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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter: 12a

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Her mind was blasting with the decision...as she slept few hours ago...she thought it was a bad dream and she would wake up in her room...but tables had turned, now it was just a fragile girl sitting in her palace filled with luxuries, but still mourning.
For her Love.

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Tears were automatically coming out of her eyes, she was not crying bitterly but it was not under her control anymore. The more you try to overpower your emotions, the worst they get and this was happening with jodha. She didn't give her love that deserved importance and now repenting was all she could see doing in her life. She needed him by her side, but fate had planned something else for them. Everything was slipping out of her hands...jodha couldn't control anymore...she started crying bitterly...sitting on the bed...head bend down and hands covering her face. Shivani was caught off guard seeing her sister in this situation..."Jiji...jiji aap aise...kya hua...chup ho jao!" but jodha was not listening, her tears were not stopping...shivani ran out of the room to call their mother. After explaining everything to her mother shivani received a glare in return from mainavati and she instructed to not accompany her to jodha's room. Mainavati came into the room and the sight in front of her made her heart flinch...she immediately went to the bedside and kept her hands on her daughter's back to calm her down. "Jodhaa! Kya hua tumhe beta...itna kyu ro rahi ho?" she wiped her tears and jodha while crying kept her head on her shoulders. "Maasa...hum..humse bahut badi bhul ho gayi" she said amidst the sobbing. "Kaisi galti beta?" her mother surprisingly looked towards her daughter as she sat straight looking at her. "Maasa humei pata hai shenshah kyu gaye hai..." she gazed down in guilt "Kaise bataaye hum maasa ko ki hamari wajah se hi hua hai yeh sab" she mentally slapped herself. "Haan beta woh aaye toh the raja ji aur hamare paas...phir tum so rahi thi..." her mother continued but jodha interrupted in between "Aur woh chale gaye..." sighing in utter sadness and angry upon herself.. "Chale gaye?? Nahi beta woh toh yahi hai..." Her mother said in a curious tone. Jodha looked at her mother immediately with surprised emotions surfacing in her eyes ...still not believing what her ears had just heard. He is here? Really? He is still here?? "Par...shivani ne toh humse..." and her mother understood "Are beta usne toh aise hi tumhe chedha tha...kya pata tha tum iss tarah se bikhar jaogi yeh baat sunke!" Jodha surprisingly looked at her mother...then wiped her tears while getting off the bed, in a second she ran to her room. Their room!



Her face was gleaming in happiness; a smile was glued on her face as she ran to her room. She forgot that she belongs to royal clan as there was no slow walk and neither pure sign of tehzeeb in her actions and well she didn't even care. As she was about to enter, she composed herself by grabbing the door and closing her eyes for a second so that her heart beat goes back to beating normally. She finally stepped inside the room expecting to see him and looked all over...but it was empty. She didn't found him on the bed...she quickly went and checked in the hamaam...but he was not there too. Where was he now? She thought. Loud thunder waves echoed in the sky as the raindrops left the clouds and touched her body...she was out in the lawn searching for him...the lightning shook her from within but she was adamant on finding him...she looked here and there but again no sign of him. "Kahin shivani sach toh nahi keh rahi thi...kahin sach mei ve...chale toh nahi gaye..." her face fell on this thought. She walked inside the palace thinking about his whereabouts as she saw shivani coming from the other side...jodha glared at her sister as she just looked at jodha and made a sorry face. Jodha narrowed her eyebrows at her and shivani understood that her sister is in a bad mood all worried for her husband...she just shifted her gaze to the stairs on her right side and looked at jodha and again looked at the stairs and left from there. Jodha got puzzled at shivani's expression...did she indicated me to go upstairs? Confused jodha thought to give it a try and started walking on the stairs that leaded to their palace's terrace... "Pata nahi shenshah yaha honge ki bhi nahi..." her heart was doing somersaults at the very mention of his name...what if he is there? What will she say to him? That she is sorry for everything and they should forget their every fight and move on? What if he is angry and has made up his mind to leave the palace! Jodha stopped for a second as she reached the terrace's door...she shooed all the thoughts away and went on to look for him.


God was pouring water heavily on her, it seemed as if the almighty is challenging her to try and search for his love, she looked at the sky for a second and kept a hand on her head so that she could see properly...till where she could see he was nowhere near...soon she started shivering as she was completely drenched in rain, she kept her hands on her arms and soothed them up and down for some relief...her teeth were making a trembling sound...her hair were spread on her shoulders but her eyes were still scanning the place to find a glimpse of him...she failed to find him even there. It was no use standing there so she decided to move out just then a strong hand engulfed her waist and in a fit of seconds her back was facing the wall. A heavy weight was hovering over her body...she could feel the same cologne...the tempting fragrance...lingering around her strongly and dominating her senses...her eyes searched for the powerful orbs in the darkness and they came to her close...piercing through her gaze.

