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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shiningstar77

Asusual Very nice update,Dhivya...👏

Raji...pavam iva...romba innocent...ippo ketkava venum...romba varuthapadra...vishnu avaluku boost kodukarathu aaruthalana vishayam...

karthik...hmm...ivan laxmiya pathi kavalai padum pothu,enaku etho maathiri irunthuchu...but avan rajiya pathiyum ketukitte than irunthan rajitaye...rajithan vaya thorakalai...raji pannathu romba correct...aana ava romba thindati poita...

vishnu...super...super...karthiktaa vishayatha pottu udaichutan...😆

aana namma herooda kovam chanceaillai...😆😆

Thanks for the superb update ma..

adutha update nalaike venum...ok😉


Thanks a lottt Bro...
Inike update panna try panren Bro kandipa
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: plily

First my heartfelt congrats dear for your result 👍🏼

Latea update kuduthalum superna update thaan.
Feel so sorry for Raji . Vishu trying his best to change her mood. Nice friendship between Vishnu & Raji 😊

Aww co cute Karthik , thinking about Raji. Missing her badly .So much love for his Raji 😳

Karthik's call make Raji to pour out all her pain but I'm disappointed with Karthik , knows that he care for Lakshmi but what about Raji . Asking a girl to out in the night its too much pa. Raji hiding her sorrow knowing it will make him sad if he knows. Feel her pain. 😭 . I like her character such an understanding person.

I agreed with Vishnu. Karthik now your just think about Raji cause Lakshmi is his responsibility now.

Thanks dear.

Heyyy dear thanks a lottt
Karthik ku lakshmi mela romba paasam... En nu koodi seekram theriya varum dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Smiles-20

Congratulations on an awesome score!

Oh my gosh, such an emotional episode this was! Raji stressed and losing confidence and wanting to share this with Karthik, then she doesn't tell him and hides everything, those emotions were deep. I like how KVRL are there for each other. The way Vishnu tries to make Raji feel better and hope she is safe was nice to see, also with the concern K had on Lakshmi. I have to admit I got a little upset with Karthik near the end seeing Raji, just because she didn't get the chance to tell him everything. But I liked how he recollected their old memories. Hope everything works out well, please update soon.

For the frst time such a long comment from u thanks a lottt f dat...
Ll update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ramya05

Congrats on ur result... Semma cute update...

Pls keep giving us update..

Thanks a lottt
Ll update regularly
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waiting for your update dhivya..Today possible a...
I cant wait where Raji is...How K react to it..KR conversation irukumaaa...
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 21

"what the hell hav i done"...his head was swirling...

karthik mv : lakshmi pathi pesarom nu, avala pathiyum kekama...indha raathirila cha...na sonenu ava povala? avaluku theriya venama...avala namma enga pesa vitom...ellam en thappu thaan...

his tension was increasing...

ayooo what would hav happened to her...ena agirukum...kalambirupala?...i ll call her now...rite now....."

he tried calling her...her phone was not reacheable...he hit his head hard...

he cursed himself again and again...he called lakshmi...he knew dat within d short span raji would not hav rched lakshmi's place...

but by chance what if she had reached?? he immediately called lakshmi...

at the same time raji called lakshmi and got an engaged tone...she tried again and again to inform her that she is coming to her home...

but it was engaged...

lakshmi : karthik...sollu da...

she sounded normal...

karthik : lakshmi nee...

lakshmi : enada ipothaana pesinom? un aaluku call panrathuku badhila enaku pantiya?

karthik got confused...

karthik : lakshmi...raji anga ilaya...

lakshmi : dei...anga ipo enna neram...inga thaana raathiri?...thoongariya?...thookathula olarariya...indha raathiri la raji epdi inga...na lakshmi pa...un frndu...nee avaluku call pannu...mathi panita...

so raji is not der...

he sat down n d couch...he was worrying a lottt...

lakshmi : hey karthik?...any prob...

he dint reply...

lakshmi : karthikkk...

he fumed...

karthik : unaku konjam aavathu arivu iruka ?

lakshmi : karthik

she frowned...

