NEW FF : UNAKAAGA PIRANDHENE PART 32 POSTED, pg 119! - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: muthucheenu

Wow!! Excellent updates, back to back!!! Chanceless, Dhivya ma'am. KR journey together has so far been so enjoyable... as we are enjoying it, sudden-a oru fight sequence kondu vandhutteengale? K's display of concern for R was nice, poor thing, you made him stand without a shirt like Salman Khan...oruvelai, K is flaunting his 6 pack abs to Rajiyo?!! irukkum, irukkum...adhaan avalum admire panraale. Superb job ma'am. 👏


sallu bhai 6 pack nahi, karthik shahrukh mari 8 pack 😉
thanks a lot fr d comment..m super happy😃
kr jouney has been enjoyable... there is gonna fight between them in the next part...
donno how much u all wil like d next part...😊
thx again fr d cmnt...
SRK K lol😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic update dhivya..
I cant wait for KR Fight..which is the highlight of their chemistry i will say...😉😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anithu

Fantastic update dhivya..

I cant wait for KR Fight..which is the highlight of their chemistry i will say...😉😉


haha thanks anithu sis, u r waiting fr d fight? haiya super...dint expct..
ll update tom sis
thanks fr d cmnt
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks so much Dhivya, this is so much better than today's episode of Office! Nice part, Vishnu and Lakshmi were funny, KR were sweet.
Edited by Smiles-20 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Smiles-20

Thanks so much Dhivya, this is so much better than today's episode of Office! Nice part, Vishnu and Lakshmi were funny, KR were sweet.


thanks a lot 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 9

all gathered for campfire...they were playing games... enjoyed to the core...

r was silent throughout,all that happened last night was runnin n her mind...deir closeness,his action, her reaction all these taunted her...

k noted t and wished to sort out the issue that is troubling his girl...

they had dinner...

after vomiting and sleeping fr n hr, lakshmi became normal...

v : hi latchu...

lak : apdi koopdatha nu soliruken la..

v : enna lakshmi..thelinjurucha..

lak : enaku enna peiya pudichathu, theliyarathuku...

v : pei pudikala,,vishnu va pudichuchu..

lak : ennada olarara..lite ah ethavathu saaptiya??

v : yaaru nanu ??

lak : neethaan, pinna enna naana...

v : indha ponungalaye purinjuka mudiyalaiye purushothama...

l ignored him...

lak : hey guys,, its too late...naliki vera nalla enjoy pananum, so its time to disperse i guess..

goutham : hey ipothaana saptom athukullava...

susan : u r rite lakshmi, romba late ithuve,, naliki enjjoy panna micham meedhi irukatum... poi thoongalam elarum...

lak : ok ok cool...bye bye gud nite all...raji vaa polam...

raji : nee po lakshmi, enaku thala valiya iruku na oru walk poitu apram varen...

lak : hmm patthu kadal kittka pogatha raji...ok va...bye bye...

ds time she dint go towards the sea..she started walking towards the streets...

k : nanum join panikalama?...

r : koodathu...

k : ennna koodathu...

r : na thaniya irukanum karthik plz,...

k : athaan en nu kekaren..en dulla iruka...any prob..

r : sonen la thala vali nu... plz thaniya vidunga...

k : en roadu en urimai..na enganalum nadapen..nee yaru nadaka koodathunu solrathuku...

r started walking fast...

k : kannu inum eriyudha raji??..

she dint reply...

k : pinna vayiru valiya...

k : athuvum ilaya..jorama..iru thotu pakren...

she pushed his hands...

r : onnum ila...

k : okkk,...i got t...appa ta sollama vantomnu thaana feel panra...

r : na appa ta solala nu ungaluku yaru sonathu...

k : apdina soltiya...

she narrates him everything...

