NEW FF : UNAKAAGA PIRANDHENE PART 32 POSTED, pg 119! - Page 20

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Posted: 10 years ago
Excellent updates dhivya... didn't expect two updates in a day.. vl convo was
so nice...KR feelings wer so nice to see..felt like watching in tv ..awesome update
👏 👏 👏

Waiting for ur next update ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Dhivya...Fantastic Update..I loved Karthik-Raji like anything..

Precap koncham terror a dhaan iruku...irundalum...i cant wait for next..


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Archana03

Excellent updates dhivya... didn't expect two updates in a day.. vl convo was
so nice...KR feelings wer so nice to see..felt like watching in tv ..awesome update
👏 👏 👏

Waiting for ur next update ...

Thanks a lottt😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anithu

Hey Dhivya...Fantastic Update..I loved Karthik-Raji like anything..


Precap koncham terror a dhaan iruku...irundalum...i cant wait for next..


Thanks a lot anithu sis
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice.. Read back to back...

Ivvalavu nalla k... Padikka supera irukku... Wonderful... Waiting for tomorrow
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dhivya...sathiyama adutha part ethirparkalai...kalakareenga...
wow...full KR scenes...superb...👏👏

Karthik...romba romba romba samathu payana irukan.😳..avan pesara ovavaru dialoguem arumai...

Raji...thnoda kastatha sollita...

rendu perum indirecta propose pannikittanga...ithukumela enna venum...

r's dad arrives??...enna nadaka potho..😛.

precap...sema interesting...waiting for tommorrow...oru doubt ,nalaiku rendu updatesa illa moonu updatesa??...en ketena,naanga ketkaratha vida kooduthalave update panreenga...athan keten...😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you for the updates Dhivya, hope you are well. Curious to know what Meesai is going to say.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hw is ur health NW.. wen s d next update dhivya... eagerly waiting..
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PART 14

after having fun n the outing, all were back to their routine...

night...

raji was correcting her bed to sleep...her phone rang...

raji : enna ithu puthu number ah iruke...indha nerathula yaara irukum...

raji and karthik has always used office extension so raji was unaware of his mobile number..

moreover they are neighbours so there was no need of t...

karthik : hello raji...

raji couldnt recognise his voice...

raji : hello yaaru ?...

karthik mv : yaara? enn voice kooda va theriyala?...iru iru vechukaren unaya...

karthik : raji phone thaana ithu...

raji : aama na raji thaaan pesaren...yaru neenga ...enna venum

karthik : neethaan venum...

raji : hello, yaru pesrathu...

karthik : athu ethuku unaku...

raji : mariyathaiya pesa theriyatha ungaluku.?...innerathuku phone panirukeenga police la pudichu kuduthuruven pathukonga...

karthik mv : paravalaye dhairiyama thaan pesra...

karthik : naanga pakatha police aa?...

raji : epdi ungaluku indha number kedaichathu...yaru neenga...

karthik : un mama...

raji : chiii...na vekaren...

karthik mv : vekarenu yaravathu solitu vepangala raji...nee inum develop aaganum...

she cuts the call...he calls again...she cuts t,calls her father and informs him...

raji : appa en number yarukavathu kudutheengala?...

messai : ilaye ma...ethana prachanaiya?

raji : ilapa , phone potu yaro pesranga..anegama wrong call nu nenaikren..neenga kolapikatheenga...na pathukaren...paduthukonga...gud nite...

meesai : pathuko da...vekaren appa...

karthik calls and he gets and engaged tone...

karthik mv : athukullla yarta pesara...police ku pantalo...avlo dhariyam namma aalu ta kedaiyathey...appa ku phone ah potrucho...

he calls again...she cuts...he calls again and again

raji : hello mister ungaluku ennathaan venum...oru tharava sonna puriyatha?...

karthik : enaku neenga thaan venum...ethana tharava ketalum ithaan badhil...ungala pona vaaram kovil la pathenga...oru vaaram thedi kandu pudichu number vangiten...

raji : chiii asingama ila...

karthik : ilaye...

raji : enaku kalyanam agiruchu...

she lied...

karthik gets shocked...

karthik : enanga solreenga...

raji : aama,...enaku kalyanam aagi 1 varusham aachu...

ds time she said sternly...

karthik : nejamava?... aniki kovil la paathapa thali ilaye...

raji : ah..hm...athu vandhu na christian...

she struggled...

karthik laughed...

k mv : en chellathuku olunga poi kooda solla varlaye...

karthik : enga kovil ku apo ethukunga vanedheenga...

raji : athu vandhu...hmmm...kedaichuruchu...avaru christian...athaan thaali illa...na phone ah vekaren...

karthik : yenga yenga oru nimishamnga...epo ungaluku kalyanam aagiruchunu sonengalo..inimetu ungala disturb panna matenga...

raji : thanks...phone ah veinga...