karthik : oru mani neram munadi sethuralamnu iruku apdi ipdi nu azhudhute cal panina...ipo ipdi pesara

lakshmi : athu one hr munadi da...ipo i am ok...

karthik : enna vilayata iruka enna patha?

lakshmi : unaku ennachu...en ivlo tension aagara...

karthik : mannangatti

lakshmi : dei

karthik : call panni azha therinjathula?...seri aanathuku apram solla theriyudha?...sense iruka...konjam neram munadi sogama pesara...ipo cool ah pesara...ena lusu aakariya manushana...

lakshmi : na normal aagiten karthik...vishnu inga vandhu...

karthik : neee onnum solla venam...

lakshmi : enaku onume puriyala karthik...en kova padra...

karthik : unaku onnum puriya theva ila...

his tone was harsh ds time...lakshmi was confused...she forgot all the pain she had been undergoing frm mrng...and was waiting fr vishnu very happily,...and now karthik's anger again made her to worry...

karthik showed his anger towards lakshmi...he was angry on himself...not knowing how to express...he just poured all his anger on her...

lakshmi : enna prachana karthik...plz...sollu...nee enna solra ne enaku puriyala theliva pesu...

she said sadly...

he just then realised what was he doing...

he did the same to raji few mins before...

karthik mv : lakshmi mela ulla akkaraila...raji enna nelamaila irukanu theriyaama pesi...ipo ivlooo prachana...ipo raji ku enachunu theiryama..lakshmi ta katharom...nammma enna panitrukom?...ipo raji ku enachunu thaan pakanum...raji ku ila vishnu ku call pananum...

enaku theriyum raji ku onnum agirukathu...onnum aagiruka koodathu...

he was thinking a lot...

lakshmi : karthik r u ok...

he composed himself...

karthik : lakshmi...nee ipo ok thaana...

lakshmi : na nallathaan iruken...nee thaan nadu raathirila enna thititu iruka

karthik : athu vandhu...athu onnum ila... saaptiya

he asked without any emotions...his mind was wid raji...he wasnt even interested in knwng the reply...

he thought dat raji's safety was more important than ds...he came to know that lakshmi has been back to normalcy...

but he couldnt rejoice dat as his grl is in trouble...he was not sure whether she ws really in trouble r not...

but he wanted to talk to her...ask sry to her...wanna make sure dat she is safe...

lakshmi spoke...

laskhmi : na nalla iruken karthik...vishnu vandhan...avanuku kooda ivlo feelings irukune enaku ipothaan theriyum...nalla advice panina avan style la...everything is ok...

she continued to tell him what happend...he dint listen...

raji raji rajiii this was running n his mind...

lakshmi : irukiya karthik...

karthik : lakshmi nee ok thana?...seri ok enaku konjam thala valiya iruku na apram pesren...

he gave lame excuses to cut the call...

lakshmi : hey enachu da...en thala vali...tablet vechurukiya..ilana vaangi podu...

karthik : na pathukaren...

he cut the call...

he called raji again...but it was out of reach...

he called vishnu...who was driving fastly in search of raji...he dint pick up d call

karthik mv : vishnu edunga plz plz...enna neengalum sodhikatheenga...eduthu raji ungaloda thaan irukanu solunga plz...ava badhrama iruka kavala padatheenga karthik nu solunga...avala enta pesa veinga...ava kiita na sry ketatha solunga...

he called him again and again...but vishnu dint pick up...

vishnu : lakshmi ...na vara konjam late aagum...inga oru prachana... oru one hr paaru...apramum na varlana...thoongiru namma kalaila pathukalam

laskhmi : enachu vishnu...any prob...

vishnu : athu vandhu...na apram solren...nee kolapikatha..nothing serious...

lakshmi : en neeyum oru mari pesara...karthikum tensionaa irukan..ethayavathu enta maraikareengala...

vishnu : athelam onnum ila...;overa kolapikatha...

lakshmi : raji ku ethana prachanaiya...

she guessed correctly...

vishnu : overa yosikatha nu sonen...na apram pesren...drive panitruken...

he cut the call...

lakshmi was thinking...