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meesai : raji ma...epdi iruka da..

r : na nalla iruken pa...mathara elam olunga saapadreengala...

meesai : athelam vela velaiku potukaren ma..nee appava nenaichu kavala padatha..unaku velai elam sowriyama thana iruku,...ethana

prachana irundhalo,...ilana vela romba irundhalo odane vandhuru da..

r : athelam onnum ila appa...na anupina courier vandhucha pa...

meesai : atha en ma kekara...nee anupina puthu thuniya iniki uduthitu koviluku poitu vandhen,...ayya, aachi ku kooda romba pudichathu ma...

r : pudichurundhadha appa...

r feels happy...

meesai : neee pani appa ku ethavathu pudikama poguma...

r smiles...

meesai : raji ma ethana prachanaiya...

r : illainga appa..

meesai : velaila prachana na ooruku vandhuru da..appa odane kalyanam kati veka elam adam pudika maten... apo panina mari unna

padutha maten..un ishtam etha seiyanumo sei ...seriya

r : thanks pa...

meesai : seri ipo sollu appa ta,enna vishyam...

r : onnum ila pa...

meesai : apram en da oru mari pesara..

r : athu vandhu...office la nanga vela nalla senjatha paarati, engala velila kootitu poranaga... athaaan

meesai : velila na enga ma..

r : maamallapuram nu oru edathuku pa... enayum vara solranga...

meesai : poitu vaa ma..appa pudhu thuni elam anupi vekatuma...kaila kaasu iruka...ilana appa podava...

r : appa nejamava poga solrenga?...

meesai : en ma... na nee sandhoshama irukanum..kashta padakoodathu nu thaan unaya kalayanam katika solli otha kalula ninen...epo athula unaku sandhosham ilanu therinjadho...apove un sandhosham enavo athuku serinu soliten...

r : athaan theriyume pa..

meesai : un sandhosham thaaan mukiyam... anga porathu unaku pudicha poitu vaa. na thadaiya iruka maten...pudikalaina pogatha...

ethunalum enaku sammadham..

r : enaku pudikalainu ilainga appa..pazhakam ilaye...

meesai : pazhagiko ma... ila thappa irukunu thonina pogatha...un manasuku seri nu seiraatha sei...nee thappu ethuvum seiya maata..athula enaku nambikai iruku...seriya...

.aama enna edamnu sonna..

r : maamallapuram appa,...

meesai : anga beach elaam iruku thaana raji ma..

r : appa enake theriyathu ..epdi pa kalakarenga...

meesai : enoda snegithan oruthan anga pakathula thaan irunthan...beach la porapa paathu badhrama irukanum seriya...

r : seri pa..na pathukaren..aachi ta solirunga..odamba pathukonga appa..na anga poitu call panren....

meesai : seri ma ..pathu poitu va...

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k : flashback super aana athula amma varave ilaye...

r : amma irundha thaana varuvanga...

k : oh m sry raji...

he felt bad fr her...he took a promise then, to look after raji like her mother..and to give her only happiness...

raji was sad,.. k wanted to change her mood...so...

k : evlo nalla appa unaku...

r : athuthaan karthik enaku bayame..

k : ithula bayapada enna iruku...

r : enoda sandhosham thaaan enga appa ku mukiyam..athey mari avara sangada paduthara mari na ethaiyum senjura koodathu...

k : avara en nee sangada padutha pora...

r : ungaluku puriyala karthik na enna solla varenu...

k : ila enaku puriyudhu...sollu...

r : enaku pudicha onna avaruku pudikalana na enna seiya...

k : unaku pudichathu avaruku epdi raji pudikama pogum...avaru thaan ivlo theliva pesararu la...

after some gap...he continues...

unaku pudikanum athaan mukkiyam inga...

she dint reply...

k : pudichuruka ?...

r : etha...

k : nee etha pathi pesriyo atha thaaan...

r : appa ku pudikanum karthik ...oru vela avaruku pudikama pochu na?...

k : apdi elam onnum aagathu..

r : oruvela aachuna?,,,,,apo enna seiya ?

k : puriya vei...

r : enathu...

k : unga appa ku puriya vei... enoda sandhosham ithula thaan irukunu puriya vai..

r : othukalana...

k : othuparu..

r : othukalana...?

k : avara ethirthu seiya vendiyathu thaan raji, vera enna seiya...

r shocked...

r : athu epdi karthik...ivlo paasama irukaru en mela..avara oru nimishathula epdi odhara mudiyum...

k : unna yaru odhara sonna,,, vera mari handle pannunu solla varen...

