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Posted: 18 years ago
I loved the chap pooja! The song is so nice! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sania_12

I loved the chap pooja! The song is so nice! 😳

Thanks for ur appreciation😃.It seems like you really don't miss any of my chapters😉.I really appreciate ur support😳........Keep enjoying Mamta II😳.....I'll continue to write more exciting chapters ,just for supporters like u.....😃

luv😳

Pooh😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

CHAPTER FIFTY TWO

Mamta thinks in her mind.. "This is the same Akshay,my Akshay....he can never betray me..."

She tries to get up looking embarrassed but again falls on him...He stops her and gets up first then asks her to give her hand...he pulls her up...She blushes...and walks away from him...He thinks in his mind.. "Mamta....you'll be soon back in my life......Actually you were never away from me,you are here in my heart....every second..with every heart beat I think of you..."GB" only bloomed the flower of love in our hearts and now he only will unite us....I don't know why Tanisha said that I and she ...ssshhhheee...🤢"

Ganapathy wakes up and the maid also comes....Her name was Shanta bai,she was a middle aged plump woman😆very talkative ,but nice...

"You are Mamta ma'am ,Sid sir has send me here.....but who's this sir?Sid sir told me you are alone with your son here .."

Mamta gets a bit nervous and says , "He's Akshay, he's my ...he's "

"I'm her husband,her love..."he says slowly looking at Mamta...then suddenly faces Shanta bai and says , "Don't we look like a perfect couple Shanta bai..."

"Yes,sir...just like Shiv-Parvatiand your child he's really cute...what's his name?"

"GANAPATHY" they both say.....

Ganapathy starts crying and they both reach to pick him up...he pulls Mamta's hair and Akshay's collar and when they both gets up her hair gets struck in his chain😳...they both come very close😳...she tries to pull her hair but it doesn't come off😳...Akshay looks at her and slowly removes her hair😳😳...Ganapathy gives a naughty chuckle..looking at his parents🤗

Meanwhile Shanta bai looks arond the entire house and comes to Akshay who was playing with Ganapathy on the sofa... "He looks just like you ,same lips,same nose...but he has your wife's eyes ,very deep and beautiful...very innocent😳..."

"Yes,Shanta bai...very beautiful...😉😳" he says looking at Mamta...then turning to Ganapathy....

"Ma'am what all are my chores?"

"Shanta bai....Don't call me ma'am,you are of the age of my mother and so,you should call me only Mamta...I'd like that more...and you just have to help me...right now, I've done everything....Shanta bai..Did you have your breakfast?"

"Yes,Ma'am...I mean Mamta,beta..."

"Hmmm...that is nice...."

"Beta,I'll go and boil milk for Baba..."

"No need, he's only one month old and he has only my milk...you can go to the garden and water the plants....."

Mamta goes into the kitchen to take her breakfast...but then she realises that Akshay also must not have had his breakfast as it was early in the morning when he reached there.She brings his breakfast to the table with a mug of coffee..after cooling it to luke warm...just like he liked😳...

"Akshay,come and have breakfast..."

"I've had it..Mamta.."

"You don't have to lie...I know you haven't..."

"Oh!😳 so, you still care for me..." "But how'll I eat it by myself" and he shows his hand that was bleeding....

"OMG!!! 😲😲 Your hand is bleeeding...show me Oh! I'll get the bandage..."

She brings the first aid box and begins to dress his wound...

"How did this happen?"

"Actually ,It was dark outside when I came her and when I jumped over the fence a barbed wire pierced into my hand...but,you don't worry,I'm alright..It's just a small cut..😊"

"A small cut😭...your hand is bleeding and you are saying a small cut...If I'm not with you,you really don'ttake care of yourself......Who asked you to jump over the fence and come here...if you had got more hurt..then....how could you be so careless....if something happens to you,then i feel the pain...and you really don't both...now who's there to look after this wound..?" she goes on...

