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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome chapter Pooja! Even I'm pissed off! I miss Neha soo much!

Your FF is awesome! Keep up the great WORK!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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CHAPTER THIRTY SEVEN





Tanisha drops her at her home and leaves.In her car,Mamta's words echoes in her mind 😕 and suddenly she loses her control and was about to hit another car,but luckily got saved.The other car stops and a guy comes out of it looking disgusted and annoyed 😡.

"Excuse me,are you blind or something.....H-e-l-l-o...Ma'am I'm talking to you....are you deaf aswell...."

"'Am sorry....I was..... 😕 "

"What?By saying sorry you think everything will be normal....What about my car's headlight...the scratches on the bonnet....If you don't know how to drive cars why do you people drive cars here in India 🤢 ......bullockcarts are best for you people.....In U.S.we drive....bla....bla....bla...."

"Hello....excuse me......here in India if we do something wrong we say sorry and I said sorry even when it wasn't my mistake....This isn't U.S.here we drive on the left side of the road and not on the right side whether it's a car or a bullockcart...understood....now don't you people say sorry in U.S....hmmm...." she said mockingly.

"Oh! Sid never says sorry or please to anyone...you understand....bye... 😡 "

"Huh!!! Sid....what does he think of himself....as if he's the president of U.S.A.......I'll show him what Indians are and what sorry and please are but,I really hope I don't have to see him ever again in my life."

After reaching home she went into her room feeling irritated.She took a bath and came out to see a huge surprise.....😲

"You....what are you doing here?"

"Beta,he's Sid...One of our family friends Vivek Rai's son.His family is in U.S.He's joined your college and he'll stay here with us."

"What??????Here...Mum...Dad....He can't stay here ....no...no....at no cost...." she sparked with anger.

"Tanisha,behave your self.Is this the way you treat a guest??"

"Guest???huh!!!!you don't know...... 😕 😡 ..."

"Tanisha....enough...I don't want to hear anything.Go to your room right now.We are here to decide whether he'll stay or not....Go..."

"Mum...Dad.... 😭...... 😡 You.....I'll see you...."she gave a mean stare to Sid.And she rushed to her room in rage 😡 .





Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#73
wow!!....i really like this mamta story sooooo much better than the original 😳 (which is just not shaping up any good!!) 😉

tanisha in positive role is quite sweet actually...and she seems to be patching up wid sid 😆
good job pooja!!...u r really a very imaginative and creative writer....love ur episodes and do complete the story!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome chapter! This story is wayyy better than the actual Mamta story line.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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CHAPTER THIRTY EIGHT





The whole night Tanisha couldn't sleep properly 😡 ....as Sid was in the room next to her's,playing his guitar loudly 😆 ......

There at midnight,Mamta was in her room reading completing a project for her finals.She was really upset and was looking at the phone everytime....She took the photo of Akshay kept beside her and said, "You are very bad...don't you know how much I am worried for you and you are really not concerned....it's night and you haven't even called me once.....You come back,and just forget that I and my junior are ever gonna talk to you....." She then keeps the photo down and turns away from him.But someone places a hand on her shoulder and she turns......Akshay was standing in front of her with a smile as innocent as a blooming flower.

"Akshay!!!!You...were...."

"Ssshhhhh......Mamta......close your eyes......"

"No,I won't...you've already troubled me a lot...and now you want to trouble me more...hmm....I won't talk to you......you know how much I was scared....tumne toh meri jaan hi nikal di thi....don't talk to me..."she turns away from him angrily....


"Mamta I'm sorry......baap re itna gussa...See junior tumhari Mamma toh bilkul tamatar ki tarah laal ho gayi he.....Junior tell your mum to forgive me or I'll stand here all night on my knees....."

"Junior,tell your dad to do that cos he deserves a punishment.....for troubling you and mamma...."

"Okay.....your Mamma is really angry with me....I haven't had food from the morning...I am really hungry....but I deserve punishment,so I'll go from here....Junior I'm going ....I'm going.................."

Mamta is worried and turns to stop him,but he is not there.She calls him and runs to the balcony... she reaches the curtain with tears in her eyes....but Akshay comes out from behind the curtains and holds her in his arms...."Mamta...I am sorry,that I brought tears in your eyes....I promise I'll never do that ever again...I promise that I'll always bring a smile on your face....Mamta I love you.... 😭 😊 "

"Akshay....why do you trouble me like this???There is no Mamta without you....I love you very much.... 😭 "

The breeze blows the curtains and they both stand there hugging eachother. "Mamta....Happy Birthday!!!!"He takes out a king size teddy and a diamond ring and puts it into her finger.

