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Originally posted by: Gayathri30
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Dhivyaa i have no words to escribe your writing. A big thank you for updating two parts in one day also!! Nandri :)
PART 16
karthik stopped his bike...instead of going to his home..he went to her hostel...
karthik : raji ...raji enna panra...
karthik : innum kovam polaya madam ku...
raji was carrying on her work...
karthik : na pesite iruken...kandukave matra...
he holds her hand...
karthik : enna paru...
raji : enna
karthik : romba kovama...
raji : apdi elam onnum ila...
karthik : athaan pathale theiryyuthey...
raji : yar melayum kovam elam ila...kashtama iruku appaku major ah ethuvum iruka koodathunu...
karthik : athelam onnume aagathu unga appa ku...
raji remains silent..
karthik : ethuku marubadi dull aagara...
raji : na dhaddhi thaana karthik..
karthik : lusu...
raji : enaku onnume theriyala...dhideernu ipdi appa ku aanathum enna pannaum, enna ethu onnume puriyala...andha pakathu veetukararum ilana na enna panirupen ??enga appa ku enna aagirukum...?
karthik : cha cha,..en mela thaan mulu thappu...na sir ta excuse ketutu attend panirukalam...ivlo serious matter nu enaku theriyathu...
raji : enaku andha nerathula blank agiruchu karthik...
karthik : m sry raji...na vandhurukanum...
raji : na ellathukum ipdi ungalaye ethir paaka mudiyuma karthik...
karthik : en? ethirpaatha enna?
raji : practicala yosichu parunga...
karthik : athelam poga poga seri aagidum raji..vandhu konjam naal thaana aagudhu,,,,neeye ipo muna mari elam ila...improvement theriyudhu...apdiye palagidum...
raji : lakshmi vandha apram thaaan nambikaye vandhuchu...
karthik : m really sry...
raji : cha cha na athuku solala...ena nenaicha enake verupa iruku karthik...neenga enna saamathana padutha unga mela pazhiya potukareenga apdi thaana?
she looked at him...
karthik : olaratha raji...inga vandhadhula irundhu unaku onnuna na vandhu vandhe palagitathaala nee ipdi elam feel panra...
raji : naana epo samalika kathupen...
karthik : na ethuku iruken...na pathukaren...unna tune panira maten...
raji remains silent...he touches her shoulder...
raji : bold agiruvena?...elathaiyum face panuvena?
karthik : kandipa...
raji : neenga pakathula irundha aaruthala,dhairiyama iruku...velagi pona etho theevu la irukara mari thikku theriyama poiduthu...
kathik : na epavum un pakathulaye thaana iruka poren apram enna unaku,...
she was still upset,...he tried to divert her...
karthik : nyayayma paatha nee en mela kova padanum ipo...athu kooda matendra...kovame varatha unaku...thappu senja kova padanum...nee ena nyaniya?...
raji : varum...na kovama thaan iruken...
karthik : atha konji kitte solra...
raji : ila ila...neenga na oru second plz nu sonapa avathu pesirukanum...enaku unga mela semma kovam thaan...
karthik smiles...
karthik : sry...
raji smiles...
karthik : odane erangi vara koodathu...enaya nalla alaya vidanum...
raji : na kovamathaan iruken...
karthik : nejama kovama...
raji : aama
karthik : kadaisiya kekaren,...pesamatiya?
she nodded her head...
karthik : enathu ithu?...oho pesa maata apdindratha thalaya aati solra...ritu ok...kochiko kochiko...
both remained silent...
karthik : kochikita ponnuku oru super news kondu vandhuruken solatuma...
raji : onnum venam...
karthik : chm neethaan feel panuva enaku onum ilapa...
raji remained silent...
karthik : unga appa pathina matter thaan...
she listened to him keenly...
karthik : infact unna pathina...enna pathina matter kooda...
she was elated..she wanted to know dat immediately...
raji : ennanu solunga...
karthik : aasa dosa apdiye ketadhum soluvanga unaku...
raji : chm...tension ethatheenga ennanu solunga...
karthik : mudiyathu...
raji : nanthaan etha pathiyum pesa venam nu sonen la...apdina neenga pesirukeenga...
karthik : ayayao na ethuvum aarambikala unga appa va thaan...
raji : enna sonaru...
karthik : unga appa thaan vandhu...
he stopped...
karthik : adipavi...apdiye emathi matter vaangalam nu pakriya...solla mudiyathu po
raji : plz karthik solunga...
karthik : sonna ena tharuva...
raji : indha kovam cancel agidum..ok va...
karthik : ayaya avlothaana...
raji : apram ena venumam?...
karthik : oru umma thaa...