karthik : unga purushan peru enanga...

raji mv : ayayooo enna posukunu ipdi ketutan...matinom matinom...

karthik : hello irukeengala... unga husband ...athaan unga christian husband peru enna.,...

raji : avaru peru avaruu peru...KARTHIK...

karthik was surprised...his joy knew no bounds...was t her? he stil culdnt believe...

karthik : christian nu sonenga...karthik na murugan peru la...

raji : hello avaru vandhu converted christian...ungaluku elathaiyum velakanum nu avasiyam ila...inoru tharava call paneenga police la pudichu kuduthuruven...en purushan vera romba koovakararu...solten...

karthik : seri oknga sry sry...

he cuts the phone and starts laughing...

he calls again...

raji : hey enna nenaicha enna pathi...ilicha vaaina... iru unna enna panrenu paru...

karthik : enna d purushan ta ipdi mariyadha ilama pesra...

raji : enna dhairiyam unaku...yaruku yaru purushan...

karthik : neenga MRS.KARTHIK thaana...

raji dint reply..

karthik : nanthaaan karthik pesren...

raji : enathu?...

she puzzled...

karthik : frst pesina wrong call nanthaaan...

raji : ayayooo...

karthik : athu epdi epdi? en purushan vera kovakararu ,,,..hahaaa

raji smiled shyly...

raji : poyum poyum unga kitta matikiten...

karthik : atha kooda vidu,..mama va pathe oru maasam thaan aguthu,...kalyanam aagi oru varusham aachamla? ipdi pulugariye d

raji : ayooo sry...

karthik : seri, kalyanam aanatha maapla kita solalaye...ithelam aniyayam...

raji : nejama neenga thaana?...

karthik : aama un purushan thaan..

raji : chi chi enna ithu asingama pesarenga...

karthik : hello yaru asingama pesrathu?...neethana summa irundhavana purushan nu sonna...

raji : athelam theriyama oru bayathula olarinathu...athelam seriousaa eduthukatheenga...na vechudren...

karthik : hey raji ithaan en number,..save paniko...inime adikadi koopduven...purushanaache...

raji : onnum theva ila...phone ah veinga mothala...gud nite...

karthik : gud nite swt dreams...

both smile...

next day...

vishnu : enga enanga velaiye ilanalum monitoraye morachu morachu pakareega...

raji : adutha project pathi ethavathu mail vandhuruka nu pathutruken...

koushik : enna office eh orey paraparapa iruku?

raji : aama koushik na kooda varrapa gavanichen...

vishnu : enaku apdi onum theriyalaiye...

raji : lakshmi kooda semma tensionaa iruka vishnu kalaila irundhu,...

vishnu : enathu latchu tensiona irukangala...na poi cool pantu varen...

raji : veena poi vaangi katikatheenga...aprama poikonga...

koushik : vishwanathan sir PM elam kooptu meeting potutrukaram...ennanu theriyala

raji : ethavathu pracchanaiya irukuma koushik

koushik : theriyala irukalam...

vishnu : en apdi yosikareenga adutha project pathi discussion apdi kooda irukalam la...

raji : hmmm

raji's phone rings...

meesai : raji ma...appa pesren da...

raji : sollunga appa enna innerathula?...

meesai : en ma velaiya irukiya?...

raji : athelam ila sollunga appa...naliki epo bus?...

meesai : na un hostel ku velila thaan da nikaren...

raji : enna pa solreenga?...hostel velilaya...irunga na odane varen...

meesai : velaiya irukiya...na ipdi velila ukandhuruken da velaiya mudichutu vaa..

raji : athelam onum ila appa...na varen...

vishnu : poitu vanga poitu vanga... boss enna thittava poraru ungala...

raji : en vishnu neenga vera...

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raji : enachu appa...solama kollama vandhurukeenga...

meesai : unna pakanum pola irundhuchu da...nee vera nethi yaro phone pani tholla panranga nu sonniya athaan enna ethunu... rendu moonu naal unoda irundhutu polam nu...

raji : oho..seri vaang polam..

meesai ; phone pani yaru ma tholla pannathu...

raji smiles...

raji : tholla thaan pa...avaroda romba thollaiya iruku..

she smiles again..

meesai : enna ma adikadi thondaravu panrana..solllu un mamanta soliralam...

raji realises and hits her head widh her hand...

raji : ayayo athelam onnum ila pa..vera yaruko panrathuku enaku pantanga..athelam prachanaiye ila...neenga vanga...appa enna kaala ooni ooni nadakareenga..?

meesai : onnum ila da...varra vazhila oru auto kaaran lesa idichutu poitan

raji : ayayo enna solrenga...

meesai : onnum ila padharatha...nee va...

raji : ennapa neenga...kaala katunga...ivlo weight vera..na ketena unga kiita ipo ithelam venumnu..?

meesai : elam nee aasaiya saapadrathu...pudicha dress athaan eduthutu vanten...