He was right there! Standing in front of her...the sole man she wants to have babies with, the only person who can get her heart blind. Jalaluddin Mohammad!
He was there on the terrace, watching her... observing her from behind, her every move was monitored by him. She badly wanted to see him that he could make out from her expressions...the way she was standing helplessly in the rain looking out for him made his heart flutter! Her antics were too cute...he couldn't resist himself so he appeared from behind and grabbed her from the waist and placed her against the wall. He saw her wearing a shocked and surprised expression...he smirked at her...
"Hum jaante hai jodha begum ki aapka dil abhi kya soch raha hoga...ki hum yahan kaise...par hum itni aasaani se aapko kuch nahin bolenge, shuruaat toh aap hi ko karni hogi"
He was back with a bang! Jalaluddin mohammad was adamant on his mission and moreover he came for a reason, which he wanted to fulfill, but soon his mission flew from the terrace door when he saw something and his expressions changed in a second. Holy God She is wet! In this dark night, beneath the grey clouds the rain pouring so heavily on them...calmness resided in his mind, she was looking marvelous, an absolute beauty! His eyes met her eyes, wearing a innocent expression and all wet due to the intolerable rain...still somehow they were glued in surprise, predictable to him...then his gaze shifted from her eyes to the rosy lips who were signaling him to come closer and cover them with his wet ones...they appeared to be so inviting but he controlled somehow...then he saw her neck which was paving way for the raindrops to enter into her beautiful assets...he gasped at the thought of it. She was so inviting...jalal knew she wanted the same but he was a player and he won't let this game end so easily.


On the other hand jodha could sense his gaze was going deeper and a dark passion got ignited in them...she was scared and was feeling helpless at her husband's gawking...she knew at what time where his orbs were resting on her body...she felt naked for a moment...she stole gazes on him and was totally paralyzed...she couldn't move from there! Jalal was busy analyzing the effect of rain on her body...his mind was playing drum rolls and doing acrobatics as he saw some water drops clinging on her lips...he slowly moved his face ahead towards her lips...jodha got aware of his move...she saw him but at that time he was dangerously close...she closed her eyes and moved her face to the other side...jalal smiled as his lips touched her cheeks and missed out on the lips...he saw her with closed eyes and mentally calculated the exact time god had taken to carve out such pure innocence!
"Humei jaane dijiye" jodha said still looking at the other side. Jalal was in a trance of her beauty...today nobody on this earth could stop him to love this angel standing in front of him. Through his finger he slowly turned her face towards him... Jodha down casted her eyes, she didn't look at him, her bravery was gone into the drain after such a sexy encounter with his husband in the rain.
"Agar aap jaana chahti hai toh ek baar hamari aankhon mein dekhiye" jalal said.
Jodha was caught in between! But she didn't have any option so she looked into his eyes masking an I-Am-Brave face. Their eyes met for a few seconds and jalal left his hold on her...he freed her way and stepped back. Jodha was surprised by this action of his husband.
"How can he let go of me so easily? I was just saying what every other girl says in such moment! Damnit Jodha!!" An unhappy jodha moved out from there leaving behind a smirking jalal. After watching her unsatisfied figure going away he turned his face towards the sky, his arms spread in the air to embrace the rain, feeling the cold going down and soothing the hot temper rising in his body! He couldn't wait now.
Not ANYMORE!

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Precap: SR
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hope you guys liked it. This is the last second update, which i updated in parts. Part B will be last so yeah keep on coming your love through likes and comments, it will really encourage me to write :)
Thankyou everyone for so much love and affection, i love you all 🤗
I will reply to last update's comments soon 😊 but i've read them and ofcourse i super loved them! You all are my driving force behind this SS, and i will really try to make the last update well and good, according to your expectations. And i am so very sorry for the late update! Will try to cover up the next and the last time!

Thankyou
With love and hugs ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Surbhii.. 😡 phataphat part B likhe update karna.. why did u leave it at such a cliff moment.. 😭
I want part B abhi ke abhi..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Surbhii.. 😡 phataphat part B likhe update karna.. why did u leave it at such a cliff moment.. 😭
I want part B abhi ke abhi..



Di aap toh mujhe kitne ache se jaante ho fir bhi aisi demand rakhdi aapne 😳
Milega part B par kuch din baad 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: surbhimathur



Di aap toh mujhe kitne ache se jaante ho fir bhi aisi demand rakhdi aapne 😳
Milega part B par kuch din baad 😆



not kuch din dear.. make it fast this time.. please..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hemakeerti



not kuch din dear.. make it fast this time.. please..



I have to make it fast this time as diwali is coming so main itna lamba break nahi rakhna chahti, definitely i will try my super level best! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely and beautiful update.
Jalal nahi gaya.. Jodha ki jaan mein jaan aayi...
Shivani bhi na.. Aisi mazak koi karta hai bhala...
Loved the close encounter.
Precap is blushy blushy..
Continue sooonish...
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Super duper update pls update part b sooonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update

continue soon🤗

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