raji : ayaya chi chi...
kartihk : apdina sollla mudiyathu po...
raji : paduthatheenga karthik...
karthik : mudiyathu mudiyathu...
raji : mudiyati ponga...na enga appa kitaye ketukaren...
karthik : nee adichu keta kooda avaru solla mataru...nanthaan solli aaganum...
she remained silent and was doing her work...
raji made faces and pleaded him...he showed his cheeks and asked for a kiss...she hesitated...he dint say anything,,...
raji : seri vishayatha solunga...apram tharen,..
karthik : nee emathiruva...vaaipe ila..kudu solren...
she was so much excited to know d matter...she kept the clothes aside and slowly walked towards him...
she puts her hands over his shoulder.,,,she was sooo close to him...he felt her breadth...
he showed his cheeks...she turned his face and made him face her...
she said in a husky tone : en chellam la...sollunga plz...
karthik : ipdi elam keta na gaali...onnu kudu solren....
raji : neenga solli..enaku nejama sandhoshama irundha nane kuduthuruven...seriya...ipo paduthama olunga solunga...
karthik said her everything...she was still standing close to him...
he said that her father accepted to postpone her marriage for next 2 years...she was very much happy...
but she dint show dat in her face...she felt like flying but controlled,
raji mv : en chellam sonna mariye appa ta pesitare...she thought...
she wanted to kiss him..but she was tooo shy to do that... she dint show d happiness in her face...
raji : hmm mela solunga...
karthik : mela sollungala avlothaan.....
raji : cha ithaan mattera...na kooda etho perusa ethir pathen...seri ok na varen...
she pulled her hands off his shoulder and tried to move...he pulled her with full force towards him...
she hit him hard...
karthik : enaku theriyum d...ipdi thaan emathuva nu...
raji : ematharatha naana...
she made puppy face...
karthik : nalla ushara thaan d iruka ithula ellaam..na ithaye thaan unga appa kitayum sonen...
raji smiled...
karthik : sirikatha olunga kudu...
raji : athelam mudiyathu enna vidunga...
karthik : kedi athaan na mukkiyamaana vishayatha solama maraichen...
raji : enathu ...
again she was curious...
karthik : no way...
raji : plz...
she begged him...
karthik : vaaipe ila...nee marubadi emathuva...enathaan sandhosha paduthinalum atha kaatikama odiruva...enaku ithelam venuma.,...athelam na solla mudiyathu...
karthik was talking continuously..suddenly she kissed him on his cheeks...
karthik looked surprisingly at her...she looked down...
karthik : raji...
raji : shhh...vishayatha solunga...
karthik : enna raji...pesitrukumbodhu kuduthuta...na ethir pakave ila...inonu thaayen
she gives him an angry look..
karthik : seri seri moraikatha... unga appa nanum lakshmiyum...
raji : lakshmiyum...
he said about meesai's possessiveness...
raji was blinking...
raji : apdina enga appa ku...
karthik : aama...
raji : enathu aama...konjam solungalen...
karthik : unake theriyum...irundhalum na solren...
raji : solunga...
karthik : vera oru ponnu enna katti pudichathu unga appavuku porukala...apdina
raji : apdina..
she was excited...
karthik : apdina enna artham...unga appa vilundhutarunu artham...
raji : enga vilundharu?
karthik : mara manda...
raji : karthik ...
karthik : unga appa ku ena pudichu pochu...
raji : nejamava karthik.,...
karthik : aama raji...unga appa vandhadhum neeye ketu paru...
she hugged him immediately...she cried...
karthik : nee ipo sandhosha padanum...enna nee kochikarapa konjara...sandhosha padrapa azhara...
he parted from the hug and made her look him...
karthik : ipo enna yosana...
raji : avaruku pudichuruku seri...ungaluku...
karthik : enakum avarra romba pudichuruku...evllo nalla appa unaku...nee aniki sonathula thappe ila ipdi oruthara epdi orey nimishathula thooki poda mudiyum...avaru kaatra paasathula kaal vaasi na katuvena ne theriyala
raji : athu epdi ungaluku theriyum...
he frowned...
raji : athu enaku thaana theriyum...neenga kaatra paasatha unarara enaku thaana athu theriyum.,..
he smiled...
raji : ipdi oru appava meeri na onnu paniruken na...neenga en mela evlo paasatha katreenga pathukonga...
karthik : nejamava raji,...
raji nods her head...they both look at each other...he carasses her cheeks...
she closed her eyes...
karthik : pudichuruka.?..
raji : romba...
she repeated the same ques...
raji : pudichuruka.?..
karthik : athaan sonene...unga appa va romba romba pudichuruku...
