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PART 20


vishnu : enna raji, ivlo neram...semma dose pola

raji nods her head

vishnu : vidunga raji...feel pani enna aaga poguthu..next time thitu vaangatha mari nadakanum nu oru mudivu edunga avlothaan so simple...

raji : na munave apdi thaan vela senjen vishnu...na itha ethir paakal...

vishnu : puriyuthu... athuvum avangaluku pathalaye...innum hard work panunga...vera enatha seiya...

raji : kashtama iruku vishnu

vishnu : appa amma kooda thitaama chellama valathurupanga la?

raji : thitinathuku ila...thitara mari nadandhukutome nu varuthama iruku...

vishnu : vittu thalunga raji...romba kolapikatheenga

raji : na nallathaan vela pakarenu satisfactionoda irundhen...

vishnu : avanga ilanu solranga...prove pani katunga...inum hard work panunga

raji thinks

vishnu : enna raji inum feel panreengala?

raji : hmmm...

raji wasnt satisfied... he tried to console her...

vishnu : mudinja varaikum work pananum raji...neenga senja vela ungaluku mana niraiva tharudha avlothaan...mathavangala pathi elam nenaikave koodathu...ivanga ipdi thaan puzhi puzhi nu puzhivanga...24 mani neramum vela senja kooda kurai thaan solvanga...neenga...

raji stopped him...she dint listen to his advice at all...she was immersed in her own thoughts...

raji : avaru thitinatu thapu ila vishnu...nanthaaan...

vishnu mv : marubadi mothala irundha???????

vishnu : enanga neenga athaiye solreenga...enathaan prachana ungaluku?

raji : en prachanaiye vera... na en ipdi irukenu enake...

now he stopped her...

vishnu : unga prachanaiye...elathaiyum prachanaiya paakarathu thaan...

raji : nanthaan seri ilanu solreengala...

vishnu : ellathaiyum epdinga wrong senselaye eduthukareenga...

raji asked him innocently...

raji : na seriousaa kekren solunga vishnu ella prachanaiyum perusa paakareno?...na romba kolapikareno...ena suthi irukaravangalukum kashtam la?

vishnu : ungala suthi ipo nanthaan iruken...enaku enna kashtam...na kashtam nu ennikavathu solirukena?

raji : polambite iruken la... bore adikaren ungala...sry vishnu...

vishnu : apdi ila raji...

raji tried to divert the topic...

raji : seri avaru thitinathu ungaluku kashtama ilaya vishnu...

vishnu : avaru enna pesinarunu keta thana thitinara ila konjinaara nu theriyum...

raji : adapaavame... apdina kekave ilaya

vishnu : athuku thaananga avaaru enaya velila anupinaru...na apo mind voice la konjam busy ah irundhena...avaru kandu pudichutaru...

he laughed...

raji : apo neenga enna seiya poreenga...

vishnu : ungala mari athaiye nenachutu, hard work pani, adutha review meeting apo prasava ward ku velila wait pandra purushana mari tensionaa thiriyarathu ithelam namaku set eh aagathu...

raji : apram...adutha meetinglayum thitu vaanga poreengala

vishnu : thirutham thirutham...adutha meetinglayum avaru enna kooptu pesuvaru...as usual enna pesinaru nu enaku onnum theriya porathila...

vishnu laughed...

raji : epdi vishnu ivlo cool ah irukeenga...

vishnu : by birth la irundhe ipdi thaanga...

lakshmi heard their convo...

lakshmi : ipdiye iru...oru naal velaya vitu kalambunu solli thoookiruvanga...apo theiryum unaku...manushan na konjam aavathu ethavathu irukanum...

she said harshly...

vishnu : ethavathu irukanuma?...enathu? kai kaal elam thaana iruku?

he tried to lighten d mood...

raji : vishnu ava ariva solra...

vishnu : oh athuva...athu namaku konjam kammi thaan...athuvum by birth la irundhe thaan...en mela mistake ila...manufacturing defect latchu...

lakshmi : unaku arivu konjam kammi ila..suthama ilave ila...epdi indha mari situation la kooda sirikara nee...cha

lakshmi scolded him and went to her place

vishnu followed lakshmi to console her...

raji remained their and was thinking deeply...

