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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShan

omg.. 😲 aisa kya ho gaya swayam ko..?

nice start... plz update soon... 😃


thanks...😊😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: riachawlalko

interesting concept
nyc strt
continue soon
thanks fr d pm :)


thanks..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: diyaswaronholic

Wooowwwowwwowwwowww didu

Gods I have no words to express.
The way I wrote is just soo amazing
Ab I mean it ur much much much much better writer than me!
Mujhe classes milenge kya?
Hehe

Ok back to the update!
It's amaizng
The starting was well described
Shar and Swayam's convo tooo good
Both of their feelings beautifully penned down
And the end, tooo shocking

I wanna know what will happen!
Isiliye u r continuing it and agar nahi toh ur pming me the whole story!
I wanna knowowww pout

Hehe
Amaizng amaizng amzing update
Loved it sooo sooo much!

Ab chalo update
U know ur restless Is waiting na
Sooo sooo sorry for commenting this late.
My headache made me go mad
Ab when I read, am like!
What the hell Diyu, how could miss such an amazing story!

Ab update!
Hehe
Love u loads tooo
And the update tooo

-your crazy restless
Diyu


thanks diyu😊😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Part 2: SHATTERING HEART

It was a week that swayam and Sharon were married...nothing has changed except the fact that swayam and taani's parents have left for jodhpur...swayam was behaving weirdly with Sharon not giving her any answers to her questions and avoiding her

"kaka..mai office ja raha hoon..aap nashta mat lagaiye...mai office mein kha lunga..."

"swayam... khana kha ke jao..." she said in a cold voice...swayam didn't reply and continued to work on his tie...

"swayam mai tumhe kuch bol rahi hoon..." sharon's voice rose...

"aur mai wo sunna jaruri nahi samajhta..." swayam replied without any emotion...

Sharon felt her heart breaking with each passing second...how could her swayam behave like this with her... Something is definitely wrong , shouted her heart... swayam can't change like this in a few days...it was almost a year after they had completed their MBA...everything was fine but suddenly from a day before before rey and taani's wedding swayam had changed...he started avoiding her ..sharon at first had thought due to the preparation for the marriage he was tired n busy... But the final bomb fell when on the day of their wedding swayam threatened and forced her to marry him... She could not understand what made him threaten her to marry him.. he knew she was ready for marriage...then what??

"swayam chillao mat..." Sharon shouted... " tum samajhte kya ho apne aap ko?? Mai sirf apni family k liye chup hoon warna abhi niche jaake tumhare parents ko sara sach bata deti..." swayam pulled her toards himself and pushed her against the wall pinning her between his body and the wall...

"tum aisa kuch nahi karogi...warna tumhare dad ka loan extension mai cancel kar dunga... Mai apne aap ko kuch nahi samajhta hoon... Aur agli baar mujhse dur rehna...tumhe jhelna meri majboori hai..." Swayam held her arms tightly leaving red marks of her fingers... Sharon flinched in pain...

"swayam choro... mujhe dard ho raha hai..." Sharon tried to get out of his hold but it got tighter...

"dard mehsoos hona kise kahete hai wo tum jaisi larki kabhi nahi samajh payegi... so apna drama apne paas rakho..." Swayam gritted his teeth... Sharon breathed in and out and calm himself up... She mellowed down a little finding immense hurt in his eyes...she touched his cheeks with her palm and caressed them...

"swayam...mai tumse pyaar karti hoon...kya baat hai..tum mujhese share karo na..hum milke sab sor out karenge.." she said with tears brimming her eyes...swayam jerked her hands away

"pyaar ka matlab bhi jaante ho tum???? To ye jatana bandh karo kit um mujhe chahte ho etc etc etc...aur ye jhoota ansoo behena bandh karo...aur haa...tum mere aur rey ke academy mein aaj se nahi jaoge..." he walked away from the room to his office picking the keys from the side table...

Sharon sank down on the floor crying her heart out...the pain was becoming too much for her to not cry now!!!

It was late night and Sharon was pacing the entire length of the lounge rubbing her hands...she was hell tensed as it was 1 o clock at night and swayam has not yet returned home...

obviously she knew something is majorly wrong with him but she can't fall out of love just like that...although she was hurt and broken her love for him was intact...

Her thoughts were broken as she heard the main door knob click and swayam entered the house... Sharon immediately threw him a bunch of questions...

"swayam..kaha the tum??? Thik to ho na tum??? Itni der kaha the???" she went near her as he was loosening his tie... swayam ignored her... Sharon was about to pull him by his arm when she smelled some ladies perfume in his clothes...

"swayam..tumhare shirt mein se ladies perfume ki khusboo arahi hai...tum kisi larki k sath the???" she asked...

*flashback*

It was almost 11 o clock , Swayam wrapped up his work and was about to go home when he saw lights in taani's cabin on...taani also used to work in shekhawat company...

He went inside taani's cabin to see her wrapping up with her work...

"taani..tum abhi bhi yahi ho??itni raat tak????" swayam asked with a frown...

"actually wo Mehta wali file bhi complete karni thi aur rey office se academy gaye hai..so abhi aate hi honge mujhe pick karne k liye..."

"oh... are you sure..rey is coming..otherwise I will drop you home..."

"nahi bahi..aa raha hai..ap ghar chle jao...sharon bhabi must be waiting..." Taani saw swayam's expression hardened...

"chalo sath mein niche chalte hai..." swayam and taani were climbing down the stirs when taani missed a step and her ankle twisted...

"aaauuu..." taani cried out... swayam immediately bend and held her ankle...

"uff taani..thik se chal bhi nahi sakte ho..."