raji looks at him...
raji : appa va ila ponna...
karthik : ponna pudikaama poguma...
raji : na onnu kekalama
karthik : dhaaralama...
raji : nejamave pudichuruka ungaluku...ivlo kozhaiya irukene...steady mind kedaiyathu...na romba
he stops her...he covers her mouth with her hand...
karthik : enaku indha raji ya thaan pudichuruku...sila vishayangal nee palagikanum...atha pathukarathu enoda porupu... unnoda vela..en mela paasatha katrathu matum thaan...purinjatha...
she cried, she pecked him on his cheeks...she hugged him tightly and continued to cry...
karthik : na enga amma va miss panren...avanga oorla irukanga..athey pola thaan neeyum unga appa va miss panuva,,..ivlo naala andha ekkam namma rendu perukulla irundhurukum...inime iruka koodathu... enna solla varenu puriyudha...
raji : na ungaluku thaguthiya nu enaku inumum sandhegama iruku karthik...
karthik : ithula enna thaguthi elam...enna pesara neenu...
raji : na ungaluku etha aalu thaana..
karthik : mothala nee indha gunatha mathikanum...INFERIORITY COMPLEX...ithaathaan nee thooki podanum...itha thooki potutale..self confidence, boldness elame automaticaa vandhurum...
raji : mathikanum la...ila ungaluku etha...
karthik : nane unna adipen...innoru tharava ipdi elam pesina...nane unna poleernu adipen...
raji : enna adipeengala...
karthik : en adikama? ipdi kanna pinnanu olarina?...
raji : karthik...
karthik : hmmm...
he tightens his grip...and wipes her tears...
she nears him...he looks at her lips...he was about to kiss her but she turned his face
and kissed him passionately on his cheeks...they relished the moment...
she broke the hug and turned back...he pulled her again ...she hit him...
he kissed her cheeks..she closed her eyes...he continued kissing her cheeks, forehead...and
out of shy...she hugged him tightlyyy...he patted her shoulder...
they lived the moment...raji received a call...they parted...
karthik looked at her with full love in his eyes...she too looked at him with love and respect...
he signalled her to attend the call...she did...
lak : hey raji andha rascal ethirtha veetla irukaana paru...half n hr ah try panren edukave matran...ara mani nerathula varenu soltu ponan...ondra mani neram aachu...avan irundha anupi viden...
raji laughs...he hugged raji from behind...and heard wat lakshmi said...
karthik whispered : sir busya irukarunu sollu...
raji smiled
raji : karthik busya irpaara irukum lakshmi...na anupi vekren...
lak : enathu nee anupi vekariya...
raji : ah ha...ila athu vandhu na irukaranu pathutu inform panrenu solla vandhen
karthik laughed..she hit him...
lak : avanavathu leave soltan..na permission thaan potruken...paaru d...ilana nee avathu vaa...
raji : na kalambi varen lakshmi ipove...sry sry...
she cut the call and tried to chase karthik out of her room...he dint allow her...
karthik : un side la almost ella prachanaiyum ok...
raji : apo unga veetla prachana varum nu solreengala...
karthik : en d ipdi thappave yosikara...itha thaan mathiko nu solren...na apdi solla varala... meesai ah crct paniyachu...
raji : athuku...
he neared her again...
karthik : onnu thaayen...
raji : ethana thara karthik...
karthik : kudutha enna koranja pova...
he neared her...locked her within his hands...she was helpless...
raji : karthik plz..unga veetu side la ellam ok aanathum tharene
kathik : enna prachana unaku ipo...
raji : illa koochama iruku...
she looked down...again raji's phone rang...
raji : lakshmi thaan karthik...pathiya indha time eh seri ila..na apram tharen...
karthik : hey lakshmi iruku d unaku...neram kaalam theriyama...
he banged the door...
raji : karthik...
karthik : enna
raji : kovama...
karthik : aama...
raji : seri kochikonga...
she laughed...he left the place...
he reached his home...and she was all smiling after he went..
she was happy dat her father too liked karthik...
she packed everything and was ready to go to the hospital...
to be continued...
friends thanks a lottt fr d comments...m super happy
my clg reopens tom, so i can update only once a week, dats y posted 3 parts today
thanks fr ur cmnts 😊
Originally posted by: shiningstar77
Dhivya...super...super...super...super update..👏👏
KR scenes...so sweettt...karthik romba samathu paiyanthan...aana sema naughty koda...😉😆raji...romba innocent...appa vilunthutara enganu ketkara??..laxmi...hahaha...pavam ava ivana thedikittu iruka...romba thirupthiya iruku intha update..aana inime weekly once...oh..so sad...😭