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Posted: 18 years ago
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CHAPTER THIRTY ONE




Tanisha and Akshay's mum leave in the morning itself.Akshay and Mamta along with her parents leave for the temple.In the car Akshay irritates Mamta by pulling he hair,ticling her etc; ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†She frowns at him nodding towards her parents...

"Mamta,Akshay you bothdrop us at the bus stop..and then we'll go from there ourselves.Mamta,look after Akshay and yourself.We'll be waiting for you two.... ๐Ÿ˜ญ "

Mamta hugs her parents and Akshay smiles ๐Ÿ˜Šconsoling them....The weather was really stormy that morning and the fate had something else stored for them .On the way to the temple their car hits a lorry and falls into the gorge๐Ÿ˜ฒ...............

............After some days,Mamta is in a hospital....she murmurs and comes into her consciousness.

"Akshay....Akshay..... ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ Ma....Baba......"

"Oh,nurse she's gaining her consciousness.Go and call Dr.Garima.Hurry up!!"

"Can you hear me???What is your name ๐Ÿ˜• ??"

"Mamta....Where's my Akshay???Akshay! Akshay!...my parents..."

"Calm down,Mamta.You are in the hospital.You are here since one month.And who's this Akshay?"

"Akshay...my husband,my Ma...Baba.They were with me when that ... ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ Oh!!please I want to see them...my Akshay...how is he?please take me to him...please doctor... ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ"

"Mamta,please calm down.I really don't know where they are?? cos I am newin this hospital๐Ÿ˜•.Oh!! Dr. Garima,thank god ,you've come...see this patient is asking for someone called Akshay...where is her husband??"

"OMG,Mr.singh!!! ๐Ÿ˜ญ They died in the crash.We could only rescue her.... ๐Ÿ˜ญ "

"N-O-O-O-O-O-O!!! you are lying...My akshay ,my Ma Baba can't leave me...no I don't believe you....take me to my Akshay... ๐Ÿ˜ก " she yelled and cried madly.

"Mamta...Mamta.....control yourself....it's not good for your health and also for your child's health... ๐Ÿ˜• "

Mamta is shocked and stunned by that word.... "My child....What do you mean? ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜ญ "

"Yes,Mamta...your child.You are one month pregnant.You are going to be a mother ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ญ "

"My child ๐Ÿ˜ญ Akshay suna tumne...our child but where are you??Why have you left me here???Please come back soon ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ."

"Doctor,can you call my friend Tanisha at this number...and tell her that I'm here."

"Ya,sure...but you've to promise me that you'll lie down and take rest till I return...okay ๐Ÿ˜Š "

She goes out and dials the number... "Hello!! can I speak to Ms.Tanisha."

"Yes,Tanisha here.May I know who's speaking??"

"I am Dr.Garima Joshi from Green hospital...Your friend Mamta is here....she wants to meet you...She has regained her consciousness just now...She's really shattered as she has lost her husband and family... ๐Ÿ˜ญ "

"W-H-A-T??????Mamu...Mamu is alive๐Ÿ˜ฒ....okay,okay I'll reach there tomorrow morning."

"Mamta,I've talkd to her and she'll reach here by tomorrow..."

"Doctor...I know that my Akshay is alive.I want to go and find him...and my Ma Baba.Please let me go "

"Mamta....we'll find them.You lie down,you are still very weak and you need to have complete rest until someone from your family takes you from here cos now you are our responsibility.I promise you that I'll help you to find your husband and parents..but now take rest."

She lies on the bed and sees her GB on the side table ๐Ÿ˜ญ .... "Mamta,when you were found this idol was in your hand.."

"GB,where is my Akshay???Why has all this happened?? ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญPlease help me to find my Akshay and my Ma Baba."

She hugs the idol and falls asleep. ๐Ÿ˜ญ

.....The next morning Mamta is sitting on a swing in the garden remembering Akshay.... She touches her stomach and says, "Beta,your Pappa will come soon and take us from here ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜Š ."

