NEW FF : UNAKAAGA PIRANDHENE PART 32 POSTED, pg 119! - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
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m extremely sry, yt to start next part..
was busy,.m sry..
l try my level best to update today..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: dhivya8

m extremely sry, yt to start next part..

was busy,.m sry..
l try my level best to update today..



Its ok dear . Take your time . We will wait
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhivya8

m extremely sry, yt to start next part..

was busy,.m sry..
l try my level best to update today..



no worries dhivyaa take your time shall wait for update :)
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Originally posted by: dhivya8

m extremely sry, yt to start next part..

was busy,.m sry..
l try my level best to update today..


Its ok,dhivya...no problem...naanga wait panrom😊
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editing ,,ll post within 5 mins
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PART 6

vishnu rched lakshmi's place

vishnu : hi lakshmi...

lak : hi vishnu...

vishnu : enna hi la shruthi ye ila...

lak : periya ananth vaithyanathan, shruthiyoda pesanumam la ivarta...

vishnu : ennoda serndheengala athaan tension la kooda joke adikarenga hahahaa.. he laughed..

lak : ipo enna venum vishnu..

vishnu : neengathaan

lak : enathu??

vishnu : ilanga en tensiona irukeenga nu reason venum...

lak : athuva,.. epavum pola project review tension thaaan...karthk nethi night romba tension ah irundhan...en nu theriyala...oruvela,,

he interuppted

vishnu : negative ah en pesanum ??...athelam kadaichurumnga...na vela pathuruken kedaikama poguma...

lak : romba peruma thaan unaku...

vishnu : ilaya pinna...seri seri...moraikatheenga...namma elarum theeya vela senjurukom...ethuvum sodhapala..apram ethuku tension...chill..be cool..relax...nallathey ninaipom

nallathaiye pesuvom.,...en style la sonna... gujaala irupom gummalam adipom ...

he laughed...

lak doesnt know how to respond but her mind relaxed after his soothing words...HE LIKED HIS ATTITUDE...

they continued to chat...

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raji was tensed yt waited fr him patiently,...

karthik came out of his room,,,, he was surrounded by few men, dey were discussing seriously..all shook hands with him..

she culdnt interpret the result from that scene...she puzzled...

raji mv " kedaichatha kedaikalaya..mogathula sandhoshame ilaye...sothapirucha..namma apdi abasagunama paninathaala thaan sodhapirucho ?? lusu lusu...arive illa enaku,,,, aaahhh ivan adichathu vera valikuthey..."

lakshmi frm nowhere, rushed to him and gave him a hug...

raji was sooo happpy,,,...she was excited...

she felt a bit worried on seeing lakshmi still hugging his karthiik...

now goutham's turn to hug karthik ,, susan shook hands with him...

all were happpyyy...

lak : so sollunga susan ji,,ipo sanda podalama? outing ah ila party ah...

goutham : party thaan...

susan : mothala team la ulavangaluku sollunga..avanga thaan hard work panirukanga..ponga porupa nadandhukonga..

lak : dei goutham enga irundhu da ivala pudicha??... ivlo sincere odambu aagathu thambi..

goutham : athaan othu varlaiye...

karthik : ipo ethuku atha pathi pesitu..ponga poi velaya parunga..na vishwanathan sir ah pathutu vandhudren...

raji was watching ds from distance... she was very happy dat the company got ds project... now she waited to meet him face to face...

before he left, he looked at raji with a blank expression..she smiled...he dint reciprocate it...n left dat place..

raji frowned,...

raji expected karthik to share the happiness with her..he dint... she waited for the whole day..he dint turn up...

she left to hostel...she was about to enter her room...

r mv " ennanu nera poiye ketutu varlam,..apothaan thookam varum"...

she went to his home...

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K's HOME

k in his home... r comes...k stood rooted to the spot...

k mv " raji vandhuruka ??? nejamave veetuku vandhurukala... ayayo potathu pota padi iruke..enna nenaipa...

dei karthik kovama iruka, marandhudatha marandhudatha..maintain paniko athaiye."

r smiles...

k : ulla vaa...

r doesnot know how to initiate the convo..after thinking hard..she was satisfied as if she got a super idea...

she smiled...she stretched her hand...

r : ithu unga kerchief nu nenaikren ..office laye vitutu vanteenga...

k teased her : enaku lady's kerchief elam use panra palakam illainga...

r mv " kandravi...neetrathu neetra ponnunga kerchief ah neetuva...asingama nenaika poran...aandava kapathu.."

he waited fr her to speak...

she was struggling fr words...finally she asked...

r : athaan adichuteengala inum enna kovamam...

k dint reply...

r : epdi valikuthu theriyuma...

she tries to create sympathy... he regrets for beating her..

now its his turn...

k : m extremely sry...

r : enga appa amma kooda adichathu ila theiryuma...

he felt bad for beating her...

r : ourmurai na 8th standard half yearly exam la maths la fail agiten..apo kooda enga appa thita thaaan senjaru...adikala ...neenga thaaan poleernu kanathulaye vituteenga...

she continued to speak...he was immersed in the pool of her innocence and beauty...

he neared her...she was keeping a hand on her cheeks and was saying stories...

he held her hand...she was shocked... she looked down..

k said in a husky voice...

k : raji look at me...

