MAMTA II

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Posted: 18 years ago

I was talking abt the story below......😃

Akshay and Mamta😳...when ever I think of them ,Anand and Neha😳 come to my mind...they look as if they are just made for each other....the perfect couple....😳 Their is innocence in their love ,their is compassion in their love...and above all ,their love seems to ahve been showered upon by the blessings of "GB" (Ganapathy Bappa....)😃

Innocent yet with all beauty of true love😳....

My story "Mamta II" is completely dedicated to Anand and Neha.....for being the cutest couple on Indian telivision.....they are my inspiration.....😳😳

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Pooh😃

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@pj2012

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Posted: 18 years ago

CHAPTER 1

The Sharmas were a big family and they were known 4 their unity and oneness.They owned a successful business.The family consisted of two brothers Rishi and Rajive ,their wives Rakhi and Ragini, and their children Abhay and Akshay,Rahul and Rani respectively.Their Dadi also lived with them.Abhay and Rahul were more closer to each other and they they were doing their final semester in Business Management.Rani was the youngest,she was in school.But the most lively of them all was Akshay 😊 ,the colour and life of their home 😛 .After the studies of Abhay and Rahul,their parents thought of getting them married.Initially they weren't keen but later agreed.

Akshay and Rani constantly irritated their brothers poking fun at them. "Akshay,if one more time u come here singing that parody on 'Two Donkeys Wedding'you are finished.seriously,you are getting on to my nerve," screamed Abhay.

"Abhay don't scold him,he's just feeling happy for the both of you.Akshay! Rani!enough of this fun now go to your rooms,go!," said Dadi winking 😉 at Akshay and Rani.

"By the way Abhay and Rahul what were they singing about two donkeys 😉 ....I couldn't hear it properly from behind the door?," said a curious Dadi.

"D-A-D-I 😡 ," screamed Abhay.

Dadi got up and and went out laughing.

Akshay was a happy -go-lucky kinda person 😃 unlike his brothers.He wanted to enjoy life to its fullest ,but he also loved his family a lot 😳 .

Akshay had recently joined the college after his XII boards.He too followed his brothers footsteps and took the same subject on his family's stress.He always wanted to do something adventurous 😃 and nothing aspired him more than to become an Army man.But future stored something else for him 😉 .........

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Posted: 18 years ago

i c..
you are talking about a fanfic...

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@pj2012

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Posted: 18 years ago

here comes the second chapter....te te te😆😆😆

hold you breath

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Posted: 18 years ago

😳Hmmmmm................Akshay and Mamta are the cutest couple in the whole world.And Tanisha in a different role whats cooking ? wanna know ,just check out the next chapter......

PJ😃

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CHAPTER TWO

His college began with the usual bustle and excited air.The first years walked into the classroom like puny meek rabbits 😕 😕 and the seniors surrounded them like some dreadful monsters from a horror flick .Akshay was the last to enter so he escaped the ragging blues 🤢 🤢 and he was least bothered too.He also knew the seniors through his brothers so they were not a problem for him.Almost when the prayer started , an extremely nervous 😕 looking girl with a pillow like bag clutched in her hands entered the classroom with another girl who looked flambouyant unlike her.

"Wait!!don't you two have manneres to wait and give reverence to your college prayer and your seniors ," spoke Akshay spranging in front of them.

"S-o-r-r-y!! 😕 😭 We were really scared and thought that we were late for the class," stuttered Mamta.

"Never mind,I am your senior Akshay Sharma and what are your names??"

"Mamta Sharma and she is Tanisha Mittal."

"Doesn't your friend speak anything or is she dumb and deaf?? 😆 😆 "

"Excuse me, I am extremely perfect and I don't think I have to prove it to you 😡 😡 ," sparked Tanisha.

"Really!! We'll see.So, you think you are very smart." He and his friends pretended to be the seniors and asked the girls to sing a song and made fun of them 😆 😆 . Mamta was on the verge of crying 😭 😭 .Later when they came to know that they had played a prank on them,Tanisha was furious 😡 😡 and wanted to take revenge.
"I'll see you 😡 !!!," she threatened.