Akshay interrupts her, "Mamta,so, why don't you come back? A small wound of mine has made you so uneasy then how will you tolerate the pain of parting with me....come back..Mamta.."

She realises that she got a bit carried away,she composes herself and says, "Akshay,some wounds can never be filled,you have the breakfast.."

"But,my hand"

Mamta doesn't pay heed,Akshay nods and gets up to leave the table...when she holds his hand and stops him😳😳...She gets up from her place and comes near him..she tears one piece of chappati and dips it in the curd.She takes it to his mouth😳.....He smiles at her😳 and eats the chappati from her hand....Akshay could have sat there for ages gazing into her deep eyes and eating from her hand😳😳😳.....He wanted to be lost in that very moment.....He wanted it to be frozen in time....😳

Akshay goes to Ganapathy and starts playing with him...Mamta looks at both of them and smiles ...looking at her world of happiness.....😳 "I should give him a chance...I took a hasty decision...without trusting my heart😭..Akshay cannot betray me...never...how could I think so? He loves me and Ganapathy more than himself...."

But, perhaps things were moving in a different direction for them...their love had to under go many more tests......and it was soon going to happen....

Meanwhile Mamta enjoys looking at her world 😳.......Akshay looks at her and smiles at her..He picks up Ganapathy and comes to her...

[Back ground song: "Tere liye ,hum hai jiye,hoton ko siye...Tere liye hum hai jiye har ansoo piye...dil mein magar jalte rahein chahat ke diye...tere liye...tere...liye....naadan hai woh ,kehte hain joh mere liye tum ho gair...😳"]

listen to this song here....

😳 https://www.songs.pk/song.php?songid=1526😳

What is awaiting their fate,now?Is Tanisha lying or is she saying the truth?Wait for the next chapter...Hope you all have enjoyed the chapters till now.......😳😃

luv

Pooh😃

Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: poohtarang

Thanks for ur appreciation😃 your welcome!.It seems like you really don't miss any of my chapters😉 lolz, yeah! they're too good!.I really appreciate ur support😳 aww thnx!........Keep enjoying Mamta II😳 I will!.....I'll continue to write more exciting chapters ,just for supporters like u.....😃 yay, thnax!!

I loved the chapter! Hopefully, Mamta will forgive Akshay!😳 Keep up the great work!

luv😳

Pooh😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
CHAPTER FIFTY TWO




At eleven 'o' clock, Sid comes and he is utterly shocked to see Akshay there...Akshay too is angered to see him there..but Mamta comes in between them and says, "Sid, I want to give him one more chance...I trust him...I don't want to make a mistake in haste and anger for which I may regret my entire life...Sid, for now you may go..I 'll see you later."

"But, Mamta...Oh! I see so, you trust him and you don't trust Tanisha,your best friend...He betrayed both of you...What'll happen to her now?? He's a lier, a cheat!!"

"S-I-D 😡 ,who are you to interfere in our life?? Mamta is my only love and she's my life..."

"Sid, you please go from here.You have really helped me a lot..but right now...I can't trust anyone..."

"Mamta ,he cheated you...and you...Just leave him...that is the only punishment he deserves....just leave him...forget him..."

she bursts out, "S-i-d!! How dare you? Who are you to decide whether I should leave him or not? I cannot leave him cos I love him,more than anything in this world.....he has not only touched me, but my heart...and it's not that easy to remove someone from your heart...it's impossible...and what do you know about love??Have you ever loved any one??I cannot forget him..he's my child's father...Sid ,you please go ,now.." she cries and falls down on the floor...

Sid feels frustrated and leaves....

Akshay comes near her and lifts her from the ground.He wippes her tears and promises her, "Mamta, I'll make all the real culprits behind this hideous plot pay for your tears and for spoiling our happy life..."

Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

CHAPTER FIFTY THREE

Mamta and Ganapathy begin to leave for their home with Akshay, but at that moment his mobile rings and he asks them to stay there for some more time with Shanta bai,till he comes back.He told her that he had an urgent thing to do...