"Akshay...."

"Mamta I wanted to give you a surprise....that is why I asked Tanisha and Arjun to help me...."

"Akshay.... 😭 😭 😭 "she started crying and hugged him."Sometimes I really get scared on seeing my happiness.You've filled my life with love and I don't need anything else from life....our child,when he'll come into this world....our love will become divine...."

"Mamta...you've made my life beautiful....and I want to celebrate this day when God decided to make you for me and send you to this world for me with all my heart....I want to live each and every moment with you...I don't want to waste even a single moment of our times spent together..... 😳 "

[Background song: "Chookar mere mann ko,kiya tune kya ishara...badla yeh mausam..lage pyara jag saara..aa..aah
Tu jo kahe jeevan bhar tere liye mein gaoon....geet tere bolon ke likhata chala jaoon......"
]


All the other family members also come there and wish her....but they all leave soon as it wasn't good for Mamta's health to stay awake for so long at this time........She keeps the teddy below GB's statue 😳 and looks at Akshay sleeping.She combs his hair with her fingers and smiles at him sleeping 😳 .She was seven months pregnant and was eagerly waiting for her child to arrive in this world 😳.

There at Tanisha's place ,they both(Tanu and Sid ) had a big argument and her parents were in his favour saying that she was lying about his playing guitar in the night as she wanted him out of the house...Tanisha was really sulking and banged the door of her room in anger 😡 .

Next morning,When Tanisha was getting into her car...her parents stopped her and asked her to go with Sid as they were in the same college.

"Mum,no way..I have to pick up Mamta as Akshay is not there and today is Mamu's B'day..so I'll have to go in my car only...bye.."

"But,Tanisha beta...Akshay has come back and Mamta called this morning to tell you this and she also told that she will come to college late only as she is going to the temple with her family...."

Tanisha had no other option than to get into the car with Sid who was chuckling silently 😆 ...






Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#76

CHAPTER THIRTY NINE




In the car.......
Tanisha is irritated by the music and she shouts,"Will you stop this deafening music of yours?? 😡 " But Sid is indifferent to her constant nagging and he replies, "Oh!Just shut up!! 😆 😆 "

They reach the college and Tanisha jumps out of the car slamming the door angrily. 😡

"Oh!Hello...this is my car and not your hair brush..at which you can vent your anger...."

"My hair brush is far better than your stupid car... 😡 "

She walks away.... "How thankless??"he muttered.

There Akshay and Mamta also reach the college...and they meet Tanisha in the classroom sitting grumpily .

"Tanu ,are you angry with me???....hmm....by the way it should be me who is supposed to be angry after what you both did to me yesterday...isn't it..see but 'am not...and won't you wish me today??? 😊 "

"Yes,Mamu...I'd..Happy Birthday my sweet sweet Mamu...and here I have a gift for you ...and did you like our surprise..we had planned it meticulously..you know 😃 ."

Sid enters the classroom and comes and sits next to Tanisha.Tanisha was annoyed and frustrated and whenshe opened her mouth to shout at him ,the teacher entered..leaving her sulking 😡 .

During the class,Sid looks at Mamta and says, "Wow! that girl is gorgeous...won't she and I make a good pair...though i know 'am far better than anyone here... 😉 "

"Oh!! Yeah!! Look at you...she won't even look at your monkey face... 😡 😆 😆 "

"Oh...you are just jealous.... 😉 "

"Jealous..my foot...for you...I'd die rather... 😡 😡 "

"Okay...you wanna bet then...If I make her agree for a date with me...then you'll have to do what ever I ask you and vice versa....agreed..Ms.Indian Chilly.... 😆 "

"Sure,with pleasure....Mr.Over confident.hi!hi!hi!," she giggled rubbing her hands satisfactorily. 😆 😆

The class got over and Akshay asked Tanisha to look after Mamta..while he goes out and gets her a juice...Sid looks at Tanisha still unaware of the entire situation.He gets out of his seat and walks towards them...He comes and sits facing Mamta...He introduces himself, "Hi!! I'm Sid..Siddharth Rai..I'm Tanisha's friend...i'm staying at her place..and I'm coming from U.S. 😉 " Tanisha giggles again..and Mamta looks perplexed.

"Hi!! I'm Mamta...and 'am Tanisha's best friend...."

Sid was astounded a bit and looked at Tanisha who was trying to control her laughter....