[Back ground Song:Na jaane kyon... from Choti si baat ๐Ÿ˜ญ ]

"Na jaane kyon....hota hai yeh zindagi ke saath...Achanak yeh dil kisi ke jaane ke baad,karke usi ko yaad....Choti,choti si baat....Na jaane kyon...."

"Mamta,The doctor is calling you.There's someone to see you." said an attendant.

"Really...it must be my Akshay.See I knew it.Please take me to him quickly."

In the doctor's room...Tanisha is waiting for her along with Mrs.Rakhi Sharma.

"Tanu ๐Ÿ˜ญ ...where's my Akshay?Hasn't he come along with you???Ma where's he?"

"Mamta...beta....what have you done to yourself???OMG.... ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญhow will I tell you? "

" "No,Mum.I'll tell her."

"Mamu,Akshay is in Mumbai and we've come to take you home..."

"Tanu...where's my Ma Baba?"

"Mamu...they are .....no more..and we thought that you too ๐Ÿ˜ญ ......but thank God...you're alive.I am so happy to see you ,Mamu.."

"Tanu...my parents...my God...How will I live without them? ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ "

Mamta brings her GB and the doctor tells her to take good care of her health ๐Ÿ˜Š .

"Mrs.Sharma...Mamta is your daughter-in-law and there's a good news I want to give you...She's going to be a mother and you a grandma.. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ "

Tanisha and Rakhi are dumbfounded with shock๐Ÿ˜ฒ.

"See God's miracle when he took away two lives,he also blessed Mamta with another life..to pacify her grief. ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ณ "

Rakhi hugs Mamta and cries ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ .They reach Mumbai and Rakhi takes Mamta to her home.

"Ma,Why have you brought me here to my house.I want to see my Akshay...Come let's go... ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜• "

"Mamta,beta...I want to tell you something.Beta,God plays really strange games and what happens is all in our destiny...we can't deny it...we have to face it at any cost... ๐Ÿ˜ญ "

"Ma,why are you saying all this?You are really scaring me.. ๐Ÿ˜• I want to see my Akshay...come let's go."

"Mamta,you can't go... ๐Ÿ˜ญ "

"Why ,Ma?"



What more is stored for Mamta in her fate?What is the reason behind Rakhi's denial?Is Akshay alive ๐Ÿ˜ƒ or dead ๐Ÿ˜ญ ?????Hold your breath for the next chapter.... ๐Ÿ˜Š

Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
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CHAPTER THIRTY TWO




"cos you are not my Akshay's wife anymore ๐Ÿ˜ญ Tanisha is...."

๐Ÿ˜ฒMamta stands petrified on the spot.

"Mamta after we were unable to recover your body...we thought God had snatched you from us.....your parents were found dead...and Akshay was in comma.....when he got his senses back he had lost his memory till the day he came to your house for the marriage proposal.... ๐Ÿ˜ญ In the hospital Tanisha took care of him,day and night....and as people were saying a lot of things about them and Tanisha liked him we thought of getting them married....But Akshay wasn't willing,he ageed for it only for my sake cos I pleaded in front of him ๐Ÿ˜ญ Just few days ago they both got married....Now ,you tell me whose fault is it?mine....or ....yours....this was written in our fate....Mamta 'am sorry.Beta,please forgive me..."

Mamta falls unconscious and is taken to the hospital.Tanisha's mobile rings and it's Akshay.... "Tanisha where are you?You and mum have reached Mumbai or not?"

"Yes,Akshay we have reached Mumbai and we'll soon reach home...Howz your health ?"

"Ya, I am fine....I'll just go to the doctor and show him my right leg cos it has been paining since some time...but don't worry i'll reach home when you two come...bye ๐Ÿ˜Š "

"Ok,bye"

Tanisha is worried and goes into Mamta's room.The doctor says, "Tanisha she's really very weak and she's also carrying so, you'll have to take good care of her.You can take her right now,but you have to bring her for checkups on the following dates..." and the doc. hands her a chit.Mamta is sad and blank...

