A Swaron FF : Nothing lasts forever epilogue updated pg 108 - Page 27

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anubhutijain

Thanks fr d pmm...loved dis update...I actually wanted swayam to feel guilty. ...hope sharon will be alright...swayamz misery, guilt, pain...was explained fabulously😊 update soon...n update ur other works too...will be waiting fr a pm!😃


thanks!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mansi98

It was such an emotional update😭

Poor swayam😭

He is lonely😭

Nobody is der with him😔

Bt even dey r right😡

Hw could he think like dat😡

Love depends on trust😊

If der is no trust der is no place of love💔

He has done a big mistake😡

Hope sharon accepts him😊

Update soon😊

N thankx fr d PM😊

Love

Mansi😊


i love your colour coordination

thnks for d wonderful comment...

love you behena
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: firefly..

Hey Ani,

This is superb, the way u described every emotions was just perfect. Though I wanted Swayam to get a good reality check from his closed ppl but I was feeling bad for Swayam too. Coz u know Swayam is one of a kind of person jispe gussa hona bohut mushkil hai.
Update soon yaar Ani. Its getting damn interesting.
Love,
Sree 🤗.


thanks yaa!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: snehaswaron77

Gosh I never knew such an mind blowing & emotional SWARON ff existed...Read all the chapters in one go...gosh this FF is bloody emotional & heart wrenching...
I hated swayam in few chapters..
Taani was right swayam is lost somewhere...
This is not our loverboy our majnu
Moreover sharon's swayam...
How cud he hurt sharon to such an extent...
Glad finally misunderstandings are over...
OMG sharon...please save her please don't make her die...
Those lines by sharon for swayam in the last chapter after getting shot by bullet...were heart wrenching...trust me I literally cried reading it...
A very emotional & commendable update indeed...
Loved it just loved it...
Thanks for the pm...dear...


thanks yaa...loved the comment!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

SORRY FOR DISTURBING YOU...THIS FAST UPDATE IS FOR KANICA..SHE DEMANDED SOMETHING FROM ME FOR THE FIRST TIME SO HAD TO KEEP IT


PART 9 : LOVE THAT IS UNDYING

Swayam's breathing stopped as he saw the red light of the OT switch off... he immediately rushed in front of the OT waiting for the doctor...

The doctor came out and before he could speak swayam and rey together threw him a hundreds of questions...

"Sharon kaisi hai...she fine right...???" Swayam finally asked fearing for the worst...

"haa...humne bullet nikal di hai... thank god bullet chest pe nahi ..uske upar shoulder blade par lagi thi... wo abhi bhi critical hai but we expecting that her condition will improve once she gets conscious...humne unhe ICU pe transfer kar diya hai... wo abhi behosh hai par kuch hi der mein hosh aa jayega..you can go and see her..." the doctor smiled...

Swaym breathed heavily closing his eyes thanking god... all of them moved the her cabin and as swayam was about to open the door , his mom stopped him...

"tum andar nahi jaoge...tum Sharon se nahi miloge..." She said coldly...

"pls mom...aisa mat kahiye...mujhe Sharon ko dekhna hai..i want to see her...don't do this mom..." he said desperately...

"aunty ise andar jane dijiye pls..." rey tried to make his mom understand...

"nahi rey... I don't want k swayam Sharon k paas jaye...I don't want k swayam Sharon ko hurt kare..pehele hi bohut kuch sahe liya hai meri bacchi ne... ab aur nahi..." Swayam felt that his life was taken away from him...

He has done such a thing that his mother thinks that he will hurt his Sharon if he goes near her... he has lost all rights...

He looked expectantly at taani ... She was crying looking at him...she could feel his brother in pain...

Swayam stood there in the corridor while the three of them moved in...

As they moved in Sharon slowly opened her eyes... She was not feeling the pain of the wounds because of the high anesthesia...

"Sharon beta...kaisi hai tu???" swayam's mom caressed his cheeks... She just smiled and nodded...she didn't have the strength to speak... But she immediately looked at the other side towards rey and taani and found swayam missing...

"rey..taani... swayam kahan hai??? Wo thik to hai na...use kuch hua to nahi...?? Kya shivam ne use kuch kiya?????" Sharon whispered breathing heavily... when she saw swayam missing all she could think was shivam might have hurt swayam...

