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Posted: 11 years ago
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should I upload 4th part today
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yes
ofcourse
yeh bhi puchne wali baat hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishra123

Yes
ofcourse
yeh bhi puchne wali baat hai

naa buddy I kept a target for each post like I should update every part in alternate pages.
but no one replies few people likes and goes and few wont even mind indication not good part.
so i need permission na to continue.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

should I upload 4th part today

Yes 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 4

Scene starts with Ishita crying and thinking over everything happened because of her.She then remembering every moment happened before on how Raman reacted when Mani was near by or in call.

She tried to go to her room but she was stopped by Romi.Romi informs her that Mrs bhalla have told him not to let her enter .

Ishita got devastated as she lost entry to her own house.No one is ready to believe her.

Then she was crying whole day sitting outside and she is unable to do anything.Mani comes there.

Ishita don't know whether to blame him for her condition or blame herself.

Mani "Ishita kyaa huan tum yahan kyaa kar rahen hon.Wahan Raman hospital mey hain aur tum yahan kyaakar rahen hon."

Ishita was crying not speaking anything.Then to her misfortune Mrs Bhalla comes there at same time.She sees them together and gets angry.She keeps a disguisted face and goes to her house without speaking any thing.

Ishita sees her and asks .

Ishita "Mummyji Raman kaisa hain.?"

Mrs Bhalla "Kyon abhee bhee maarney kaa iccha nahen gayen.Tum donon ney tho ..."

Mani gets angry on accusation Ishita is getting and counters it and defends Ishita .Thsi will make the situation worse and MRs Bhalla is no where ready to forgive Ishita.

Mrs Bhalla "Tumney kabhee Raman ka bhalaayi chahey ho tho ek kaam kar usskey akhon key saamney na rahon.Who jabh bhee tumhey dekhegaa tumhaara dhoka yaad aayega.Please chaley jaon yahan sey."

Ishita "Mummyji mujhey ek mauka tho deejiyen mujhey saabith karney key liyen mainey who galath matlab sey naheen bola.Please mujhpar vishwaas keejiyen.Main Raman sey pyaar karthee hun.Main Raman ke bhina nahen jee sakthee."

Ishita pleads Mrs Bhalla and finally she gives tiem for three days to proove her innocence on a condition that Ishita has to leave this town if she din't proove her innocense.

Mrs Bhalla leaves telling her to proove her innocennse in three days.

Mrs Bhala "Lekin tum iss ghar mey nahen aasakthee aur hospital bhee nahen jaogee."

Mrs Bhalla "Aaj tumhaarey wajaha sey ghar mey kissey ko chain nahen hain.Ruhi wahan Raman key pass bhaithkar ro rahen hain."

Mrs Bhalla "Raman ko chodo.Tumney Ruhi key baarey mey kasiey bola.Ek pall bhee yaad nahen aaya.Who wohee bache hain jissney tumhey apney maa bulaaya.Tumhy apnaa maa banaaya.Tumney Ruhi ko bhee chodney kee baath ke.Main ney tumhaarey jasiey aurath ..."

Mrs Bhalla leaves from there.

Ishita is crying.

Mani "Ishita kasiey saabith karogee tum.Main boldoo kyan huan."

Ishita "Koi vishwaas nahen karega.Main khud solve karloongi."

Ishita "Abh yeh merey ladaayi hain mujhey akeley karnaa hoga."

She goes to Iyer house.She faces same situation there as evertyone thinking she is the reason for Raman's condition.

They scold her for her carelessness and situation she made for herself.

Ishita locks herself inside a room and starts crying thinking how to proove her innocense.

Then she gets an MMS over the remmaining part of conversation.Followed by a message from annonymous number that she will get that part of MMS only when she provides 10 laks and she shpuld nopt tell to anyone.

Ishita tries to forward that mms and message but it gets corrupted and gets deleted before she can do it.

Ishita "Kaun hain who jho merey zindagee sey khel rahan hain."

Ishita "Main abhee key abhee das laak kahan sey laun."

Ishita "Mani sey?nahen pehley hee baath itnaa bigad hgayan hain main abh mani sey nahen."

Then she decided to ry all possible ways and sells her car,withdraws from all her accounts.

Then when she finally gets meeting point and she goes to meet there again she got misleaded as Mani enters their and they skip away breaking the deal.

Then on other side.Ruhi was crying sitting beside Raman.

Ruhi "Papa aap uthjaon naa.Nahen tho main bahuth rooungee.Aap bhee mujhey chodkey jaogey."

Ruhi "Sab log ,ujhe chodkey kaayengey.Shagun mama ishimaa abh aap bhee."

Ruhi "Aaap good boy hon naa.Sab baath sunthey ho naa .Papa please uthjain na."

Ruhi was crying loudly when Nurses ask her to leave the room she was shattered and she want to stay with her father.

Ruhi "Papa please aap world key best papa hon naa.Aap uth jaon naa.Main aapko chodkey kahen nahen jaoongee."

Even doctors got tears seeing Ruhi crying.They let her stay there.She was broken but she is the only hope that Raman will be alright.

Then Ruhi was crying holding Raman's hand and she feels Raman hand closing hers and shee feels movement.

Ruhi shocked but they realize Ruhi's crying is working and they immediately start treatment.

Raman starts responding and giving posoitive reaction.Ruhi din't leave even once .She became hard after betrayel of Ishita.She now wanted to be just with her dad whatever happen.She stopped crying.

Three days passed Raman was discharged from hospital and as condition Ishita left the place as she was unable to proove her innocense.No one know where she went.

Raman was sent back to Mumbai to cause diversion from this conditions.Ruhi went along with him .Everyone tried to convince her but she was adamant over decision that she will be always there for her father wherever he is.

Raman took her along with him.His sole reason for survival his daughter.

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Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
kya update ahin boss...
u r a genius...
loved so much...
cant ruhi's crying...
who the hell is behind it...param r ashok..
so new love stry in mumbai...
im suprb xcited...
waitng fr nxt...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shavi2311

kya update ahin boss...

u r a genius...
loved so much...
cant ruhi's crying...
who the hell is behind it...param r ashok..
so new love stry in mumbai...
im suprb xcited...
waitng fr nxt...

i dont know which part you are calling genious.
but i myself compressed it hating to write mani part in it.

yup story will start in mumbai again mani will be there but story will be different
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
So is isheta also in mumbai
Was it parm jesna mms send kea
Exited yaar
Nice update waiting for the next part
Wat about ur other updates long time no updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

i dont know which part you are calling genious.
but i myself compressed it hating to write mani part in it.

yup story will start in mumbai again mani will be there but story will be different

im talkng abt part 4... i called u genious bcoz u always turns the stry in a right way nd acnt bored of ur stories...always u amaze me in each part...yea mani trck kis nt intrstd bt u turn the stories in a prfct mannner...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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NIce update
So separation huh 😭
Ruhi hating ishita is heartbreaking

Even after all that happened why cant she maintain her distance with mani 😕

Plz update soon

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