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FLIGHT LANDED...

karthik hired a taxi...

it was very cool...the climate and the cool breeze were very comforting...

he took his mobile and inserted d ear phone and played songs in random...

the first song was "MUNBE VAA EN ANBE VAA"...a beautiful melody...

the climate and the song together just made him go crazy...

he was missing his girl a lottt...his mind was filled with her thoughts...

karthik was feeling weak...before the seperation he was a bit confidnt that he could go thorough this easily...

just then he realized that d following few weeks are gonna be hard for him...

if this was the feeling of him? how much would she miss her?...this thought made him feel even worser...

karthik mv : paatha konja naalulaye ipdi paithiyam aakitiye d...

he was longing to hear her voice...but he knew dat she would hav fallen asleep by dat time...so he decided to call her later...

each and every words in dat song,, just reminded him of RAJI...his RAJI...

he stopped the song and tried to close his eyes...

but he heard her voice... her child like voice...the voice for which he had become addicted to...

he heard her voice frst, before meeting her...he recollected that day..and all the incidents that happened between them all these days...

the way she suspected him n the frst day...their cute eyelocks...their frst handshake...

the way she held his hands as a support...the way she fooled him before the review...their first hug...

their untold love...the peck on his cheeks...he touched the place where she kissed...her affection, her care, her love

her pressence...her first month salary gift...

he touched the locket ever so lovingly and said " I MISS YOU SO MUCH RAJI"...

he received a call...

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raji too was feeling a lottt...she felt lonely...she was stressed...she wanted to be in his arms right then...

raji mv : motha tharavaye thitu vaangara mari agiduche... namma nalla improve pananum...english kathukanum,...neriya hard work pananum...ipo sincere ah vela pathom nu nenaichom...aana result vera mari iruku...ithey mari apramum nadandha?

en mela thaan thappa...? ipo enna seiya...karthik inga irundha epdi irukum... vishwanathan sir kita kandipa improve panrom nu solitom...panna mudiyalana? avaruku apovum en vela pudikalana?...velaya vitu anupiruvangala?...vandha orey maasathula velaya vitu poga porena?...

na waste thaaan...karthik thaan summa ennakaga solraru...yarukume enala prayojanam ila...

karthik inga vandhhurungalen plzzz...enaku neenga venum...ipove...indha nimishame...inga vandhurunga...

she was thinking overboard...she missed him so much...

she dint eat...

she dint sleep...

she received a phone call...

it was karthik...she answered the call immediately...she was ready to pour out her feelings...her thinking...her worries everything...

he was waiting fr his encouraging words... she knew that he was her medicine...his words...his encouragement could make all things easier...

she wanted to make sure he has reached safely and then to open this topic...

raji : hello karthik......

she tried to sound normal...

he could feel more sorrow in her tone than love...he very well understood her situation...

karthik : enna voice oru mari iruku?

raji : athelam onnum ila...neenga

karthik : enna vishayam nu keten...

raji : onnum ila karthik...neenga en orumari pesreenga?...

karthik : neeyum azhudhiya?...

raji frowned...: en neenga azhudheengala?...

karthik : chm...na ketadhu neeyum avalukaaga azhudhiya?

raji was confused...

karthik : lakshmi phone panirundha...

raji remained silent...

karthik : lakshmi ya overa thititarame...apdiya

raji : hmmm aama...ennayum,...

he interrupted...

karthik : en elaru munadiyum ipdi thitararu...avaruku enna prachana...athaan project kedaichuruchula...

raji : elaru munadi ila karthik...nanum avalum thaan irundhom...

karthik : seri enava venumnalum irukatum...epdi avaru susan oda compare panalam...

