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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey i m new to this forum, i am a member of dekha ek khawab forum, but m equal fan of vivian dsena, and madhubal

so thought to write something, hope you all would like it

just reply me you all liked it or not. and weather i should cont. to write more or should put my pen down


Love is the purest form in the world

Love is when my eyes first met his

Love is when he first smiled at me

Love is when I wished him luck for his match missing my important classes

Love is when I prayed and screamed at top of my voice to cheer for his victory

Love is when he hurriedly came to listen my speech leaving his practice

Love is when we parted our ways yet our heart belongs to each other.

The hall roared wid the applause on hearing such beautiful words

Madhu closed her dairy and thanked the crowd for listening her

She moved out of the auditorium.

Who knows once a shy girl can be the famous author today.

"MADHUBALA MALLIK" , famous author. Her book love is sweet pain is well known.

She walked on the grass barefoot towards her back garden smiling and eagerly to meet him.

"Can we please have some words with you ma'am" a girl shouted from the gate followed by a boy of her age parking his bike.

Madhu smiled and nodded, she took them in "have some tea, its good in this weather"

The girl nodded, boy beside her was just having the look at her house.

"You both wanted to talk with me??" she asked with a polite smile

"I am great fan of yours ma'am, I have come here with a request?"

"TRISHNA...please lets go its rubbish, keep your thoughts to yourself", the boy whispered in her ears

"Karan please, shut your mouth and sit"

"TRISHNA.. and Karan nice name" madhu smiled at them.

"We ..actually only i..want to know abt u" the girl spoke with curiosity in her eyes.

"Everyone knows about me, what do you want to know TRISHNA.." madhu asked, as she sensed the question already.

"About you and him, your story" she answered

Madhu had a smile on her face.

"It's my time to meet him TRISHNA.., he is waiting for me. "

"It's 4 now, I think u always meet him at 5"

"You have fully researched about me, haven't u?", Madhu laughed on seeing the guilty expression on her face.

"Have some cookies, they are good"

Madhu moved towards the window observing the sky.

"She won't utter a word yaar, it's her personal matter"

"He used to love play basketball under the clear sun" madhu cont.

"Can the day get much better than that day, when our eyes first met. He missed his basket score, I was trying to settle my notes when first our eyes met, there wasn't any butterflies flying in me, not any superfast feeling, nothing. We both were just staring at anothers eyes at every passing moment."

The thundering sound of heavy down pour interrupted their talk.

"Nature, no one can predict, our eye lock was broken the same way" madhu smiled politely.

"What happen, did he propose you?" karan asked her, not much interested in those words.

"You are quit fast, haina??"

"karan, swear I will break your teeth" the girl threatened him.

"What happen next manayata"

"We met in college, he was the sports captain the star of the college, handsome, dashing, son of the well-known family, which girl won't fall for him?"

"You too fell for him"

"I just felt for his eyes, which has spark as well as emptiness for some reasons, he had a group of friends yet he was alone, somewhere his eyes showed his loneliness.it was our daily routine, him playing and missing the basket when I used to enter, our eyelock, just a short time with him.

Never spoke ,never met, nothing.

But life can change any moment, one day he smiled at me. I was scared but returned him the two curves formed on my face. That's it, he just needed that, he ran from the court leaving his friends behind.

"hi" he extended his hands towards me.

" ..hi.." I merely whispered.

It was the first step towards our friendship.

We used to talk, laugh, exchange our smiles. I still remember it as fresh memory like it was just yesterday, i almost run out of my class, missing my most important lecture. I run till my legs won't reach its destination and that was him. It was really funny but I did all this just to wish him for his match. You can call me crazy to miss my test just to watch him play and win, but in return I would get to see the sparks in his eyes and I new that was just for me. It was his test match for our inter colg level but he made me promise to participate in the protrishnaect competition. He knew I was good at it, but not much at confidence, I went just for him. He missed his match just to boost me up. His these gestures were my sweet world.

At last the day of our graduation came further. I was sad coz I knew I will be parting way from him.

But guess what??? it really surprises me yet, he was really happy, very happy.

I still remember his touch that day when he holded my hand and said those unforgettable words "princess, wipe off that saddy face of yours, its time to rejoice cause soon I would get success and would settle down with you beside me, just need some time. Will you support me till then"

What can I say

"do you know princess, I won't say those cheesy lines that you are my world, I would bring stars for you, I will die for you and your smile ...n ...lot..i just want to say that I want to be with you till my last breath, will not bring stars and moon for you but I want to look at them with you beside me. I wont die for your smile because I want to create best moments for you, just one thing...I love you"

And he was a man to his words till today. He was successful, he became the business tycoon soon. How cutely he proposed me. I think every one knows it.he took me to an ice cream parlour on our engagement day. But he said he wants to meet me everyday till marriage. So we meet daily for our evening date"

Madhu smiled while staring at her engagement ring "my crazy rishab"

"with was amazing to hear" trishna said with moist eyes.

Karan just rolled his eyes at them

"its time, he would be waiting for me"saying those words madhu left to meet him.

Karan moved towards TRISHNA "it was just a simple love story, hero met heroine, they fell in love, what so great about it, for which you were crazy??"

TRISHNA handed him the newspaper and walked behind madhu to have a look at them.

Madhu just run to him and kneeled down before him, "sorry, I m late ...plzz forgive me this thim. Sorry.. bada wala sorry"

There karan had tears on reading the headlines.

"YOUNGEST BUSINESS TYCOON RISHAB KUNDRA MET WITH AN ACCIDENT ON HIS ENGAGEMENT DAY, HE TOOK HIS LAST BREATH" he moved after TRISHNA.

"he died but took a promise that his love should always smile and be successful"she hugged karan watching madhu to have conversation with the tomb which had inscribed " RISHAB KUNDRA".

Who said true love is to spend our whole life with each other, sometimes it's also about to love without being with the other.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Such a beautiful Shot it was! Brilliantly penned down by you!!
So heart touching. Though the initial lines made it clear about the plot but the last newspaper headlines made me emotional a lot!
Losing someone beloved is the most painful event that could happen and you portrayed it superbly!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was so emotional dear
U wrote it beautifully 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heart touching story ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey dear, welcome to MB forum.. Such a lovable story and emotional too.. I liked the way you explained abt their past.. Even i didn't realise til the end that he was dead.. I would be very happy if you would continue..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing story!
i loved it dear!
please do write more on rishbala & welcome to madhubala forum!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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splendid os
beautifully written i had tears in my eyes reading it
welcome to mb n vdians land
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
Beautiful OS you have written here
Got really emotional at the end
Loved it
You should write more...I like it 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome OS dear...it was a heart touching story...u have written really well..
Welcome to MB Forum...pls do continue... Once agn I wanna tell it was superb...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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painfull OS 😕
you have written it very well

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