A Swaron FF : Nothing lasts forever epilogue updated pg 108 - Page 8

Created

Last reply

Replies

616

Views

123.4k

Users

63

Likes

1k

Frequent Posters

flyinghigh_ani thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: anubhutijain

Heart touching update. ...u write beautifully. ...

n uhave mony oder things to updateplss udate soon
thanks fr d pm😊


thank u!!!
flyinghigh_ani thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#72

unres nahi kiya!!!!😡
flyinghigh_ani thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Khizar_SWARON

What have you done to SWAYAM!

He can never do this to his Sharon especially when she loves him and he is stern to her, rude to her and hurts her
The part after flashback was so much hurtful and paining for Sharon 😭
Hope to see the next update soon


thank u...
flyinghigh_ani thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Mansi98

wow👏

awesome part👏
loved it❤️
sharon is so hurted😭
her pain was clearly visible😭
she loves him so much😊
bt he is showing so much anger 2 her😭
bt y is swayam doing all this???😕
y he is hurting sharon n himself too??😕
hope all this soon cleares out😊
and swaron come 2ghter😃
update soon😊
n thanx fr d PM😊
Love
Mansi😊


thanks mansi...muaaah!!!
flyinghigh_ani thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: dvrushu

awsmm...
loved it...
emotional one...uhh made me cry...felt very bad for sharon
jst want to know the reason behind swayam;s rudeness...
something majourly is wrong with him...bt what?? want to know
plzz write more
n pm me too


thanks!!!!!😊😊
flyinghigh_ani thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Part 3: CRAVING FOR LOVE

Sharom couldn't help but worry for swayam ... he was again late today..it was almost 2 o clock at night and taani had informed Sharon that swayam had gone out from the office at 7 pm... Although she mentioned that rey was also not home n both their phones were unreachable...Sharon had this tiny hope that swayam was with rey and thus he will be all fine...

Last few days were hell for Sharon... the pain was increasing each day... the pain of living with a new swayam... the pain of getting all the pain from swayam...she just couldn't understand why the hell was swayam behaving in that abnormal manner with her...

Her reverie was broken by the calling bell...

"swayam to kabhi bell nahi bajata...kaun hai itni raat ko..." She quickly ran and opened the door while the sight in front her shocked the hell out of her... Rey was standing there with swayam who was continuously blinking his eyes n even staggering in his place...

"swayam... Are you drunk???" she couldn't believe her eyes...

"Sharon pls..gussa mat hona...wo mai aur swayam club gaye the aur usne thodi jaida pee lee... aj k liye bas kuch mat bolo..." Rey went home as taani was also waiting for him and swayam came in...he was almost staggering in each of his steps... Sharon rushed and held his hands...

"sambhalke swayam... kya ho kya hai tumhe??" tears wear streaming down her cheeks... Swayam sat down on the couch pulling his hair...

"pata nahi Sharon... pata nahi mujhe kya ho gaya hai..." He said in a state of full intoxication...

Sharon came and hugged him... although he was hurting her for days now she could not see him in pain... swayam cried hugging her waist...

"swayam..kya hua hai...mujhe bolo...pls... pls share karon swayam..." Both cried in each others arm...

Swayam broke the hug and looked into her eyes... " I really love you Sharon..." he cupped her face ...

"I know..." she whispered... Swayam kissed her tears away... he kissed each every corner of her face pouring out all his love and kept murmuring I love you'...

he moved down to her neck and shoulder peppering small kisses there urging more of her... in a state of intoxication all he wanted was to confirm to himself that Sharon was here with him...she was his...and he loved him... He fanned his skin with his breath as all his love poured out in intoxication

and Sharon willingly gave in even after knowing he was drunk ... he picked her up in his arms and moved to the bedroom keeping her on the bed carefully as if handling a crystal doll...

He poured her with all his love and claimed her soul and she surrendered herself to him...as the night grew darker the two souls completed each other with the moon and the starts witnessing their love to narrate this unending story to the other generations yet to come...

As the morning rays entered through the curtains , swayam stirred in his sleep...he frowned in the bright light as he felt some weight on his body...he shifted in his sleep and opened his eyes to see Sharon sleeping beside him in his arms...he quickly sat up as flashes from the previous nights came rushing back to him... he immediately got dressed and moved to the washroom... As the frustration of using Sharon peeped inside his soul he banged his fists into the wall...

