rajee sis, ungalukaga periiyaaa update 😛
m very sorry gayathri, i completed this part yesttrdy eve tself, but cudlnt post
m sry...
PART 10
all were gettin ready,
lak : hey raji, nanaiya porom thana, chudi pota vasathiya irukathu, skirt top andha mari ethavathu potu ko d..
raji : athelam enaku comfortable ah irukathu lakshmi., chudi thaan...
lak : ivlo ganamana dress ah..thannila nanaija innum ganakum...chudi thana, en chudi potuko...indha...
raji : hmmm ok...hey nee dress change panlaya lakshmi..
lak : athaan pantene...
raji : enna night dress oda vara?
lak : enathu ithu night dress ah, full pant potutu anga poi madichu vituka..3/4th pant vasathila athaan...seri nee mathitu vaaa na wait panren..
raji : hmm ok...
raji showed no interest in getting ready...
lak : hey raji... enna vida unaku indha chudi super ah iruku..neeye vechuko itha seriya...
raji smiles...
raji : summa kalaikatha lakshmi...tops konjam chinnatha irukara mari iruku...
lak : hey ithu short chudi apdi thaaan iruku..summa ethavathu solitrukatha...vaa polam...
all gathered at a place and had tiffin...they brought balls and other things fr playing...
vishnu : raji ithu lakshmi dress thana...
raji : aama vishnu...
vishnu : nalla iruku raji...lakshmi konjam darkaa athanala indha dress avangaluku avalava edukathu..ungaluku nalla iruku raji...
vishnu just says what he thinks...always...
lakshmi hears it...
raji : vishnu ...na ketene ungala ipo...pinadi parunga...
he turns...lakshmi gives him a kottu...
vishnu : aaah...en lakshmi ipo nadu uchi la nachunu vecheenga...lakshmi lakshmiii badhil soltu ponga..
he follows her...
raji expected karthik to praise her beauty...he saw her but ignored her...
koushik : hi raji...
raji : solunga koushik...
koushik : nice dress raji...
raji : thanks koushik...enthu ila lakshmi odathu...
koushik : oh lakshmi odatha fine fine...and u luk beautiful in this dres.,.
karthik overheard dat and started fuming...raji got angry,.,,.she doesnt let anyone to talk ds way to her...
vishnu was like her brother, so dat dint mean wrong to her...so she wanted to bash koushik dat moment...
she started...but then she heard a loud roar...
karthik : KOUSHIKKK...
both turned to his side...
karthik : koushik inga vaangalen...oru help...
koushik : itho karthik...
raji was surprised... she smiled at karthik...
lak : hey karthik rajiya pathiya,, nalla irukula modern chudi avaluku...
karthik : hmmm...
lak :enachu. en dullaa iruka? ethavathu problem ah?...
karthik : athelam onnum ila lakshmi...
lak : seri vaanga poi vilayadalam...
karthik : enaku konjam thalavaliya iruku...neenga poi games elam conduct panunga..na vandhu join panikaren...
lak : hey nee varlana epdi karthik...ena puthusa thala valinu elam solra..vandhu vilayadu elam seriya poirum...
karthik : purinjuko...po goutham kootitu kalambunga...elarum wait panranga paru...
raji looked worried...
lakshmi looked at raji and concluded dat she might be the source of his sorrow...
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all were enjoying a lott...except raji and lakshmi...karthik was n his room...
raji : nee polaya lakshmi...
lak : ila...
raji : en...
lak : karthik ilama bore adikum...
raji : karthik en varla...
lak : unaku theriyatha?...
raji : lakshmi...
lak : inga paru ungalukulla enna prachananu elam enaku theiryathu..aana avan dulla iruka neethaan karanam...
raji : aama nanthaan karanam...
she accepts...
lak : ipo sandhoshama...
she remained silent...
lak : andha corporate ulagathula epayavathu thaan ipdi team oda outing vandhu enjoy panrathey...atha keduthuta
raji : avaru thaan lakshmi enta...