"So,Mamta...would you like to be my friend...you know i was very famous at my college in U.S..."

"Oh!! really...then why did you leave it before completing your graduation??Were you so brilliant that they gave you a degree even before completing it???hmm... 😆 "

"he..he...he 😡 very funny...My college has been closed on some legal reasons...and so my parents decided to shift me to India and put me in a local college...understood..Ms.Chilly... 😉 ...Leave it...so,Mamta ould ou be my friend...."

"hmmm....okay.... 😕 😊 "

Before Sid could ask her for a date ,Akshay came there with the juice and gave it to Mmata....Sid was a bit confused and looked at Akshay curiously...Tanisha was chuckling....silently..... 😆 😆

"Hi..."said Akshay 😊" 'am Akshay"

"Hi...I'm Sid... 😕 "

Sid looked at Tanisha perplexed and gave a stupid smile.... 😕 😊

"Akshay ...so you three are friends...since when do you know each other....."

"Me...it feels like ages...,"he said looking dreamily at Mamta.

"Oh..Oh...so you are her boyfriend..."

"Boy friend....."They all bursted into a laugh 😆 😆 ..."sid ,she is my wife... 😊 "

He is gobsmacked...Mamta gets up with the help of Akshay and removes the duppatta from her stomach...Sid's eyes popp out..in awe..

"OMG...she's pregnant..Tanisha why didn't you tell me... 😕 "he was really embarrassed..

"Why would have I told you...? you were the Mr.Over Confident...now what happened????all smartness flew away in one blow.....hmm...now remember who I 'am and don't dare to play games with me...understood Mr.O.C. boo..ooo... 😆 😆 😡 "

Sid looked pathetic after this blow....





Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was a great chapter, i love sids entry into the story 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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CHAPTER FORTY




Months passed by and Mamta was admitted to the hospital with labour pains..Now Sid too had become a good friend of them and Tanisha also started softening towards him.Akshay was very nervous as well as very happy...Mamta had knitted cuddly woollens for their child and dreamt of their wonderful family.

Akshay and Tanisha came to the hospital after their classes and her due date was almost near....Tanisha left sadly....

"Tanu...why are you looking so sad 😕 ??"

"Nothing ,Mamu.I'm so happy for both of you....look after yourself...Now I must leave....mum would be waiting for me.."

After she left...

"Akshay why is she so sad??"

"Oh...that's a simple thing....I tell you she's in love. 😉 😆 "

"With whom 😕 ?""Sid?? 😕 ",he nods..."Oh my God! 😊 😳 "

"Yes,and she's sad cos he took Tina out for a date..."

"Oh!that's bad...he shouldn't have done that...They both will make a good pair..isn't it...??What do you think??....O-U-C-H!!😲"

"Mamta..what happened???I'll go and call the doctor... 😕 "

"No..need.I'm alright.It was your junior...he's anxious to come out... 😳 "

He sighs and smiles at her affectionately.He comes near her and sits on the bed.He takes her hand into his and looks into her eyes...he kisses her on her forehead with tears in his eyes.

[Back ground Song:
Tumse milke ...aisa laga..aa..aa..tumse mil..llll...ke ,armaan hue dil ke poore...Tumse milke aisa laga tumse mik..llll..ke armaan hue dil ke poore.....
Tere mere tere mere beech mein..... 😳
]

Rakhi,Rishi and all other family members were called during the nightas Mamta was taken into the labour room with severe pain...Akshay was really tensed.The time seemed to pass at a sloth speed.Akshay was pacing up and down the corridor.....Suddenly at four 'o' clock in the morning the nurse came out and asked, "Who's the father?"

Akshay rushed to her and said, "I'm......how's my wife and my child??? "

"Congrats...you've become a father.Your wife gave birth to a healthy baby boy 😊 ...but..... 😕 "

His excitement vanished and he asked anxiously, "But ......what nurse??"

"Nothing serious...It was a normal delivery,but your wife is still unconscious due to some post natal complications...You can go in to see her..."

He goes in and finds Mamta unconscious....next to a pink bundle 😳 in a cradle...He is overwhelmed with love and approaches the pink bundle of joy and lifts his child with the help of his Mum and takes him to Mamta.He hugs her and cries 😭 😭 ... "Mamta wake up and look at our child....Mamta...."

When the tiny fingers of their child touch her cheeks...and the yearning cry of the baby for his mother reach her ears,she opens her eyes and tears fill them 😭 😳 when she looks at her child...

"My child 😳...my child..." she kisses the tiny pink bundle again and again....