HE KEPT HIS HAND ON HER CHEEKS... she shivered...

k : romba valikutha...

r : ila...

he carassed her cheeks...

k : now listen...m truely sorry... i hav done a big mistake by slapping you,,

she looked at his eye...

r : cha cha nanthaan sry solanum...

he kept his index finger on her mouth..

she jerked..

k : shhh..now keep quiet and listen to me ok...

r : hmmm..

k : m sry, but it doesnt mean dat u r correct.. u r equally wrong...

r's brows arched...

k : never ever do that to me..n any circumstance...understand????

r couldnt get him..

k : dont ever try to scare me like dat...plz...

he requested..

r : ila na vandhu...

k : unoda april fool logic elam enaku puriyudhu,pudikuthu,..aana unaku ematha vera vazhiye kedaikalaya??..

r : ila...

k : enaku accident nu na unaku phone panni, april fool na nee epdi react pannuva??.

she was shocked...she dint expect dat...

r : enna neenga...

she started to cry...

k : ipo puriyudha...nee inki kalaila enaku enna valiya thandhanu...?

r nodded her head... just then she realised the intensity of foolishnes she had done to him,...

she cried continuously...

k : ipo en azhara?...

k : kekaren la...

r : nan senjathu thappu thaaan...periya thappu thaan...atha innoru adi adichu venumna enaku puriya veinga...

he neared her...they were so close,,

k wiped her tears.,.

r : aana vilayaatuku kooda apdi solathenga...

k : epdi ?? he questioned

r : accident aaachu, mannangatti aachunu ...

he laughed and wiped her tears again...

k : ipdi sonnathana unaku puriyudhu

she looked at him angrily...

k : seri azhadha...

r : na onnum azhala...

k : hahaaa sonnanga sonanga...

k : seri sry...

r : project ennachu ethachunu oru vaartha soneengala.? ungaluku enga, enna paaka kooda neram ila..

k : apdi ila raji..

r : kovam irukalam...athukunu itha koodava solla mudiyathu..sonna nanum sandhosha paduven la..

k : en unaku na solala na news eh theriyatha..

r : theiryum aana neeenga thaaana solirukanum...

k : ila na busyaa irundhen

r : aama aama polladha busy.. lakshmi ya kattipudika neram iruku...enta solla kooda neram ilayo..

r mv " olaru vaaai olaru vaai... olarite irupiya...vaaila thaan raji vaasthu seri ila unaku..."

she tried to divert the topic..

k : enna sonna enna sonna..

r : onum ila...neenga busy na phone avathu panirukalame nu sollavandhen...seri karthik time aachu na kalambren...

she turned..he held her hand...

k : unaku ipo na unta sollalandrrathu prachanaiya...ila lakshmiya kattipudichathu prachanaiya...

r " vasama maatinom "

r : ila enta sollalanu thaan...

k : unmaiya sollu...

r : rendum thaaan...

k dint expect her to open up her feelings so soon...she looked worried,,,

r : na kalambaren...kaiya vidunga...

she moved...he pulled her towards him...she hit him hard...

k : unmaiya sollu...na lakshmi ya katipudichena...ilana ava ena wish panni katipudichala...

r couldnt answer...

k : sollu...

r : avathaaan ungala...

k : hmmm apdina ithu enoda question...nee en enna wish panla??..

he teased her...

she dint answer... she tried hard to come out frm his grip..

k : badhil sollu...en wish panla...

r : athu ...athu vandhu...neenga enta solala athanaa na wish panla...ena vidunga...

k : seri ipo onnum late ila... carry on..

r : athelam mudiyathu..

k : aayayaa...kalaila enaya emathinala athuku punishment...indha topic aarambichathu neenu..olunga wish pantu po...

he stretched his both hands and asked fr a hug..

she felt weird..she was so close to him...t was a strange feeling , she is experiencing it fr the first time...

she hesitatd first... she thought she was too fast... she was confused

r mv " na enna panren...ipdi oru paiyan veetuku vandhu,,ivlo kitaka..enaku enachu... karthik nallavaru ...ivaru thaan...appa othupara... kadavuley..."