lak : enava venumnalum irukatum raji...unaku theiryuma..project review motha naal night avlo tensionaa irundhan...marunaal apdiye opposite...kediachuruchu nu therinju ithelam namma plan panina odane...avlo sandhoshama irundhan... ithu varaikum nanga indha mari neriya velila vanndhurukom aana avan ivlo happya na pathathe ila..etho excitement avanukulla... athu en nu unake theiryum...
raji listened to her silently...
lak : nethi varaikum nalla freeya irundhan...iniki thaan dulla irukan... etho mood out... team ah vandhutu thaniya poi room la kedaka ethuku varanum avan..
raji : sry lakshmi enalathaaan...
lak : sry solli enna agapoguthu raji... solution kandupudi...
raji : nethi ennachuna...
lak : athu unnoda personal...nethi etho nadandhuruku...neeyum thappa irukalam ilana avanum thappu panirukalam...atha neenga eponalum samalichukonga...atha veli padutha ithu time ilanu thaaan na solla varen...
na ipdi ukandhurukaratha pathutu goutham susan vandhuruvanga... avan oruthanala elarume enjoy pannama poida poguthu...
personal problem ah en group ah vandhurukarapa veli padutharenga... ipdi panrathu enaku seri nu padala...ipo kooda na avana thaaan thappu solren...
pothuva avan ipdi panna koodiya aalu ila... indha murai thaaan...seri vidu... ..nee thaana beach ponum nu aasaiya irundha... poitu vaa...
susan iruka paru...po ava kaiya pudichuko...
raji : ila na pola...
lak : chm...ipo nee adam pannatha raji ...olunga po...
raji : onnum venam..
lak : seri na varen variya...
raji : venam lakshmi...
lak : enna kovama...na onum unna thappu solala...seri vaa polam..,,nanum varen,.,,,,time aguthu...
raji : na varla lakshmi...
karthik : seri vaanga polam...
both their faces gloomed...
lak : karthik...thala valinu sonna...
karthik : orey saridon thalai vali neekividum...orey saridon...
lak laughed...
lak : super karthik...kai kudu,..
karthik helped her to get up...
lak : vaa polam...
saying ds she dragged karthik...
raji was still sitting in that place...
kartthik : enna d ipdi iluthutu pora...
lak : vaa vaaa...apram thala vali poi vayiru vali nu room la ukkandhuka pora...summa vaaa..
karthik turned back and looked at raji... she too lookd him...
all were playing, by spashing water on each other...
raji saw them playing...
though karthik was in water,playing, singing and having fun,,,he had his eye on raji too...
raji started to play wid the sand..she was building a house...
koushik and vishnu sat near raji...they wr tired ...so they came to rest for sometime...
koushik : raji nenga varlaya?...
raji : ila koushik,,,
koushik : yenga?
raji : enaku kadal na bayam koushik..
she lied...
vishnu : haha chinnapula thanama iruke raji...engala meeri ungala matuma ala thookitu po poguthu..summa vanga...
raji : thookitu pochuna...enga appa ku neenga badhil solreengala...neenga kaalam poora saapadu poduvengala avaruku...
vishnu : ayayaa abasagunama pesinale indha vishnu ku pudikathu...onum aagathu vanga raji...
raji remained silent...
vishnu : ayaya indha ponnu mannula veedu katta anga irundhu maamallapuram vandhuruku...
raji smiled..
vishnu : nallla kattunga..mudinja ullara poi soru aaki veinga...vandhu saapadrom...
they both left...
karthik culdnt see her in pain,,,,he reached her...she dint note him
karthik coughed...she turned to his side...
karthik : m sry/...
raji : nanthaaan sry solanum...
karthik : na nethi konjam over ah thaan pesiten...kova patuten...
raji : ila ila...
karthik : enna pesa vidu... itha pathi elam pesrathu romba early nu enaku thonudhu... prachana varathuku munadiye atha pathi bayapadra aalu na illa..vandha dhairiyama face panuven...avlothaan... ipdiye ellarum irukanum nu ethir pakarathu thappu thaaan...
after a gap...
m sry...na itha pathi pesa vendamnu nenaichen... summa potu manasa kolapikathu...nadakarapa pathukalam......relax ah iru,... avlothaan...
raji : avlothaana...