raji : ivlo weight thooka koodathunu doctor solirukarula...adikadi nenju vali irukarapa strain panna koodathunu en pa ipdi panreenga...podhadhathuku kaalula vera adi...

meesai starts to sweat profusely...

raji : neenga ukarunga..na thanni kondu varen...

he keeps his hand on his chest...when raji returned,.,she saw him lying on the floor..she dropped the glass and rushed to him

raji : appa appa...appp elundhiringa appa...plz apppa...

he dint respond...

raji doesnt know wat to do...she doesnt know any hospital nearby...

she called karthik,,,,he dint pick...she called him agin and again...he cut her call

she called lakshmi...her phone was switched off...she donno vishnu and koushik's number...

she was helpless...she ran to the hostel warden for help...but it was lunch time...she wasnt there in her place...

she kept her ears on his chest...she cried hard...

she called karthik again...he picked up...

raji : karthik...karthikkk,...appa

karthik : helllo ...na busyaa iruken apram pesu raji...

raji : karthik onnum ila orey oru nimisham...

karthik : puriyatha unaku...

raji : puriyudhu karthik...oru sec.,..orey oru sec karthik plzzz...

he cuts the call...

raji : karthik...oru emergencyyy

she dint finish,,,,.he cuts the call and switches off the phone,..

she called 108...but dat service has currently been stopped in TN..she was unaware of that too...

raji mv : cha vishnu number kooda ilaye...

she hit her head hard...she ran downstairs...she stopped an auto...

raji : anna niruthunga anna...orey oru help anna...plz...

she pleaded him...

auto : savari etha thaan ma poitu iruken...vazhi vidu...

she hit her neighbour's gate hard...

they came out and she informed them her condition...as begged for help...

neighbour : mothala ambulance ku phone paniniya ma...

raji : noothi ettu ku paninen anna..aana badhile ila...

neighbour : call taxi buk pani vara late aagum...pakathula hospital iruku...chinna hospital thaaan anga kootitu polam...nee

bayapadatha ma...

raji : romba neram aachu anna...avaruku already oru attack vandhuruku enaku bayama iruku...konjam seekaram...anna plz...unga kaalula venumnalum vizharen,,,

neighbour : nee vera elundhiri ma...iru na mothala poi auto pesaren...

he stopped an auto..n he wid the help of auto driver...brought meesai downstairs and the rushed to the nearby hospital...

meesai was being treated,...

neighbour : en ma.,..ooruku vandhu ethana naal aguthu?...

raji : oru maasam mela aaguthu...

neighbour : akkam pakathu aalunga phone number vaanga mudiyathu seri paravala...en na hostel la iruka..avangaloda elam palaga mudiyathu...hostel la elarum velaiku poirupanga...seri...office la kooda vela pakravanga number kooda vechuruka matiya ?...

raji : rendu peru number irundhuchu anna...yarum phone ah edukala...

neighbour : summa saaku poku solatha ma...veli ulagam epdi irukunu 4 peru ta palagi patha thaan theriyum...oorla irundhu vandhuruken bayam bayam nu ethana tharava athaye sollli ungala neengale emathika poreenga..

ungala mari vevaram kettu irukarathaala thaaan easya ematharanga... enatha solli enna...pathuko appa va...onnum aagathu bayapadatha...

raji : romba nandringa anna...

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lakshmi switches on her mobile and notices the missed calls from raji...

lak : raji sollu d..ipothaan meeting mudinjathu..charge poirum nu off panirundhen...sollu enna ithana call ?

raji cries

lak :hey enna d solra...iru na odane varen...endha hospital...

raji : hospital peru theiryala lakshmi...inga pakathula

lak : lusu...admit panni evlo neram aaguthu...endha hospital anga podhiya facilities iruka elam paaka venama...

raji : ila appa va pathutrukanga lakshmi...inum doctors yarum velila varla romba bayama iruku...

lak : nee bayapadama iru...na odane kalambi varen...nalla hospital la admit pani pakalam onnum aagathu kavala padatha...na kalambiten


to be continued...

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precap

meesai : thambi raji unga kitta sanda potucha?

karthik : athelam illaye...

meesai : potrundhalum avala manichurunga... etho kovathula

karthik : cha cha athelam oru prachanaiyum ila...

meesai : ungala pathi neriya solluva... neenga thaan avala nalla padiya pathukanum...

thappu senja...manichu vitrunga...

karthik : athelam na pathukaren...neenga thoongunga mothala...

meesai : na onnu keta thappa eduthukura mateengale?...

karthik : kelunga...

k was surprised :O

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Posted: 10 years ago
part 13 oda comments :superb update.. i liked kr convo it was nice..😊
part 14 : chancea illainga mindblowing update.. sema conversation btwn kr especially wrong no convo😊👏.. i was like reading dt kr convo..
Edited by srithu - 10 years ago

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