raji : aama karthik...lakshmi romba feel panina...

karthik : uyar adhigaariya irundha enna venumnalum pesalama?

raji : avaru vandhu nallathuku thaan sonaru...

karthik : enna nalathu...advice panalam thappu ila...ethuku compare panraru...

raji : ila thappa eduthukatha nu solitu thaan susan pathi sonaru...

karthik : ipdi pesina thappa eduthukaama...ava evlo sandhoshama irundha theriyuma mrng...enta sonna review meeting irukunu...

ipo call pani azhara...

raji : vidunga karthik

karthik : athu epdi vida mudiyum...ava azharathu enaku kashtama iruku raji...

raji : feel panatheenga karthik...enaku puriyudhu...

karthik : en vaazhakaila mukkiyamavangala en amma ku apram lakshmi thaan...

raji felt a alottt...definitely that was not out of jealousy...but she felt like she was been missed out...

she thought of sharing her sorrows with him...but she couldnt...he was already disturbed...she realized that it was not the right moment to disturb him,,,

but on the other hand, she felt he was least bothered about her...he dint make any attempt to know what has been said to her in the meeting...

she was given least importance she thougt...she scolded herself fr the next moment fr that thought...

already she was stressed and his care towards lakshmi, no...he, not feeling fr her made her to burst out...

mixed feelings...on not knowing how to express...

she cried silently...

he continued...

karthik : avala mari kashtatha indha chinna vayasula yarum anubavichuruka maatanga...appa amma va ezhandhutu... indha society la thaniya indha alavuku vela senju ipo TL aagiruka na...atha paaratama thitina...

raji : neenga kova padatheeng karthika...relax aagunga... hotel vandhuteengala...

karthik : enaku enna...enaku avala nenaicha thaan kashtama iruku...saaptalanu kooda theriyala...nee poi konjam pakariya enakaaga plz...

raji : plz elam en kekareenga...na poi pathukaren karthik...neenga kavala padatheenga...

she wiped her tears and tried to console him...

karthik : nee avala konjam pathutu enaku call panriya plz...

rajji : na ipove poren karthik...neenga kavala padatheenga...

karthik : nee en oru maari pesara...unna ethavathu...

just then she realized that he was not aware of anything happened to her...

she stopped him...

raji : athelam onnum ila karthik...

she made sure not to let her feelings to him...he wasnt aware of vishwanathan sir scolding raji...his reaction would taken a new dimension if he knows that...

she thought to cheer him up and so, she burried the thought of sharing his sorrow wid him, deep inside her heart...

raji : ava saapadalana na ooti vidren karthik...neenga kavala padama irunga...

karthik : neeyum romba feel paniya raji...

he dint let her to speak

karthik : aama neenga rendu peru thaan romba close aache...ava azhudha neeyum azhudhurupa...nee kavala padatha...na anga vandhadhum iruku paru avaruku...

raji : athelam onnum venam karthik...na lakshmi veetuku poitu enna nelama nu ungaluku solren...neenga feel panatheenga plz

karthik : ok raji...call panu...avala enta pesa sollu...avala pathuko,...

raji : kandipa karthik...

he cut the call...

she cried...

she started to lakshmi's house with a heavy heart...

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karthik was not conviced yet...he called vishnu...

karthik : vishnu...na karthik

vishnu : boss solunga solunga...epdi irukeenga...

karthik : enna vishnu normalaa pesreenga

vishnu : en enaku enna?

karthik : lakshmiya sir thitinathu ungaluku theriyuma theriyatha?...

vishnu : theriyum...

karthik : apram epdinga ipdi irukeenga... ava azhudhutruka apdi...unarchiye ilama irukeenga

vishnu smiled

karthik : sirikatheenga kadupaguthu...

vishnu : karthik...neenga solrathu late news...nethiye radio la vandhuduchu

karthik : enna olarareenga...kavalaye ilama irukeengale...konjam avathu porupa nadandhukonga...lakshmi lakshmi nu epaparu pinadiye suthina pathathu...akkara pasam elam irukanum...