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raji stepped out f her hostel after asking permission frm warden

it was tooo dark...she was afraid...

she called lakshmi again...it was busy...

her phone's battery was draining out of charge...a msg poped up to connect the charger...

after few mins it was switched offf...

raji went to auto stand...many were there...she went near an old man

raji mv : ivaru thaan vayasaanavara irukaru...ivar auto laye povom...

raji : anna...anna nagar ponum...

she just then noticed that he was sleeping...

raji doesnt want to disturb him...but at the same time she was afraid to go in other's auto...

she raised her voice...: anna

ds time he woke up...his eyes were red...she thought dat as his deep sleep was disturbed by her, his eyes were reddened...

raji : anna anna nagar ponum...

auto driver : 150 aagum ma...

raji : paravala anna...

auto driver : eru ma...

he was sure that she is new to the city and dats y she agreed to him 150 fr a few kms ride...

his eyes was very red and she got scared...he stopped the auto in a tea shop...

raji : anna en inga niruthareenga...

auto driver : tea kudichutu varen ma...2 nimisham...nee erangatha

raji dint like all these as she wanted to reach lakshmi's place as soon as possible...

she peeped out and got even more scared to see few persons smoking in the tea shop...

ds auto driver was talking friendly with them...

raji : anna konjam seekaram

one among them said : po ya...raathiri nerathula oru pullaiya seekaram eraki vidama, inga vandhu ninukitu irukara...po

another person : enga savaari

auto driver : papa ku anna nagar ponumam...

she overheard all these and dint like the way the auto driver termed her...

raji mv : ivaruku enna patha papa mariya iruku...pillaiyar appa...bathrama poi serndhuta thenga odaikaren...pathuko pa...

all of them were joking there and she got angry...

raji : anna vareengala,..ila na vera auto pudichu poikava...

she gained all courage and sounded harsh...

but she was very scared inside...

auto driver : vandhuten ma...manichuko...

he said while getting in...

raji mv : ayayooo indha aalu kudichurukane...periyavarunu nambi erinom...olunga otuvana? bayama iruke...naliki usuroda irundhena thaan unaku thenga odaika mudiyum...pathuko pillaiyar appa...

she just then realized the reason fr his reddish eyes...she was scared...

auto driver : en ma oru mari iruka...

she dint reply...she remembered karthik's words " bayapadalam thappu ila...namma bayapadrom nu velila theirya koodathu "

auto driver : padichutu irukiya ma...ooruku pudhusa...

raji : athu ungaluku theva ilatha vishayam...

auto driver : seri seri kochikatha papa...

raji : pesama otreengala...

he was drunk so he was continuously speaking throughout the journey but she dint reply...

he dropped her in the place...she got down immediately and gave him d money...

raji mv : kudichutu otiye palakam pola indha aaluku...crcta kondu vandhu serthutan...

she was about to leave...but she had kept her phone in d auto itself...

raji : anna annaaa she called him

auto driver : ena ma...

raji : en phone ah auto laye vechuten...

auto driver : athelam ilaye ma...thedi pathuko...

raji found her phone nowhere...

raji mv : thirutu muzhi muzhikarare...kandipa ivaruthaan eduthu vechurukanum...

auto driver : en ma sandhegama pakara...indhama en phone...phone pani pathuko,...

raji mv : switch off agiruku call varadhunu therinjutu phone ah thararu...thimiru pudicha aalu...

raji : unga phone elam enaku venam...unga auto number matum na pathukaren..

auto driver : ethuku ...

raji : phone ah kanumnu police complaint kuduka poren...apo endha auto la vandha nu kepanga...athaan

auto driver : police ah...iru ma iru ma...ithuva paru...

he gave him d phone

raji : ...ethuku anna indha polapu...inimelavathu nermaiya sambadhinga.

he left the place immediately...

raji mv : 150 vaangitu veetuku velila kooda nipatala...2 sandhu munadiye eraki vitutaru...

she cursed him and walked fast...