Mamta happily remembers the time spent with Akshay,and feels happy to get her love back.Her thoughts are soon broken by the ringing of her mobile.

"Hello! is this Mrs. Mamta Sharma?"

"Yes, who's this?"

"I'm no one,but I have an important message for you.If you want to know your husband's truth,come to Tanisha's place as soon as possible..."

"Who are you?and what do you know about him?Hello..hello..."

She was really confused and prayed that all this was lie..but she needed to confirm it ,so, she decided to go to Tanisha's house.Ganapathy was fast asleep...she handed him over to Shanta bai...She kissed him and rushed to Tanisha's home.

She reaches her home and is shocked to find Akshay's car parked in front of her house.

Meanwhile inside Tanisha's home.....

Akshay barges into Tanisha's room leaving her parents aghast...

"Tanisha...come out!! Tanisha..."

She comes out and Akshay rushes to her with a thousand questions in his eyes,burning with fury.

"Tanisha,so, you are sitting here peacefully after burning my entire life....my entire world..." he sparked.

"Akshay,I'm sorry.....I never wanted to come in between you and Mamta,but I'm helpless...I couldn't control my heart....I love you Akshay....but you..you were always in love with Mamta...you never bothered for my love...I sacrificed my love everytime for her...and what did she do...she doesn't even trust you....Akshay, she is not your true love...I'm...I really love you...and I had no other option.."

"Shut up!! I don't want to believe my senses,that you,whom I and Mamta trusted like the saviour of our love..can degrade to such cheap deeds...How dare you think that I'd leave Mamta for you??She is my life....understood,you wicked woman..."and he pushes her..She falls down the stairs....

She starts crying holding her stomach,as if she wanted to show that she was being forced by him to lie to Mamta.... "Akshay,please don't force me to lie to Mamta...please leave me.." Actually she had seen Mamta coming there....

"Tanisha,don't act so innocent..you have ruined my entire life...I won't spare you..I'll kill you.But ,first come with me and tell Mamta the truth..."

"Akshay,I've told her the truth already that I'm carrying your child..and if you want me to stay away from your life...I'll go away from here to some far away place ...but I can't lie to her...she's my best friend.."

"Best friend..huh!!😡 "....he tries to drag her ...but...

At that time only Mamta comes in front of him and stops his hand.He turns shockingly.She again misunderstands him and looks at him with tears in her eyes..as if one more time he shattered her heart.Tanisha cries and begs more loudly on seeing her.....

"Akshay,leave her"😭😭

"Mamta..I wanted her to clear all the misunderstandings between us"😕

"By forcing her to lie😡😭..Aren't you satisfied with spoiling three lives...of mine,my child's and Tanisha's that you are intending to destroy more...Enough Akshay...there were misunderstandings between us..but now the reality is out..and my trust has too betrayed me now...."

"Mamta,this is a trap...they all want us to be separated.Please give me a chance to prove it..."

"Akshay,I've given you enough chances,but all the time you've broken my trust.." she cries, "now I don't have enough courage left to bare more wounds...please leave us...." "I hate you Akshay...I hate you!!"

"Mamta.." he comes near her,but before he could say anything the police comes there...

"Who is Mr.Akshay Sharma?"

Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
oh my god.. poo so very good too good i have to read all the chapters now.. great..

why dont you start a new story and i will make it a sticky wat say? 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nishtha

oh my god.. poo so very good too good i have to read all the chapters now.. great..

why dont you start a new story and i will make it a sticky wat say? 😳

Thanks yaar!!😃 but i am into this story right now😳...can't u make this one sticky!!😃 I'll try to write a new story...but now it's not possible....don't have that much creativity...😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
ok do one thing start in new thread and give link to this one that i will make sticky as serial has taken a leap so story should as well 😆
please do it
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nishtha

ok do one thing start in new thread and give link to this one that i will make sticky as serial has taken a leap so story should as well 😆
please do it

Sure I'll do that...Thanx yaar......You are really the coolest moderator...very supportive...

luv u

Pooh😃

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