"Where's her husband?"

"Husband...he's ....not here ๐Ÿ˜• ."

"Well,at this time he should always be with her... "

Mamta gets up and runs to the hospital temple.Tanisha runs behind her.

"Mamu,I am sorry ๐Ÿ˜ญ ....I'll tell him that you are his real wife ๐Ÿ˜ญ ....He thinks that you have married someone in Mussourie ๐Ÿ˜ญ ....we had to lie to him cos he was in no condition to bear the shock of your death.The doctors said it was dangerous for his life..please forgive me ๐Ÿ˜ญ ...Mamu...please... ๐Ÿ˜ญ

" ๐Ÿ˜ญ No...Tanu...you won't tell him the truth...at no cost...he'll be devastated...My life is already spoiled and I don't want to ruin your life too.It 's in my fate....and you are not gonna tell him...you got me ๐Ÿ˜ญ "

"Mamu....but...."

Mamta walks away not listening to her.There at home Akshay takes out a diary and picks out Mamta's photo๐Ÿ˜ณfrom it and says, "Mamta,you left me alone here,i don't have any grudges against you...I just want you to be happy whereever you are...I know that you didn't love me...all I saw in your eyes was a dream....nothing else.That night after I left your place,tanisha told me that I had met with an accident and she took me to the hospital...and when I came into my senses,I came to know that you have married someone else....tum mujhse door ho par ab bhi dil ke kareeb ho....kaise bhula doon tumhe....kaise nikaloon tumhe is dil se...insan hoon mein...khuda toh nahi hoon ๐Ÿ˜ญI still love you....I love you Mamta..."

A breeze comes in through the open window and her photo flies away..Akshay runs behind it.......

There at hospital Rakhi comes in and tells "Tanisha,I've arranged for a maid,a driver and a watchman for Mamta at her home....They'll look after her,and we can go there everyday...you don't have to worry now.."

"Mum,how can you do this?She's pregnant and that too with your son's child and you want to leave her alone in the care of strangers...I won't allow this...no...no ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜กMum,she's gonna stay with us..."

"But,Tanisha... ๐Ÿ˜• "

"No.mum...What I've said is final...if she isn't coming so 'am I.. "

"Ok,as you wish.....but it would affect your relationship with Akshay..."

Mamta at first denies a lot but when Tanisha swears in her name she agrees...also deep in her broken heart there was an urge to see Akshay and to know how was he?They reach home where everyone's waiting for them but,they get shocked to see Mamta...but her eyes were searching for only Akshay and Akshay.... ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ณ who wasn't there.

"Mamta,beta you are alive...OMG,how thankful I'm to God....How are you beta??" asked Rishi Sharma...Akshay's dad.

Rani runs to her and hugs her crying ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ .

"Rani,take Mamta didi to the room in front of ours.She's not feeling well. ๐Ÿ˜Š "

"Come didi.... ๐Ÿ˜Š "

Tanisha too leaves behind them.Rakhi tells the entire family about what has happened and also tells them to keep it secret from Akshay.................

Akshay comes and goes into his room and calls Tanisha...Mamta hears his sound and is overwhelmed with happiness and rushes out of her room but she stops halfway thinking about the reality and when she turns sadly to return back to her room ...Akshay calls her from behind. "Who are you?"

She doesn't turn and tears fall down her eyes.He recogonises her in that one look and comes near her and turns her and says, "Mamta... ๐Ÿ˜ณYou and here.I won't ask you about your marriage....has he also come with you...I was searching for you like mad....but then they all told me that you've married someone...and you never even thought of me ,ek baar bhi nahi.... ๐Ÿ˜ญ " but then he stops when he sees Tanisha....

"Akshay,we went to Mussourie to bring her home from the hospitalShe lost her husband in an accident... ๐Ÿ˜• "

Mamta is sad and shocked to hear that and cries silently...Akshay looks shocked too and when he tries to go to her ,Tanisha says, "Mamta go and take rest.We'll talk later..."