"Akshay...our child...."

The nurse comes in and asks everyone to leave as it was time for the baby's feed.Everyone goes out and Mamta feeds the baby for the first time.She felt the true motherly feelings after touching her child...she was in a new world of love ...of motherhood that is the most divine relationship in this world.She couldn't take her eyes off her child and smoothed his tiny fingers.. 😳 [Background Song:
" Chanda hai tu ,mera sooraj hai tu...oh meri aankhon ka tara hai tu...
Jeeti hun mein bas tujhe dekh ke..."
]

Rakhi comes in .....

"Beta,Congrats and Thanks for giving so much happiness to my son and our family..." She takes the child into her lap.Akshay also comes in walking towards them with his hands folded behind..

"Akshay,what are you hiding in your hands?"

He comes near and places her "GB" in her hand.She smiles and hugs him.

"So,Akshay now you've become a father yourself...my son has grown up...and it's all cos of you Mamta,beta....now both of you what have you decided to call your son?? 😳 "

They both said together.... "GANAPATHY 😳 "

The baby smiled with twinkling eyes when he heard the name😳.Akshay took him in his lap and hugged Mamta😳 and looked at their little Ganapathy.The "GB" idol also twinkled😳.........


Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww. how sweet. please continue.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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CHAPTER FORTY ONE




In the morning...at the hospital...

Tanisha comes there with Sid...still looking angry with him...though he looked quite happy...

Tanu picks up the child and says, "Look Gannu...I'm your Tanu aunty....and tell your mamma that I'll snatch you away from her soon..."

Mamta looks at her shockingly.....

"Oh! my God...your Mum is dumb.She doesn't even understand a joke... 😆 Okay Gannu now go to your Mum or she'll kill me...and also trouble her a lot.. 😆 "

"Tanu...you'll never change...you and your childish pranks... 😊 "

After some time....Akshay and Mamta are alone with the baby....

"Akshay...look at him...how he is nibbling his thumb....my baby.... 😳 "

"Yeah! he's so cute... 😳 "

Next day,they all came back home along with Mamta and Ganapathy.Rakhi took their Aarti and blessed them.Akshay brought Mamta and their child to their room.

"Mamta...stop!! and close your eyes... 😉 "

"But...Akshay....okay..."

She closes her eyes and Akahay opens the door and brings them in.

"Now open your eyes...and see... 😃 "

She was wonderstruck with surprise and joy.The room was filled with toys and balloons.....

"Welcome Home my Queen and my lill' Prince..." said a banner hanging from the bedpost...and a cradle decorated with cartoons and a starry wind chime stood near their bed.... 😳

The baby produced an excited "goo...goo...gaggle..goo" sound and moved his hands.

"See he's just like you...always troubling me.... 😳 "

"An..ha!! So,I always trouble you...."

"Yes.... 😳 "she smiles... 😊 "But I love both of you... 😳 "

"Heard that Junior ,your Mum is really smart..."

"He knows that Juniors Pappa.... 😳 😆 "

The baby hardly cried...he was always chuckling and laughing...except when he was hungry....He was always hungry and never let Mamta go anywhere....She was all the time feeding him.

"Mamta...where's my jacket??"

"Coming!!....Like father ,like son..."

"Akshay..are you mad??...You really don't understand,Mamta is very weak and you are always calling her for little things..... 😡 "

"Mum...I'm sorry...I'm so used to her that I often forget... 😕 "

"Here's your jacket.... 😊 " and she helps him to put the jacket and combs his hair... 😳

"Mamta ,I'm sorry...You go to bed and take rest..I'm a big big fool...I'm sory darling..."

"Akshay...you don't have to be sorry.You know when you call me for even little things..it makes me happy...it makes me feel so special for you...and at no cost would I like to lose my happiness of looking after you...understood..."

"I love you... 😳 "

"Mamta,beta you are very weak...and Ganapathy also constantly needs your feeding......Beta you go and take rest...I'm here to look after Akshay.... 😊 "

Akshay dresses up and comes to Mamta and the baby.He kisses both of them and sits their looking at his lill' prince. 😳

"Akshay...you are getting late. 😆 "

"I know sweetheart,but I don't feel like leaving my junior...I love him so much...I wanna see him all day... 😳 "

"We both will wait for you...now go....Ganapathy say bye to Pappa...Bye.... 😳 "The baby smiles...And Akshay leaves halfheartedly....

Mamta plays with the baby...and makes him ready for a bath...