One month passed by and their fight grew worse.though Mamta tried to stay as far as possible from the fight she always got entangled between them and one day......................................................

Akshay locked her in the old library of the college which was totally deserted in order to take revenge from her as she complained against him to their teacher about him of hiding her assignment.He was thrown out of the class in front of everyone and he was really infuriated 😡 .When he turned at night to check her condition he was scared and ashamed 😕 of himself to see her unconscious.He lifted her and somehow managed to bring her to Tanisha's home.Tanisha was shocked and frieked out to see him with Mamta and when he tried to ask sorry she shrieked at him, "How dare you?.....Just....just get lost 😡 !!"

She didn't wanted her parents to wake up and so she didn't say much to him and slammed the door on his face 😡 .She called to Mamta's home and told her mother that Mamta would stay at her place for completing an assignment.

Akshay called in the middle of the night to say sorry and to enquire about Mamta's condition.Tanisha was mad at him and was about to cut the call when he begged 😕 not to cut it and listen to him. "Listen! Tanisha every human makes mistakes and I also made one,but I know my mistake is really unforgivable.I am extremely sorry from the bottom of my heart...........Please 😕 can you call Mamta."

"What you did was not a mistake but a sin 😡 and when I can't forgive you how do you imagine that she would?"

She hung up the phone and glanced at Mamta who sat on the bed motionless with tears falling 😭 down her cheeks.Tanisha came near her and tried to pacify her.

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Neetha

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Posted: 18 years ago

go on....go on..............I'am enjoying this.....what happened next,yaar??????????.......... 😊

hmm Akshay as a college-going boy,he he ,that's interesting..........when will AM fall in love? 😉 ...can't wait????? 😳 😆

atleast in ur story ,we can expect some AM scenes..... 😳 😕

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@pj2012

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Posted: 18 years ago

Definitely! cos I am a great AM 😳 fan.But there are loads of suspenses 😈 too.........Ready for the third chapter ......here it comes

PJ 😳

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CHAPTER THREE

The next morning.................................

Mamta called her Dad and told that she'd come home before going to college.When the girls left the house they were shocked 😲 to see Akshay waiting for them beneath a tree in front othe house.Tanisha looked at Mamta who just ignored him and raced the car down the main road.They both kept silent the whole journey until the silence was broken by the ringing of Tanisha's phone.

"It's him Mamu.He wants to say sorry."

"Tanu,Please I don't want to talk to him." and she got down from the car as they had reached her home.Tanisha too disconnected the call and got down.

"Mamu,Don't be sad 😔 ,if you want we can complain to the principal against him.."

"No.Tanu.I don't want to complain or take revenge from him.I will forget everything ,but you promise me that you won't tell this to anyone especially Maa! Baba!cos they'll be hurt 😭 ."

"Mamu,'Am your best friend and you can trust me.I am always there for you." she smiles at Mamta who too feels good now.

They both go in and Tanisha greets her parents. "Good morning Uncle!Goodmorning Aunty!"

Mamta's mother forced them to have paranthas before leaving hurriedly ,clutching on to their stomachs🤪.

"God ,my stomach is full and I feel like vomitting 🤢 ."

"Tanu, then why did you have three paranthas? You really look sick."

"Yaar....Mamu.What could I do.I couldn't resist your mum's yummy paranthas? I must tell you they were delicious."

Mamta laughs 😃 and Tanisha feels happy 😊 to see her laugh.They leave her home and reach the college and Akshay wasn't present at college.They thought it must be because he is frightened to come to come to college after what he did to Mamta.

"Why hasn't he come? we saw him before my house......a-r-g-h 😳 ..why should we bother,it's his wish whether he comes or not?Maybe he's afraid."

Mamta doesn't reply and she walks away.