"how could i... how could I do it!!!!! I was drunk and I practically forced her...i used her...what is wrong with me..." he shouted at his image on the mirror...

In the mean time Sharon got up and found swayam missing ... Then she heard the shower in the bathroom and understood swayam was inside...

She got dressed too and was about to move to the kitchen when the bell rang... she opened the door and a huge smile spread across her face... Swayam's mom was standing there with a smile...

"mamma..." she immediately hugged her and started crying... Weeks of piled up hurt and longing for love has catalysed her cry on seeing swayam's mom...

She moved inside as swayam's mom kept stroking her hair and back...

"kya hua Sharon...jhagra hua swayam ke sath..." Sharon immediately wiped her tears..

"array nahi mamma...sab thik hai...aap bolo...itna accha surprise...aap khud hi aa gayi..."

"aj karwa chauth hai na...to mai nahi ati kya..." the driver brought inside the sargi...

"haa wo to hai..." she stammered remembering hers and swayam's current status...

Swayam came downstairs and hugged his mom...

"mom aap ne kaha nahi aap aaoge..."

"kyun bina kahe nahi aa sakti??"

"mom pls... aapko bhi pata hai mera wo matlab nahi tha..."

"aaj karwa chauth hai...humhare ghar pe hi hum manaenge...rey aur taani bhi aa jaenge aur baki sab friends ko bhi maine bol diya..."

"ye sab karne ki kya zarurath hai..." Swayam asked...

"tu chup kar... Sharon beta tu taiyaar ho ja... hath mein mahendi laga le...ye tera shaadi k baad pehela vrath hoga.." she smiled caressing her cheeks while Sharon gave a sad smile...


THANKS FOR YOUR SUPPORT... LEAVE YOUR LIKES N COMMENTS


LOVE , ANI

Edited by flyinghigh_ani - 11 years ago
rosyrkohli thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Swayam broke down in front of sharon
It was intense n so emotional
Even thou both are feeling completely two diff things
She is sad tat she cant reach to him
N he is guilty of using her feelings
Which is a brilliant contrast to sketch
I just hope the guilt makes swayam
Realise a lot if things
It was a fantastic update
Do update soon 🤗
Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago
Kshailja thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#78
I thnk ye IPKKND k story ki tarah h...Bt u have written this in diff manner...
Nd this is gud...nd the story is really interesting. ..
Hope ki swayam sharon ko or hurt na kre...
Nd want to knw the reason of swayam hatred...
Update soon...nd pm me as always...
ExpectoPatronus thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#79
nice update... karwachoth me kuch gadbad toh hoga... 😛 i m just assuming.
LoveHopeMagic thumbnail
Book Talk Reading Challenge - Pride Prose Thumbnail Book Talk Reading Challenge Award - Star Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 11 years ago
#80

heyyy aniii😉

sorry for late comment😉

your each title has its own meaning and it is so touchy👏

about update it was nice,👏

at first sharon's concern for swayam penned beautifully👏

the swaron scene was so beautiful👏

its full of pain😭

both of them are in pain😭

they dont know what others feeling

its too paining😭

swayam cried like a baby in sharon's arms😭

and swayam cried in sharon's arms as in same way😭.

the swaron scene was so beautiful👏

sharon and mom's bond was so nice to read👏

so karwa chauth is coming

i really hope swayam doesn't hurt sharon more

anniii

so im stoping her

i know the comment was bad

im sorry for that

im not feeling good

sooo

update soon

then i will give a nice comment

sorry once again



with lots of love

keechu di



Edited by keechu91 - 11 years ago

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: BusiMusi · 1 months ago

Hey everyone! I had nothing to do since this morning, and I was so bored out of my mind. On a whim, I decided to read one of my stories that I...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz · 6 months ago

COVER BY AISHWARYA (Mystic_Muse) SUMMARY Suzanne Miller , an Indian Origin Canadian Citizen adopted by the Miller family, who goes on a quest to...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050 · 1 months ago

A story filled with Love Affection Care and Respect ... This story is made up in the Backdrop of North Indian background but the story is going...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050 · 1 years ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1021 page no 31

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: abavi · 5 years ago

From the author's desk : Welcome to thread 6! I started to write this story years ago when the show was live and now when I look back on what...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".