karthik : vera enna... ipothaan etha pathiyum think panni kolapikathanu sonen... oru tharava sonna purinjupa nu nenaikaren...
raji : hmmm...
karthik : ethir kaalathula la varra problem nenaichu feel panna aarambicha nigazh kaalam naragam agidum... appa ipdi nenaiparu..ivan ipdi nenaipan...enna seiya...thappu panroma?...indha ennatha elam vittu thallu mothala...
ethayume think panatha...varrapa pathukalam... LIVE THE MOMENT...dats all...
raji : puriyudhu...
karthik : seri vaaa...vandhu jothila aiyikiyam aagu ...
raji : apdina...
karthik : engaloda vandhu serndhuko nu sonen...
saying ds karthik got up...she expected him to give his hands...he dint...
she got up herself...and they went towards to beach,,,,,
vishnu : paatheengala koushik..namma kooptapa varala...ipo parungalen...
koushik : ithenna pudhusa vishnu...
lak : hey raji vaa vaa...
raji : sry lakshmi...
lak : hey lusu en sry solra...seri vaa vaa...inum konjam thooram polama...
raji : bayama iruku lakshmi... pothume...
lak : na iruken la raji...nethi ulla ponum ulla ponumna...ipo bayapadra
raji : neethana sonna neriya peru adichutu poranga nu...ingaye nikalam...bayama iruku...
lak : onnum ila vaa...
karthik : avathaaan bayapadra la romba ulla pogatha lakshmi...be careful...
lak : apdi elam deal la vitra maatanga pa un aala...pathukaren...
karthik : aalunu elam asingama pessatha...na andha side poren...pathuko...
lak : poda poda...
r smiles...
susan : lakshmii...inga vaaa..jollya iruku...paarai iruku nikka vasathiya iruku d...vaa paarai la eri ninnu oru selfie eduthukalam...
lak : itho vandhuten susan..hey raji vaa polam...
raji : na varla nee poitu vaa lakshmi...
lak : ok athu varaikum ingaye nikanum...ulla poga koodathu...
raji : nee sonna kooda na poga maten pa...poitu vaa...
raji was alone now...
a big wave was nearing...she got scared...
at the same time...koushik neared her...on seeing koushik nearing her...she moved
koushik was not a bad guy, but for some reasons she hated him...
raji : aah lakshmi itho vandhuten...iru varen...
she moved from that place and reached the place whre 2 girls were taking pics...
she went near the rock and found that the girrls wernt lakshmi and susan...
raji : enga ponanga..inga thaana selfie eduthukarenu sonanga?...
she was searching...
karthik, searched for raji and lakshmi and found them nowhere...
karthik got tensed...
karthik : lakshmi...oyeee lakshmi...enga iruka?...
goutham : nee evlo kathinalum reply panna mataluga...anga paaru... paaraiyin mun pugaipadam...raga ragama pose kuduthu selfie eduthutrukanga..
karthik laughed...he thought that it was raji and lakshmi,,..
goutham : susan kum selfie paithiyam pudikumnu na nenaikave ila...paakathaan verapa katikara pola...
karthik stunned...he was shocked...
karthik : enathu susana...athu raji ilaya?...
he neared them...
karthik asked shockingly : lakshmi raji enga?... un kooda thaana irundha,,.,
lak : ava angaye thaaan iruka da..paru...
karthik : enga?...anga ilaya..
lak : nalla paru da...anga paaru..she showed her hand...
but raji wasnt there...
karthik : neeye paru avala kanum...
lak : anga iruka solitu thaana vandhen...iru pakalam..nee tension aagatha...
karthik : hey unaku arivu iruka ilaya,...un porupula thaana irundha.,..ipo photo edukarathu romba mukiyama...konjamavathu common sense iruka
lak : tension aagatha karthik..na poi thedi pakren...
karthik : tension aagathaya...varra kovathuku unaya,...venam...na poi thedaren...ethavathu aachu..... he fumed...
ila ila onnum agathu...na poi pakren...,..he cooled down himself...
lak : karthik na ethuvum panla ...na avala...
karthik : neenga onum panla madam...nenga photo eduthukonga nalla... vidha vidhama pose kudunga...na poi pathutu varen...