Mamta goes in with tears in her eyes.Being so close to Akshay she couldn't even get a glance of him...she prayed to GB to stop torturing her like this...she pleaded... ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ Akshay is sad for what happened to her but he too feels happy to see her.Tanisha tells him that as she has no one to take her care and her brother is far away at the border she'll stay with us
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Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
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CHAPTER THIRTY THREE





In Mamta's room........
"Akshay,I am so glad that you are fine.I came here just to see you and now I'll have to go.I can't stay here.I'll survive with your memories and our child at some where far from your world ๐Ÿ˜ญ.GB,why did you do this to me?"

Next morning Mamta does the Pooja in the Pooja ghar with Dadi and she blesses her.

"Dadi,after I go from here please look after my Akshay.I have no regrets towards anyone.If GB has decided this for me then what else can be done,I'll have to accept it ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜Š .I have full faith in him...he is just testing my patience and my love." she gives the prasad and goes away.

At the breakfast table Rakhi and Dadi enquire about Mamta.

"Tanisha,beta go and call her."

"Mum,I called her.She won't come cos she's fasting.Today is monday and she keeps this fast every monday for Santoshi maa.."

"But she's not well.And if she fasts the whole day then she'll fall ill."

"Mum,I'll go and see" he left the table and went to her room.

She was sitting in the balcony holding her mangalsutra ๐Ÿ˜ญ. "Mamta,come and have the breakfast or you'll fall ill. ๐Ÿ˜• "

"No,Akshay I can't break this fast.It's very important to me.You go ..I'm fine. ๐Ÿ˜Š "

"No,Mamta I won't go until you come.If you don't eat I too 'am not gonna eat ..."

Akshay walks towards her but falls with his bandaged leg.Mamta rushes to him and supports him to get up.

"Akshay,are you alright.You really don't look after yourself ๐Ÿ˜ญ.If something happened to you then I too would have died......" she stops abruptly on realising what she had said. ๐Ÿ˜•

"Mamta........you love me....look at me...Why did you do all this?You've not only ruined my life but yours also...Why didn't you tell me before.You and me have been distanced just because of your fault...why?Mamta... ๐Ÿ˜•I am suffering immeasurable pain cos of you. Mamta looks miserably at him and takes her tearful eyes off him.

"I don't know who our husband is but Tanisha told me that he lost his life in an accident....I am really sorry for you,you lost your hus...."

Mamta shouts, "Stop it!" placing her hand on his mouth and with tears "Akshay please don't say that."

"Mamta,what's wrong?I really 'am feeling that you are hiding something from me.Tell me the truth.Why do I feel that you love me more than anyone ๐Ÿ˜ณ ...and why do I get strange dreams about you and me together.Mamta,tell me the truth.... ๐Ÿ˜ก"

"Akshay,please leave me alone."

"Okay,do as you wish...but I will find out the truth."

"GB,I am helpless.If I tell him the truth then I'll ruin Tanu's life who sacrificed herself to look after my Akshay.She only saved his life...She loves him too....I can't...I can't come in between them...no...I'll have to go ๐Ÿ˜ญ ."

She packs her things and comes down.Everyone's shocked to see her๐Ÿ˜ฒ.

Tanisha runs to her and says, "Mamu,what's this?You can't go like this.Please don't punish me like this...."

"No,Tanu...don't ever think like that.I am not punishing you but,if I stay here I'll be punishing myself and you.I've accepted my fate and I have to live the rest of my life with this truth and the earlier I do it,the better it is for everyone.Tanu,look after him.Bye..."

Tanisha hugs her and cries.Mamta meets everyone but Akshay.She looks up at his room ๐Ÿ˜ญ and leaves.
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CHAPTER THIRTY FOUR





Few days later............

She plans to join the college for the second year of graduation.One day when she is in the hospital for a check up,the doctor enquires about her health and tells her that she is very weak and also asks her , "where's your husband."