"mai gir gayi aur aap mujhe daant rahe ho.???" She made a pout... Swayam smiled at her nodding his head sideways at her drama and picked her up in his arms and took her out from the office...her perfume got in his shirt then...

Rey had just parked his car n was coming inside when he saw swayam walking towards him with taani in his arms...

"ye taani ko kya hua???" he asked...

"gir gayi teri biwi...shadi ho chukka hai par thik se chalna nahi sikhi ha meri behen..."
swayam chuckled ... he put taani in rey's car and then after biding them goodbye sat in his car and drove off...


*flashback end*

Swayam's thought was broken as Sharon asked again...

"kiske sath the tum..." Sharon asked with a thudding heart as if it was aniticipating to a break any moment...

"tumse matlab..." Swayam asked opening the first botton of his shirt...

"swayam I am your wife..." she said in desperation...

"to meine tumhe apne koi bhi action ko question karne ka haq nahi diya..." He retorted...

Sharon felt tears streaming down her cheeks...

"par mai fir bhi puchungi..." Her voice choked...

"haa thi...thi mai kisi larki ke sath khush????" he was determined not to tell Sharon exactly what happened...and the reason he himself didn't know...he knew at that point of time he had to hurt her...

Sharon let out a sob...

"kisi larki k itna kareeb ki uski perfume tumhare shirt pe a gaya..."

"haa ..." he said coldly...

"swayam..." she choked... " how could you..." She could speak no more... Swayam turned and pinned her to the wall...

"kyun gussa a raha hai?? Lo mai tumhare kareeb bhi hoon... Ab thik hai..." Swayam slid his hands around her waists and traced her cheeks , shoulders n arms with the other...

"look Sharon... I am touching you...stop me if you don't want this..." Sharon closed her eyes as a sob escaped her throat...

"swayam kya kar rahe ho ???" she said in a cracked voice...

Swayam rubbed his cheeks with hers...

"wohi jo tum chahte ho..." He whispered in her ears... " kyun rokogi mujhe??? Of course you want this..." He left her and stood at a distance...

"I won't stop you because I love you...you have the right on me swayam..." She cried and shouted...

"haa hai mujhe haq..aur sath sath baki bohut se aur logon ko bhi hai...hai na??" he chuckled sarcastically and went inside the room while Sharon felt her heart and soul getting numb with whatever swayam has told... she sank down on the floor crying her heart out hugging her knees closer to herself...

Swayam entered the room and threw his wallet and watch with a force on the floor...

"damn it..." he closed the door and sank down on the floor leaning against the wall and cried equally...



thanks for your support guys...this one is very long..sorry for that...really hope you like this... so leave your comments n hit like...


love , ani

Edited by flyinghigh_ani - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
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unress

ani🤗
this was an amazing chp very well written
totally loved it all emotions were well portrayed
m really feeling bad for sharon
hope the reason from swayams hatred comes out soon
and sharon wud make everything back to normal

update soon dear
me waiting to read more

sry i know comment is small but u know na m busy

love
shini
Edited by shiningshannu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
heyyy

my dear annniii😉

me came dear😆

but you know im angry with u😡😡😡!!!!!!

i gave you that long cmt and you replied just thanku😡😡

hmmm,,,,,,,,,pouts

i hate the word thanku😡😡

so try to reply long😆😆😆

from now dont say thanks to me😆

i love to cmt like that for you guyes,😃😃😃!!!

i dont need a thanku for that😆😆😆!!

so no thanku any more😆

hmm i loved the title😆

a well suitable tittle👏👏👏!!!!!!

humhumhmhumhm

me angry😡😡😡/

this time i could't able to become the first one😡😡😡

shiniii😡

you take my place😡😡

but its ok😆😆😆

i love you both😃😃

a week passed,,,how?😆

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

if the first part was full of shocks😲😲

then this part was full off pain and emotions😭///

you made me cry😭//

what happened to swayam??????????

swayam hurt sharon to this extend,,,,,,,,,,,

its unbearable 😭 and painful tooo😭!!!!!

how could swayam hurt sharon this much???????????

he is avoiding her😭!!!!!

something is surely happened to swayam!!!!

i think he misunderstood her!!!!!

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this part was awesome👏!!!!

you done a splendid job dear👏!!!!

every reader can feel the pain😭😭😭!!

you made each and every one cry😭

each and every word full of pain and hurt!!

every word shouting only pain😭😭😭

sharon's situation is worst!!!😭

she dint getting to know what happened to him!!!!

it is so much painful,when a person keep hurting ,

and we don't know why he doing that 😭😭!!!

it was along one!!!!

and beautiful!!!

you are improving in each updates of your!!!!

i love to read more😳

so continue soon😳

update soon😳

me waiting 😳

so!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


with lots of love

keechu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Edited by keechu91 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
okk dis was something too good
dii u r such an amazing writer
bt why is swayam hurting sharon nd in turn hurting himself
nd sharon she still loves him
update soon nd thanks for d pm
Edited by ritz15 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
That was emotional :(
Well I read before the PM itself :3

Why is Swayam doing all :( hurting her and himself too :'(
Those harsh words he throw on her 😭
Please update soon eager to know his reason behind all this
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Res
Problem khatam honey ke badley aur barr gayi

Unresing
The update was very emotional
Swayam n sharon are torn apart sharon jitna bhi karey kam hai
It was a very well formed chapter
Sry but tym kam hai n work jaada so small comment
Do update soon
Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
It was so emotional!

You made me cry! 😭

each and every emotions was well portrayed! 😊

it was a beautiful update!

Just falling in love with all your writings!

What could be the reason for this behaviour of swayam's??

I'm dieing out of curiosity!!

Eagerly waiting to read more!

Update soon! 😃

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