she saw a car wid a man inside...he was speaking in phone...

raji mv : enaye paakara mari iruke...enoda brammaiya?

the man in the car looked at her keenly...

raji mv : ennathaan pakaran...pochu...

she walked past the car fastly...she noticed the man getting down frm the car...

she took long steps...he started following her...he said something...

she started to run... he too ran...she heard him saying something to her...

she ran even faster...after few mins she was fully exhausted...

she stopped running...he neared her...she was scared

she was sweating profusely...she sat down n the street...

she dint eat, she was weak...

vishnu : raji nanthaan...en odreenga...

he saw her sitting n d street...he ran fast...lifted her face...

vishnu : nanthaan raji...

she fainted...

vishnu : raji ...raji...

she dint respond...

he called lakshmi...

vishnu : laskhmi un veetuku adutha sandhu ku vaa seekaram...

lakshmi : enachu vishnu

vishnu : vaa na vaa...odane vaa..thanni eduthu vaa.,..

vishnu lifted her and made her to sit in his car...lakshmi reached der...

laskhmi : dei enachu...raji...rajiii...

vishnu : laskhmi..thani eduthu avanga face la theli...thatti elupu...kannathula thattu...mudhugula thechu vidu...seekaram.,..

laskhmi : itho itho...

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karthik tried to call raji...it was switched off...then to lakshmi...she left her mobile at her home...

and then to vishnu ...but he cut the call...

karthik : yaravathu edungalen plz...ivaru en cut panraru...ethana prachanaiya...

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raji was still unconscious...

vishnu : doctor ku call panlama...

lakshmi : iva thaan adikadi mayangi vizhuvale vishnu...therinja vishayam thana,...konjam neram papom...aprama koopduvom...

vishnu agreed half mindedly...

lakshmi : enachu vishnu ena nadandhuchu...

vishnu narrated everything...

lakshmi : ivaluku enna paithiyama...avan sonna odane kalambi vandhuruvala?...enaku cal paniruka venam...

vishnu : unaku thaan paithiyam...phone pani avaruku solla matiya...problem solved nu...

lakshmi : marandhuten...epdi mayakam pota?

vishnu : auto la vandhu eranginanga...romba neram avaru kita pesitrundhanga phone pathi...enaku raji voice mari thaan thonichu...aana avanga ipdi elam adhirndhu pesa matangale dhariyama nu oru sandhegam...na follow paninen...bayandhu vegama poga aarambichutanga

lakshmi : lusu lusu nee raji nu kooptrukalam la...ilana call panirukalam la...

vishnu : phone switched offf...na koopda koopda kaathula vilugatha dhooram odi poranga...na enna seiya dhideernu patha...keela road laye ukandhutanga...

lakshmi : road laye va...

vishnu : aama...apram mayakam potutanga...

lakshmi : karthik ku cal pani solitiya...

vishnu : ila..ivanga mulikatum..ithuthaan mukiyam ipo...

laskshmi : athuvum mukkiyam thaan...enachunu tension la irupan..na solitu varen...

vishnu : nee enavo pannu...na poi doctor kootitu varen...

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lakshmi called him...he answered

karthik : helllo... raji...raji...

he was tensed,...

lakshmi : karthik...raji inga thaan iruka...

he was relieved,excited,happpy...

at the same time he was angry on raji,,...a mixture of many feelings...

karthik : vandhutala...badhrama vandhutala?...epo vandha? thaniyave vandhutala?...ipo thaan uyire varudhu lakshmi...

laskhmi : vishnu thaan kootitu vandhan karthik...

karthik : vishnu hostel poi kootitu vandhara?...nallathu...ava phone not reacheable aave iruke..en vishnu kooda en phone edukala...na epdi thavichu poiten theiryuma...

lakshmi : theriyum karthik...ava thaniya thaan vandha, vishnu hostel elam pola...ava ipo mayakama iruka

karthik : mayakama? enachu ...enna prachana...

his heart skippd a beat...

lakshmi said everything...

he felt a lot...

karthik : inum mayakam theliyalaya...mayakama thaan irukala?