She keeps silent,but at that time Tanisha comes in and says, "Doc, I'm her friend,Tanisha.How is she?"

"She's very weak and at this time her husband should be with her and look after her.But she's always comes here alone and when I ask her about him,she keeps mum. ๐Ÿ˜• "

"Sorry,doctor,her husband was a lot busy these days,but I've brought him with me today....AKSHAY!! ๐Ÿ˜Š "

๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ"Tanu,what are you doing????Please go away from here...I beg of you... ๐Ÿ˜ญ "

"Ssshhhh.....keep quiet...bahut bolti ho tum....'am only going to do what I should have done long before ๐Ÿ˜ญ ."

Akshay comes in and looks at Mamta.Mamta looks confused and tries to take her eyes off him. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ญ

"Mr.Akshay,you should take care of your wife.She and your up coming child must be more important to you than your other priorities,right.So,look after them well. ๐Ÿ˜Š "

"I am sorry doctor .I was really ignorant in not understanding this earlier." he said looking at Mamta.

They come out and when Mamta tries to leave Akshay halts her way and says, "Mamta,what do you think of yourself? ๐Ÿ˜ก ....that you can do anything to me.You never even thought once that how 'am I gonna live without you.... ๐Ÿ˜ญ"

"Akshay ๐Ÿ˜ญ ......." she looked into his eyes and saw Tanisha.

"Mamta,don't turn your eyes away from me.Tanisha has told me everything. "

"T-a-n-u!!!! ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜ญ "

"Mamu,I am sorry that cos of me you had to suffer a lot....but no more....you both are supposed to be together not only in this life but in the coming lives too...cos your love is that deep and pious.I am sorry... ๐Ÿ˜ญ "

"No,Tanu.....please don't say sorry.... ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ "

"Mamu,you are very good at heart and that is why you see only others pain but I know my pain is nothing as compared to yours." they both cry and hug eachother...

"Hmmmmmmmmm ๐Ÿ˜† ...now take your wife to your home and look after her properly or I won't leave you cos she's my best friend...my sister... ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ญ "

They both leave happily but Tanisha stands there crying but also feeling happy for them.There at home Rakhi welcomes them with aarti and all other rituals just like a dulhan ๐Ÿ˜ณ

"Now,you take care of your Akshay and this house....Mamta..." sais Dadi smilingly. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Mamta goes to the Pooja ghar and thanks God for his blessings.

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CHAPTER THIRTY FIVE





"Mamta,I feel like having got a second life.Without you I'd've died. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ญ "

"Shhhhh....why do you say that every time.. ๐Ÿ˜ญ as long as my breath is going on...nothing can happen to you.My "GB" has tested me a lot of times...but I know he can never destroy my love or my faith.....cos he is the destroyer of all problems and the incarnation of goodness and love. ๐Ÿ˜ณ "

"I really don't remember anything about our marriage but then I don't have to cos I know that I love you and you are my everything. ๐Ÿ˜ณ "

They hug eachother and go out in the evening to a beautiful countryside and and sit there,the whole evening. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ [Background song:KANK]

"Tumhi dekho na,yeh kya ho gaya..aaa.....tumhara hoon mein aur tum meri. ๐Ÿ˜ณ "

"Mein hairan hoon,tumhe kya kahoo...ooonnn,yeh din mein hui kaisi chandni..iii ๐Ÿ˜ณ "

"Jaagi,jaagi si hai,phir bhi khabon mein hai...Khoi..ii...khoi..ii...zindagi..iii... ๐Ÿ˜ณ "

.....Some months later....

Their wedding was formally celebrated and announced...they both had joined their college for continuing there studies....

