will just worsen the situation!"
"How will I worsen the situation if I'm there to protect her?"
"Because..eh, I really can't tell you. As of now you're mother is safe, she can protect herself, she can't be harmed unless you are harmed, that's why she kept you here, under my protection. You must understand being here is the only way you can save your mother or else she'll lose everything."
"I..I don't want to lose her..She may have kept herself away from me..but I still love her." Dev said in a shaky voice
Radhika felt bad seeing him, she can't tell him, she shouldn't have promised him. What does a human do to comfort someone? Ah! A magical hug!
"That's why I'm saying stay here so the things don't get worsen." She said as she slid her arms against his waist and rested her head on his chest.
Dev was taken back by her gesture, he didn't expect this. He took her in his embrace and tighten it, crushing her.
"What are you doing?" Radhiks asked as she struggled to loosen his arm.
"I won't let go off you until you tell me everything, also my mother's location."
"Like I will tell you!" She said and used her power to remove his arms inspite his great struggle of tightening them.
"I was comforting you and you, well I've been already told human forget favors easily.I expect less from you." She said and went away.
"If you won't tell me, I'll discover it myself." He murmured to himself.
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The update was very mysterious. Loved it. So,Radhika has come to protect Dev from maybe his own Father. Waiting for the next part.

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