lakshmi : doctor kootitu vara poirukan vishnu...nee bayapadatha...

karthik : romba bayandhurupala? athaan kaaranama irukumo mayakathuku?...

lakshmi : hmmm...

karthik : paavam...enala thaan...

lakshmi : en karthik apdi panina...

karthik : epdi

lakshmi : nejama na azhudhathum tension aagitiya...

karthik : unaku theriyatha...

lakshmi : na azhudha nee tension aagara, oruthi nadu raathiri nu kooda pakama odi vara...inoruthan oru mani neram koodave irundhu samaadhana padutharan...en ipdi

karthik : en na?

lakshmi : en elarum ivlo paasam katareenga...

karthik : chinna vayasula irundhu paasam na ennane theiryama valandhuruka...un mela naanga pasam kaatalana...vera yaru katuva...

lakshmi : amma paasam epdi irukum nu enaku theriyathu karthik ...aana na kandiipa solren...indha alavuku avanga irundhurundhangana en mela paasam vechurupangala nu sandhegam thaan...

she cried...

karthik : chm...ethuku ipo athelam pesitu...

lakshmi : sry karthik ...neeye tensionaa irupa...ipo poi ithelam...enna vidu...ava konjam nerathula mulichuruva karthik...na avala pesa solren,.,.

karthik : hmmm...

laskhmi : saptiya

karthik : ava mulichathum ...motha velaya enta pesa sollu...na kathutruken...

laskhmi : kandipa solren...nee saaptiya...

karthik : ila ila...na ava kitta kovama irukenu sollu...na pesa maten...

lakshmi : chm...ava mulichathum na pesa solren...neenga pesi seri panikonga...nee saptiya...

karthik : auto la vandhuruka paren...ethavathu agirundha...ithula phone ah kudunga nu sanda vera potruka.....phone romba mukiyama ipo...

laskhmi : karthik relax...

karthik : enaku marakaama pesa sollu lakshmi...na wait panite irupen phone call ku.,..

lakshmi : apo nee kovama irukenu sonna...pesa matanu sonna...

karthik : kovam thaan...aanalum enaku ava kitta pesanum...nanthaana thappu panine...nee avala enta pesa sollen...

lakshmi : sonathaiye 100 tharava solra...na kandipa call panna solren...nee saptiya

karthik : doctor vandhutara...

he dint listen to her...

lakshmi : doctor vandhutaru...na poi enanu ketutu varen...apram avala pesa solren...bye...nee saapdu...

she cuts the call...

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lakshmi was sitting n the bed beside raji...nothing was serious,..doctor said that she ll regain her conscious soon...

vishnu left to his home after buying medicines and dinner fr lakshmi and raji...

vishnu : neethaan avangaluku saapadu kudukanum..apram mathara tharanum...na venumna keela car la paduthukaren veetuku pogama...ethavathuna odane koopdu...apram avanga phone charge potru...

lakshmi : nee mothala poi thoongu po...na pathukaren...

vishnu : avanga saapda matenu solvanga...neethaan ooti vidanum...seriya

lakshmi : kandipa vishnu

vishnu : marakaama neeyum saapdu

lakshmi smiled...

vishnu : apram namma plan konjam delay...dinnner ku plan paninom...atha breakfastaa mathikalm seriya..

she smiled again..

lakshmi : nee mothala poi rest edu seriya...bye

he left,,,,,

lakshmi looked at raji lovingly and carrassed her hair...

lakshmi fell asleep...

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karthik was restless,...he was waiting fr her call...

after two hrs...

raji woke up and saw lakshmi beside her...lakshmi woke up immediately and hugged her...

lakshmi : are u ok...

raji : atha na kekanum...nee epdi iruka?

lakshmi : enaku enna na nallathan iruken...

raji : nee romba feel panina thaana karthik enta sonaru...vidu lakshmi ..azhalaama ithuku elam...azha koodathu seriya?...

lakshmi hugged her again

lakshmi : nee epdi inga vandha..nyabagam iruka?

raji frowned...

lakshmi said everything...

lakshmi : ethuku d nadu raathiri kalambi vandha...

raji : nee azhudha nu sonathum kashtam agiruchu lakshmi...sapda kooda ilanu avaru sonare athaan...

lakshmi : athukaga...

raji was about to say someting...

lakshmi : namma apram pesikalam...mothala karthik ta pesu...indha

she gave her mobile...

raji : hmm ok...