Mamta comes after having a bath and calls Akshay, "Akshay,get up you are late for college. ๐Ÿ˜ณ "

"No...ooooo...Mamta,let me sleep ๐Ÿ˜ณ" He replied clutching on to his blanky.Mamta comes near him and sits on the bed stroking his hair...After constant calling when he wasn't waking up...she held her wet hair and squeezed drops of water on his face ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณwith a cute smile ๐Ÿ˜ณ....Akshay woke up suddenly and looked at her angrily...She laughed ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† at his funny look with shaggy hair and a cute look ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ...and she tried to get up on seeing Akshay forming a naughty look...with a naughty smile. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ But before she could get up,he held her hand...and pulled her towards him...they both looked into each other's eyes... ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

"So,you find great delight in troubling me...han!.... ๐Ÿ˜ณ Just you wait and let my junior come ๐Ÿ˜ณ then we'll show you what actual troubling is..."

"Oh,really....let's not be so sure ...cos today morning only I saw him in my dream and I recollect that we both were giving you a hard time.. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†" she laughs ๐Ÿ˜† .

Akshay tilts his head side to side and stares at her smilingly ๐Ÿ˜ณ .She smiles at him and pushes him ๐Ÿ˜ณ .She goes to the wardrobe to take out his dress for college.But suddenly......

"A-a-a-g-g-g-h-h!!!"she screams in pain.Akshay rushes to her and holds her.He lifts her and brings her to the bed.He really gets tensed and asks her , "Are you okay? ๐Ÿ˜• I'll go and call mum....But how will I leave you here...Mum....Mum..."

"Akshay...calm down...baba...I am alright... ๐Ÿ˜ณ It was just a kick your junior gave me.I think he heard you and he didn't like his Pappa being troubled.... ๐Ÿ˜ณ "

"Stop it...Mamta...You know how much I was scared?...Junior don't listen to Pappa...and remember...don't trouble your Mamma cos Pappa loves her more than himself ... ๐Ÿ˜ญ " ๐Ÿ˜ณ He then kisses her on her forehead and places his hand on her stomach.... ๐Ÿ˜ณ Mamta places her head on her shoulder and they look at a photo of a baby on the wall near their "GB's" idol,who winks ๐Ÿ˜‰ at them from among the clouds...
Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
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Hi,Guys ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

I cudn't write the next chapter cos I was busy with some arrangements.I am leaving today for Mysore.....I'll try to get online from there.....I'll miss you people a lot....All of you, don't stop watching Mamta...don't ever give up...cos we will have to make these scriptwriters change this disgusting masala they're adding ๐Ÿคข every day!!!

AM are surely gonna unite soon...and they'll have more cute kids in future ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Bye,loads of love
Cheers
Pooh ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
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really nice chapters, continue soon after u come back ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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OMG,guys what is this happenin in Mamta...my eyes popped out when i saw Narayani as Mamta.....this is apocalypse.....Mamta ruined......now what is left in this show...I can't bear to see Anand with Narayani.....no no this isn't happening....someone pls do sth and bring Neha back....she has to return back to her Akshay....arre Mamta writers ne to hadd ki bhi hadd kar di


well, I don't care now....cos for me Neha is only Anand's Mamta and Anand is only Neha's Akshay....Darn these disgusting scripwriters.....baap re....i feel like crying....if I come across these people i'll definitely break their nut shells....idiots!!!!donkeys!!!!

But mere story mein AM were,are and would be Anand and Neha.....
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CHAPTER THIRTY SIX






His mum rushes into their room looking worried.
"Mamta,beta!!what happened??Are you alright??? ๐Ÿ˜• "

"Maa,everything is fine...Akshay gets scared very quickly.Your grandson is just like your son....was playing football...the kick was a bit strong and I screamed....that's it!!...... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† Oh!!Maa...look at him.... ๐Ÿ˜ณ bilkul bachon jaise hain......"

"Akshay,beta...you are so excited to become a father......it seems just a few years ago that you were born and now you yourself are going to be a father...I really 'am very happy for both of you."

"Maa,everything is fine...Akshay gets scared very quickly.Your grandson is just like your son....was playing football...the kick was a bit strong and I screamed....that's it!!...... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† Oh!!Maa...look at him.... ๐Ÿ˜ณ bilkul bachon jaise hain......"

