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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

yes I read the book and planned to take it from it.
not just reading I habe posted summaries of each and every chapter in it.

Oh ok !
Yes I've noticed !
So eager to see how you take the story forward !
Cause while I've loved the book , there are always "things" which pissed me off !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 3

Scene starts next day morning.Ishita has been in hospital whole along.Everyone are worried about Raman.She was crying whole day everyone try to calm her but she is not relaxing she is completely worried about him.

Ruhi don't know about anything that happened.Everyone told her that Raman went outside and Ishia went along with him.Ruhi was not ready to believe.

Then around afternoon doctor comes to meet them whole Bhalla family was waiting there.Raman's condition was still no better.

Doctor "Patient treatment key liyen respond nahen kar rahan hain."

Mihir "Aaap kya bol rahen hain ?Bhain ko pehlee baar koi health problem rise huan hain aur aap kehrahen hain kee who respond nahen kar rahen hain.Aapsey nahen hoga tho badey doctor ko bulaayiyen but ."

Doctor "We understand your emotion but.Yeh sabh aap logon key haath mey hain.Aapko mujhey sach bathaana hoga .Patient ko koi shocking news ya koi problem."

Mr Bhallla "Aap yeh sabh kyon pooch rahen hain."

Doctor "I am sorry to say.But sach kahon tho.Patient jeena nahen chahtha.Who pschologigaaly khudhko mara haun samajh rahan hain.I mean he is mentally dead.Just physically he is normal but ."

Doctor "For now he is in coma but I don't know how long we can hold him same way.Baakey aapko karnaa hain.Ussey jataana hoga kee he has to live uskey liyen jeeney kee wajaha hain."

Doctor "Hum patient ko ICU mey rakh rahen hain.Koi ek jaakey unsey milsaktey hain."

All are shocked listening this and doctor leaves telling this.

Everyone sends Ishita inside as she was worried most about him.

She was speaking to Raman but he is not responding any thing which broke Ishita down.

Ishita "Raman aap aisey nahen kar saktey aap mujhey chodkar naheen jaayengey.Aap kaisey jaa ssaktey hain Ruhi ko chodkar."

Ishita crying "Raman mujhsey ladiyen naa.Main aapkey samney hun.Aapko gussa hon tho mujhpar nikaal lejiyen but aap asiey chodkar nahen jasaktey .Kyaa hoga ghar ka.Raman Ruhi apkey liyen wait kar rhaen hain."

Ishita was broken seeing no response from Raman she has never seen Raman in that state .She could not bear that Raman is not speaking with her even for a minute.

Then suddenly she hears sound of door opening and Mrs Bhalla rushing inside angrily .She holds Ishita hand and drags her outside and slaps her hard .

Ishita was shocked by this.

Mrs Bhalla "Kyon kiyan tumney aisaa?Kyaa bigaada tha Raman ney tumhaara?"

Ishita "Mummyji aap kya kehrahen hain?"

Mrs Bhalla "chain nahen miley tumhey abh Raman ko maarney key liyen tayyar ho gayen hon?"

Ishita was shocked beyond she was being accused for Raman's state.

Then Mrs Bhalla plays some video in her mobile in which she is hugging Mani and telling I love you even Raman's reactions were recorded.

Mrs Bhalla "Mainey kabhee nahen socha kee tum aisey kar sakthee hon.Kyaa kuch nahen kiyya tha Raman ney tumhaaarey liyen.Tumhaarey pariwaar ko apnaaya.Tumharey saath khada thaa ,Tumhey ek beti diyan jho tumhaarey kismath mey nahen thee.Par badley mey tumney kyaa diyan itnaa bada dhooka."

Ishita was cryig loudly "Mummyji mera who matlab nahen thaa.Main majaak mey bolee thee aap jaanthe hain main Raman sey pyaar karthee hun."

Simmi "Ishita hum achey taraha jaanthey hain tum kaisey ladee hon.Lekin main sbhaabith anehn kar paayen.Jiss din tumney paramjee par ilzaam lagaaya.Tabh hee main samajh gayen kee tum kaisey aurath hon.aaj sabith bhee hogayan."