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"RAJI CALLING..."

he was flying...he answered the call immediately,...

raji : KARTHIK...

he was waiting fr ds...his name to b called by her...with so much love, care, affection...nothing made him more happier than ds...

he dint respond...

she is safe, she is safe...yesss she is back...she regained her conscious...he was jumping out of joy...

she called him again...

raji : karthik...irukeengala...

raji was waiting fr him to reply...atlast now she can share her feelings wid him...she could understand how bad he would hv felt...

he would hav regretted...he would hav felt guilty...she was sure that he is going to apologise n times...

but she dint long for dat..she wanted her lov to share her feelings...she longed for his lov and care which he showed for lakshmi sometimes ago...

but his ANGER overpowered his LOVE...

karthik : unaku konjam aavathu arivu iruka?...

raji frowned...

raji : karthik...

karthik : na sonna nadu raathiri kalambi poiruviya?

raji : ila lakshmi saapdama...

karthik : athukaaga...

raji : lakshmi paavam la...feel panite irupanu...

karthik : apo na paavam ilaya..

raji : na enna senjen karthik...neenga thaana pathutu vara soneenga..athaan

karthik : na sonna poiruviya?...unakunu suya budhhi ilaya...inga ipo 12 mani...epdi thaniya poga ...ithelam yosika matiya...kalaila poi pakava karthik nu sonnna na enna veemba pudika porena...ilana ivan sanda poduvan...thappa eduthupanu nenachutiya enna pathi?...

what if something bad had happened to her...he couldnt imagine dat and so he vented out his anger on her...

raji : kalaila poirukalam thaan;...aana lakshmi athu varaikum feel panitrupale...avala nenachu neenga feel panuveenga...athaan odane pathutu ungaluku solalame nu

karthik : lusu mari pesatha raji...unaku ethavathu agirundha?

raji : athaan onnum aagalaye karthik...neenga en sidu sidu nu vizhareenga

karthik : na sonenam ...iva ponalam...na madila irundu gudhika sonna gudhipiya nee?

raji : maaten...

karthik : hmm andha vevaram irukula...athu ithula iruka?

raji : madila irundhu gudhicha adi padum...

she joked...

karthik : oho...madila irundhu gudhicha adipadum...rathiri 12 maniku velila pona adi padatha athaan poita la...

raji : na cmdy panina kooda seriousaa eduthukareenga...

karthik : cmdy panra nerama ithu...inga manushanuku uyire poiduchu theriyuma

raji : neenga pesaratha kekave enaku kashtama irundhuchu karthik...neenga evlo feel panreenga nu therinjatu athaan oru vegathula kalambiten...

karthik : nalla vegam,,,, pattikaadu nu ovoru asaivulayum prove panra...call taxi avathu buk panirukalam la...auto la poiruka

raji : call taxi number elam theriyatu karthik...athuku elam timeum ila

karthik : aama etha ketalum theriyathu, bayam...ipdiye solitru

raji : en karthik thitite irukeenga

karthik : unaku ethavathu aagirundha...

raji : badharama vandhuten karthik...na onnnu solata...andha auto kaarar irukar la...avaruta kooda dhairyama pesinen theriyuma ungaluku...

now she tried to explain him regarding her boldness n handling the auto driver...but he was in no mood to listen...

karthik : athu vera..nadu raathiri la avanta poi phone ku sanda potruka...avan apdiye kothitu poirundha enna panirupa

raji : enna neenga...ithukum thitreenga...dhariyama nadandhuruka nu paaratuveenga nu patha

karthik : ethu un dhairiyam road la mayangi vilundhadha...

raji : athu vandhu vishnu nu enaku theriyaama thaan na mayangi...dhidernu oru paiyan follow paninathum enna panrathunu theiryama,...