His mum leaves ,blessing them....Akshay turns to her looking grumpy.

"Akshay,now why arte you looking so grumpy??Okay,baba...I'm sorry...Now please go and take your bath...you'll be late for college.."

"Okay,okay...I'm going...but you are not going to move from this place until I come out....understood.."

He goes into the bathroom and Mamta smiles ๐Ÿ˜Š at him...She takes out his clothes and her's and gets ready to change......

She takes out a pink saree and starts draping it,when Akshay comes out and is stunned on seeing her.He comes from her behind and holds her in his arms.....

"Akshay....no badmashi ๐Ÿ˜ณ ....allow me to wear this saree....leave me!!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ "

"Mamta...this isn't badmashi...this is just my love for you....whenever you wear this pink saree,i can't resist myself....I feel like looking at you all the time...."

Mamta..smiles shyly and looks down ๐Ÿ˜ณ ......

"Mamta....I love you.....I love you ๐Ÿ˜ณ"He comes closer and pushes the wet hair from her face,she blushes,her heartbeats increasing. She tries to move back.....he smiles and leaves her.....She turns away smiling [Back ground song:
Tumhe pata toh hoga.....hey shona...hey shona...hey!shona...hey shona

"Here take your dress and let me wear this saree....see you've spoiled my saree with the water dripping from your hair.Now hurry up or you'll be late for college."

Akshay drops her at Tanisha's home and leaves for the college as he had an important seminar to be attended.Tanisha and Mamta goes to the hospital and after the checkup they both reach the college,but Akshay wasn't there.

"Hey!!Arjun have you seen Akshay somewhere???"

"Mamta,he's gone on an important study tour with the delegates who presented the seminar....He asked me to tell you that it was all set suddenly and it was inevitable because as the team leader he had to be present with the group at any cost...he'll return within one week...he'll call you soon...maybe it's a network problem...."

Mamta is sad and looks worried ๐Ÿ˜ญ ...but she controls herself and prays to GB for his wellbeing... "Thankyou Arjun"Tanisha consoles her.

"Mamu,don't be sad ๐Ÿ˜• ....he's gone for a good thing...it's important for both of you's future...he'll be back soon...don't take stress and spoil your health..or when he comes and finds his Mamta and Junior sad he'll feel guilty...so cheer up and hope for the best.."

After the classes Mamta tries his mobile but it said out of range....

"He'll call you after reaching there.Mamu,seven months have passed since your marriage and your love for each other has only bloomed more and more with each passing day.....And this is all cos of your strong faith in GB and this baby is a gift from him to both of you....who'll add infinite joys and colours to your love... ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ณ "

"Yes,Tanu...I can't wait for my child....our child..I see him in my dreams...his innocent eyes ๐Ÿ˜ณ ,his tiny fingers ๐Ÿ˜ณ ,his naughty smile ๐Ÿ˜ณ ....his lispy talk ๐Ÿ˜ณ ....calling me Maa ๐Ÿ˜ณ ...walking with wobbly steps ๐Ÿ˜ณ ....filling my life with all the happinessess inthe world ๐Ÿ˜ณ ....bilkul Akshay ke jaisa ๐Ÿ˜ณ ....Tanu..the feeling of becoming a mother....feeling your child ,the gift of your love ๐Ÿ˜ณ ...growing inside you...kicking you...is something that takes you closer to God....You feel the presence of God....my GB...Akshay is not away from me...I can feel him here in my womb...near our child.....the feeling of motherhood is magical.....I feel like flying high among the clouds.....dancing with the cool breezes...tossing with the flowers......it's divine... ๐Ÿ˜ณ "

Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
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Guys,I hope you like this chapter....I've tried to write after many days.Dunno whether it's fine or not....I am really frustrated and pissed off ๐Ÿ˜ก by what is being done by the freak scriptwriters..... Hope like me you guys also find solace in this fan-fic where Neha and Anand are together as our cute and adorable "AM"

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