she looked at him...

she doesnt know the answer fr the questions that ran n her mind..but dat moment..she felt happy on seeing him...

all her worries were wiped off on seeing his smiling face... she decided not to spoil that moment..she wished to live that moment...and neared him...

r came closer... she kept her both hands on his chest...and kept her face in one of her hands...

r : ok va...

k : ithuku peru unga oorla hug ah??... koilpattindratha ovoru nadavadikailayum prove panra...

he said while carassing her ...

r got angry...

r : apdina poi chennai ponnungalaye wish panna solunga..enaku ithaan theiryum...

she rushed frm that place..

k : hey raji nillu nillu...koilpatti kaddipudi vaazhthey pothum vaa...nalla wish pantu po..

r : enna kindal panneengala athaan punishment..

she left to her hostel... he smiled...

k mv " enna ponnu da"...

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lak : hey guys... vishayam kelvi patrupeengale...

vishnu : aamanga,,.. enga porom.. pondicherry ok va??

lak : enathu...unaku pondicherry kekutha??... avlo dhooram nee thaniya poitu va...

vishnu : lakshmi neengalum vaangalen ..jollya poitu varuvom indha vaaram...

lak : na unoda TL konjamavathu bayam iruka unaku...vaai ku vandhadhelam pesara...

vishnu : ada ponga latchu ungala pathu enaku enna bayam..

lak : enadhu latchu va.,.otha venuma unaku..

koushik : seri unga sandaiya apram vechukonga... lakshmi etho solla vandheengale...

lak : hmmm ah koushik...namma elarum maamalllapuram porom...

raji : apdina?

lak : athu oru edam raji..nalla irukum anga oru resort poitu, beach athu ithu nu full day fun thaan po...

raji thinks...

raji : na varla lakshmi...

lak : hey enna d ipdi solra...team ah porom nee varla na epdi...

raji : ila lakshmi plz...

lakshmi becomes sad...vishnu signals her...

vishnu : lakshmi namma elarum naa yaarelam...

asking ds, he looks at raji...

lak : 3 teamum thaaan..

vishnu : enanga lakshmi ,,,ipdi mottaiya sonna epdi... elarum varanga thaana..

lakshmi understands and smile...she looks at raji mockingly and says..

lak : ellarum na nee yaara kekara vishnu?? namma PM ah??,,,avaru ilama epdi??...

raji becomes shy...but

raji : yaru vandhalum na varla...

she said sternly..

vl begged her...

koushik : lakshmi eniki sonenga,,,ds sunday va?? enaku oru chinna vela iruku lakshmi sry nanum varla..

lak : hey enna aalu aaluku varlanu solrenga...final ah kekren raji variya ilaya..?

raji : ila lakshmi...athu...

lak : nalla mariyadhai raji...romba thanks... romba nalla team enaku vaaichuruku...hey vishnu neeyum sunday iluthu pothitu thoongu,,.nanum pola..avanga 2 team potum..

she leaves the place... r is worried...

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l inform her frnds that she s not joining them...karthik and goutham ask the reason...

lak : elaam un aalu thaan da prachana panra...seriyana koilpatti..

karthik : hey apdi solatha...avaluku apdi sonna matum kovam vandhurum...

lak : apdi nadandhukita apdi thaan solvanga...

karthik : seri seri ipo enna..avala ok solla vekanum athana?..

lak : aama...

karthik : ok na pathukaren...

lak : epdi da... adam pudikarale... na evlo kenjinen..

goutham : neeyum ivanum onna...athelam solravanga sonna kandipa kepa ...enada maapla ??..

karthik laughs...


to be continued...


sry fr the late update...

ll post the next part n monday :)

ll update everyday next week too

thanks ...

Edited by dhivya8 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Superb update..

Continuity la pinnreengha... 👏

Adutha update, Monday va... Innum rendu naal irukku...

We will be waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Idhu pudhusa irukku... But superah irukku..

"vaaila thaan raji vaasthu seri ila unaku..."
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rajee71

Idhu pudhusa irukku... But superah irukku..

"vaaila thaan raji vaasthu seri ila unaku..."



sis,,athu sutta dialog 😉 m sry fr using sutta dialogs,,
vadivelu comedy la varra dialog, m nt sure..
a girl says dis dialog to him 😆
na suttuten😊srrryyy
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
m sry, thought f writing more emotionally n romantically,
but time pathala,,
got to go now,,,
ll b bck n monday...so thought f writing ds part today tself,,
enake theriyudhu,, could hav writtn ds better, m sry
ll post next part n monday
bye all
thanks 😊

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