vishnu : hello mind ur words...vaarthaya vidatheenga...

karthik : ipdi nadandhukita apdi thaan pesuvanga...

vishnu : neenga solrathu one hr mundhina status...ipo nelamaiye vera

karthik : vera na

vishnu : en boss...ava kashta padranu neengale feel panreengana..na feel pana matena...

he was thinking

vishnu : karthik neenga lakshmi ku appa va amma va enava venumnalum irunga...aana na avaloda lover...future husband...avaluku onnu na enakum kashtama thaan irukum...engalukum porupu iruku...solla pona ungala vida romba jaasthiyave akkara iruku...pothuma...

karthik : ava ipo ok va...

vishnu : neengale phone pani confirm panikonga...

karthik : ava sirichutala...

vishnu : one hour ah nan ava veetla thaan irundhen...ava ungaluku phone pani vechathula irundhu konjam munadi varaikum en kooda thaan irundha...ipo na veetuku vandhadhum...marubadi pakkanum pola iruku...dinner polama nu keta...

vishnu : 12 maniku dinner kooptruka...latchu ku ipothaan kathal ponguthu boss...

karthik smiled

karthik : apdi enna pesineenga vishnu

vishnu : athelam lovers kulla 1000 irukum koranjathu 999 avathu irukum...personal boss...kumudha happy annachi ipo athu pothum...

karthik : sry vishnu...na ungala thappa...

vishnu : irukatum irukatum... enaku time aachu karthik...dinner poren avaloda...apram pesava

karthik : vishnu oru nimisham...apdiina ava veetla ilaya ipo?

vishnu : aama nanthaan avala veetla poi pick up panna poren...late aagiruchula...

karthik : ayayoa...na rajiya ipothaan anga po sonen

vishnu : rajiya va?...en ethuku ?

karthik : ava phone potu enta azhudhadhum enaku kaiyum odala kaalum odala athaan...rajiya pathutu vara sonen

vishnu : indha raathiri la yenga avala thaniya po sonnenga...

karthik regretted for asking her to go to lakshmi's place ...

karthiik : na yosikave ila vishnu.,..late aachula...

vishnu : late aacha va?...enanga vilayadreengala...porupu iruka konjam aavathu...

karthik : ila lakshmi azhudhadhum...enaku

vishnu : en raji azhalaya?...

karthik : enna solreenga

vishnu : rajiyum thaana thitu vaanginanga...avanga feel paniruka matangala...

karthik : rajiya thitinara

he was shocked...

vishnu : enanga theriyatha mariye pesareenga...raji ku semma thitu...avangalum bayangara mood out,..madhiyame saapda kooda ila...

karthik's anger went beyond limits...he hit the desk hard...

vishnu : avanga summave bayandha subavam...mrng la irundhu kashta patutu irundhanga...ipo thaniya vera velila vandhurukanga...

enna karthik neenga...

karthik : vishnu enaku theriyathu vishnu...

vishnu : enanga theriyathu ungaluku...ungaluku akkara iruka konjam aavathu...

karthik : rajiiya thitinnathu sathyama enaku theriyathu vishnu...

vishnu : atha vidunga...athu theriyalainalum...lakshmi ya paaka anupi vekara neram ah ithu...enake mothala phone panirukalam la...ipo panreenga enaku...oru ponna indha raathiri la..avanga epdi thaniya...cha...avangaluku ipo ethavathu prachanaya irundhuchu na ungala summa vida maten solten...

vishnu couldnt feel how raji would hav felt and scolded karthik like anything...

karthik stood rooted to the spot...

vishnu's words taunted him more...he was shell shocked...

he prayed for her safety...

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m extremely sry fr d delay...results vandhachu 94%

thanks a lot fr d cmnts and sry again fr d delay...

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Congratz 👏👏👏 wow it's awesome score frnd 👍🏼

will comment after reading the update 😉
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