r lookes at him angrily..

k : vera enna panna solra...

r : ennala athu kanavula kooda muidyathu karthik...

k : ethu

r : neenga solra mari avara ethirtu seirathu...

k : en...

r : athaan ivlo neram sonene...

k dint reply..he angrily stares at her..

r : ithaan karthik en bayame...enaku enavo na thappu panrenu thonudhu...false hope tharenu...

k : ethuva irundhalum nera pesu...

r : na nera thaan pesren...

k : ipo enna solla vara...

r : enga appa ku sangadam tharra ethuvum na seiya maten...

k : muyarchi kooda panna mata nu solria?...na vera mari handle panu nu solla varen..atha kaathu kuduthu keka kooda matra...

r : apdi ila karthik...

k : unga appa konjam naalula avaruku pudicha decision onnu eduthutu..unta opinion keta?? enna seiva...

r : enaku pudikala nu solven...

k : good... adam pudicha...

r : enaku ethu pudichurukunu solven...

k : othukalana?

r : othuparu karthik...

k : nee keta athey kelvi...othukalana??...

r : avaru sandhosham thaaan...

he interuppted...

k : apdina...pozhudhu pokuku thaan elathaiyum paninen nu solla variya?? oru maasama...

she dint expect dat from him...

r : karthikkk... she shouts...

k : nee ipo pesrathu apdi thaan iruku raji...

r : enga appa va ethirthu enala ethuvum panna mudiyathu karthik...avara vida mukkiyaama enaku vera ethuvum thonala...

she said sternly...

k : come again...wat did u say,..

r : avara vida mukiyama thonala nu solren..

k : nambikai varla nu solra..athana...

r : apdi ila karthik...

k : just stop t raji...unaku nambikaiyum venam oru mannangattiyum venam...ivlo kozhaiyana irupanu nenaikala,...

kadaisila elaru mari thaanu prove panta...

r : karthik...

k : unga appa manasu enikume pun padathu kavala padatha...neeye nenaichalum apdi endha oru mudivum edukara mari unaku soozhnilai amaiyadhu...sandhoshaama iru...

saying ds he walked fast...

r starts crying...it was too late,, she started to her room...

she was walking in the streets...she heard some sound and turned to look at tat direction...

she saw 4 men approaching her...she took long steps..she walked fast..they followed her...she started running...

thet chased her...

r ran as fast as she could...

suddenly all 4 stopped chasing her and ran from that place... she was confused... far away she saw silhoutte of karthik...

karthik was coming near her...on seeing his rough physique all 4 left...

as usual she started to cry...she felt relieved...

r mv : namaku enna prachana nalum anga vandhu nikararu..aruthaal solraru, nambikai thararu.,..ivara poi epdi...appa ku therinja enna aagum...othupara... othukalana...

he neared her and said nothing...

r : thanks karthik...

k : un thanks enaku theva ila... time aachu...polamnu nenaikren...he dint speak a word...

r was badly hurt by his silence...he treated her as a third person...

they reached their rooms..

r : gud nite karthik...

he ignored her and wnt to his room and shut his door hard...

she started crying...dat became the first sleepless night for her in her life...

to be continued...


mokkaiya irundha mannikavum 😒

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Posted: 11 years ago
First fight between K R.. Hmm.. so sad...

Nice update..Thank u...

Nicely narrated the story , Dear.

But konjam short update idhu...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dhivya, the argument was simply adorable. Natural flow of conversation, without officially declaring their love for each other, they have gone one step ahead. You've done an excellent job, yet again. Thank you!! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajee71

First fight between K R.. Hmm.. so sad...

Nice update..Thank u...

Nicely narrated the story , Dear.

But konjam short update idhu...

Nanum nenaichen sis short update nu...
Next part rombaaa a perusu athaan sis sry...
R's first gift 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: muthucheenu

Dhivya, the argument was simply adorable. Natural flow of conversation, without officially declaring their love for each other, they have gone one step ahead. You've done an excellent job, yet again. Thank you!! 👏


Thanks a lot... Thanks for d complimen😛


Omggg double post m sry
Edited by dhivya8 - 11 years ago

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