lak started crying : en da ipdi elam pesara...
he left the place...
lak and susan started searching...
lak : raji..enga pona raji...
she cried,..
susan : azhadha lakshmi...inga thaan irupa...enga pona ...oru edathula nika sonna nikka matala..ellaraiyum tension pannitu...adhigaprasangi...
lak : ila susan...en mela thaaan thappu..ava bayandhute irundha...periya alai vandhapa elam bayapatta...ulla poga venamnu solite irundha...vitutu vandhadhu en thapu thaan..ava matum kedaikala...nanum poiruven...
susan : lusu...enna cinema dialog ah...summa kanna kasakatha lakshmi...vaa thedi papom...nallathu thaan nadakum...dhairiyama iru...
karthik donno wat to do...he was crying... raji raji...
karthik : rajiii...enga iruka...
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raji : lakshmi enga pona...
she dint find lakshmi..so she decided to get back to the place whre all were playing ...and found no one der...
raji mv : enna ithu..elarum inga thaana irundhanga..yarayum kaanume...enga ponanga...
all dispersed and were searching for raji...some wnt to room, some deep inside the water...
raji went to the other side of the rock and started shouting...she was on the verge of crying...
raji : lakshmiii...susan...enga irukeenga...
she heard someone calling her...it was her KARTHIK...
karthik : rajiii...
she became happy...but she couldnt locate him...
r mv : brammaiya irukumo ?... elarum enga ponanga..bayama iruke...kadavuley....
till then she was shouting lakshmi and sussan's name...now...
raji : karthikkk...
she cried...ds time he heard her...
he hurried to the other side of the rock...
she was shouting,facing the other side... he was relieved...
karthik : rajii...
she turned back...her eyes wer wet wid tears...he kept his hands on her cheeks...
karthik : enga d pona...
saying ds he hugged her tightlyyy...
she could feel the tension and stress he was undergoing moments ago...
raji : onnum aagala karthik...naa vandhu,..
she couldnt finish... he was still crying...
she too cried...
lakshmi pulled her out of his hug,...
lak : enga d poi tholanja...na una angaye thaana nikka sonen...
raji : lakshmi, nee pona apram...
lak : pesatha...usuru poi usuru vandhuruchu theriyuma... una kaanumnu padhariye poitom elarum... nee chinna pulla mari kaaranam solra/..
raji : sry lakshmi...
lak : pesatha...
raji : plz lakshmi sry... she went near her...she took lak's hand...
lak : onnum venam pesatha...
raji hugged lakshmi...
raji : thappu thaan lakshmi..m very sry...
lak : usure poiruchu raji.... both cries...
susan : hmmm ethuku azharenga...vanga mothala raji kedaichutanu soluvom..theditruka poranga...
karthik looked at lakshmi..she dint c him...
vishnu sees the place where raji was building house out of sand...
he gets emotional...
vishnu : avanga kolandha mari koushik... manasalavula chinna pulla thaan...avangaluku elam ethavathu aagirundha kadavul nu oruthar ilanu thaan artham...
koushik : onnum agirukathu...aagiruka koodathu..
koushik couldnt speak further,,,
goutham : vishnu anga parunga,...lakshmi, susan elam varanga...
he dint turn,...
goutham : raji oda varanga parunga...poi kepom ennachunu...
smile appeared in his face automatically...he rushed to her...
vishnu : yenga enganga poneenga...oru nimisham bakkunu agiduchu...
susan : elarum valachu valachu athey kelviya kekarenga...shabbba.. athaan vanta la...vanga poi lunch saapdalam, pasikuthu...
vishnu : ivanga enna sir konjam kooda unarchiye ilama irukanga... ipo puriyudhu epdi divorce aachunu...
goutham : ava romba practicalaana aalu vishnu,...vidunga avala...
vishnu : romba kashtam thaaan...
lakshmi was dull thoroughout and vishnu noted dat...
raji also noted that karthik was still not out of the last night incident... he was maintaing some distance...raji was hurt by his behaviour...
to be continued...
kr ,vl convo followed by kl patchup???????? ...
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