One week passed by and there was no sign of him.Tanisha was a bit curious now unlike Mamta who was least bothered and was consentrating on the studies.Tanisha asked without the knowledge of Mamta to one of the girls friendly with Akshay about him.She told her that he had gone to Delhi with his family where his grandmother is admitted.She also told her that he'd be coming back the following Monday.

Mamta and Tanisha were friends from schooldays,but they both were extremely differentfrom eachother with different attitudes ,different perspectives and different tastes.Mamta was a traditional,shy,down to earth girl with small pleasures and happinesses to share with her family and friends but she always stood for the right things 😊 and her values.Tanisha was a flamboyant,fun loving 😃 ,chirpy girl.But they both were inseparable.

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CHAPTER FOUR

Monday morning!.............

"Tanu, who are you looking for?"

"No one,I was ju..st looking around."

"You are acting strangely.Okay 😕 lets hurry or we'd be late for the class."

Suddenly someone called them from behind.They turned to find Akshay standin there.

"Tanisha ,I heard you were looking for me."

"What?Why should I?Just get lost or I'll tell Malhotra ma'am about what you did to Mamta." she said looking at Mamta.

"Mamta, I am really sorry 😕 .I did that in anger and I regret my behaviour.I am sorry." he pleaded holding her hand.

Mamta pulled her hand back in anger 😡 and said, "For you these things must be fun but for me it was a cheap and disgusting act.You think you can do anything but I never expected this from you.I complained against you cos you were guilty but what was my fault....??Neither I nor God will ever forgive you."

They both left him feeling pathetic 😕 .Akshay tried hard to convince the girls to talk to him but in vain.Even if Tanisha tried to talk ,she left the idea cos of Mamta who was really shattered by that incident.

One day the girls were coming down the stairs and Tanisha slipped off the steps but Akshay held her at the right time from falling 😳 .She was scared and couldn't believe that she was saved 😕 .

"Tanisha,are you alright.God show me your feet.It's swollen 😲 !!," said Mamta and rushed to her.

Meanwhile Akshay made Tanisha sit and was about to leave when Tanisha called his name and said' "Thank you!!"

Mamta started colecting Tanisha's books ignoring them.Akshay waited and looked at them for a second and went away smiling at Tanisha.Tanisha stared at him 😳 😳 .

"Tanu,are you feeling better now? Can you walk?"

"Ya!"

Mamta held her hand and she limped her way to the classroom.Tanisha's heart started softening towards Akshay and she glanced at him in between the lectures ❤️ ❤️ 😳 .Mamta had gone to the library to return some books and to issue new ones leaving Tanisha in the class cos of her sprained ankle.

Akshay came to Tanisha and asked "Howz your leg now?"

She blushed 😳 and said smilingly, "It's better now and Thanks!"

"Oh,don't say that.I am really glad that atleast you have forgiven me and I should be thankful for that..hmmmmm.......now that you've forgiven me , can we be friends?"

He extended his hand and Tanisha returned the gesture with a friendly smile 😊 .

"Great!But I think your friend will never forgive me,she's still very angry."

"Oh! you don't worry about that.She's very sweet and she'll be okay in a few days.Her anger doesn't last for long."

Mamta returned and saw them talking.She came and sat next to Tanisha stuffing the books into her bag.

"Mamu ,we've become friends and you too should forgive him and accept his friendship."

She ignored her advice and drowned herself into a text of Shakesperean tragedy Hamlet.

"Mamta, 'am really very sorry........"

"Stop it. Please!I don't have any problem with you but I am sorry don't expect me to be your friend,"

She left the classroom and Tanisha limped out of the class behind her shouting , "Wait Mamu!"

That evening the Sharma family had all dressed up in their traditional costumes and left for Abhay and Rahul's engagement.And actually they were getting engaged to the twin sisters of Tanisha - Aditi and Radhika.

"Hi,Akshay 😃 !!golly, this is really a big,big surprise." said a surprised looking Tanisha.

Just at that time Mamta and her parents arrived 😉 😉 .

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