karthik : athaan ivlo bayam irukula..apram en thaniya pona...vishnu ku mothalaye call panirukalam la

raji : athu panirukalam...apo thonala karthik...

she said innnocently...

karthik : aama unaku onnum thonathu...prachanaiya iluthu vituka matum theriyum...

raji : en ipdi elam pesareenga karthik...romba hurt panreenga karthik...

karthik : aama hurt panranga...inga enaku epdi irundhuchunu theriyuma...

raji : na enna paninen karthik...

she was really hurt...tears wetted her cheeks...

karthik : nee onume panla ma...pothuma

raji : enaku thaan onume panna theiryathey karthik...prachanaiya iluthu vituka matum thaan theriyum...elarum enala prachana thaan...

saying ds she cuts the call...

he frowned...

karthik mv : overa kathitomo...raji phone ah edu, phone ah edu...

raji was already having inferiority complex, after getting scolded by vishwanathan sir, she concluded dat she was fit for nothing

but after taking an auto in late hours and on successfully rchng the desitination ...she encouraged herself that, she has changed a bit...

she wanted to share that happily wid her karthik...but the event turned upside down...

karthik dint really mean to hurt her...but she was the only person for him, on whom he has rights to pour his anger...

he called her again...she cut the call...

she was crying...so does he...

karthik mv : sry raji...

he repeated this again and again...

she dint pick up his call...

of course he knows how to convince his koilpatti...

he texted her...

"A MESSAGE FROM KARTHIK..."

she was sure it was a "M SRY RAJI "msg, but...

it was..."I LOVE YOU,...YOU ARE MY LIFE"......

automatically her lips curved...

she called him the next moment...

to be continued...

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precap

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karthik wiped his tears

karthik : hey lusu...en vaazhkaila mukkiyamanavangala en amma ku aduthu lakshmi na...ivanga elathukum munadi neethaan...athu kooda unaku puriyalala?

raji was crying...

karthik : pesamaatiya...

she was still crying...

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sry fr dragging...

couldnt edit, net prob so edit panala...apdiye type paninatha i posted...

mistakes irundha manikavum...

thansk all

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Posted: 10 years ago
Such an emotional update dear.
Karthik's anger . Hero love panalum over , kovamum over.
Raji romba bold autodriver keeta pesina , paravaliye.
Vishnu's care for his loveable ladies , so cute.
Karthiks anger over take his love shows that Raji is his life.
Thank you dear.
Precap pothu engala knock out panaringale . Waiting dear.


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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovable update dhivya..loved karthik raji phone conversations so much..precap sema..waiting for next so much..eppo next
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update,Dhivya...👏
Karthik mv ...no chance...pinran payan...thaan pannathu thappunu therinchu avalavu varutha padran...laxmita kathiye vittutan...super..

Raji...romba pavam...cellphonela chrgeum illama,autodriver vera etho maathiri irunthathu...hmm...but raji situationa romba smarta handle pannita...appayum kartik sonnathuthan avaluku mindla vanthuruku...very nice to see that...👏

VL eppavum pola supporting pillarsa irunthanga rajiku

KR convo...ada karthik...karthik...ivan kovama naan thappu solla maaten...hehe...payan raji kidaicha aanathathula kathi theerkaran...carry on HERO..😳😆

Precap..interesting...waiting😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very emotional update...
Padichu mudikaiyila thaan tension kurainjathu... happaa..

Karthik thaviya thavichadhai appadiye visualize panra madiri irundhadhu ungha narration... 👏

Ivvolo thavikkum podhe ippadi kobam varuthey, Karthik ku... haaapppaappa... raji mattum bayapadalei... enakkum bayama irundhadhu...

Raji... pavam pa... ava solrathai kooda kekamma K rombha thirtaan... akkaraiyila thittinaalum...oru oorkara ponnai rombha paduthuraan... aanalum semaiya irundhadhu... hope he is tuning her to face the difficult situations...super

Hats off to ur super dialogues and for the narrating skill... 👏👏👏

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