"Ab Mamma ka Ganapathy will have a bath....then Mamma will take him out and then Mamma will give him milk....then she'll sing a lullaby...and Mamma's Ganapathy will go to sleep....and in his dreams he'll see fairies,choclate clouds...Pappa..and Dadi and Mamma and everyone playing among the clouds and stars....then in the evening when Mamma's baby wakes up ,Pappa will come and play with you....Okay...now com'mon...we'll go for a bubble bath...Yeah!!! 😃 😳 "

Mamta gives the baby a bath with the help of Rakhi.He splashes the water with his tiny toes and fingers.Then she picks him up in her lap,drapes him in a towel and wipes him dry...and brings him to the bed.The baby was crying as the soap got into his eyes.Mamta puts him on the bed and softly swabs his body with powder,puts his baby suit and takes him in her lap...He was still crying...so she sings a song trying to pacify him....

"Mamta ,give him to me...and you take rest...you'll be very tired..."

"No, Ma...I'm not at all tired.This is the first time that I gave him a bath and it's a great feeling.I want to be with him every second.I feel like all my life has been transformed into him.His smile makes me happy,his tears make me sad,his play,his cackling,his grimaces,his everything means like heaven to me...my child... 😳 "

"Don't cry,beta....Mamma is here..." She kisses him and hugs him. 😳

"Mamta...he'll stop crying when you feed him..."

"Mamma's baby is hungry...you want milk...Don't cry...." She takes him in his lap and feeds him.He drinks the milk and falls asleep.

"Mamta,you know...when Akshay was born I too used to feel like you...He was just like Ganapathy...While giving him bath ,he too would play in the water..and would cry when the soap got into his eyes...he'd cry till I fed him milk and put him to sleep.Ganapathy looks just like my lill' Akshay....same eyes,same nose,same smile...you've filled our lives with the greatest happiness...by giving us Ganapathy... 😳 "

"Ma,GB took away my parents from me,but by giving me Akshay,this family and now our child...he has given me everything...this is all I wanted in my life..and it's all cos of my "GB"."

Mamta gets up and tries to walk ,but she faints and falls down....

"M-a-m-t-a.."

She comes into her senses and opens her eyes...She finds no one in the room.She looks into the cradle and doesn't find Ganapathy in it...She becomes scared...and gets out of the bed and searches for him...

She goes into the balcony and finds Akshay sleeping on the swing with the baby on his shoulder.Both of them were asleep.It was evening time and the breeze was cool and refreshing.She goes near him and ruffles his hair.He wakes up and smiles at her....

"Akshay...I have troubled you a lot....I am sorry.. 😭 😳 "

"Mamta,you are not only my wife..you and Junior means everything to me ,you both are my life 😳 and you think to take care of you both is troubling myself...then it means you don't consider me as yours.. 😕 "

"Akshay,I didn't mean that...If I have hurt you ..'am sorry...please...sorry 😳 "

"Hmmm....Junior,what should we do???Should we forgive Mamma? 😉 " Ganapathy makes a naughty grimace... 😉 "Or should...we...punish Mamma??" 👏 he nods.Mamta smiles "Your son is just like you,naughty...very naughty... 😳 "

"Okay Mamta...so,you'll be punished.. 😉 "

"Okay..baba...father and son are in one team now..and no one needs Mamma...But remember both of you'll need me sometime,if not now... 😆 "

She takes Ganapathy from Akshay and goes in...Akshay follows her and blocks her way.He takes the child and puts him in the cradle with his favourite stuff toy.He then turns to Mamta and holds her close to him....He then says, "Thank you... 😳for making my life complete... 😳 and giving me my Junior "

"Akshay,...Thank you!! 😳 "

They both hug each other and they both take Ganapathy out for a stroll.They go to the beach.

"Mamta, give Junior to me..you'll get tired."

"No,I am okay... 😊 "

"Listen to me..." and he takes the baby from her...and holds her hand 😳 .They walk on the waves and buy ice creams.

"No,Akshay 😕 ...don't give him ice cream...he's too small for it...he just has milk...he'll get cold...He can have that once he is a bit older... 😳 "

"Okay..baba...gosh!!you mothers are all alike 😆 ...the child can't have this and that....Mum was also like you,she still is...she forces me to have that yucky palak...evrytime...Yucks!! 🤢 "

Mamta laughs 😆 😆 They both look into each other's eyes and kiss Ganapathy....

[ Background Song :
"Chhokar mere mann ko ,kiya tune kya ishara...Badla yeh mausam ,lage pyara jag saara..aa..aa" ]









Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago

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