"shhh...relax Sharon..." rey came forward and cupped her cheeks... " swayam bilkul thik hai...bahar khara hai wo..."

Sharon's heart broke...

"kya wo ab bhi mujse naraz hai??? Wo mujhe dekhna bhi nahi chahta nah??? Pls ek bar use kahiye na andar ane k liye... Mamma..aap bolegi to wo manega... bas ek baar fir use taang nahi karungi..." She sobbed

Three of them were shocked to see Sharon saying this for swayam even after he has hurt her so much...

"Sharon we know kya hua hai...swayam ne kya kia hai tumhare sath... let me tell you one thing...swayam ne tumse jhut bola tha beta...your dad's loan has been paid off...you need not worry about that..." His mom said... and rey continued...

"aur swayam ko bhi sara sach malum hai... aur aunty ne hi use andar aane k liye mana kiya hai..." he said softly...

Sharon got hyper...

"mamma...pls aisa mat kijiye ... Use andar aane dijiye... Rey tumne swayam ko sara sach bol diya...ab to wo aur bhi guilty feel kar rahe hoge... I know him too well...swayam mujse bohut pyaar karta hai... use ye sab pata chal chukka hai matlab wo tut chukka hai rey... Tumne use sambhala????" rey looked down... Sharon understood that rey has not talked to swayam...

"taani????" Sharon looked at her with a lot of hope but she saw her cry emotionlessly...

"taani... Bhai hai wo tumhara... Swayam tumse bohut pyaar karta hai..usne jo bhi kiya tumhare liye kiya aur tumhi usse baat nahi kar rahe ho... kitna hurt hua hoga wo... ho kya gaya hai tum dono ko rey taani..." She cried with frustration...

She sobbed and looked at his mom...

"mamma... he really loves you... aap pls swayam se gussa mat rahiye...wo bardash nahi kar payega... Swayam ne jo bhi kiya jaan buj ke nahi kiya mamma...haa mai bhi gussa hoon par pls mamma...pls..." her voice choked...

"thik hai bhejti hu mai use andar..." Three of them walked out and saw swayam sitting on the bench outside the ICU...

"andar jao...sharon wants to see you..." His mom said and his face lit up...

" usi larki hai wo jise tumne itna dard diya... wo dekhna chahti hai tumse ...milne k liye taras rahi hai wo...mai tumhare liye nahi Sharon k liye allow kar raha hoon tumhe andar..." she said coldly...

Swayam nodded softly and went in...

As swayam came inside the cabin Sharon looked staright into his eyes with a huge grin in her lips and tears in her eyes but swayam never met her eyes...he felt too shallow to look there...

"swayam..." she whispered...


LEAVE YOUR LIKES N COMMENTS...


LOVE , ANI

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Posted: 11 years ago
RES
UNRES
GOD DIDU
THAT WAS SUPERB
FEELJNG BAD FOR SWAYAM
NO ONE TALKED TO HIM
AWS SHARONS LOVE IS SO TRUE
AFTER BEARING SO MUCH SHE STILL LOVES HIM
AWESOME DIDU
THANKGOD SWAYAM MOM LET HIM GO IN
THANK U FOR UPDATING IT FAST FOR ME DIDU
LOVE YOU
UPDATE SOON
-LOVE,
KANICA

YAYY
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Edited by taashareyam - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
swaron are badly hurt yr.. sharon still loves him inspite of all that.. swayam is feeling guilty.. bt sharon is there with him.. they will overcome from it soon thanks 4 d pm dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res😊
unres
huff
finally m unresing it
sorry fr dat
bt ny exams were der
so sorry
coming 2 d update
i loved it
finally she is safe
bt dey didnt let her meet him
tats unfair
bt m happy dat sharon called him
bt y u stop it at such a point
nw wat will happen
wana know
update soon
n thankx fr d PM
Love
Mansi
Edited by Mansi98 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww...it was awesome...
Feeling bad fr swayam...nobody is talking to him...
Plz plz plz do update soon next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear
I so knew it Sharon gone blast on everyone
now early waiting for swaron convo

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