MrS Bhalla "Jab Shagun ney dokh diyan naa uss din bhee Raman ko kuch nahen huan.Lekin tumney jho kiyaa.Main tumhey apnee beti sey aage mane thee lekin tumney merey betey kee jaan sey."

Mrs Bhalla "Chaley jaon yahan sey.Kabhe tumhaarey chhrey math dikhaon.Raman ko kuch huan naa tho tumhey mujhsey koi nahen bachaayega."

Ishita "Mummyjee mujhpar vishwaas keejiyen main sach kehrahen hun.Main sirf Ramn sey pyaar karthe hun .Main Raman theek honey tahk yahen rahungie."

Mrs Bhalla pushes her "Tum pass rahogee tho merey beta ka bache huin saas bhe chaley jaayega .Daffa hojaon yahan sey."

Alll are shocked over scenarion.Even Iyers were not understanding whome to support.They know Ishota can't be wrong but they can't deny what happened was because of Ishita.

Iyers take Ishita to home and there they saw Ruhi speaking with Shagun and she was crying.

Ishita goes immediately to her but Ruhi is not speaking to her.

Ruhi "I hate you.Aap bahuth burey hon.Aapkey wajaha sey papa ka health kharaab huan."

Ishita "Ruhi mera baath suno tum jho samajh rahen hon who sach nahen hain."

Ruhi "Mainey suna aapney kahan aap mujhey aur papa ko chodkar jaayengey.Aaj papa hospital mey hain.Main Papa ko kabhee nahen dekhpaongi."

Ishita was broken even Ruhi is against her now.Most important persons in her life were going aways from her her family is not with her.

Shagun tries to speak to Ruhi but Ruhi is hating both of them now.Both have cheated her father .

Then Mihir comes there he keeps a disguisted face for Ishita and leaves taking Ruhi.He is taking Ruhi to hospital on hope Ruhi may suceed in making Raman a reason to survive.

Ishita was broken and was wondering who sent that MMS to everyone.Mani was along with her he is not speakin and watching her silently.

Mihika comes there and se was equally angry at Ishita.She is not speaking to her.

Ishita "Tum tho mujhpar vishwaas karon.Mihika mai"

Mihika "Bass akka aaj aapkey wajaha sey jeeju iss halath mey hain."

Mihika "Aap mujhey boundaries key baarey mey sikthee thee naa aaj kahan gaya won.Aap hee ney tho kahan kee aap jeeju sey pyaar nahen kar sakthe but aap kissey aur sey."

Ishita "Mihika aisa math kahon.I love Raman more than my life mujhey samjho main Raman key bhina jee nahen sakthee."

Mihika "Leave it akka aap itney din naatak karpaaya aaj merey saamney aapkey liyen nayan nahen hoga."

Mihika leaves from there angrily.


(cont.)



HAPPY DIWAALI

Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
heart touching update...
felt bad fr ishu...
ye mms kisne banaya ab...
shagun ya mani...
update nxt as soon as poss...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the update ... Full on emotional !!! The way you portrayed Raman and Ishitha is wonderful... Please update soon .. Can't wait to read what happens next
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Amazing update
I loved ishita's portrayal
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Loved it !
Amezing!
Super!!
Thank u!
Conti plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Amazing update
Felt bad for Ishu but she deserved it to get her senses back...
It would've been great to see something like this on the show
Do continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Happy diwali!!!!
Amazing yar
Like butten not working for me

Pls update fast cant wait
Thanks for the pm

cant wait
Edited by Simmideepak - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Oh my !
I love this update !
Well apart from Raman bwing sick !
But Ishita deserves this ! Even if the words may be harsh !
She so needs someone to throw the truth in her face !
Oh Toshiji why can't you slap her hard in the show ?! 🤔
Now everyone is upset with her and even Ruhi , wonder how she will prove she didn't mean it " that way " ?!
Sure JJ will try to find who sent the video ?!
Amazing update ! 👍🏼
Thanks for the Pm (:

Happy Diwali ! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
nice update
I feel for ishita BT then she deserve it also
Raman in coma 😔

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